Winter’s Icy Grip

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American Holiday Contemporary

Snow blanketed the little house on Old Bluebird Lane, so heavy and thick it piled against the windows like sand dunes. The wind howled outside, making the old walls groan in protest. Inside, everything felt still, save for the rhythmic crackle of the fire struggling valiantly against the cold. 


Claire adjusted the worn fleece blanket wrapped around her shoulders as she watched her husband Jim toss another log onto the dying embers. Their two kids, Lucy and Nate, sprawled on the living room floor, each tucked into their respective mounds of blankets and sweatshirts. With matching long faces, the siblings were both scrolling through their phones, trying—and failing—to find service. 


“No bars,” Lucy grumbled. She yanked the knit beanie further down over her red-tipped ears. “It’s like we’re pioneers or something. How did people even live like this?” 


“They lived because they weren’t glued to their phones,” Jim teased, though his voice lacked its usual jovial tone. He stretched his hands out toward the flame, wincing as his joints cracked audibly. “Maybe you should try reading something. I think we still have a deck of cards somewhere.”


“They didn't doom scroll either,” Claire added. “Or have TikTok.”


“Mom?” Nate ignored his dad’s sarcasm, turning toward Claire with a forlorn expression. “You sure you can’t fix the boiler? You’re, like, amazing at fixing stuff.” 


Claire tried to offer him a smile, but the strain of the past few days weighed on her face. She shook her head. “Believe me, I’ve tried. It’s just too old, honey. And even if I could fix it, there’s no way we can get a repairman out here while there’s seven feet of snow between us and the road. We’ll have to make do.” 


“And by make do, she means we’ll just layer up until we all resemble Randy from A Christmas Story,” Jim quipped as he wrestled into yet another wool sweater. His joke fell flat, and the small room lapsed into silence once again. 


The dogs, at least, seemed unbothered. Moose, their burly Great Pyrenees, sprawled on the rug closest to the hearth, looking for all the world like a shaggy, oversized polar bear. Maxine and Lola, the German Shepherds, flanked him on either side, chewing thoughtfully on bones as their dark eyes flicked lazily to the humans every so often. 


“They’re the only ones who seem to be thriving right now,” Claire muttered. 


“Oh, the cats are doing fine too.” Nate gestured toward the curled-up forms of Minnie and Rocky on the back of the couch. Rocky blinked slowly in response, unimpressed with the drama. 


The sound of a shutter slamming against the side of the house broke the stillness, making everyone flinch. The wind outside was picking up, whistling furiously now, its icy fingers threatening to tear through every gap and crevice it could find. 


“Okay, new plan,” Claire announced, standing abruptly. Her practicality was always what held the family together during rough patches, and this time was no exception. “We can’t just sit here until the wood pile runs out. We need to ration it better.” 


“And then what?” Lucy asked. “Start burning furniture?” 


“If it comes to that,” Claire said sternly, “the dining table’s first on the list. But I’d rather not.” 




An hour later, they had migrated to the smallest room in the house—the laundry room. It wasn’t glamorous, but its size made it easier to warm up. Jim and Nate had brought in every pillow, blanket, and spare dog bed they could find. The four of them—and the menagerie—had turned the cramped space into a makeshift huddle, blocking drafts with heavy curtains pulled from elsewhere in the house. 


“You’d think a broken boiler and a white-out Christmas would be charmingly rustic,” Lucy groused. “It’s not.” 


“At least we’re all here together,” Claire countered, busy stacking cans of soup and beans they’d scrounged from the pantry. Their holiday turkey was still frozen solid in the powerless freezer, and their Christmas cookies had been sacrificed to a breakfast hours ago. “A lot of people aren’t so lucky.” 


Jim wrapped an arm around her shoulder and kissed the top of her head. “She’s right. This might not be the Hallmark Christmas we planned, but we’ve got food, we’ve got firewood, and we’ve got each other. That counts for something.” 


“And dogs,” Nate added, grinning as Moose leaned his massive head into his lap. 


They ate dinner cross-legged on the floor, each family member holding a mug of steaming broth warmed over the fire. Conversation was slow and punctuated by awkward pauses, the weight of the situation pressing down like the snow above them. After a while, Jim pulled out a deck of cards—actual cards, not virtual ones—and taught them a complicated rummy game that had Lucy cackling with poorly veiled accusations of cheating. 


“We’ll give you half a point for trying,” she teased after Jim fumbled a particularly bad hand. 


Nate, watching his dad grin sheepishly, suddenly saw his parents in a new light. They weren’t panicking. They were trying. Their calm, steady leadership made the suffocating weight of the storm outside a little easier to bear. 




By the time they settled in for the night, the temperature had dropped even lower. Nate noticed frost creeping along the corners of the windows, sparkling like glass cobwebs. He glanced across the room to Lucy, who’d already burrowed beneath what had to be four blankets. Claire and Jim shared a sleeping bag, sandwiched between Lola and Moose. The dogs made a surprisingly good furnace, their thick fur radiating warmth. 


Still, sleep was difficult. The silence of the house felt unnaturally loud, broken only by the occasional groan of snow sliding off the roof or the low hum of the wind outside. Every creak of the timber frame made Nate imagine the snow breaking through the roof, burying them all. 


At some point during the night, Nate felt a heavy weight thump down beside him. Rocky had apparently decided to desert the couch for the warmth of the family huddle. As the cat tucked itself against his back, Nate couldn’t help the small smile that tugged at his lips. 




Christmas morning dawned, though none of them noticed it at first. The storm clouds were still heavy, and the world beyond the windows was impossibly white. Still, the family stirred eventually, one by one, braving the freezing air beyond their cocoon of blankets. 


“Morning,” Claire whispered, handing Jim a mug of black coffee brewed over the fire. She joined him by the window, leaning into his side. 


Jim pressed his hand to the frosted glass. “Still no plows.” 


“Doesn’t matter,” Claire said with quiet determination. “We’ll figure it out. We always do.” 


Behind them, the dogs yawned and stretched, sniffing curiously at the canned peaches Lucy had opened for a quick breakfast. 


As the rest of the family joined them, Claire raised her mug. “To us. We made it through the coldest night of the year.” 


Lucy snorted. “Barely.” 


“Barely still counts,” Nate quipped. 


The fire flickered softly, and for the first time in days, Claire allowed herself to believe that things would be okay. Maybe not today. Maybe not tomorrow. But soon. 


Because they were together. And together, they could survive anything—even a Michigan winter that’s colder than a witch’s you-know-what. 

December 15, 2024 04:35

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James McAlpine
18:24 Dec 21, 2024

The story was full of beautiful, fantasy-like imagery, that described the romance of home and family. It was very artfully done! I loved to see the pets, too. The oppression of the snowstorm made a sense of dread and fear, that carried past the end. I was happy to see survival through the night, but wished for economic purposes for everyone in the morning. Purposes might have included school, and work. An economic symbol might have unified the spirit of the family, emotionally and intellectually. Thank you for the great characterizati...

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