Submitted to: Contest #223

A Voyage With The Greeks

Written in response to: "Start your story with a student discovering a hidden room in a university library."

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Mystery

It shouldn’t have been there. Jed had taken books from that section before and he’d never seen a door. But there it was, at the end of the aisle, between Greek Philosophy on the left, and History of Europe on the right. A dusty old door, with peeling black paint – totally out of place in the modern library.


He was thinking of going to the desk to ask old Mrs Porter about it, but then he remembered what she was like. She’d take ages to come and check, and she’d insist that Jed stick around while she did. He really couldn’t spare the time: it was exam week and he just needed one book – Ellison’s ‘The Voyages of the Ancient Greeks’ – to complete his revision for the next day. Best to find the book, get it signed out, return to his room, make a pot of coffee, and get elbows on the table again.


Jed ran his eyes along the Greek Philosophy section, found the rainbow-colored spine of the Ellison book and slipped it out. It was weighty; Jed blanched at the similarly heavy task ahead of him. He turned to go, then turned back. A door. Which he’d never seen before. A quick peek wouldn’t do any harm, would it?


He moved to it and tried the handle. It was stiff. He forced it a little and heard a crack: he’d broken the lock! It must have been rusty or something. He looked over his shoulder to check that no one had heard before dragging the door open with an ominous creak. Against his better judgement, Jed stepped through the door, pulling it shut behind him.


It was a dark, dank space. He felt for a light switch and found one that he had to turn rather than flick. There was a dim lightbulb over his head, and another above a small archway opposite him, perhaps five meters away. Jed stood for several moments weighing up the wisdom of continuing; he really did need to get back to studying. But curiosity got the better of him and he stepped gingerly to the archway. It was an opening to a set of stone steps winding downwards, illuminated weakly by a string of light bulbs spaced at regular intervals.


Jed took a deep breath and began to descend, one hand gripping the book, the other a rusty handrail. The steps spiraled down for what seemed like an eternity but must have been only minutes. Finally, he reached the bottom to find another door, identcal to the first. He tried the handle of this one, which was also stiff and also gave with a little force.


The room he entered had nothing but a bed and a chair, but tied to them were two people, their mouths covered with duct tape. Jed hurried over to the person on the chair, who was shouting a muffled cry of help through the tape. It was Freddy Carstairs, a student-reporter for the university’s deadly-dull monthly magazine.


With the Ellison book tucked under one arm, Jed struggled to get the tape off Freddy’s mouth while the terrified young man continued yelling silently. When the tape was finally removed, Freddy let loose an almost incomprehensible torrent of words.


“Dr Bale … psycho … wanted to … Dr Jones…” Here he nodded towards the man on the bed. While he was gabbling, Jed began to untie him. “… grant … he wanted the … there was a research grant, you see … I saw them … Bale … knife, coming here … followed…”

Once released, instead of fleeing, Freddy stared uncomprehendingly at the floor and continued:


“… saw me … I tried to get away … slipped … steps … I … I …”


Jed patted him on the back and went over to Dr Jones on the bed. He seemed to be asleep. Jed shook him. The professor’s arm fell limply to one side.


“I see you’ve discovered my little secret!” came a booming voice from behind him.


Freddy yelped and jumped off the chair, scambling into the corner of the room. Jed backed away until he came up against the wall. Dr Bale held the knife Freddy had mentioned, hanging limply at his side. Jed kept his nerve; he’d seen enough detective shows on TV to know that you had to engage with the threat.


“Freddy’s told me all about it, Dr Bale,” he said.


“Has he?” Bale said, treating Freddy to a deadly stare. “Has he indeed?”


“I didn’t…” Freddy began before trailing off; in his present state of mind, any attempt at reasoning would have failed miserably.


“And what did he tell you exactly?” Bale asked Jed.


Jed paused, ostensibly to marshal his thoughts, but he had one eye on the only escape from the danger: the way he’d come.


“He told me that you and Dr …” He swallowed drily. “… Jones had a … a misunderstanding about a research grant.”


Bale snorted and did a little turn in the middle of the room, enjoying the understatement.


“You could put it like that,” he said.


“But I’m sure,” Jed continued, once again channeling detective shows, “that you didn’t mean to kill him.”


Bale scoffed.


“But I didn’t. He had a heart attack. They’ll see that.”


“Ah, then it’s okay,” Jed said, trying to keep the sarcastic tone he was feeling out of his words. He was sure Bale would know that he was in trouble, that he was facing jail time, that his career would be over. He had to guide Bale to some sense of resignation, before he burned his bridges, which at this moment took the form of Jed and Freddy.


“I can tell them you didn’t mean for it to happen, that you treated us well, that you allowed us to go free…”


As soon he’d said this, Jed wondered if he hadn’t laid it on a bit thick. But then he saw Bale’s shoulders slump. The professor shuffled over to the bed, flopping down to sit beside Dr Jones.


“Go, then,” he said finally, his voice strained now.


Jed took a moment to gauge how sincere Bale was being; would he attack Jed if he left his relatively strong position agaist the wall? When he decided it was safe, he moved quickly, grabbing Freddy from the corner, pulling him to the door and up the steps. As they were climbing, they heard a whimper from the room and the sound of a weight falling to the floor.


Back in the library, Jed made for the desk; despite the stress of the moment, he still had to take the book out and hurry to his room to study. But suddenly, Freddy had disappeared, and behind the desk was Compton, Jed’s roommate.


“What are you doing here, Compers?” Jed asked, bemused.


“What am I doing here? I live here, you doofus!” Compton laughed.


Now Compton wasn’t behind the library desk at all but at the dining table, grinning at Jed. Between them were two bottles of beer, two plates, and a half-eaten cheese and mushroom quiche.


Jed shook his head to clear it and gazed at the quiche in disbelief.


“You didn’t!” he said.


“It was only a couple,” Compton said in justification.


“Why would you…?!” Jed couldn’t even formulate the question, he was so incensed.


“I thought it would take the edge off, ol’ chum. You have been really stressed, you know. It’s not good for you! And that comment from old Dr Jones didn’t help, did it? Saying that you have to ‘knuckle down’.”


“But … but I’ve got an exam tomorrow, dickhead!”


“And you’ll sail through it, we both know that. You’ll thank me later.”


“You…” Jed began. Then he noticed the book by his right hand. He picked it up and read the title on the shiny black spine: ‘The Voyages of the Ancient Greeks’.


“But anyway,” Compton was saying. “Tell me … what was all that about Dr Bale? Sounded interesting.”

Posted Nov 07, 2023
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Ken Cartisano
06:46 Dec 03, 2023

Well now... mushrooms have to be picked in the morning. That's when they're fresh. You get up before dawn, (unless you're already up, like I was) and head to the most remote cow pasture you can find. (Because they're illegal. And you're trespassing.) The cows don't mind though. It's a good thing too, because you're wandering around in someone else's field as the sun comes up and burns off the fog, and that's when you see the cows, sometimes they're like, thirty-feet away.

I once picked a mushroom with a cap that was 8.5 inches in diameter. I don't know how many centimeters that is, but it was a big effing mushroom and I know it was that big because I brought it home, and traced it's outline on a sheet of lined notebook paper. After that, we cleaned it, removed the stem, and boiled it in a pot of hot water, (along with its smaller brethren). (I wanted to say 'we called in a taxidermist, 'ad it stooffed and mainted, and 'at's it 'angin' on nah bloody wall, mate!' But that would be a lie.) We lost track of time and the water boiled over the top of the pot in great purple bubbles and foam. (We hadn't even had any yet and felt like we were already hallucinating.)

I forgot to mention that my stepfather was sitting at the kitchen table, in his white shirt and tie, eating his breakfast at the time. Fortunately he had his back to the stove and didn't see the purple bubbles which me and my friend were feverishly sopping up with assorted dish towels. He finished his cereal, got up and put his bowl in the sink and very casually said, as he was heading out the door, "I don't know what you two are cooking, but it stinks to high heaven."

Hope you don't hold it 'against' me for mentioning it, but you have a typographic error in this story, Phil. (And it will be there forever. That's just the way it is.) So what is that? Six errors in eight years now? Astounding. It's been like, three years? Since your last mistake? (How do you account for this sudden surge in sloppiness, Phil? Mushrooms?)

Also by the way, I see you've been short listed on your next story. I haven't read it yet, but congrats on the recognition. It is an achievement currently beyond my grasp. It isn't like I don't complain enough, is it? I complain plenty. Plus, I've posted more stories and they're all better than yours. (No mistakes, either.) I can't believe I haven't won something just on the strength of my wit and beguiling personality! That last story of yours should've been a winner too. (You know I'm just kidding of course, only some of my stories are better than yours.)

You know, I'm probably one of your most consistent fans. I have read one a week, or two of your stories every month for eight or nine years, Phil. I've followed a lot of authors, but I don't believe I've really followed any other author so regularly, for so long. I've read a lot of your damned stories Phil. (And you have read a lot of mine, yes I know, but that's a different story, we're talking about you right now. Well, I am.) I once said you had no distinct style, (which you, of course, you took as poppy-cock.) After reading, and enjoying your stories for eight or more years, I would describe your style as a seamless blend of talent and technique, in a thoroughly contemporary imprint that works well across all genres. But the most striking thing about your stories Phil, stop me if I've told you this before, but your stories are memorable. In fact, I've forgotten a few of my own stories (at least two) and remember many of yours. (Some of my stories I would like to forget.)

I'll share a secret with you Phil, (now that everyone else has fallen asleep) I have super-powers. I can give people a headache from thousands of miles away. Incredible isn't it? It seems to work best on people in the same room though. To be more accurate, I don't have much control over it, all I know is...

The important thing, is that you made another mistake, and I caught it. Hey seriously, congrats on making the Short-list. I think that's impressive. There is so much competition, it's a real achievement.

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PJ Town
13:25 Dec 03, 2023

I always enjoy your streams of consciousness, Ken. You have a sense of humour that I really love.

I also really love any praise I can get, so thanks for that! (again)

And as for the typo ... what? You gonna make me beg for you to tell me what it is?

(It's probably deliberate. I can't imagine me committing typos otherwise! ... winky emoji.)

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Ken Cartisano
03:54 Dec 06, 2023

Phil,
I left you a hint in my previous 'manifesto.' (Or whatever the hell it was. I'll accept stream of consciousness. It's more like Scream of consciousness. Or steam. Steam of consciousness. But I digress.)
I wrote: Hope you don't hold it 'against' me for mentioning it,
You wrote: ...would he attack Jed if he left his relatively strong position agaist the wall?
14th paragraph up from the bottom.
It's just about the last thing that happens as they leave the strange room, so I had to read your story all the way through again to find the mistake Phil. I should charge you for that. You owe me a steak, and I only eat Filet Mignon. That's no lie, it's the only cut I eat. Don't get me wrong, I eat plenty of hamburger and cereal, pasta, bread, you name it. I don't really like steak, so I only eat the best cut. But finding that stupid error was worth a steak. (Don't send me no steaks in the mail. Don't even think about it.) I sent Alice some candy once, I never saw the stuff or touched it. Bought it online, shipped it to her home. She probably threw it in the trash can to be safe. (I hope not, it was really good stuff. The kind I hate. Fancy.)

So I meant to ask, did you read my story on this prompt? I'm trying to remember what I called it, 'the Libranarium.' That was it. It has a clever end but it could have used more polish. (I should go and check to see when I posted it. I'm usually fucking with a story right up until the last minute, unless it's a re-write. This wasn't a re-write. )
I was thinking about my story last night, and I think it would make a good children's story. It's (not yours, mine) It's imaginative and quirky. I didn't write it with that intent, but, maybe with a tweak or two, could be a good children's book.
Well, thanks for letting me steam off my consciousness again. I don't remember if I read your winning 'short listed' story yet. Pretty sure I fell asleep in the middle of it. I hope I didn't make a comment with my forehead or something like that. Life is an adventure Phil. Catch up with you later.

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PJ Town
00:44 Dec 07, 2023

You got me, Ken, and there ain't no pushin' back agaist it!

Will take a look at your story. (Note to self: Must do better to keep up with the work of my favourite writers!)

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