Submitted to: Contest #312

Jack Macintosh: The Silent Harvest

Written in response to: "Write a story that includes the line “Are you real?” or “Who are you?”"

Crime Historical Fiction Mystery

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Special Historical Note: This story is a work of fiction, but there really was an 1800s dispute between Cedar Falls and Waterloo (both in Iowa) over which town was the Black Hawk County seat.

Waterloo residents carried out a “midnight raid” in the pre-dawn hours of March 6, 1855, stealing official county records and documents from the Cedar Falls courthouse—effectively shifting the county seat to Waterloo.

In the end, Waterloo’s de-facto takeover of the county seat during the raid was subsequently ratified by the Iowa Legislature before the end of that year, despite official protests from Cedar Falls.

The rivalry is still alive and well to this day.

***

The rain hammered my bookshop window, a dreary November afternoon in Cedar Falls. My sign, The Written Word, mocked my part-time trade. Time, it seemed, wasn't just a river; it was a swamp, and I was about to be up to my fedora in mud.

The bell jingled. I looked up from The Maltese Falcon. Standing there, rain dripping from his hat, was Elias Miller. An Amish elder, his face, usually open, was etched deep. His presence meant trouble.

"Mr. Miller," I said. "Come in. What can I do for you?"

He stepped inside, removing his hat. His coat was soaked, smelling of wet wool and damp earth. "Mr. Macintosh," he rumbled, gravelly, "Trouble found our community. The darkest kind."

I gestured to an armchair. "Sit down, Elias. What trouble?"

He settled, hands clasped. "It's about Daniel Lapp, my cousin. Found this morning. Dead. In his barn."

My gut tightened. "Dead? How?"

"Shot," he said, heavy. "Shot in the chest."

Dread seeped in. Amish communities rarely saw violence. A shooting was unheard of. "Who, or why?"

Elias looked at me, eyes clouded with grief and fear. "Land, Mr. Macintosh. A parcel bordering Buchanan and Blackhawk counties. Land Daniel farmed, as his father did."

"Land disputes happen," I conceded, "But not usually murder, especially here."

"This isn't simple," Elias said, leaning forward. "This is old. Very old. It goes back to our grandfathers, to the founding of Waterloo."

I leaned back, recognition sparking. "Waterloo? What's it got to do with an Amish farmer's land?"

"They stole them," Elias stated, firm. "The documents. From Cedar Falls. When they sought to make Waterloo the county seat. Documents proving true ownership of that land."

The pieces clicked. Old whispers, grudges. Waterloo and Cedar Falls, locked in rivalry. The county seat. A power play, a land grab, dirty business.

"You're talking about the 1800s," I said. "A century ago. How could old documents lead to murder today?"

"Because those documents," Elias insisted, "prove that land—Daniel’s land—was rightfully ours, granted to our ancestors by purchase. But Waterloo, in their desire for power, altered records, made claims, and stole the original deeds. They wanted that land to solidify their claim as the county seat, to control growth, to box us in. It was strategic. For generations, we lived with their lie, while they built their city on what they claimed was their own. Now, a developer came, offering a fortune for that parcel. Daniel refused. He knew the truth. And now he is dead."

"A developer," I mused, money and blood mixing. "Who?"

"A man named Silas Thorne, from Chicago. He's been buying land around the county lines for months. Plans an industrial park, they say."

Silas Thorne. Vaguely familiar. A big fish, aggressive, but whispers followed him.

"Daniel refused to sell because he believed the land was his, despite county records?"

"Precisely," Elias confirmed. "He spoke of old family papers, passed down. Maps, deeds… proving the theft. He believed the truth would out. He spoke of confronting Thorne."

"And these papers? Where now?"

Elias shook his head, profound sorrow. "We cannot find them, Mr. Macintosh. After Daniel was found, the house was searched. They are gone."

My mind raced. Stolen 1800s documents, crucial to a land dispute, reappearing to threaten a modern deal, then disappearing after a murder. Professional job.

"You think the documents were the motive?" I asked.

"It makes the most sense," Elias said, eyes meeting mine. "Daniel was a peace-loving man. No enemies. But he had knowledge that threatened powerful men."

"Law enforcement? What are they saying?"

"Sheriff Brody of Blackhawk County and Sheriff Larson of Buchanan County are investigating. They say robbery gone wrong. But Daniel's house wasn't ransacked. Only the papers are gone. They don't believe us about old documents." Elias paused. "We need someone to look beyond. Someone who understands some truths are buried deep. Someone who isn't afraid to dig."

That’s where I came in. The man who unraveled threads from the past.

"Alright, Elias," I said. "I'll take the case. But I'll need everything: about these documents, the land, anything Daniel said. No matter how small."

He nodded, hope in his eyes. "Thank you, Mr. Macintosh. May God guide your steps."

My first stop: Blackhawk County Sheriff’s office. Sheriff Brody, bulldog-faced, viewed private investigators like fleas.

"Macintosh," he grunted, feet on his desk. "What brings you here?"

"Following a lead, Sheriff. The Lapp Case. Elias Miller came to me."

Brody snorted. "Miller. Look, Macintosh, it's a simple robbery. Kid probably spooked, shot the old man. Happens."

"Anything else taken besides these 'old family papers' Miller talks about?"

"Nothing of value. A few dollars. What kind of papers would a dirt farmer have worth killing over?" He lit a cigarette.

"Papers proving land ownership? Something to wrench a big developer's plans?"

Brody’s eyes narrowed. "Thorne? He doesn't dirty his hands. He buys what he wants, fair and square."

"Or has others do his dirty work," I countered. "Checked his alibi?"

"Already did. Chicago, closed a big deal. Witnesses. Besides, what's a century-old document got to do with anything? County records are clear."

"Unless tampered with, in the 1800s, when Waterloo vied for county seat."

Brody laughed, harsh, humorless. "Ancient history, Macintosh. Too many pulp novels." He waved a dismissive hand. "Stay out. Police business."

I knew I wouldn't get more from Brody. He was blind or looking away. I left, stale cigarette smoke clinging.

Next, I drove to the Lapp farm, modest buildings among rolling hills. Air crisp, smelling of damp soil. Amish men worked, faces solemn. The weathered barn stood silently, a dark stain on its floor.

I found Sheriff Larson of Buchanan County there, younger, thoughtful. He inspected the barn's perimeter, notepad in hand.

"Sheriff Larson," I greeted.

He looked up. "Macintosh. What are you doing here?"

"Elias Miller hired me. You're handling the Buchanan County side?"

Larson sighed, running a hand through his hair. "It's a mess, Macintosh. Brody's theories, mine. Blackhawk says robbery, but details don't add up. No forced entry, nothing valuable. The shot… close. Personal."

"Elias mentioned old documents. Deeds. Waterloo stealing them from Cedar Falls in the 1800s for county seat."

Larson stopped, looking at me. "You know about that? Local legend, mostly. Whispers. They say original survey maps and deeds were 'lost' during county record transfer when Waterloo won. Documents supposedly favored Cedar Falls' claims to disputed lands, including this parcel. Never proven."

"Daniel Lapp believed they existed. Elias says they're missing."

Larson rubbed his chin. "Missing, huh? That changes things. If those documents exist, and prove Miller's claim, then this isn't just robbery. It's a land claim, possibly worth a fortune, being threatened. And Thorne… he gets what he wants."

"Thorne involved?"

Larson shrugged. "Biggest player in this land grab. Buying every acre. Daniel's parcel is strategic. Completes a massive tract for his industrial park. Daniel refused to sell."

"So, next move?"

"Looking for the gun, possibly a .38," Larson said. "Any struggle signs, though there wasn't much. Clean. Too clean for panicked robbery." He paused, looking at distant fields. "Daniel Lapp was a good man. Always said, 'The truth will out, like water from a well.'"

I made a note. "Any idea where these historical documents might have been kept by Waterloo back then? Or how they were 'lost'?"

"Some say in the old county clerk's office, near today's Waterloo Courier building. Story goes, during the move, a fire broke out, or records 'misplaced.' Convenient accident, some folks call it."

A convenient accident. Shivers down my spine.

The next few days were a blur. I tracked every rumor about the 1800s land dispute. Hours in dusty archives of both the Waterloo and Cedar Falls Public Libraries, sifting old newspaper clippings, county records. Records sparse, sanitized, but tension clear. Cedar Falls had a strong claim, based on earlier settlement and original survey. Waterloo, political clout and burgeoning population.

I found an article from an 1856 Waterloo Courier, celebrating Waterloo's county seat designation. It vaguely mentioned "minor administrative adjustments" concerning land deeds and "rectification of erroneous surveys." Bland euphemisms for outright theft.

My instincts led me to the old courthouse in Waterloo, a grand structure built years after the county seat was settled. The county clerk, a perpetually flustered woman named Agnes, looked at me with suspicion when I asked about 1800s records.

"Basement archives, Mr. Macintosh," she chirped. "Official use only. Most are incomplete, water-damaged, or missing after all these years."

"Missing? How convenient."

She sniffed. "History isn't always tidy, Mr. Macintosh."

I tried another angle. "Any stories, old-timers, about the county seat dispute? About missing documents?"

Agnes paused, tapping her pen. "My great-aunt, God rest her soul, worked here. She spoke of a 'phantom file.' Maps, old deeds, vanished. Said they proved Cedar Falls controlled land around the Black Hawk Creek. Just gossip, you understand."

Black Hawk Creek. Ran right through the disputed land.

I pressed on. "Any old maps, even partial ones, from that period? Original surveys?"

She reluctantly pulled a drawer, produced a faded, brittle map, rolled and tied. "One of few that survived the 'fire' in '58. From the Black Hawk Land Company. Not official county, but shows early claims."

I unrolled it carefully. A general survey, but in the corner, obscured, was a faint notation. "Parcel 7, Lapp's Claim. Confirmed by 1849 Deed." Not definitive, but a breadcrumb. The 1849 deed. The missing link.

That afternoon, I visited Silas Thorne's temporary office in Waterloo, sleek, modern, reeking of ambition and expensive cigar smoke. Thorne was sharp-dressed, eyes like chipped ice. He greeted me with a practiced smile that didn't reach his eyes.

"Mr. Macintosh," he purred. "To what do I owe the pleasure? You're a… purveyor of rare books?"

"Among other things, Mr. Thorne. Investigating Daniel Lapp's death."

Thorne's smile didn't waver. "A tragedy. My sympathies to his family. Senseless."

"Senseless, or convenient?" I countered. "He refused to sell you his land. Land with a murky history."

"Murky? County records are clear, Mr. Macintosh. Legitimate offer. Valid contract. Prime location for my industrial development."

"No knowledge of old documents, 1800s, disputing ownership?"

He chuckled, dry, humorless. "Mr. Macintosh, I deal in futures, not fables. Ghost stories don't factor. Besides, I was in Chicago when the man was killed. Impeccable alibi."

"So I've heard. But you have employees. Eager to please you."

His eyes hardened. "Implying something, Mr. Macintosh? My operations are above board."

"Just asking questions, Mr. Thorne. Did you know Daniel Lapp claimed to possess documents proving the land was rightfully his family's, not the county's, not yours?"

Thorne leaned back, calculating. "Heard ramblings. Old men clinging to old grievances. Nothing substantial. The man was eccentric."

"Eccentric men don't usually get shot in their barns."

He scoffed. "Look, Mr. Macintosh, nothing to hide. Find these mythical documents, bring them. I'm reasonable. But I won't be held up by sentiment or baseless accusations."

I left Thorne's office with a bad taste. He was too calm, too collected. The kind of man with contingency plans for his contingency plans.

My next lead: John, the local mute. Ignored by most everyone except me. He noticed things others didn't. He often wandered old parts of town, sketching. That evening, as I stared at the rain-streaked window, John came in and slid a folded paper onto my desk. A rough sketch of an old, abandoned building near Waterloo's railroad tracks. Beneath it: "Tunnel."

"What's this, John?" I asked. He nodded, eyes wide, then gestured.

I stared. An old, forgotten warehouse. A tunnel? John never talked, but his insights were sharp.

I drove out early next morning, sky heavy. The building was as John sketched: dilapidated brick, boarded windows, weeds claiming its foundation. A faded sign: "Waterloo Municipal Records Annex - Est. 1855."

An annex. For forgotten files. 1855, just before the "fire." My pulse quickened.

I found a back door, hinges rusted, wood rotted. A solid kick, it groaned open, echoing. Air inside: cold, musty, thick with damp paper and decay.

Dust danced in weak light through cracks. Rows of rotting wooden shelves stretched into gloom, stacked high with boxes and ledgers. A forgotten tomb.

I started to search, coughing, flashlight cutting darkness. Hours passed. Fingers numb. Just as I was about to give up, my light caught something. Behind a collapsed shelf, obscured by mildewed newspapers, was a small, crudely built wooden door. Almost perfectly blended, a secret entrance. Below it, a faint breeze, carrying damp earth and stagnant water. A tunnel.

I tried the handle. Stiff, but with a grunt, it turned. The door swung inward with a low creak, revealing a dark, narrow passage. The air was colder, heavier, a faint, metallic tang.

I stepped inside, my flashlight sweeping darkness. The tunnel was short, crudely dug, leading to a small, hidden room. On a single, rough-hewn table, illuminated by my dying flashlight, was a battered wooden crate.

I pried it open, heart thumping. Inside, wrapped in oilcloth, were bundles of documents. Old, brittle paper, tied with fraying ribbon. Deeds, surveys, correspondence. On top, a map. A detailed, hand-drawn map of the Black Hawk Creek area, clearly marking "Parcel 7 - Lapp Family Homestead - 1849 Original Deed in Accompanying File."

This was it. The phantom file. The stolen history. Proof of Waterloo's deception, Daniel Lapp's claim.

I pulled out the accompanying deed. A formal document, signed and sealed, clearly granting the land to Daniel Lapp's great-great-grandfather. Irrefutable evidence.

As I held it, a sudden sound echoed through the tunnel. A scrape. A metallic click. My heart leaped. I wasn't alone.

The flashlight flickered, then died, plunging the hidden room into absolute darkness.

I heard footsteps, slow, deliberate, entering the tunnel. Two sets. Air grew colder. A heavy menace closed in.

A voice, low and gravelly, sliced through the inky blackness. "Well, well, Mr. Macintosh. You've certainly been doing your homework."

It wasn't Thorne. The voice was familiar, but I couldn't place it. Then, another voice, sharper, colder, cut in. "Drop the papers, Macintosh. And don't try anything clever."

A faint click, distinct and menacing, reached my ears. A hammer being cocked on a revolver. I was cornered, deep underground, with the proof that cost an Amish farmer his life. My light was dead.

"Who are you?" I demanded, my voice echoing.

A low chuckle answered. "Just some folks who don't like old history getting in the way of new money."

Then, a sudden, blinding flash. Not a flashlight. A camera. The old, blinding kind with a flashbulb. It exploded, searing my retinas. In that split second, before the afterimage consumed my vision, I saw them. Two figures, silhouetted. One, tall and broad-shouldered, holding a camera. The other, slighter, with a distinct, angular profile, holding what looked like a .38—I'm betting the same gun and caliber that killed Daniel Lapp.

The tall figure. The bulldog face. It was Sheriff Brody. And beside him, his partner, his face obscured by the lingering glare, but something… A glint of metal on his lapel I hadn't registered through the flash. Not just his partner, but someone else from Brody's side.

"Drop them, Macintosh," Brody's voice commanded, closer. "You've seen enough."

I clutched the documents tighter, my mind racing. Brody? The law on the wrong side. And with him… the other figure stepped forward, a glint of malevolence in his eye as the afterimage faded. It was Thorne's right-hand man, a snake in a cheap suit.

They weren't just here to take the papers. They were here to silence me. The tunnel, cramped, was a trap. My hand, clutching the priceless deed, was slick with sweat. I backed up, my foot hitting something cold and metallic. The air grew thick with damp earth and gun oil.

Brody stepped into the narrow passage, blocking my only way out, his silhouette looming large against the faint light from the open door behind him. The other man raised the gun, its barrel a dark, hungry eye in the oppressive gloom.

I was out of options, out of time, and out of luck. The truth, in this city, was a dangerous thing to unearth.

My breath hitched. The gun's hammer clicked back again, a sound like a death knell. I could feel the cold steel of the gun against my forehead, though I couldn't see it.

This was it. The end of the line...

Posted Jul 18, 2025
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Mary Butler
23:59 Jul 21, 2025

Wow—what a ride! This story pulled me in like a river current, and by the end I was holding my breath in that dark tunnel with Mr. Macintosh. The line that stuck with me: “Just some folks who don't like old history getting in the way of new money.” — such a sharp and timely commentary, wrapped in noir grit and historical intrigue. The way you blended a real 1855 courthouse raid with a modern murder mystery is nothing short of masterful. I loved the moody, detective voice and all the vivid sensory details—wet wool, creaking doors, musty basements. And the twist with Brody? Oh My Goodness. I sincerely hope this isn’t the end of Mr. Macintosh’s case—because I need to know if he makes it out of that tunnel. Bravo!

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J.R. Geiger
01:17 Jul 22, 2025

Thank you SO much for the kind words!!

If the prompts next week are right, as Mary Bendickson asked, "Will he meet his 'Waterloo?'"

Tune in and see.

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Mary Bendickson
00:13 Jul 20, 2025

Suspenseful. Digging up old history can prove fatal!

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J.R. Geiger
02:05 Jul 20, 2025

Will our hero escape the clutches of the crooked sheriff and deadly henchman, or will he end up another casualty in the bitter Cedar Falls/Waterloo rivalry? Tune in next week to find out... if the prompt is right.

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Mary Bendickson
03:55 Jul 20, 2025

Will he meet his Waterloo?

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J.R. Geiger
14:11 Jul 20, 2025

Why didn't I think of that? 😆

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