Fiction

Nora almost didn’t open the envelope.

It had been wedged under her apartment door, delivered between yesterday’s mail and this morning’s first cup of coffee. The envelope was thick, cream-colored, sturdy enough for origami, and smooth. No return address or stamp, just her name in dark ink, precise and deliberate.

Inside: one sentence.

You are cordially invited to your birthday.

She frowned. Her birthday wasn’t until November, and even then, she rarely celebrated. Since her mother died five years ago, the day had been just another square on the calendar. No date was mentioned in the note, just an address written below in that same looping script.

The address was on the far side of town, in a neighborhood full of old houses. She told herself she’d throw it out. But at work, she kept looking at the folded paper in her bag, curiosity and unease growing with every glance. The strange phrasing—your birthday, not a birthday—echoed in her mind, blurring the line between invitation and summons.

By late afternoon, curiosity won, guiding her toward the answer she sensed was waiting.

The house at 18 Lockwood Lane leaned slightly, but someone had carefully decorated it. White lanterns hung from the porch. Piano music, a slow waltz, drifted out an open window.

She knocked, then immediately wondered why she hadn’t just walked away.

The door opened to reveal a man in a gray suit, his hair swept back with the precision of someone who had been taught manners before speech.

“Nora,” he said warmly, as if greeting an old friend. “Right on time.”

She opened her mouth to ask how he knew her name, but he was already leading her inside.

The air smelled faintly of vanilla and cedar. Guests milled in the foyer, dressed in shades of silver and cream. A long table stretched across the room, set with crystal glasses and cakes decorated in pale sugar flowers.

At the far end, a large white door stood closed. A sign above it read, "The Birthday Room."

Nora’s pulse ticked in her throat. “I think there’s been a mistake,” she said.

“There’s no mistake,” the man replied. “We’ve been expecting you.”

Nearby, guests spoke in low, dreamlike tones, referring to her in the third person while looking directly at her.

“…finally here.”

“…didn’t think she’d accept the invitation.”

“…wonder if she’s ready for the candles.”

When she pressed for answers, the guests only smiled and said she’d understand soon enough.

A woman in a green silk dress took her arm. “You look just like her,” she murmured.

“Like who?”

The woman tilted her head. “You really don’t remember, do you?”

Before Nora could ask more, the man in the gray suit rang a small silver bell. “It’s time,” he announced.

The white door swung open.

The next room was lit only by hundreds of candles, placed on shelves, tables, and the floor in glass containers. Their flames moved gently, casting soft shadows. In the center was a round table with a single cake on it.

Twelve candles burned on its surface.

Nora hesitated in the doorway. “This isn’t my birthday.”

The man’s smile was kind, but his voice was grave. “We’re not celebrating the day you were born,” he said. “We’re celebrating the day you begin.”

A quiet murmur rippled through the guests. The woman in green squeezed Nora’s hand. “Go on. Blow them out.”

Something in her chest tightened. “I don’t understand.”

“You will,” the man promised. “But first, you have to make the choice.”

She stepped forward, each footstep softened by the worn Persian rug.

As she got closer, she saw that the cake was covered with small photographs pressed into the icing. Each photo showed her at a different age: seven, fourteen, twenty-one. She didn’t remember posing for any of them.

Her stomach turned. “Where did you get these?”

“They’ve always been yours,” said the man. “But you’ve lived so far from yourself that you forgot. We keep them safe for nights like this.”

She shook her head. “I don’t want this.”

“You don’t want the truth?”

The question landed heavier than it should have. Suddenly, her hands were trembling, panic edging out her composure.

“What truth?”

“That the life you’ve been living is borrowed. And tonight, you can return it.”

The room felt smaller. She remembered the years after her mother died, moving from one boring job to another, living in small apartments, never feeling at home. Her childhood memories were incomplete, and family stories never quite made sense.

“What happens if I blow out the candles?”

“You wake up,” the man said simply. “You step into the life that was meant to be yours from the start.”

“And if I don’t?”

“Then the room closes, and the chance passes. We won’t call again.”

The cake shimmered in the candlelight.

She remembered something her mother used to say: The truth doesn’t always set you free. Sometimes it asks you to set something else free instead.

Her throat tightened. Doubt pressed in, but resolve flickered beneath it. She wasn’t ready, but she knew she would regret it if she left.

She took a deep breath. One by one, she blew out the candles.

When the last flame died, the room plunged into darkness.

A single spotlight shone above her. In its glare stood a tall mirror she was sure hadn’t been there before.

She stepped closer and gasped.

The reflection was hers, but not hers: steadier eyes, shoulders straight. Grief remained, but so did strength, as if she had endured hardship and emerged unscathed.

The other Nora spoke, though her lips never moved. You were born into lies. But you’re not bound to them anymore. Go find what they hid from you.

And just like that, the candles flared to life again, the guests smiling as if a great weight had been lifted.

When she stepped back into the night, the air felt different, sharper, cleaner. In her mind, the echoes of the man’s words and the vision in the mirror still lingered. She didn’t know exactly what she was looking for, but she knew where to start: the attic of her childhood home, where her mother had kept a locked cedar chest.

The invitation was still in her bag, but when she pulled it out, the words had changed.

Happy birthday, Nora. Now go live.

Posted Aug 15, 2025
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Saffron Roxanne
03:15 Aug 17, 2025

Hmm very peculiar. I enjoyed the mystery of it.

Great job.

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