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American Contemporary Horror

Garret Lipman was thinking he must know how Adam felt in the Garden of Eden when Eve tempted him with the apple. After all, the fruit was plucked from the tree of knowledge and insider knowledge meant everything to a young day trader at Goldman Sachs. It wasn’t just the attempt at insider trading that had placed Garret in his current predicament. As with most things in his life, it was poor decision making that put him in a situation where he had no idea how to extract himself from this singular moment of time where he finds himself staring into a shock of blinding light. All Garret could think about were the events leading up to this very pulse pounding second.


Garret lived in a Mid-Town apartment that could just as well have been called a walk in closet with futon and hot plate. With a rent of $2,200 a month for the 13th floor walk up, and his $100,000 dollar a year income as a junior trader, Garret didn't feel he was exactly crushing it. To make matters worse, his alarm clock failed. He awoke already late for his job in the financial market.


Garret owned one used Armani suit, charcoal gray, with two ties of similar gray tones, two Van Huesen white dress shirts and a pair of boot-black Velasca shoes with complimenting socks. His current wardrobe hung from the frame of his ten speed bike mounted to the wall, a relic from his days as a bike messenger. Garret couldn’t remember the last time he trucked the bicycle down the flights of stairs to take it out for a spin.


With no time to shower, several articles of clothing were already on him as he bounded down the stairwell rushing to get to work. The suit jacket was the last to join the rest of his ensemble as he powered out the front door of his building racing toward the subway. Today was supposed to be a big day.


Today Garret was going to manage the Sunshine Index Fund while his boss was conferencing out of town. It was called the Sunshine Index Fund, created from the portfolio’s of residents from the state of Florida. It represented government workers, teachers, nuns and retirees, even law enforcement pensions. Garret’s job for the day was to do nothing, simply watch the fund. Again, do nothing, unless he saw any wild or even subtle fluctuations needing to be brought to his boss’s attention, then he was to contact his boss immediately.


Garret was useless without his coffee. He’d have to buy it now and drink it on the train. Luckily, he was already thirty minutes into rush hour. There was no line. He snagged his Venti ignoring that they wrote “Gary” on the cup. The next minute he was through the turn-style high stepping it for the waiting subway car.


The subway car was like a frenetic beehive as commuters were disembarking or piling in with a simultaneous herd mentality. Garret arrived, the doors started to close. He yelled for someone to hold them open. The office workers just stared at him, a zombie look upon their faces. They were off to jobs of monotony that give one the feeling of being among the living dead. The train pulled away. Garret skidded to a stop. The lid to his cup flew off, spilling hot coffee on his wrist. Garret moved the dripping coffee from hand to hand like a hot potato. In his balancing act, some coffee spilled onto his dress shirt leaving a stain.


“Dammit!” Garret unleashed a tirade of swear words like a sea captain with Tourettes.


“Late for work?” The voice was sultry.


Garret spun around, spilling more coffee. On the platform against the wall, stood an old-fashioned wooden kiosk painted blood red like a phone booth from hell but slightly larger. On the displays, several electronic gizmos were offered for sale. Everything from burner phones to smart ones, including tablets and watches. 


Garret was surprised he was able to take in all the minute observations at a glance especially since the booth was manned by a woman. Not just any woman.


This young woman was stunning. Relaxed, posed in her chair like Mrs. Robinson in the Graduate. Garret guessed, standing, she’d be about 5’9 with curves lacking any sharp tangents. Her breasts easy to describe; perfect. Her body seemed to be in motion though she was sitting still. Her hair, wine red, hung past her shoulders. Garret stared into her eyes detecting a yellow ring within the reptilian green of the irides orbiting her pupils. When she smiled, her ivory teeth shone, two canines peaked out from inside her cherry red smile.


“Perhaps I can help you with that, Garret.” It wasn’t a whisper, but felt like one.


Garret almost dropped his coffee. “How do you know my name?


She placed an elbow on a knee. “I know a lot about you, Garret Lipman. For instance; I know you work at Goldman Sachs.”


“Who are you? How do you know me?” he said intrigued with growing unease.


She smiled, tilting back to laugh. “Your access card, silly. It’s hanging around your neck.”


Garret snapped up his access card that hung from a lanyard. It gave him access to the elevator that took him to the seventieth floor of Goldman Sachs trading center. Feeling silly, Garret shook his head. “You’ve got pretty damn good eyesight.”


“I do. I can see that you are late. I’ve just the thing for you.” The woman turned to her display, removed a smart watch. She spun back to Garret with a smile the Chesire Cat could envy. She whispered, “A special watch, for a special man.”


It was a golden AppleWatch with a honeycomb band and bejeweled frame. Garret thought it must easily be a thousand dollar watch. 


Garret stuttered. “I’m sorry, you know my name, what’s yours?”


“Eve.” Eve gently took a hold of Garret’s wrist and lay the watch across. “It’s perfect.”


“I can’t afford that.”


“Of course you can. We’ve a very generous payment plan.” She went to attach the watch.


Garret pulled his wrist away. “I’m sorry, I can’t. I've to get going. I’m late.”


She cooed. “You’ve got ten minutes before the next train arrives. Let me show the amazing features.”


“No…”


“Relax, Garret.” Her voice gentle as a mother’s kiss. Garret felt his anxiety escape his body via his shoulders. Eve set his coffee down taking hold of his wrist once again.


Garret never felt her slip the watch on. He realized it was in place when he looked from her eyes back to his wrist. His mouth formed to whistle at the beauty of the device. The gold band sparkled. The jewel framed screen was a rich obsidian color. Eve pressed a button turning the watch on. A half dozen electronic icons lined up on the watch screen like soldiers awaiting orders.


“This watch measures your heart rate.” Eve pressed the heart icon. A diagnostic graph appeared showing his pulse rate and O2 level. “Right now it’s pretty high, wouldn’t you say?"


Garret’s cheeks flushed red as he searched for an explanation. . He gathered himself. “I did just run for the train, y’know.”


“Ah yes. About that. Check this out.” Eve’s thumb dialed the digital crown of the watch. One app closed, a second, showing a quarter moon graphic, opened. “This measures your sleeping patterns, giving you an idea if you’re getting the right amount of sleep. Plus, check this out…” She tapped the screen. “Set an alarm and the watch actually taps you awake.”


Garret felt a tapping vibration on his wrist from the watch. “I’ll admit that’s cool, but this is way out of my budget.”


“You work in finance right? This app gives you up to the minute stock readouts. It connects to the same high speed frequency trading systems companies like your Goldman Sachs connect to. It’s state of the art.”


This tidbit got Garret’s interest. He took a closer look. Eve encouraged him. ”Go ahead, ask it about a stock. Just speak into the watch.”


Garret raised the watch to his mouth. “Okay… Apple Inc.?” Instantly, a stock readout appeared giving a real time animated trading price. Garret noticed a graph in the corner of the screen. “What’s that?”


Eve grinned. “I told you, it uses the same HFT the big financial hedge funds use. It taps into their AI infused algorithm predicting a future price in nanoseconds.”


Garret was impressed. “I can do that from my desk. We’re tapped into huge proximity server farms. Seeing that ability on this watch is incredible.” Garret noticed another icon. It was a clock face circled in red, a slash cutting through its center. “What’s this?”


“Don’t touch that...” Eve warned. Garret looked at her confused. Her smile morphed into the kind a person gives when sharing a secret they only know. “…Until I show you just how special this watch is.”


Eve sidled up closer to Garret. He could feel her warmth. “This button allows you to pause time. For seven seconds to be exact.”


A bell went off in his head. Garret’s skepticism leapt forward. “What the hell are you talking about?”


“May I demonstrate?” Eve held her hand out for the watch. 


Garret gave it over. She slid it on. Eve took stepped back and placed a finger to the watch. “Ready?” Garret nodded. From his point of view, Eve disappeared. He looked left and right, she was gone!


“Right behind you.” Her voice said invitingly.


Garret turned to see her smiling like a kitten who just caught a mouse. He wasn’t buying it. “It’s a trick. You… you hypnotized me.”


“What about your coffee?” She pointed to his cup on the kiosk counter. He turned to look. One second it was there, the very next, it vanished. He spun back around to Eve taking a sip. “Mmmm. Espresso macchiato. Nice.”


Eve stepped forward handing Garret his coffee and placed the watch back on his wrist. “Why don’t you give it a try?” She took back the drink.


Garret held up the watch ready to press the icon. He was nervously confused.


Eve encouraged. “It can’t hurt you.”


“What do I do with seven seconds?”


“You’ll figure something out, I’m sure.”


Garret pressed the app. He watched the countdown in large red numerals go from seven to one.” He hadn’t moved. The countdown ended.


Eve sighed. “Try again, Garret.” Pointing at the watch, “This time make use of that time.”


Garret pressed again. He looked around the station. People were frozen mid-walk. Papers floated in space. Everything was still and quiet. Looking at Eve, he could only think of one thing to do. Garret stepped forward and stole a kiss. He stepped back as the clock ran out without a second to spare.


Eve, noticing no change other than her own eye blink, seemed exasperated. “Garret, this isn’t going to work unless you do something with your time.”


Garret smiled holding up his coffee cup. The last few seconds of his time pause, he took his coffee back. Garret took a sip.


Eve was pleased. “Do you believe me now?”


Garret did believe her. His mind was already racing ahead. What he could do with an extra seven seconds on the trading floor could make him a billionaire, a Wall Street legend in a short amount of time. These thoughts were interrupted as the next train arrived at the station.


“So would you like the watch?” 


“Very much so.”


“It’s yours. Go. You’ll miss your train.”


Garret, lost in a cascade of dopamine enriched thoughts, couldn’t wait to get to work. In his brain he was already filthy rich with the sensual Eve as his girlfriend.


The doors were closing. Garret pressed his smartwatch. Time froze. In five seconds he boarded the train. Another two, the doors closed. He looked back. Eve was gone. The kiosk was gone. He checked to make sure the watch was still there and he hadn’t been hallucinating. He felt a tap on his shoulder. It was Eve.


She was frowning. “Aren’t you forgetting something?”


Garret figured she must have followed him on board. “What?”


Her frown reversed. Eve held up a red pen. “You forgot to sign the contract.”


“What? How much?”


“Why don’t you worry about that after you make your first million?” She handed him the pen and contract offering him her back to use for him to sign the page. “Oh, and Garret? We offer no warranty.”


Garret signed the form. The train arrived at the next station. Eve folded the contract and placed it safely between her ample breasts. “This is my stop. Pleasure doing business, Mr. Lipman.” She stepped off the train. “Remember what I said, time is money.”


The doors closed. Garret Lipman was off to a future that, at times, felt like it was coming seven seconds at a time.


Garret arrived at work an hour and fifteen minutes late. The stock market had been going through a flurry of activity since early morning. The dow was climbing, expecting to reach 40,000. Garret’s computer was on thanks to Simone, his boss’s secretary. Garret thanked her for not reporting him late. In his mind added her to his list of conquests to be made once he struck it rich.


He dropped into his chair and began to analyze the funds attracting the most activity. He set the Sunshine Index Fund off onto a side monitor.


There was a frenzy of activity in the commodities fund. A new pipeline was being voted on. Garret checked the algorithm. It seemed to be hedging upwards. He watched it tick up, then down a point, then up again. He waited for the next uptick. He hit the time pause button on his smart watch.


Everything on the seventieth floor came to a halt except Garret’s mouse circling his pad. It took him five seconds to move the Sunshine Fund into the commodities index fund. Time started again. Garret watched as the next uptick doubled the value of the Sunshine portfolio. Based on the size of the transaction, he had just made a ten million dollar commission. He hit the time pause button again and quickly sent the fund back to it’s original setting in its conservatively managed index.


At the end of seven seconds, Garret leapt from his chair and shouted out in joy. Everyone on the floor turned, then froze. Garret had pressed his watch again, taking his seat hoping no one saw his display of euphoria.


Garret noticed volatile activity in the real estate index fund. The arrow was snaking up high then dropping low then back to high. Similar to the commodities fund but bigger dips. The algorithm on his watch predicted a spike upwards. Garret was ready to blow things sky high. He hit pause and shifted the Sunshine Fund over. Seven seconds later the graph began to trend south. It dropped lower and lower. Garret watched in horror, both his computer screen and watch face, the value of the Sunshine Fund plummeting in free fall. Someone was shorting the real estate market.


Garret needed to stop the bleeding. The seven seconds were up yet the losses continued. Garret went into a panic. He realized, he still controlled time. He would just shift the fund to other hedge indexes and play it the same way as his first attempt. Garret looked at his watch. His jaw dropped. The power died. The watch face went blank. Garret was out of his chair. He left it spinning. He needed to find Eve.


That afternoon Garret searched the entire subway system riding train after train in the oppressive summer heat of the New York City transit system. After three hours, Garret found Eve at her kiosk in the Hell’s Kitchen part of town. Garret ran up, waving the watch. “Eve! The watch! There’s no power. I think it’s broken! You have to fix it!"


Eve held up the contract. “I told you, no warranty.”


Garret snarled, “You bitch! Do you know what you did to me?”


She sneered. “But what I can do is sell you a new battery, but this will cost you more. Your first purchase cost you your character, this will cost you your soul.” She held up the battery.


Garret had no time to argue. “Give me the damn thing.” He signed the contract.


Eve placed it with the other contract between her breasts. “I love it when I get a repeat customer.” She inserted the battery and powered the watch up handing it back to Garret. “Time is money.”


Garret checked the stock. The Sunshine Index Fund had lost 3/4 of it’s original value. It was only 3pm. There was still enough time to fix this by 4pm when the trading day closed. Garret had one more thing he needed to take care of. He pressed the seven second pause.


Garret kissed Eve for a final time then crossed to the platform to await his train which was close. Garret turned back and called out to Eve. She looked up. He held up the two contracts. Eve looked down between her breasts to see they were gone. Garret smiled. He lifted them during his seven second farewell kiss. Garret tore them up scattering them to the hot tunnel wind.


The train was almost at the station when Garret heard Eve’s sultry voice in his ear. “Sorry Garret, all sales final.” She was right behind him.


Garret wondered how did she get there so fast? Eve held up her own AppleWatch smiling an evil smile. With a shove, Eve pushed Garret onto the tracks, the train mere seconds away from hitting him. He hit the pause button one last time. Garret Lipman spent the last seven seconds of his life with his most recent moments flashing before his eyes, wishing he had more time.

June 06, 2024 22:25

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Jesse Todd
02:13 Jul 08, 2024

Great story!

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William Riling
19:09 Jul 08, 2024

Thank you! Please share and feel free to check out my other REEDSY PROMPT short stories. Much appreciated. Regards, Bill

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Jesse Todd
18:04 Jul 13, 2024

I like your storytelling and going to start a scary story youtube channel. Would you mind if I use your stories and put your name and a link to a page of yours if you have one? Thanks Bill

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Helen A Smith
13:58 Jun 09, 2024

A story that kept me hooked and I enjoyed the twist at the end.

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William Riling
14:06 Jun 09, 2024

Thank you! Check out my other short story, "Chemical Reaction."

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12:57 Jun 09, 2024

Ha very good! Even with a stoptime watch you can't beat the bulls and the bears! :) Great fun

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William Riling
14:05 Jun 09, 2024

Thanks for reading! Glad you liked it. Check out my other short story "Chemical Reaction. "

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Ray Riling
18:07 Jun 08, 2024

Twisty fun.

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