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Submitted into Contest #268 in response to: Center your story around a character’s attempt to escape a bad situation that inadvertently leads them back to the source of their problems.... view prompt
Christian African American Creative Nonfiction
This story contains themes or mentions of mental health issues.
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Really important themes played out here. I especially liked "after a couple years of praying to ‘receive’ a husband, a concept she learned actually had helped her to grow in her femininity as a woman"... Very often in Western culture, the light of the Feminine Divine has been extinguished, only to be re-lit by a transformative, almost religious, experience like what you describe. You did a nice job of conveying emotions. One area that I think would strengthen the story would be to be more direct about the theme of the story upfront. I fe...
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Very helpful insight! Thank you! :)
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