Submitted to: Contest #297

53 Years of Omertà

Written in response to: "Write a story with a number or time in the title."

Crime Fiction

Santo Gianelli checked his watch again—10:59 p.m. He'd been punctual his entire life, a habit formed during his fifty-three years with the Ricci family. A full hour early for an 11:59 meeting wasn't excessive. It was prudent.

A photograph sat in his wallet—creased, faded, but preserved with care. His late wife, Maria, holding their daughter Sophia at her confirmation. The sight of it still tightened his throat, twenty-six years after losing Maria to cancer. She'd stood by him through prison, through the family business, through everything. "Do what's right, Santo," she'd whisper at night. "Not what's easy." He ran his thumb over the worn edge of the photo before tucking it away.

The Philadelphia Zoo's central pathway stretched before him, empty and eerie after hours. Security lights cast long shadows across the concrete, and somewhere in the distance, a peacock cried out like a woman in distress. Santo's breath fogged in the April chill as he walked, counting his steps—another habit he couldn't break. Numbers never lied, unlike people.

He'd spent the last forty minutes circling the perimeter, checking entrances, exits, potential hiding spots. Old habits from a different life. The sloppy and lazy slept with the fishes. The careful grew old.

"Mr. Gianelli?" A voice called softly from the shadows. One of the night security guards—young guy, maybe thirty, with a flashlight and nervous demeanor. "You're not supposed to—"

"I'm meeting Michael Ricci," Santo said, not stopping. "He's expecting me."

The guard hurried to keep pace. "Sir, I'm going to need to see some—"

Santo turned, fixing the guard with a stare that had made hardened criminals step back. "Call him if you want. Or check your clipboard again. But don't waste my time."

The guard swallowed visibly, glanced down at his clipboard. "I... I see it now. Sorry, Mr. Gianelli. It's just protocol."

"Protocol is good," Santo nodded, his voice softening slightly. "Keeps everyone honest. But remember, kid—not everything important gets written down."

It was the first rule he'd learned from old Don Paolo. Some things stay in the air. Words disappear. Paper doesn't.

Santo paused at the Reptile and Amphibian House, peering through the darkened windows. Just last week, the papers had been full of the story—a pair of century-old Western Santa Cruz Galapagos tortoises becoming first-time parents. Abrazzo and Mommy, they called them. Four tiny hatchlings from parents who'd been at the zoo longer than Santo had been with the family. There was something poetic about that—creatures who moved slow, lived long, and still managed to surprise everyone.

Driving over from South Philly, Santo had passed the Philadelphia Museum of Art and its famous steps. Every morning for thirty years, he'd run those same steps at dawn, just like Rocky Balboa in the movie, punching the air at the top. Not because he was a fan—though he was—but because after prison, he'd needed to rebuild himself from nothing. Step by painful step. Today's youngsters wanted to sprint to the top without putting in the work. They didn't understand that the climb itself was what made you strong.

His phone buzzed. Michael Ricci, the family's young CEO: At the Monkey House. Enter through the staff door.

Santo tucked his phone away, straightening his cashmere overcoat. Twenty years since the family had gone legitimate. Twenty years rebuilding what the RICO indictments had destroyed. Twenty years making the Ricci name respectable again. And now the grandson of Don Paolo Ricci wanted a midnight meeting at the zoo.

Bad sign. Terrible sign.

The Monkey House loomed ahead, its Victorian architecture more menacing than whimsical at night. Santo found the staff entrance unlocked. The smell hit him immediately—primate, disinfectant, tropical plants. Dimmed emergency lights illuminated the central viewing area, where Michael Ricci stood with his back to the entrance, hands in the pockets of his designer jacket, looking into a darkened enclosure.

At thirty, Michael had been CEO of Ricci Enterprises for three years. Princeton educated. Silicon Valley trained. He had his mother's delicate features—Carla Ricci, who'd fled back to Sicily rather than raise her son in the shadow of a prison sentence. Santo had helped raise the boy in her absence, taught him to throw a baseball, to tie a tie, to look men in the eye when speaking. Now Michael couldn't even turn to face him.

The irony wasn't lost on Santo. He'd never had a son of his own—just Sophia, who was now a cardiothoracic surgeon in Boston with two kids who called him Nonno. She'd escaped the family legacy by his design, with his blessing. Michael hadn't been so lucky.

"You know why I like it here, Santo?" Michael didn't turn around. "These monkeys—spider monkeys—they're communal. They share resources. But there's always a hierarchy. Always leaders and followers."

Santo stopped twelve feet away. "Your message said urgent, Michael."

Finally, Michael turned. In the dim light, Santo could see the resemblance to Paolo—the same determined set of the jaw, the same calculating eyes. But where Paolo's gaze had held wisdom, Michael's held only ambition.

"It is urgent." Michael's smooth face was illuminated by the blue glow of his smartwatch. "You've served my family well. But we're making some changes. Organizational restructuring."

Santo felt his stomach tighten. The familiar weight of dread. A flash of memory—sitting across from Paolo in the visitation room at Lewisburg, the old man's hands trembling with early Parkinson's as he gripped Santo's sleeve. Promise me you'll keep them legitimate, Santo. Promise me they won't end up in here.

"You're letting me go," Santo said, his voice steadier than he felt.

"'Letting go' sounds harsh. I prefer 'transitional separation.'" Michael smiled, showing perfect teeth. "We'll keep your pension intact. Your health benefits. Your stakes in the legitimate enterprises. But the board—"

"The board answers to you. Let's be clear about that."

Michael's smile didn't falter. "The board agrees we need fresher perspectives. People who understand modern business. Digital ecosystems. Cryptocurrency. Artificial intelligence."

Santo had known this was coming. The meetings he wasn't invited to. The decisions made without his input. The new "consultants" with their tech jargon and shifty eyes.

"You're going back to the old ways," Santo said quietly.

"We're evolving. Finding new efficiencies. New revenue streams."

"Racketeering with computers instead of baseball bats."

Michael's expression hardened. "Twenty years playing by their rules, Santo. Twenty years of being watched, investigated, harassed by every three-letter agency. For what? Scraps from their table?"

A spider monkey shrieked from the darkness behind the glass, making Michael flinch. Santo didn't move.

"Your grandfather understood something you don't, Michael. He understood limits."

"My grandfather died in federal prison because he didn't understand how the game changed. I won't make the same mistake."

Santo glanced at his watch—11:50. Nine minutes until midnight.

"You're going to get everyone sent back to prison," Santo said. "Including yourself."

Michael laughed, the sound echoing in the empty space. "That's what you don't get. The digital world doesn't work like the old neighborhoods. It's borderless. Anonymous. Untraceable when done right."

"That's what they all say before the indictments drop," Santo said quietly.

Michael leaned forward, his voice dropping to a whisper. "Let me tell you something. We've got people inside the Bureau now. People who can make things disappear. People who owe us."

Santo kept his face neutral, despite the flash of alarm inside. "You broke omertà? You're discussing business with outsiders?"

"It's not like the old days, Santo. Information is currency now."

"Information is a noose," Santo corrected. "Especially when shared with the wrong people."

Santo studied the young man before him. He remembered holding Michael as an infant while his father served time. Teaching him to ride a bike during prison visitations. Watching him graduate summa cum laude while federal agents took pictures from unmarked cars.

"Your grandfather came to me when I was twenty-seven," Santo said. "Younger than you are now. I'd just done a five-year bid at Lewisburg for a job that went sideways. Know what he told me?"

Michael's eyes narrowed. "I'm sure you're about to tell me."

"He said, 'Santo, the government's got computers now. They got guys who can add faster than you can think. The old way is done.' That was 1984." Santo took a step closer. "You think the feds haven't figured out Bitcoin? You think they're not already inside whatever dark web operation you're planning?"

For a moment, uncertainty flickered across Michael's face. Then it hardened again.

"Maybe my grandfather was too cautious. Maybe he could've fought harder."

"He fought smart. That's why there's still a family business for you to inherit."

"The world moves faster now."

"Some things don't change," Santo replied. "Omertà isn't just about keeping quiet. It's about protecting the family, even from itself."

Michael checked his watch. "This isn't a negotiation, Santo. The decision's been made. The board votes tomorrow morning, but it's just a formality. I wanted to tell you myself, out of respect."

Santo felt rage building in his chest. Not for himself—for the family that three generations had built and protected. For Paolo Ricci, who'd died handcuffed to a hospital bed. For the sacrifices made, the lessons learned in blood and tears and prison time.

"You know what they call thirty-year-olds running companies now?" Santo kept his voice even. "Prodigies. Visionaries. Time was, being young meant you hadn't earned your place yet. Now, being young is all that matters."

"The world changes," Michael said. "Adapt or die."

A memory surfaced—Santo's first AA meeting after his release from prison. The serenity prayer. God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change...

Thirteen years sober. Thirteen years of facing reality without chemical filters.

"You're making a mistake," Santo said simply.

"Noted." Michael straightened his jacket. "There's a severance package. Generous. Jake Levinson will contact you tomorrow with details."

Jake Levinson—the new consigliere in waiting. Thirty-two years old with an MBA from Wharton and a cousin at the SEC. Santo had never trusted him.

The spider monkeys began chattering again, their silhouettes visible now as his eyes adjusted to the darkness behind the glass. They moved like shadows, climbing, swinging, watching.

"I've given my life to this family," Santo said. "Fifty-three years. I did eight years in federal prison protecting your grandfather's operations. I rebuilt our legitimate businesses while your father was inside. I kept everything running while you were at Princeton learning economic theory from professors who've never made a dollar outside academia."

Michael's jaw tightened. "And we're grateful. That's why the package is so generous."

"I don't want your package. I want you to listen." Santo took another step closer. "The legitimate businesses are profitable. Clean. Protected from RICO statutes. Why risk everything on some digital racketeering scheme?"

"Because playing by their rules means staying small!" Michael's composure cracked. "We could be ten times bigger. Twenty times. We have the infrastructure, the connections—"

"And twenty years of goodwill with federal prosecutors who remember the old days," Santo cut in. "You think Agent Braddock won't notice sudden unexplained income? The man's been watching us since before you were born."

Michael's face flushed. "Agent Braddock is retiring next month."

Santo felt his blood run cold. "And you think that's coincidence? They're setting you up, Michael. New agent takes over, eager to make his name. Old agent feeds him intel on his way out. Tale as old as time."

A flicker of doubt crossed Michael's face, quickly replaced by determination.

"We've gamed it out. Run the scenarios. The risk is acceptable."

"To you, maybe. You never served time." Santo's voice dropped. "Federal prison isn't a corporate retreat, Michael. It's where men like your grandfather died, alone except for a guard who couldn't care less."

The monkeys had gone quiet, as if listening. Santo's watch showed 11:56.

Michael pulled out his phone, tapped the screen. "Car's waiting at the south entrance. We're done here."

"Not quite." Santo reached into his pocket, pulled out a small thumb drive. "Take this."

Michael eyed it suspiciously. "What is it?"

"Everything I know about Agent Braddock. His patterns. His informants. His blind spots. Everything I've learned in twenty years of dealing with him."

Michael hesitated, then took the drive. "Why give me this if you think I'm making a mistake?"

"Because you're Paolo's grandson. Because your father trusted me to look after you. Because this family is the only thing I've ever really cared about." Santo met his eyes. "And because maybe, after you look at what's on there, you'll reconsider."

Something shifted in Michael's expression—not softening, exactly, but recalculation. He pocketed the drive.

"I'll review it."

"That's all I ask."

They stood in silence for a moment, two men from different generations, different worlds, connected by an invisible thread of family loyalty that stretched across decades.

Michael's phone buzzed. He glanced at it. "My car's here."

"Go ahead. I want to stay a few minutes."

Michael hesitated, then extended his hand. Santo took it, feeling the smooth skin of a man who'd never worked with his hands.

"Thank you for your service, Santo."

"I'm still on the board, Michael. I'll be at tomorrow's meeting."

Michael's eyes narrowed slightly, but he nodded. "Of course."

After he left, Santo sat on a bench facing the monkey enclosure. His watch read 11:59. He took out his phone, sent a single text to a number he hadn't contacted in years: Meeting complete. As expected.

The reply came almost instantly: Surveillance confirmed. Recording clear.

Santo put the phone away, feeling the weight of his decision. Fifty-three years of omertà. Fifty-three years of keeping the family's secrets. And now, breaking the code to save what remained.

The thumb drive Michael now carried contained nothing about Braddock—it held detailed plans of the digital racketeering operation Michael had been developing with his new team. Plans Santo had discovered, documented, and now delivered into evidence. By morning, the federal task force would have everything they needed.

Michael would never know it was Santo who betrayed him. He would assume it was one of his new tech consultants, the ones he trusted more than family. The ones who didn't understand the true meaning of loyalty.

Sometimes keeping silent was wrong. Sometimes speaking up was the only way to preserve what mattered.

Santo stood, his knees aching. Fifty-three years with the family. Eight years in prison. Thirteen years sober. Tomorrow, the board would indeed vote—not on Santo's removal, but on Michael's emergency leave of absence following his unexpected legal troubles. Santo would assume temporary leadership until the situation stabilized.

He thought of Sophia and her children—his grandchildren who were growing up free from the shadows that had defined his life. He thought of Maria, and what she would say about his decision. Do what's right, not what's easy.

He thought of Paolo Ricci, who had trusted him to keep the family safe, even from itself. Especially from itself.

The spider monkeys watched him from their enclosure, their eyes reflecting the emergency lights like tiny stars. Santo nodded to them as he walked toward the exit.

"What time is it?" a voice called from behind him. A young security guard, different from the one earlier.

Santo glanced at his watch, though he already knew the answer. "Midnight," he said. "Time for things to change."

Outside, the Philadelphia skyline glowed against the night sky. From here, he could just make out the silhouette of the Art Museum steps in the distance—steps he'd climbed every morning for decades, reminding himself that life was about endurance. About getting up when everything in you wanted to stay down.

Tomorrow would be no different. He would climb those steps again. And when he reached the top, he would stand there overlooking the city—a city that had tried to bury him, imprison him, forget him—and he would start again. Because that's what survivors did.

Because that's what family meant.

As he walked to his car, Santo Gianelli allowed himself a rare smile. Fifty-three years of omertà had taught him when to stay silent.

And when to speak.

Posted Apr 07, 2025
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Carolyn X
17:00 Apr 17, 2025

Hi, I was sent your story to critique. I suggest that you define Omerta near the beginning of your story to help readers understand the plot.

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Alex Marmalade
11:55 Apr 19, 2025

Carolyn! Thanks so much for taking the time to read and share your thoughts 😊

That's a really interesting point about defining "omertà" earlier in the story. I actually went back and forth on this while drafting! Part of me wanted to explain it right away, but another part wondered if letting it unfold through context might work for readers.

You know what's funny? Santo literally just showed up in my imagination while I was thinking about Philadelphia Zoo. He sort of sidled up next to me in my mind, this weathered consigliere figure counting his steps and checking his watch. I briefly mentioned this whole zoo inspiration in last week's newsletter - how characters sometimes arrive unannounced and fully formed.

I'm curious - did you find the meaning of omertà became clear as the story progressed, or did it remain somewhat ambiguous? The code of silence is such a fascinating aspect of that world.

Your feedback helps me think about how to make these stories more accessible while still maintaining that sense of discovery. Thank you for that!

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Carolyn X
16:53 Apr 19, 2025

I suppose talking about omerta too early in the story would ruin the twist ending. Maybe you should even consider changing the title. I wrote my comment after reading the comment from Alexis, but she said, she is not an avid crime reader. I also wrote a short story about a retired mob guy and I did understand and appreciate your story.

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Alexis Araneta
01:57 Apr 08, 2025

Alex, how is it that even with a crime story (a genre I don't normally go for), you pepper it with your brilliant insights ? A complelling tale of loyalty and how sometimes, doing the right thing is a contradiction. Great work !

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