Submitted to: Contest #299

" The Tangle of Truths"

Written in response to: "Write a story with a character making excuses."

Drama Fiction Sad

Nina swore the universe had it out for her. It wasn't that she didn't want to do the right thing. She truly believed herself to be

a well-meaning, yet tragically misunderstood individual. Why?

No matter how hard she tried, things always spiraled out of control, and her excuses, elaborate and half-true, were her only lifeline. It all started with a deadline. Nina's boss, Mr. Elliott, had given her two weeks to complete the quarterly report. Two weeks! That was a lifetime or so, she thought. But somewhere between binge watching a ten-episode series "for research," it really was about workplace dynamics, she argued, and spontaneously deciding she was going to learn French, the report found itself abandoned at the bottom of her to-do list. On the morning it was due. Nina sat frozen at the desk, staring at the blank document. Mr. Elliott's no-nonsense face hovered in her mind. Excuses, Nina, she thought. You're good at this with newfound determination, she dialed his office number.

"Mr. Elliott," Nina Began, her voice breathless, you would not believe what happened. I she paused for dramatic effect, got hit by a biker on my way to the office this morning, my laptop fell, and well, the report's gone, totally corrupted files, I swear, I'LL redo it as soon as I can get back to the office. But need a little time. There was a sharp inhale on the other end of the line.

" A biker accident? Nina, are you alright?" He asked suspiciously. Nina pressed her palm to her forehead, feigning, even though no one could see her. It was awful, I barely managed to make it here in one piece. Alright, alright, just get it done,

" Mr. Elliott muttered before hanging up. But Nina didn't stop there, the guilt crept up slowly, tickling her conscience until it itched unbearably. She planned to make it right, but then her excuses snowballed. At lunch, she ran into her colleague, Maddle,

who had been hoping to get an opinion on a shared project. Oh,

madly "Nina said, her eyes wide. I had an awful accident with a biker today. Honestly, I've been wrecked, and later, when her roommate asked why she hadn't cleaned up the mess in the kitchen, Nina blurted out. You wouldn't believe the day I've had, I was practically run off the road, I mean, priorities, right? It's all been a blur. The lie grew legs and walked out of the office with her reputation as the queen of calamity preceding her now. Every little mishap became exaggerated to cover her tracks, and soon she had friends asking if she needed help navigating her terrible luck. Weeks passed, and Nina couldn't keep the web of untruths untangled any longer. Her excuses began colliding, people were asking questions, connecting dots, and raising eyebrows

Mr. Elliott caught wind that Nina hadn't taken her usual walking route the day of her accident. "Madly mentioned hearing a similar story, but with different details. Even her roommate realized the kitchen mess had been untouched for reasons other than unexpected trauma. It came to a head during the next staff meeting, Mr. Elliott, his face set like stone, asked Nina to explain the inconsistencies. Her colleagues listened with their curious eyes boring into her like searchlights. Nina stammered, fumbled for words, and finally cracked. You're, she admitted, her cheeks burning, it wasn't a biker accident. I didn't lose the report. I just didn't finish it. I messed up. Mr. Elliott raised an eyebrow. " And the kitchen mess, the shattered project madly. Nina slouched in her chair. I'm good at excuses, okay, too good, but the truth is I've

been lazy. I've overcommitted to random things and let people down. I'm sorry, for a moment, silence hung in the room like a heavy curtain, then Madden spoke up. Mr. Elliott said, Well, at least you came clean. Now get back on track. From that day on, Nina vowed to stop weaving excuses into every corner of her life. She wasn't perfect, but she found that being honest, though terrifying, was less exhausting than juggling lies. Nina had always believed excuses were one way that life was about survival. Sometimes survival helps her to make a lot of excuses, meaning stretching the truth just a little. She wasn't a bad person; she didn't lie out of malice or deceit, it was self-preservation, a skill honored over the years, and one she employed far more often than she cared to admit. The trouble began when her boss,

Mr. Elliott handed her a critical assignment, the quarterly report

This wasn't just a report. It was the kind that could make or break the next company presentation, and Nina had been trusted with this execution. Two weeks were ample to complete it again, Nina, it felt like an eternity. The deadline loomed in the distance, she was always distracted knocked on her door with urgency to do the report. The morning of the deadline finally came reality hit Nina with the force of a freight train. The clock seemed to mock her as she sat frozen before her computer. A blank document stared back, and panic clawed at her chest. What am I going to do? Nina thought excuses were good at that. She could spin a tale convincing it would make a fiction writer jealous. In Mr. Elliott's office, she began without breathless as though she would just escaped catastrophe. You wouldn't believe what happened, another excuses my laptop spread some hot coffee on my computer is broken the file are gone. Nina said, nervously I need a new computer. I am so sorry Mr. Elliott just give me more time to finish the report. Mr. Elliott muttered something indecipherable, but Nina felt a pang of quilt. At lunch, bumped into the colleague, Oh I'am so sorry Nina exclaimed eyes wide with faux horror, " I had this accident with my laptop computer spread hot coffee on it the file are gone. Can we discuss the project tomorrow. Let me get another computer, I don't think this one cannot get fix. I need start the project again can you all give me sometime extra time a few days head of time. Please Mr.Elliott, said I would give you some more time. make should you finished the project Nina, I know accident happen . Her lies grew more everyday. Nina found herself threads of stories that no longer matched. She as forgotten to do her report. Nina had stopped feeling excited about her worked and friends felt distances, like memories belonging to someone else. At first, she blamed it on the stress, work had been demanding responsibilities kept pilling up, and she told herself that exhaustion was temporary. But deep down, she knew that wasn't the full story. It was just she was tired. It was she woke-up every morning feeling hollow, strunggling to find a motivation. The way tasks, no matter how small felt insumountable. The way she made excuses not just to avoid work, but to avoid herself. She remember a time when challenges excited her, when would dive into projects with enthusiasm. But instead of feeling motivated, she felt overwhelmed. The weigh of expectatitions pressed down on her, and rather than facing it, she did what always did she avoided. and when deadline finally arrieved again, and she had nothing to show weeks of avoidance panic set in. She couldn't admit the truth that she had not been able to bring herself to do it. She felt disconnneted, drained, that some days even getting out of bed felt like an accomplishment. She did the only thing that made sense in the moment she lied. The excuses poured out effortlessly the only thing could do no more excuses, she said I don't know what's happening with me anymore Mr. Elliott. She built walls of with every lie isolating herself further. The moment of the truth arrived during staff meeting. The weight of her lies, the scrunity of her colleagues. It was too much for Nina could keep up the act anymore. She faint in front of everyone. Nina was exhausted the pressure was too much on her emotional struggles. She went into nervous break down. She was hospitalized, she though lose everything. Mr.Elliott was reasonable man it gave her more time to recover. In two month that followed, Nina took steps toward healing. She talked to Amber her doctor, who encouraged her open up about what had feeling, she reached out for help. Slowly learning how to rebuild motivation, how to navigate the exhaustition that had weighted her down. The quartely report was completed not flawlessly, but with effort. She wasn't hiding anymore and that more than anything was progress. She got her job back. She felt love by everyone all her colleagues were there friends and co-worker. Mr. Elliott knew all those years of hard work was always present in Nina was a outstanding worker.

Nina deserved a second chances. Sometimes, It's those second chances that bring out the best in us.

Posted Apr 21, 2025
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Brianna Beecher
18:01 Apr 28, 2025

this story opens minds and shows that not every time sometime pushing you down you should stay there but you should fight and that what make you powerful

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