I'm going to America. Episode 3! This is a SEIRES!!!

Submitted into Contest #92 in response to: Write a story set in a city where the power suddenly goes out, leaving everyone in darkness.... view prompt

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Crime Drama Romance

Note: This is not related to the story’s topic. This is a series (my first series in fact). If you are interested, I suggest you go read my first episode, and my second episode, go to my profile (link): https://blog.reedsy.com/creative-writing-prompts/author/iron-genius/


Episode 1: Torrey tells the story of how he met Amber Chanel and is about to tell about his brother’s death for the first time in his life to another outside person. This is also the past. It has been five months since Amber’s sister’s death in the present. It has been two months for Torrey (person who is telling the story) at that time when he was at Starbucks.

Episode 2: Torrey tells how his brother, Logan, dies. He is thinking about running away from his parents.



All I had to do was run away right?! I mean if you just say that your going to run away, you pack some stuff and hop into your car and drive somewhere like to California or like Arizona! How hard could it be? Well it was definitely hard for because my house has cameras all over the place for safety. Ugh…

May 01, 2021 00:21

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Amel Parvez
10:18 May 24, 2021

I am waiting.......

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Somegenius Kid
04:40 May 25, 2021

Oh!! Okey I'll make another story this week!!

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Amel Parvez
06:35 May 25, 2021

Oh Amazng. i am looking forward to it.

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Somegenius Kid
03:15 May 26, 2021

THANKS!!!

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Somegenius Kid
03:15 May 26, 2021

THANKS!!!

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Amel Parvez
03:52 May 26, 2021

You're welcome! <3

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Angelina Jeong
18:36 May 09, 2021

I feel like you can elaborate a little more.... its too vague and make sure the story is flowing but I think I would rate it like a 6/10

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Somegenius Kid
00:22 May 01, 2021

This is the beginning! I will add more later!!

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