Special Shout to "Vicente Batista" and "Larissa Araujo"!
Hours and hours of sleepless night leave you sleepy and tired as you peek just beyond the door
Still snuggled up in your bed hoping there was….more
More excitement,more joy,more to do as you stare into space
But just behind the door you spot a pink little bow of lace
She exits from behind the enclosed area,so little and delicate in her silky dress
But across her face was dried blood drops making a mess
Her skin porcelain and shiny,as her eyes gleamed with light
Then her eyes locked on,staring dead into me as I stayed in sight
The floor creaked as she took each step,carefully stepping with her little shoes
Then I noticed a weapon in her possession….a bow with loose screws
It was rich in color decorated in redwood as the arrow embedded stayed ready
I carefully got out of bed holding my feet steady
The doll crawled to the floor as her face melted,creating a new mold
Then I dash through quickly,convincing myself to be bold
I turned back quickly, glancing at what was a doll,then my face went blank
Quickly after,I start running again as my heart began sank
Her face,her lips,and her porcelain cheeks they were gone
I continue to freak out as a run,run,and run
Hair stood up on my back as I heard distant shrieking, I look back once again
Seeing what I thought was just the doll in my window sill…
But now she was on all fours,faceless,and tracking me down
I would hope I was never,ever found…
Words echo throughout my head as my feet start to ache
Not long after my voice quickly began to shake
Hours and hours of sleepless night leave me alive and aware
Hoping that the distant creature would never drag me back there
It was once home,I lived there up until tonight
Then that wretched creature gave me fear,way beyond the term "Fright"
My arms tremble as I stop to take a breath
What if,by the end of this endless night,I meet death?
The thought froze me in my tracks as my heart pumped up and down
Of course I then began to anxiously look around
The darkened night greeted my sight with a blind hello
Not long after,the darkness began to grow
My hopes and my dreams,will they all end before I turn eighteen
And why on earth did this have to happen on halloween?
My parents take my brother trick-or-treating while I stay home
And apparently the evil spirits start to roam...
The doll was my sisters,now it’s mine
When she said “Burn it” that should have been a very,very clear sign.
I scatter across the nearby forest,roaming to hide
I decide to hide behind a tree and cried
Hours and hours of sleepless night
There is no way this life of mine is right
My face was flushed as I sob and pout
After awhile I decide it is time to try another route
I get up and pull my shit together
Then I spot a feather
It was decorated in blood as I rub it between my fingers gently
A wolf then emerges from the bushes,and he sure as hell ain't friendly
His coat white as his soul ran black
He probably thought I had stole his snack
His bite pushed through my skin severing my leg as I grab a huge limb
And I hoped quietly that that would be enough to damage him
He ran away growling as I was left with a severed leg and open cuts
This is one very,very big reason I hate mutts
I feel light headed as I stagger,trying to stand up,and move around
Only mere minutes later I begin to hear another sound
Howling in the distance as I quiver in fear
That damned wolf brought his pack,and they are definitely near
I hide once more behind the thickened dark tree
I was hoping,and praying that they would never find me
Cold breath awakened from dark,brushing above my ear
That is when i realized the doll had arrived here
She had rose from all fours,now a glassy Person
Her eyes wide and bloodshot like a Persian
Her tongue slithered out between her glossy pale lips
And from her thickened white face blood dripped
Her presence was eerie and cold as her touch turned ice
I turned my head slightly as she started whispering lies
Her hardened tone carried through the wind as every breath I took seemed like my last
It was quiet,silent even as every second pasted
Her nails grew into razor blades,painful and sharp to the tip
I hoped my shoulder would not slip
Her teeth bared once more as I lost my breath due to pain
I realized what anyone else thought would be insane
She had my sister’s hair,and her little bow too
This must have been the creature’s way of saying “Boo”
My heart stopped as I thought about who this creature may be
This whole time I had only seen what I wanted to see…
Her feet turned from white and hard to fleshy and soft
This monster was really,really too swoft
Her eyes changed color as she took one step closer,emerging a face
when she started to touch me it made my heart race
Her razor blade claws were gone,and her eyes lightened
And her facial features appeared,quickly heightened
I start to move,to jerk away
Although within seconds I realized I was paralyzed,left in dismay
I thought the horror was over,as romance begun
But I suppose in the end this little doll won
A shapeshifter,a liar,a killer
She was a magnificent little thriller
Porcelain and creepy as you walk by
Do you think she will eventually tell you "Hi`"?
It is up to you how this man may die
Hell,you could even pick where he may lye!
I hope everyone enjoyed with telltale as much as I
But i believe this may be my goodbye
I post in spare time,I check here left and right
If I write another,will you bite?
Happy Halloween! (When Halloween gets here of course!)
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26 comments
Happy birthday little one 🎉 16 years of a lifetime ahead of you, I wish you all the best in your life, lots of peace, health, joy, love, success, may you continue to be that sweet and caring girl, with that huge heart, I hope you enjoy your day little one with responsibility always of course, thank you for these incredible stories I miss you princess, everything will be fine ok think positive.. kisses and hugs from Samy😘🥰
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THANK YOU I REALLY APPRECIATE THIS!!!!!!!!
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I think I would like to marry you. He he he,in a nice little piece of plains out in the country,where we shall have wine and cheese across the nearby tables.Your dress would be simple and white,speckled with little specks of metal reflecting the light.And Vicente Batista (Vincent) Shall be on a platter in honor of your good name. :0
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hahaha you and your best ideas, glad you liked it😍😅
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he he he
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Wonderfully perfect and chilling story, I admit it left me a little scared haha, sorry for the delay but as always you are killing it little one😍 Happy Halloween💕
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im glad i posted it right before my weekend lol,it was rushed.
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Honestly, this story is frighteningly incredible. It gave me goosebumps, Happy Halloween to you too :/ I hope you don't disappear
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nah i meant goodbye at the end of this passage lol,im glad you and Larissa found it thrilling i tried to make it Thursday and Friday
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Oh,and before I forget,do not panic when i do not reply all next week,we are going on Fall Break.I wont be on during my birthday...REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.Happy early halloween too
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You are the best, since you won't be here on your birthday I'm going to anticipate your congratulations lol Happy early birthday I hope your day is amazing 🥳
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lol,thanks,although your scaring me with the extra enthusiasm
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I also kinda wish me and you could instant text again :L it seemed less tedious cause now i keep this tab open almost all day in school and am constantly checking the button for a reply from you,Larissa,or even someone just commenting xD its kinda driving me nuts because i am a social butterfly.
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Its posted,i did not have much time to figure out a good rhyme scheme so this will have to work.I hope You understand it just fine...
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oof it litterly just showed "Good Luck!" And i have bout an hour before fall break,i did good on both tests medical terms is 98% and the second exam about insurance was 76/80 he he he. If you dont see this in time Ill message you first thing on 23rd!
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