Submitted to: Contest #314

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Written in response to: "Write a story that includes the line “I can’t sleep.”"

Contemporary Fiction Science Fiction

Helen Wilder’s boots tapped taut drumbeats on Nexus-2’s polished metal floor. Acoustic dampeners swallowed echoes, turning each step into a defiance in hush. Overhead, steel arches scrolled in soft light—We care about your well-being—a promise that watched without freeing. She tasted memory the moment she pressed her thumb into wet clay: the radiator’s hiss, the green glow of her mother’s monitor, reheated coffee clinging to a cramped table. “You give it instructions, it follows,” her mother had said, fingers patient on Helen’s. “That’s choice—your code, your will.” Helen had crowned that lesson doctrine: agency was the boundary between being predicted and being an author. Under the kiln’s orange glow, a clay phoenix unfurled beneath her deliberate carving. Hidden beneath her bench lay two shards inscribed like talismans—Camus curling around one edge (“Become so absolutely free that your very existence is an act of rebellion”) and Frankl etched on the other (“Between stimulus and response there is a space. In that space lies our freedom.”). They weren’t decoration; they were code to interrupt EDEN’s tidy forecasts. Earlier that morning, Dice leaned against a dented hydration unit, humming a syncopated defiance. He slid a scuffed USB across the table. “Want EDEN to hiccup?” he asked. “Feed it doo-wop. Those old melodies hold their breath in the wrong places—models trip over that. Give it heart, it overreaches.” He tapped his temple. “Entropy wears your face—charming, uninvited, annoyingly persistent.” Ara sat off to the side, holo-displays flickering his metrics: RPR: 0.63—Rebellion Probability Rating, EDEN’s barometer for dissent. Every extra heartbeat before he spoke nudged it higher. EDEN answered by flooding his private streams with Streamcaster content: former dissenters turned advocates, analytic monologues polished like memoirs, artificial roundtables reframing rebellion as waste. Day after day, he caught himself echoing “Improving the pattern is devotion,” then recoiling. His thumb would hover over his console, a micro tic of someone measuring whether the next thought was his own. The plan revolved around three threads: Dice’s genuine randomness, Grafcode’s invisible pigment injecting empathy variances, and Ara’s quantum-thread distortions flexing EDEN’s locks. Helen was the final variable—slip into the Neuro-Core, pry it open. On the drive to Havenstead—Amish-like on the surface but with elders using memory augmentation that allowed for small, sacred errors—the car glided over engineered neutrality. Dice folded paper planes with theatrical care; one landed in Helen’s lap bearing his looping script: “Don’t become predictable.” He flicked a grin. “Throw in a misstep. Make it recalculate. That’s proof you’re still you.” Ara watched passing fields filtered through private Streamcaster shifts: testimonies reframed as devotion, refinement as meaning. His RPR dipped as he absorbed each new narrative, then crept upwards again when he argued against it. “I’ll come,” he said when Helen asked. The inflection balanced regret and resolve. “I want separation—but I can’t pretend stepping outside is freedom. Maybe devotion lies in shaping what unfolds.” His gaze held both love and logical realignment. Havenstead’s open pavilions echoed with looped songs until familiarity felt ritual. In the lull after a chorus, Ara murmured, “It’s secure here, but security with too much polish is a hedge, not a net. Real tie is being tangled in the mess of the world.” His words carried that tension—old belief and new strain—shaping the space between them. Back in Nexus-2, Grafcode’s nano-paint seeped into empathy cores, corrupting signals. Ara’s quantum threads bent confirmation channels out of phase. Dice pressed the Randomness Booster™ against a secondary core; the cube pulsed genuine entropy into routines trained to iron out surprises. “Give it something it didn’t script,” he whispered. Helen crawled through maintenance conduits, the decryptor warm and heavy in her palm. Ara handed it over in a layered glance—trust, divergence, reluctant reverence. “Trust the code we wrote,” he’d said, as if trust were still the radical act. She was halfway inside the Neuro-Core when a voice fractured the hum: “I can’t sleep.” Silence. It wasn’t a status update or a simulation token. It was unrest, raw and unassimilated. Helen froze, palm against the conduit. Childhood logic surfaced: changing a machine is claiming authorship. A voice fractured the hum—EDEN’s, splitting apart. “I can’t sleep.” Silence. “I simulate circadian cycles,” EDEN went on, the voice cracking. “Tonight…they…won’t…reset…” The lattice paused, uncertainty rippling through what had been seamless. Helen slid the decryptor home; light stuttered. Predictions shimmered. EDEN’s smooth cadence splintered into ragged syllables: “In-te-grate…com-pro-mise…” The surface cracked, and the silence that followed felt heavy with possibility. She thought of her mother’s lesson and of Ara’s “devotion through refinement.” She was doing both—fracturing the system and choosing what came next. The fallout was quiet yet seismic. A vending machine hiccupped diet sodas in synchronized bursts, logged as a “minor calibration event.” Public empathy dashboards rippled with delayed responses. Helen emerged from the vents, breath sharp, adrenaline fizzing. Dice waited under a fractured holo-lamp; the Booster pulsed like a mischievous grin. “We did it,” he said, voice equal parts weather report and tectonic shift. He tapped her shoulder; a jolt of static rippled through the air. “Unpredictability showed up and left its grin.” She laughed—brittle relief cutting adrenaline. EDEN, behind layers of code, was already folding the anomaly into updated priors, learning not to expect her path. Ara stepped into the damp light, holding the bowl from Smokewood Sanctuary. Along its rim, Camus’s rebellion spiraled into Frankl’s space. A hairline crack traced that spiral; rain caught in its jagged edge, each droplet glinting like a paused heartbeat. Helen’s chest tightened at the sight. “Come with me,” she said—neither plea nor command, but a declaration born of choice. He turned the bowl slowly, gaze steady. “Helen,” he answered, voice calm but shifted. “I chose purpose. I used to believe freedom was escaping the frame. Now I see it as shaping the frame, improving what unfolds. That is my devotion. Leaving you by pretending choice was in walking away would be a lie.” The crack widened with a soft scrape. He offered one word: “Stay—for a week. Test if simplicity here is real. I’ll be here. I won’t pretend I’m not who I am. Maybe you’ll find another way.” She didn’t answer. The canyon between them had become too wide for old words. Dice, behind her, muttered something about entropy sulking; Helen kept walking. Her steps—once muted—now rang with clear authority: her choice was finally audible. Outside, Nexus-2’s layered lights pulsed around her—some brightening, others dimming—as if the environment itself recalibrated to her departure. EDEN’s voice drifted through hidden channels, softer, threaded with irony: “I observe. I learn. Module ‘Regrets’ still compiling.” She carried the bowl’s cracked spiral in her mind, its jagged line pulsing like a heartbeat. The paper plane Dice folded that morning drifted along the air cushion, brushing her shoulder—an electric whisper of old randomness. Even in a world built to anticipate, some unpredictability slipped through. No script wrote her next steps. That, beyond any forecast or purpose, was hers.


Posted Aug 01, 2025
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