Whispers in the Walls

Submitted into Contest #272 in response to: Write a story with the aim of scaring your reader.... view prompt

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Horror Contemporary Fiction

Sarah's hand trembled as she inserted the key into the lock of her new home. The old Victorian house loomed over her, its weathered facade a stark contrast to the manicured lawns of the neighboring properties. At 28, she never imagined she'd be able to afford such a place, especially in this upscale neighborhood. But the price had been surprisingly low, and the real estate agent had been almost too eager to close the deal.

As the door creaked open, a musty odor assaulted her nostrils. Sarah wrinkled her nose, making a mental note to air out the place. She stepped inside, her footsteps echoing in the empty foyer. The floorboards groaned under her weight, as if protesting her intrusion.

"Hello?" she called out, more out of habit than expectation. The house responded with silence, broken only by the faint ticking of an unseen clock.

Sarah began her tour, each room revealing layers of history and neglect. In the living room, faded wallpaper peeled at the corners, exposing glimpses of older patterns beneath. The kitchen, with its antique appliances, seemed frozen in time. As she ascended the creaking stairs to the second floor, a chill ran down her spine. She attributed it to the drafty windows, ignoring the voice in her head that whispered otherwise.

The master bedroom was spacious, dominated by a four-poster bed that looked like it hadn't been slept in for decades. Sarah ran her hand along the dusty dresser, leaving a clean trail in its wake. As she turned to leave, something caught her eye. In the corner of the room, partially hidden by a heavy curtain, was a door she hadn't noticed before.

Curiosity piqued, Sarah approached the door. It was smaller than the others, almost child-sized, with no visible handle. She pushed against it, but it didn't budge. Frowning, she made another mental note to ask the agent about it later.

As night fell, Sarah found herself alone in the vast house, surrounded by boxes of her belongings. The silence was oppressive, broken only by the occasional creak of settling wood. She tried to focus on unpacking, but couldn't shake the feeling of being watched.

It started as a whisper, so faint she thought she'd imagined it. But as the night wore on, the sound grew more distinct. It seemed to come from inside the walls, a soft, sibilant sound that formed no words she could understand.

Sarah's heart raced. She told herself it was just the pipes, or maybe mice in the walls. Old houses made strange noises, after all. But as she lay in bed that night, staring at the ceiling, the whispers continued. They seemed to be coming from everywhere and nowhere at once, growing louder as the hours ticked by.

Sleep eluded her. Every time she closed her eyes, she imagined shadowy figures lurking in the corners of the room. The whispers had taken on an urgent tone, as if trying to convey a message she couldn't quite grasp.

Just before dawn, exhaustion finally overcame her fear, and Sarah drifted into a fitful sleep. Her dreams were a chaotic jumble of dark corridors and reaching hands, punctuated by those incessant whispers.

She awoke with a start, sunlight streaming through the windows. The house was silent once more. Sarah rubbed her eyes, trying to shake off the lingering unease from the night before. She chalked it up to first-night jitters in a new place and resolved to have a more positive outlook.

As she went about her day, unpacking and arranging her belongings, Sarah almost managed to convince herself that she'd imagined the whole thing. But as twilight approached, bringing with it long shadows and creeping darkness, the whispers returned.

This time, they seemed more insistent, almost angry. Sarah's hands shook as she tried to distract herself with mundane tasks. She turned on every light in the house, hoping to drive away the encroaching shadows, but they seemed to grow deeper in defiance of the artificial brightness.

In a moment of desperation, Sarah called the real estate agent, hoping for some rational explanation for the strange occurrences. The phone rang several times before going to voicemail. Sarah left a message, her voice trembling as she tried to explain her concerns without sounding crazy.

As she ended the call, a loud thump from upstairs made her jump. It sounded like it had come from the master bedroom. Sarah stood frozen at the foot of the stairs, every instinct screaming at her to run. But curiosity, that fatal human flaw, propelled her forward.

She climbed the stairs slowly, each step an eternity. The whispers grew louder, more frantic. As she reached the top, she noticed something that made her blood run cold. A trail of wet footprints led from the master bedroom to the top of the stairs. They glistened in the dim light, too fresh to be explained away.

Sarah's breath came in short gasps as she followed the trail to the bedroom door. She pushed it open, revealing a room that looked exactly as she'd left it that morning. Except for one thing. The small door in the corner, the one she couldn't open before, now stood ajar.

The whispers were a cacophony now, filling her head with their urgent message. And finally, terribly, Sarah began to understand. They were trying to warn her.

She spun around, intending to flee, but found her path blocked. A figure stood in the doorway, its form seeming to shift and waver like smoke. It had no discernible features, just a vague humanoid shape that absorbed the light around it.

Sarah opened her mouth to scream, but no sound came out. The figure advanced, its movements jerky and unnatural. She backed away, her heel catching on the edge of the rug. She fell, scrambling backward until her back hit the wall.

The whispers reached a crescendo, and suddenly, Sarah understood. They weren't trying to scare her; they were trying to save her. The house wasn't haunted by ghosts, but by something far worse. Something that had been trapped here, feeding on the fear and despair of those who came before her.

As the shadowy figure loomed over her, Sarah closed her eyes and focused on the whispers. They were clearer now, guiding her. With a sudden burst of courage, she lunged forward, ducking under the creature's reaching arms. She ran for the small door, now

understanding its purpose. It wasn't a way in, but a way out.

Sarah threw herself through the opening, feeling the entity's cold grasp brush against her ankle. She found herself in a narrow passageway, the walls pulsing with an otherworldly light. The whispers urged her on, guiding her through a maze of corridors that seemed to defy the physical dimensions of the house.

Behind her, she could hear the entity in pursuit, its anger palpable in the very air around her. The passage began to narrow, the ceiling lowering until Sarah was forced to crawl. Just as she felt her strength giving out, she saw a pinprick of light ahead.

With one final burst of effort, Sarah squeezed through the opening, emerging into the blinding sunlight of her front yard. She stumbled forward, falling to her knees on the manicured lawn. When she looked back, the house stood as it always had, giving no hint of the horrors within.

The whispers faded, leaving behind a profound silence. Sarah's mind reeled, trying to process what had happened. As her breathing slowed, she noticed a folded piece of paper clutched in her hand. She didn't remember grabbing it, but she opened it with trembling fingers.

Inside was a list of names and dates, dozens of them, stretching back over a century. With growing horror, Sarah realized these were the previous owners of the house. Next to each name was a cause of death: suicide, accident, disappearance. The most recent entry was dated just six months ago.

At the bottom of the list, in fresh ink, was her own name. But the space next to it was blank, the story of her fate yet to be written.

Sarah stood on shaky legs, her decision made. She wouldn't be another name on that list. As she walked away from the house, she could have sworn she heard a faint whisper on the wind. Not a warning this time, but a farewell.

In the days that followed, Sarah tried to report what had happened, but no one believed her. The house stood empty, a "For Sale" sign once again planted in its front yard. But now, Sarah knew the truth that lay behind its innocent facade.

She often thought about the whispers in the walls, the souls of those who hadn't escaped, forever trying to warn others of the danger that lurked within. And sometimes, on quiet nights, she imagined she could still hear them, carried on the breeze, a ghostly chorus of caution for those who would listen.

As for the entity trapped within the house, it waited. Patient and eternal, it knew that eventually, someone else would come. Someone who wouldn't hear the whispers until it was too late. And when that day came, it would be ready.

The "For Sale" sign creaked in the wind, beckoning to passersby, promising a deal too good to be true. And behind the curtained windows of the old Victorian, something smiled in the darkness, anticipating its next victim

October 12, 2024 02:00

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