The Weight of a Ring

Submitted into Contest #269 in response to: Show how an object’s meaning can change as a character changes.... view prompt

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Crime Creative Nonfiction Sad

This story contains themes or mentions of physical violence, gore, or abuse.

“You better beat me down there. I don’t like wife beaters, and I don’t like men who touch children,” said an elderly-sounding man. The phone disconnected, and the line went dead.

“What the hell?” I muttered, my hand frozen on my keyboard.

“What just happened?” Alicia asked, swiveling her chair toward me, her voice edged with concern. 

“Check the update,” I said, rubbing my temples as I tried to piece together what I had just heard. Calls like this one always left a pit in my stomach – a mess of fear and danger lingering in the air. The adrenaline that hit when you knew something was about to go very wrong. 

Alicia’s brow furrowed as she leaned over her screen, reading the latest update aloud to the officers already en route to the call. Her voice, usually steady, held a slight tremor. We’d been through some rough calls in this windowless 911 center, but something about this one felt different.

Alicia and I had been working together for almost five years, sitting side by side, monitoring the chaos as it played out on the other end of the line. Over the years, we’d learned each other’s rhythms—the unspoken language that formed between two people who spend too many late nights wading through tragedy and disaster. She was sharp, quick with her words, and always had a calm presence when the world was falling apart.

I’d seen her manage everything—from multi-car crashes to missing children—but nothing ever shook her like domestic calls. Maybe it was because those were the ones that stuck with you, the ones that haunted you long after the shift ended. Alicia once told me, after a particularly brutal call, that it was never the emergencies you were prepared for that got you—it was the ones that felt like they’d been building up for years.

“That voice,” I muttered, my mind circling back to the phone call. “Jim, the neighbor. He sounded old, but angry. Like he’s been holding onto this for a long time.”

“Yeah,” Alicia agreed, her voice low as she transmitted more updates to the officers. “And it sounds like he’s about to snap. Do we have anything on the address?”

I tapped a few keys, pulling up the files we had. “Jessica and Matthew. Married for at least five years. There’ve been a couple of noise complaints, one domestic disturbance call—no arrests.”

“Figures,” Alicia said, shaking her head. “Doesn’t mean it wasn’t happening. Just means they weren’t cooperating with the cops.”

I nodded, feeling a twist in my gut. It’s always like that. The signs were always there if you knew where to look. Jim’s call wasn’t just frustration. He’d probably been watching this unfold from his front porch for months, helpless as the system failed Jessica. Maybe that’s why he was so angry.

I didn’t know much about Jessica, but I could picture her standing in her hotel room, her fingers absentmindedly playing with the wedding ring she likely still wore. I imagined her on her wedding day, smiling nervously, twisting that ring as she made her vows, believing that this man, Matthew, was her future. That he loved her, that their life would be full of promise.

Back then, the ring must’ve felt light—symbolic of the love she thought she was building. But now? Now it was a chain. A burden. With every hit, every scream, the weight of that small band must’ve grown heavier, binding her to him, making it harder to leave.

I imagined her staring at it, the metal cold against her skin, the love long drained from it, leaving only a hollow symbol of the violence she endured.

The phone rang, jolting me from my thoughts. I picked up.

“911, what’s your emergency?”

The voice on the other end was calm, unnervingly steady. “It’s me again. Jim. I shot him.”

My breath caught in my throat. “Who did you shoot, Jim?”

“Matthew,” he said, like he was stating the obvious. “He’s dead in the driveway. I warned you guys to beat me there. I wasn’t going to wait. He would’ve killed her.”

I glanced at Alicia, who had stopped typing. Her hands trembled as she scrambled to give the officers the new update. The tension in the room was palpable, the kind that sat heavy on your chest and made it hard to breathe.

“Where’s the gun now, Jim?” I asked, keeping my voice as steady as possible. It was important to keep him talking, to make sure this didn’t escalate any further.

“I gave it to the bartender,” he said, the calmness in his voice unsettling. “I’m sitting at the bar, waiting for the cops. Just wanted to let you know—he won’t hurt anyone anymore.”

There was a long pause. I could hear the low murmur of conversation in the background, the soft clink of glasses. It was surreal, this calmness in the wake of violence.

“Okay, Jim,” I said, swallowing the lump in my throat. “Stay where you are. The officers are on their way. Keep your hands off the gun.”

He didn’t say goodbye. The line just went dead.

I sat there for a moment, gripping the mouse so hard I thought I might break it. Alicia’s voice hummed in the background, updating the officers as the situation unfolded, but I barely heard her. I couldn’t shake the image of Jessica, hiding in some dingy hotel, her fingers tracing that ring she probably didn’t even want anymore.

Later, after the dust had settled, we learned more about Jim. He wasn’t just a nosy neighbor—he was a good man, trying to protect someone he cared about. Matthew had been beating Jessica for months. Jim had called the cops a few times when he heard the fights, but nothing ever came of it. Jessica never pressed charges. She was too scared, too stuck.

One day, Jessica finally confided in Jim. She told him everything—how she felt trapped, how she didn’t know how to get out. Jim, being the kind of man who couldn’t stand by and watch someone suffer, had helped her leave. He paid for her to stay at a hotel, just until she could figure things out. He thought it was enough.

But Matthew had found her. Somehow, he always found her.

Our first call that night was for a domestic disturbance at the hotel. The officers were on their way, but they were too far out, tied up on another call. Jessica must’ve reached out to Jim, told him Matthew had found her. That’s when Jim called us—when he decided he wasn’t going to wait for help.

I later watched the body-cam footage. Jessica sat in the detective’s office, recounting her story. Her hands fidgeted with her wedding ring, twisting it around her finger, back and forth, the diamond catching the light as she spoke.

That ring had once been a symbol of love, a promise of a future she thought she’d have. But as Matthew’s violence grew, it had become something else—a reminder of the life she was trapped in, the life she couldn’t escape.

As she finished her story, she slid the ring off her finger and dropped it on the floor. I watched as it rolled across the tile, the sound barely a whisper in the silence of the room.

She stared at it for a long moment, then stood up and left without picking it up.

I couldn’t help but wonder if, in that moment, the weight of the ring had finally disappeared.

September 24, 2024 00:10

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Jax Wilder
02:38 Sep 24, 2024

You're writing always pulls me in, as if I'm there watching it all happen. Well done.

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Jackson Anhalt
20:39 Oct 01, 2024

Thank you so much. ☺️☺️

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