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The night draped the woods in darkness, a heavy cloak that whispered secrets and long-buried fears. A damp chill seeped through the trees as Reverend Elijah Mason threaded his way through the underbrush, the crisp leaves crunching softly beneath his careful steps. The lantern he carried flickered, casting long, trembling shadows that danced among the gnarled branches. He wore a cloak that hid the cut of his collar, the robes of a man of God, although he felt anything but righteous tonight.

He paused to listen, feeling the forest's breath—a rustle of wind, a distant cry of night creatures—before he pushed on. Ahead, the flickering light of a small fire emerged from the dark, a beacon drawing him closer. Agatha Wardwell sat beside it, her shawl wrapped tightly around her thin frame, her hands calloused and worn. The light painted her face in warm tones, though a shadow of wariness lingered in her eyes as she noticed his approach.

"Reverend," she said, her tone as cool as the night air. No warmth lingered in her voice, only the echo of their past confrontations.

“Agatha,” he acknowledged, nodding slightly, as he lowered his lantern to the ground. The act felt performative, though he hated the pretense. “I need your assistance.”

“Again?” she replied, an edge creeping into her words. “You’re quite determined, considering the last time we spoke.”

“I’ve come to bury the past,” he replied, allowing a tightness to creep into his voice, deliberately avoiding the underlying truths between them. “What I need… it’s not about our history.”

Agatha regarded him with a mixture of skepticism and curiosity, her posture rigid yet poised. “What do you seek this time?”

Elijah took a deep breath, the weight of his resolve gathering within him. “I wish to consult the dead,” he said at last, the words heavy as they left his lips.

“A bold request from one who cast me out,” she said, her gaze piercing. “Is it power you seek? Or are you merely lost?”

He could feel the swell of anger rising within him, but he clamped down, keeping his voice steady. “It is guidance, Agatha. I face a darkness I cannot comprehend. Elder Drake is not at peace. He speaks to me in dreams.”

The fire crackled, the sound echoing in the silence that followed. Agatha’s expression shifted slightly, the flickering flames highlighting a mixture of fear and something akin to pity. “You think you can just unearth the dead for your convenience?”

Elijah clenched his jaw, forcing himself to maintain his composure. “I have no other choice.”

“Then you will do as I say,” Agatha commanded, her tone brooking no argument. “You cannot summon the dead with such arrogance. You must approach this with humility.”

The air thickened around them as she began to circle the fire, murmuring ancient words under her breath. He watched, his heart thudding in his chest, the rhythm pounding a warning he dared not acknowledge. Shadows lengthened and danced in the corners of his vision, and a heaviness pressed down on him, urging him to turn back.

But he didn’t. He was beyond fear now.

“Tell me what to do,” he urged, his voice barely above a whisper.

Agatha hesitated, her eyes narrowing. “You must let go of who you think you are. What you seek is not merely a voice but the truth of your own spirit.”

“Just bring him forth,” Elijah insisted, his frustration boiling to the surface.

A sigh escaped Agatha's lips, full of resignation. “You seek not the light, but the shadow you’ve created.”

The fire dimmed, its flames wavering. Elijah felt a chill settle over the grove as Agatha closed her eyes, her voice rising in pitch, filling the air with an otherworldly energy. He could feel the tension coiling around him, tightening like a noose.

“Drake,” Agatha called out, her voice commanding. “Come forth and guide this man, if you dare.”

The night swallowed her words, and a palpable stillness fell over the grove. The wind held its breath, the darkness thickening, wrapping around Elijah like a suffocating fog. A silence deeper than the woods surrounded him, and for a moment, he thought he might faint from the weight of it.

Then, a voice cut through the haze, cold and distant, laced with authority and sadness. “Why do you call me, Elijah?”

The breath caught in his throat. The voice was unmistakable—Elder Drake.

“Elder!” Elijah gasped, his heart racing, exhilaration mingling with dread. “I need your guidance. I’ve strayed far from the path. The people… they no longer trust me. I cannot discern good from evil in this darkness.”

“You sought to banish the darkness, yet you have become its servant,” Drake’s voice resonated, filled with disappointment. “You drove Agatha from her home, believing it was right. You wielded power as though it were a sword, but now you find yourself lost.”

Elijah felt the ground shift beneath him, the weight of his mentor's words pressing heavily upon his chest. He trembled as realization flooded over him, a wave of shame crashing against the walls he had built around his heart. “No,” he protested weakly, though deep down, he knew the truth.

Agatha’s eyes widened, realization dawning as she stepped closer, her voice trembling. “You are not who I thought you were,” she murmured, horror etched into her features. “You did not come to seek the light. You came to drag the darkness into the light, to resurrect your own ambitions.”

“No!” Elijah shouted, anger flaring as he turned toward her, desperation clawing at his throat. “I only wanted to do right by the people!”

Drake’s voice cut through the air again, each word heavy with the gravity of regret. “You thought the end justified the means, but the shadow you cast only serves to obscure your heart. You are the very darkness you sought to extinguish.”

“Do not say that!” Elijah cried, feeling a tremor run through him. “I have served! I have sacrificed!”

“What sacrifice did you make?” Drake replied, his voice echoing, unwavering. “You sacrificed others in your quest for righteousness, casting out those you deemed unworthy. What light do you truly seek?”

Elijah staggered back, the shadows swallowing him. He looked at Agatha, desperation filling his eyes. “Help me,” he pleaded, his voice raw. “I cannot do this alone.”

But Agatha’s face hardened, her earlier pity replaced by a resolve he hadn’t expected. “You do not understand,” she replied softly. “There is no light in the darkness you’ve embraced. You must confront it alone, face the very consequences of your actions.”

As her words sank in, the grove around them seemed to darken further, the air thick with unspoken truths. The lantern sputtered, casting shadows that stretched and flickered, dancing like phantoms around them. 

Elijah turned back to Drake, his mentor’s spirit looming larger in the darkness, disappointment etched into the air. “What must I do?” he asked, his voice trembling. “How can I atone?”

“Do not seek my forgiveness,” Drake’s voice resonated with finality. “Seek the truth within you. The path to redemption is one of humility and sacrifice, but you must walk it with your own two feet.”

In that moment, the grove erupted in a sudden gust of wind, extinguishing the lantern’s flame and plunging them into darkness. Agatha gasped, the sudden loss of light drawing her back into the shadows. The air grew colder still, a silence filling the space where the voices had been.

And then, as abruptly as it had begun, it was over. The fire crackled softly once more, but the shadows shifted in the corners of Elijah’s vision. Agatha’s presence had faded, leaving him alone, suspended in the aftershock of revelation.

Elijah fell to his knees, his breath ragged as he felt the weight of the world upon him. In the darkness, he grasped for a flicker of hope, a spark of light to guide him through the void. But there was only silence, a yawning chasm of uncertainty where certainty had once lived.

He could no longer hide from the truth that had been laid bare before him. The darkness he had sought to extinguish had taken root within him, entangled in the very fabric of his spirit. And now, faced with the echoes of his past, he understood—redemption was not a path he could demand of others, but one he must forge for himself.

As he knelt there, trembling with the weight of his own choices, he felt the beginnings of a flicker in his chest, a hesitant spark of resolve. The path ahead would not be easy; it would be paved with the very humility he had forsaken.

But for the first time in many moons, he sensed the glimmer of light awaiting him, a whisper of hope amidst the shadows. Rising slowly, he stepped deeper into the night, knowing that the journey toward redemption would begin with a single step.

And perhaps, in time, he would learn to navigate the darkness—not as a conqueror but as one who had truly seen the light.

November 01, 2024 00:28

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Kiana M. Cauwels
13:22 Nov 07, 2024

Your first sentence drew me in and the spooky forest was a great setting choice. As a reader, I think your concept was a bit larger than the word count limit. I would have liked to see the Reverend’s dreams, see bits of his past and what he’d done, and understand what time in history this took place (since it’s tagged as historical fiction). Is the Elder Drake a god? Or is the Reverend’s “mentor” human but with magic? I like that his disembodied voice appears, that was another great spooky element. I also appreciated your message/theme!

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Alex Marmalade
14:53 Nov 08, 2024

😊 thanks for the encouragement and feedback Kiana. In answer to your questions...yes. Similar to light being both a wave and a particle, occupying two states of being simultaneously, I think that idea was trying to find form in this story. Thanks Kiana!😊

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