My mom’s been dead now 27 ½ days, but it feels like 27 ½ years. Losing her has been hard. No more phone calls at 6am, telling me to get a job. It annoyed me at the time, but now I really miss it. Why? Why did this happen? She was so young, barely 60 years old. By the time they diagnosed the cancer, it was already too late. She withered into something unrecognizable. By the end, she was well under 100 pounds, with sunken cheeks. She was a woman who spent her life finding beauty in her surroundings through the lens of a camera, only to have it taken in such an ugly way.
Mom was a famous photographer. Some of her work was in National Geographic. She left me a small portion of her fortune, the rest went to charity, an old Polaroid and a blender. My mom’s mansion was given to my sister, Joyce. We were never close, she was unpleasant most of the time and had the personality of a wet mop, the rest of the time. My brother, James, got all the cars. Doesn’t seem fair, why did she only leave me a small sum of money and an old, cheap-looking Polaroid?
My name is Daniel, and I am a poor author, living in a studio apartment. I lived a quiet life, simple, which I enjoyed some of the time, however, there are times when I wished I had financial freedom and could enjoy some of the finer things in life like my siblings.
When I opened the cedar box and pulled out the camera, it had a smell I knew very well. It was the faint aroma of lavender and vanilla. I closed my eyes for a moment just inhaling that scent, memories of my childhood flooding into my mind. I opened my eyes again and pulled out the pouch that held the camera, which seemed fancier than the camera itself.
My mom was a nature fanatic, loved trees and animals. She was an amazing lady, who had an incredible eye. She loved to capture truth in people’s smiles and the beauty of Mother Nature. Honestly, I was never interested in her photography until now. If only I had seen that note at the bottom of that cedar box, things would be so much different now, but sometimes fate finds a crack and steps through it. I couldn’t deal with this anymore. I put the camera back in the box, closed the lid and put it safely away on my closet shelf.
Years passed and the camera lay buried under sweaters and empty shoeboxes with the memories I didn’t have the strength to face.
One day, I was looking for a hiding spot for my pistol and I stumbled across the cedar box. I opened it and that familiar smell hit me like a freight train, instantly drawing me in. It reopened a semi-healed wound, but I knew it was time. I picked up the camera in that red, velvet pouch, set it aside and grabbed a stack of photos that was sitting underneath it. My mother never photographed the whole body of a person, just a smile or their shadow. It makes sense now that I know the entire story. Boy I really wish I would’ve seen that note.
I took the camera out of the pouch and turned it over in my hands to study it. It had brass buttons that looked much older than I thought they would. I dusted it off and loaded the film that I could only assume was included with the camera. It was also brass, which I thought was strange.
I decided to take a walk and test out the camera. I stretched out the old leather strap, which could’ve been hundreds of years old. It looked like 1800’s aged leather but it was still sturdy, so I put it around my neck and headed out the door.
I was slowly walking down the sidewalk trying to find something worth photographing, when there it was, a sexy, candy-apple red Porshe that I dreamt of since I was 12 years old. I raised the camera, pushed down on the button and the camera made a loud snap and POOF from the flash. The photo popped out the bottom and the number on the top when from 5 to 4.
I looked at the photo as it started developing and damn this thing was magnificent! I have seen photos taken with digital cameras that didn’t have this clarity and in black and white. There was definitely something weird about this camera. I went home, not wanting to waste the remaining 4 photos. Lord knows where to buy more film.
I decided I was going to spend the rest of my day writing. I had been in a funk but right now I felt alive. Like my pen was out of my control. It was exhilarating!
Before I knew it, 3 days had passed. I was a machine, writing practically nonstop. My focus was interrupted by a knock on the door. I thought, “oh shit, who the fuck was this?” No one hardly visits me anymore. I had not showered in a few days.
“Hello?” I answered on the doorbell camera.
“Oh hey, Daniel? It’s Joey,” said a burly man, who looked vaguely familiar.
“Joey?” I asked, sounding confused.
“Yeah, from college!” he answered.
“Hold on,” I answered and headed towards the door.
Joey, damn, we had not talked in years! I gathered myself and opened the door. It was definitely Joey. He was heavier with a long beard but I recognized that buck-toothed grin.
“Hey, Danny boy!” Joey shouted.
“Heeeey,” I said awkwardly, my eyes squinting in the bright sunlight that I have not seen in 3 days.
“Guess what I’m selling?” Joey asked excitedly, pointing over his shoulder at the candy-apple Porshe parked on the curb.
“What’s that?” I asked, looking enviously at my dream car.
Joey tossed a set of keys at me and said, “She’s yours if you want her, no catch. You can have her for $1. I got a bad ass job in Germany so I’m moving out of the country and she the last item I need to get rid of. For some reason, you popped in my head and I remembered you telling me how you always wanted one.”
A laugh escaped through my mouth which was hanging open in disbelief. “For real?” I asked him, thinking this had to be a joke.
Joey nodded, “it’s yours for a dollar!”
“Deal!” I shouted, reaching for my wallet. I pulled out a dollar, handed it to him and he handed me the title.
“If you’re ever overseas, look me up!” Joey said as he turned to get into a car that just pulled up.
“Ummmm, thanks,” I said, still not sure if this was real life.
I shut the door and thought, “could it be?” Luck itched and it had teeth.
I walked over to the table where I set the camera a few days ago and just stared at it. I picked it up, inspecting it, trying to find answers but only ended up with more questions.
I lived in a lonely bachelor’s pad that smelled like leftover tacos and wet dog. I needed a change and could help but ask if this old camera had powers of some sort? Why not? Stranger things have happened…I think.
I shook my head and decided to go back to writing. I felt so alive and it seemed stupid to waste it. My pen was on fire!
The next day, I decided to take the Porshe out for a spin and maybe give the camera another go. After taking a shower and putting on some fresh clothes, I grabbed the keys, the camera and headed out the door.
This car was incredible! Everything I ever dreamed about! I was sitting at stoplight, feeling so fortunate at how my life was going these last several days, when I noticed some movement out of the corner of my eye. There she was, the most perfect woman I had ever laid eyes on. She noticed me looking so I quickly looked away. I heard an adorable laugh and looked back up. She smiled and waved at me. I held up my camera and pointed at her indicating that I wanted to take her photo. She smiled even bigger and struck a pose. I pressed the shutter button and POOF the flash popped and the numbers went from 4 to 3. The camera whirred and the photo spit out. The light turned green, I set the camera down and waved goodbye to the pretty lady.
I pulled the Porshe into my driveway and picked up the photo I took. I squinted down at it and gave it a couple of shakes. That couldn’t be right, how the fuck was I standing right next to her? It had to be some sort of reflection. I shook my head and headed back inside. I still felt really alive, so I wanted to go back to my pen.
The next morning, my phone vibrated. Ughhh, I totally drank too much last night. I stared at my screen, “Unknown Number”
“Hello,” I grunted with a raspy voice.
“Hi Danny,” the woman on the other end said.
I sat up really quick and my stomach did a flip-flop.
“Emma?!” I asked, knowing that voice anywhere.
“Hi there,” she giggled.
Yup, it was Emma Caloway. She never looked twice at me back in school but I had the biggest crush on her and here she was calling me!
“I don’t know why but I just…thought of you,” she said, “wanna catch up?”
“Yeah, sure,” I said a little too quickly.
We ended up talking for over an hour. After I hung up, I just lay there, staring up at the ceiling.
Once is luck but twice is a pattern. I thought out loud, “mom what did you leave me, a genie in a camera?”
This adventure started a week ago and I thought I would test the true power of this genie. I drove over to that house I admired from a distance knowing there was no way I could ever afford it and POOF, the flash went off and the number went down to 2. Let’s see if I get a deed to that home.
Two days later, I received a call from a lawyer and he said, “your Uncle James left you everything. There is a home in Vermont, I sent the address to your email, along with some pictures.”
I looked at the pictures and it was exactly the same as the photo I took a couple days ago. Same porch, same peeling paint and most of all, the swing, only I was sitting in the swing in the Polaroid. I threw the photo to the ground, thinking a horrible thought. “Had I caused my Uncle James’ death?”
I instantly went from feeling alive to feeling like I couldn’t breathe. I also couldn’t eat anything or sleep without waking up in a cold sweat. The camera seemed to be staring at me.
I decided to do some research online and read an article about relics that can be possessed. Sometimes, possessed by demons. I knew what I had to do.
I frantically dug through the cedar box, going through all the pictures until I found what I was looking for, a full body shot of mom as a young woman in her favorite sun dress. I set it on the table and POOF, the flash went off and the number dropped to 1. The photo spit out and as it developed I looked…
Nooooo! What was this?! It was not my mother at all, it was a photo of all humanity burning, with a mushroom cloud in the background.
I waited days, weeks, months and nothing. I concluded that it had to be a mistake. I had one photo left. I put the camera back in the pouch, set it back in the cedar box and noticed a handwritten note tacked at the bottom. I picked it up and immediately recognized the handwriting:
Daniel,
I leave this camera to you. Whatever you do, DO NOT use it out of greed, lust or in any manner than to capture the beauty of life. Most of all, never use it to try and change time, death, birth, or events. The result could mean the end of mankind. Protect it with your life. Love, Mom
Daniel had done everything wrong. Everything was all wrong! The end of mankind? There was one photo left, how could this mess be fixed? Then there was a knock…
He looked at the door camera. It was his mother but her face was covered in blood, her eyes were blank. He switched on the news:
“Today the city has gone crazy. Over to Suzy who is reporting downtown,”
“Yes, it is a scene right out of a zombie movie. The dead are rising and feeding off the living. Life is being reversed. Oh no, oh noooooo…”
“Suzy? Suzy? Sorry folks, it seems like we lost the feed. If you can, find shelter and do it now…”
Be careful sometimes history has a Bite!
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Perfect description of what all lonely bachelor pads smell like, lol. Fun change ups at the end, Donald.
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Haha
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Thanks colin
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A fun and fascinating story. Be careful what you wish for, right?
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There’s always a catch. Always
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The fact that you read the prompt and came up with this~ Speechless! I was not expecting that twist either - Wow. I am a newbie to Reedsy. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.
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Thanks I just write. I am a pen and paper guy. I let the ink do the talking. Thanks Denise.
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Welcome back, Donald. Did you have to take down all your previous work? Some simply step away for a bit and pop in ever so often.
Thanks for liking 'Unforgetaable'. And 'May e One Day'.
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Yea it’s all saved in my computer though. I was pretty disappointed in Reedsy but I love the people here. I decided I’m here to hang out with friends and just enjoy writing with all of you guys.
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Loved this one. I also wrote a mom story this week. Wonderful story telling!
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Thanks Sandra
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This story had such an interesting plot and ending. Thank you for sharing.
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Thanks Johanna
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I was hooked from the start. Great story with a twist ending!
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Thanks Hannah!
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This is a great story! The plot was incredibly creative. Good job and thanks for sharing!
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Thank you! I love writing spooky
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Hey Donald, good to see you back here! Brilliant concept of a genie in a camera and I liked how it all got a bit twisted at the end. Nice one!
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Thanks penelope
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For some reason, I am reminded of Friday the 13th: the series, a tv show back in the 80s where a trio of antique shop owners must retrieve cursed objects.
I wondered for a moment why she would leave this object to your main character, then I realized that of the 3 siblings, he was the most introspective and he respected her work.
Nice!
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I don’t remember that tv series. Cool that I draw that comparison. Thanks.
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I like the idea of fate finding a crack and stepping through it.
History certainly had a bite here. Gripping story which went in an unexpected direction. Nothing is what is seems here.
A price to everything! I enjoyed your story.
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Thanks Helen. Fate and photos are closely related
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Yes, it feels that way.
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Good job Donald. Inventive. Lost Mom last summer. Miss her all over again.
Jim
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Thanks Jim. Sorry about your mom.
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Whoa! What a cool story. I was not expecting that twist...or that ending. Great build up and foreshadowing moments, without spoiling the final reveal. How did you come up with this idea?
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First thanks. I just read prompt and it popped up in my mind. I was on Reedsy before. I’m back!
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That's awesome. Welcome back! I've only been writing for about two months, and on Reedsy for a few weeks.
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Thanks I read your story. Very descriptive and the talent is natural. Had a dark element. I came back to Reedsy cause of community is awesome. Good luck on ever winning. Seems like their judgement of stories has no solid backing. I do love my friends here now I have a new one! Keep writing!
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Fun story, creative and enjoyable read. I notice it changes to third person at the end and am curious if this is deliberate? (ie. Narrator goes from 'I' to 'Daniel'). Good twist on events with a big Beware!
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I am a tornado with changing 1st person, narrative, 4th wall. I use to have other stories on Reedsy. I closed old account or you could read my others and see the same style. I like to pull you through a story “by the hair.” I have always wrote stories, books this way. Thanks for reading!
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Love this take on a classic tale of the monkeys paw. The camera being the device to grant wishes and the slow descent into the horrible consequences was thrilling to read. Well done!
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Really fun and imaginative—great to see you back, Donald!
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What’s up!!!!! I don’t ever expect to win but I love my friends here
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I couldn’t agree more. The friendships and support from fellow writers here mean more to me than anything else.
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Wow. What an ending. Great story, I loved the zombie touch.
Coincidentally, my name is Daniel, and I’m a struggling author myself.
Note to self: if my mother ever leaves me a camera, it’s going straight into storage.
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Haha you’re funny. Yea being a writer is not easy. Thanks for reading.
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You ever published anything
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I have self published two books on amazon. Lux Mendacium and HeartCoil. I've currently got a third book out to some agents. only time will tell what comes next but thank you.
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Cool
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I have a publishing firm if you ever need help
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Wow, this is really impressive 😃 I love it.
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Hi Evelyn! Thanks for the love!
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Well, written, of course, and I'd love to know how you hit upon the idea for the story.
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I just make them up. I have idea then write. Thanks for reading so much!
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Brilliant! I loved the change in tone as the narrative progressed - beware of your wishes, they might come true 😀
The ending was perfect.
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Thanks Rohit. It’s these comments that make it all worth it!
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