Whisper My Name Again

Written in response to: "Write a story that includes the line “I can’t sleep.”"

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Fiction Horror Mystery

The letter was already inside her apartment when she got home.

It wasn’t in the mailbox, on the floor, or slipped under the door. It was just there—sitting on the kitchen counter like it had been waiting for her all day.

Lily found it resting neatly beside the coffee mug she’d left that morning, untouched and cold. No envelope. No stamp. Just a folded piece of yellowed paper, creased in half.

She stared at it for a long moment before touching it, her fingers brushing against brittle edges. The door had been locked when she left. The windows, too, all latched tight. She lived alone. She lived alone. She kept telling herself this like a mantra.

The handwriting was uneven, as if someone had written it hurriedly in a moving car—or with trembling hands. The paper felt brittle, like old skin, and carried a faint scent of ash. She brought it closer to her nose, trying to identify the smell. Smoke? Dust? Something darker?

The words scrawled inside were brief and chilling:

I can’t sleep.

The walls won’t stop whispering your name.

That was all.

No signature. No explanation. Just dread curling slowly at the edge of her spine.

Her fingers tightened into a fist. What kind of sick joke was this?

She checked every room in her small apartment. Nothing was out of place. No signs of forced entry. No footprints. No other letters. Nothing.

But that night, she triple-locked the door and left every light on.

Still, at 3:17 AM, she woke to silence so deep it pressed on her chest like a physical weight. The air was thick and unmoving. Even the soft hum of the refrigerator had fallen eerily quiet. The streetlight outside her window seemed dimmer, almost flickering.

Then came the whisper.

So faint, so delicate it could’ve been a trick of her mind. Or a dream.

“Liiiily…”

She lay frozen, heart pounding, staring into the darkness beyond her bedroom door. The whisper felt like a breath brushing the back of her neck. It came again, closer this time—soft, slow, deliberate.

She didn’t move. She didn’t answer.

The voice had come from behind her—or from inside the wall? Her pulse throbbed in her ears. She stayed still for nearly a minute, breath shallow, listening.

Nothing.

Just silence again. But not the normal kind. The kind of silence that waited.

The next morning, she didn’t remember falling back asleep. She only remembered the whisper. And the way it felt—like it had known her name not from hearing it, but from owning it.

After breakfast, the second letter appeared. It was slipped under her bathroom door as if whoever left it knew the exact moment she’d be alone.

The paper was creased and stained, the ink smeared in places, as if it had been handled roughly or written in a hurry.

They know you’re awake now. Don’t answer the whisper.

Burn this letter. Ink is how they watch.

Lily stared at the words, fingers tightening around the corner of the paper. Her stomach flipped. Was she expecting it? Maybe. Dreading it? Absolutely.

She took the letter to the kitchen sink, pulled a lighter from the junk drawer, and held the flame beneath the paper. The edges curled and blackened quickly. She hesitated, heart hammering. Burning it felt like admitting she was scared—like giving in.

But the smoke rose, thin and bitter, and the letter was gone.

That night, the whispers returned.

And this time, they were closer.

They didn’t just linger in the walls anymore—they echoed through the whole apartment, like footsteps pacing just out of sight. Lily stayed curled on the couch with the flashlight’s beam cutting through the dark, every muscle taut.

Her phone was dead. She hadn’t charged it since the letters started, afraid the glowing screen might invite whatever haunted her in.

The clock beside her blinked 3:17 AM.

Liiiily…

The voice was clearer, closer, almost inside her head. Her breath hitched, but she refused to answer.

Instead, she pressed the flashlight against the door.

The shadows beyond the crack seemed to shift, pulse.

She clenched her teeth. “Not tonight,” she whispered.

Morning came like a slow release, the sun bleaching the night’s dread from the walls. She reached for the last letter left on her dresser.

“Tomorrow night, don’t sleep in your bed.”

The message was terse but heavy with urgency.

The next evening, Lily followed the warning. She gathered pillows and blankets on the couch, creating a fortress of soft and warm against the creeping cold.

But no matter where she placed herself, the whispers followed.

Then she heard it—a faint scratching, rhythmic, coming from inside the walls near the hallway.

She stood, flashlight steady, and moved toward the sound.

The panel near the basement stairs was slightly loose.

Heart hammering, she pushed it open and found a small, dusty wooden box hidden behind the drywall.

It was carved with strange symbols she didn’t recognize.

Inside, wrapped in oilskin, was a notebook—pages yellowed, edges frayed.

The first page had a message:

I tried to stop them too.

A chill ran down Lily’s spine.

The notebook was filled with scrawled drawings—doors with no handles, shadows shaped like hands, and a figure trapped behind a wall.

One page caught her eye: a drawing of a girl standing by a window, looking out at an empty street.

Underneath, a note in shaky handwriting:

She listens. She waits.

Lily swallowed hard.

Was this a warning? Or a cry for help?

Her phone buzzed suddenly. She jumped, clutching the notebook.

A text.

No number.

Just three words:

I see you.

The lights flickered.

Then went out.

Pitch black.

Lily’s breath hitched. She fumbled for the flashlight, fingers trembling as she clicked it on.

The beam caught movement—a shadow, impossibly tall, stretching long and thin across the peeling wallpaper.

A whisper curled through the room:

You belong to us.

The words didn’t come from the walls. They came from inside her head.

Fear surged through her veins, icy and consuming.

She bolted for the door, but it slammed shut before she could reach it.

The box slipped from her hand and spilled its contents—a crumpled photograph fell out.

It showed a little girl standing on the same street, eyes hollow, staring into the camera.

On the back, a date: 1987.

And a name:

Lily.

Lily stared at the photo, heart pounding. The little girl looked like her—same wide eyes, same crooked smile she hated. But how? She was born in 1994.

The room seemed to close in around her. The whispering grew louder, a chorus of voices, almost pleading, almost angry.

We waited so long. We watched. We remembered.

She gathered the notebook and photo, backing away from the door. It was locked tight. She rattled the handle, desperate.

A sudden, cold breeze swept through the room, brushing her hair like a ghost’s fingers.

Her breath formed a mist. She wrapped her arms around herself, trying to stay grounded.

The notebook slipped open again, this time to a page filled with names—crossed out, erased, overwritten.

At the bottom, written clearer than the rest:

They come for those who listen.

Lily sank to the floor, pulling the notebook close. The whispers softened, almost coaxing now.

Her mind reeled. What was they? What had the girl in the photo done? And why was she the next?

A soft tapping began at the window. Lily froze.

The curtains fluttered despite the closed panes.

She slowly turned, flashlight shaking.

Outside, a figure stood in the foggy streetlight—a woman, face obscured, watching her.

The whispers swelled into a single voice:

Remember.

Suddenly, Lily’s vision blurred. Memories she didn’t recognize surged forward—fragments of a life she never lived.

A small hand clutching hers.

Laughter echoing in empty hallways.

A shadow pulling her into darkness.

Her own voice whispering,

I can’t sleep.

She gasped, eyes snapping open.

Her apartment was still. The woman was gone.

But on the wall, written in faint scratch marks:

You belong.

Lily’s phone lit up again. Another message:

Come home.

The message haunted her as she paced the cramped apartment, heart hammering in her chest. Come home. But where was home, really? The place she lived now? The memories she never had? Or somewhere else altogether?

She clutched the notebook tightly, its pages rustling like dry leaves. The whispers were relentless now, swirling inside her mind, shaping reality like a storm.

Lily made a decision.

If “they” were waiting, watching, calling her back, she had to face it head-on.

She slid the panel closed, grabbed the wooden box, and headed for the basement door—a place she had always avoided.

The basement stairs groaned under her weight, the air turning colder with every step.

At the bottom, the flashlight flickered, then died.

Darkness enveloped her.

Then, a soft, warm light glowed ahead—a small doorway, carved into the foundation wall, previously hidden.

A child’s voice called softly,

“Lily…”

She stepped forward, heart pounding.

Inside the room was the girl from the photo, sitting on the floor, surrounded by scattered letters and drawings.

“Why did you leave me?” the girl asked.

Lily’s throat tightened.

“I… I don’t know.”

The girl smiled sadly.

“You forgot. But I remember. We’re the same.”

Suddenly, the walls seemed to breathe, shadows stretching toward them.

“You can’t run from what you are,” the voice whispered.

Lily reached out, taking the girl’s hand.

“I’m not afraid anymore.”

The shadows receded.

The whispers faded into silence.

When Lily emerged from the basement, dawn was breaking, soft light spilling into the apartment.

The letters were gone. The walls were still.

For the first time in weeks, she could breathe.

But sometimes, when the night is very quiet, she still hears a faint whisper—calling her name, reminding her that some secrets never sleep.

Posted Aug 07, 2025
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Kristi Gott
00:38 Aug 08, 2025

Clever and complex, scary, with a time travel-ish twist, very skillful writing technique, lots of suspense, kept me reading from the start!

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