Submitted to: Contest #296

The Secrets We Keep

Written in response to: "Write about a character trying to hide a secret from everyone."

Drama Fiction Suspense

No one ever questioned Hannah’s perfect life, and she intended to keep it that way—no matter the cost. Every carefully curated detail, from her perfectly manicured lawn to the impeccable family photos on the wall, painted a picture of success and happiness. She had the job, the house, the husband, and the two kids who always smiled in every photo. No one knew about the cracks that lurked beneath the surface, not even her closest friends. But today… Today, everything was about to change.

Hannah sat at her kitchen table, staring at her phone, her fingers trembling around the edge of her coffee mug. The email had come in just ten minutes ago, its subject line simple: "Re: Your Past." Her stomach lurched, and she forced herself to breathe slowly, to steady her hands. This was not the kind of thing you could ignore. This was not a mistake.

The message was brief, but its impact was immediate.

Hannah, I think it’s time we talked. There’s a lot more to your story than you're letting on. Meet me at the usual place, 2 PM today. Don’t bother bringing anyone. I’m looking forward to finally seeing the real you.

Hannah’s mind raced. Who could it be? What do they know? Panic clawed at her chest as she replayed every decision she’d made to keep the truth buried, every lie, every carefully crafted scene. She had worked so hard to create a life that would never be questioned. But the walls she’d built—no matter how high or how thick—were about to crumble.

She could almost feel the weight of the secrets pressing down on her chest, one by one.

There was the time she’d taken the extra money from the office fundraiser. Just a small amount, but no one would miss it, right? No one would know. It was a moment of weakness, a lapse in judgment. She'd been going through a rough patch, and it seemed harmless at the time. She’d paid it back in full, and no one ever knew it was gone. But the guilt had eaten at her, always there, lingering under the surface.

And then there was the affair—Mark. She pushed that memory away, but it always had a way of surfacing at the worst possible moments. It had been a mistake, a terrible mistake, but it had happened. She’d never planned for it. It had been a one-time thing, a moment of weakness after years of feeling unappreciated. She’d never told anyone about it, not even her husband, Tom. No one knew. The guilt of that night still haunted her. The thought of losing everything, of Tom finding out… it made her stomach churn.

But it wasn’t just those moments. It was all of it, the small betrayals that built up over the years. The white lies she told to avoid confrontation, to make everything look perfect on the outside. The time she lied to her mother about visiting because she was too busy with work, too overwhelmed to deal with her. Or the times she pretended to be excited about events and family gatherings, when all she wanted was to be left alone in the quiet of her home.

The lies, the stolen moments, the whispered secrets—all of it had piled up, a heavy burden she’d carried for far too long.

She pushed a hand through her hair, trying to clear her thoughts, but it only made it worse. The weight of each mistake, each lie, was crushing her, and now, someone—someone—was about to expose it all.

Her heart began to race as she thought of the next steps. If Jenny knew any of this, she could destroy everything. But what if they knew more? What if there was something darker she had forgotten, something Jenny was holding over her head?

No. She couldn’t afford to think that way. She had to go to that café. She had to make this right. She had to stop the truth from coming to light—at any cost.

But as she stood, her body stiff with fear, one thought cut through the haze: What if they know everything? What if they know the thing I’ve spent my whole life trying to bury?

And that thought sent a chill down her spine.

Her heart pounded in her ears as she reached for her purse and her coat, her legs unsteady as she hurried out the door. What if they had proof? What if someone had uncovered her darkest secret? She had no choice but to meet them. She couldn’t risk them going to her family, her friends, her colleagues. If they found out… everything she’d built would crumble.

By the time she arrived at the café, it felt as though the world had grown smaller, the walls closing in around her. The small bell above the door jingled as she stepped inside, her eyes scanning the dimly lit room, searching for the person who had brought her to the edge of her fear.

A figure sat at the corner table, their back to her. It was a woman, but Hannah couldn’t place her face. She wasn’t sure whether she should feel relief or more fear. She moved toward the table, her legs shaking.

The woman turned, and Hannah's breath caught in her throat.

It was someone she knew—someone from her past. Someone she'd thought she'd left behind, someone she’d tried to forget. It was Jenny, a friend from high school, someone who had witnessed the darkest part of Hannah’s life, someone who had seen her at her worst. The woman who had been there that night, the night Hannah wished she could erase from her memory forever.

"Sit down, Hannah," Jenny said, her voice steady but with a hint of something dark. "We need to talk."

Hannah’s mind was spinning. How had Jenny found her? Why now? She couldn’t speak. The words stuck in her throat.

Jenny leaned in, her eyes glinting. "You thought you could hide it, didn’t you? All those years, pretending to be perfect. But there’s no hiding the truth. I know what you did, Hannah. And I’m going to make sure the world knows it, too."

A cold sweat broke out on Hannah’s forehead. The truth—the real truth—was about to come to light.

Posted Apr 04, 2025
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Lucia Galli
17:18 Apr 11, 2025

The pace of your story is very smooth - it goes down like a cold drink on a summer day! I like the increasing tension and the idea that, just as small pebbles can turn into a huge avalanche, our little lies can pile up and bury us. There's only one tiny detail that caught my attention, and that's the mention of Jenny halfway through the story ("If Jenny knew any of this, she could destroy everything... What if there was something darker she had forgotten, something Jenny was holding over her head?"), only for her to reappear at the end as if she were someone the protagonist never expected to see again. Anyway, that's a minor hitch in a very interesting story... now I'm curious to know what the secret is!

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