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Christian Inspirational Creative Nonfiction

I've been through so much in this life that I could write many books of inspiration on various topics that would no doubt uplift all who dared to read them.

So I jumped at the chance to share a story about learning what a true treasure is; and finding it in the most unexpected place.

To all who are about to read this; may you be blessed with understanding, compassion, and love; and may the value of this writing be transferred to the mind of the reader in order to receive its worth.

Let me begin by saying that I love treasures.

Who doesn't?

The question then becomes; what does a treasure entail?

Because what may be treasure to some may be trash to others.

Well I assure you that all will agree, that this particular treasure is importantly precious to all; and definitely not trash to anyone.

This story entails a non fiction introduction; and also a poem, that explains the exact value of what I've found to be, not only...

A treasure... but... THE treasure.

All my life I have searched for what matters most in life. For years I wanted to find worth in something other than material things.

I never would have thought that the most valuable treasure in the world would be this place. Once it was revealed to me; I was a different person.

You don't have to travel far because this place is very close in proximity. When I reached the destination of this treasure, I was a bit overwhelmed because I really didn't understand its worth.

Now I'd like to pay it forward, so that anyone and everyone who wants this treasure will be most completely satisfied in realizing its value.

In doing so; please allow me to present this poetically served riddle to solving my mystery of the most valuable treasure in the world.

And for the record;

This place lives.

WHO AM I?

I LOVE WHEN YOU ARE MOST HONEST WITH ME

FOR WHEN YOU DO SO, THAT HONESTY CAN SET ME FREE

I LOVE FOR YOU TO CONVERSE WITH ME AT LEAST 100 TIMES A DAY

EVEN THROUGHOUT THE NIGHT, AS YOU SLEEP, IN EVERY WAY

I LOVE TO BE SET APART FOR BOTH QUALITY AND QUIET TIME

DO YOU KNOW WHO I AM? WELL LET’S CONTINUE THIS RHYME

I LOVE TO BE AT PEACE, FOR IT IS HOW I FEEL JOY

I DWELL WITH BOTH MAN AND WOMAN; WITH BOTH GIRL AND BOY

I HATE FOR YOU TO LIE TO ME, FOR IT MAKES DIFFICULT MY PARDON

WHEN YOU LIE TO ME, IT JUST MAKES ME BECOME MORE HARDENED

WHEN YOU LIE TO ME, I BECOME LIKE AN UNBREAKABLE STONE

NO MATTER HOW YOU SURROUND ME WITH OTHERS, I STILL FEEL QUITE ALONE

I CAN FOLLOW THIS WORLD’S WAY, AND PICK AND CHOOSE WHO TO LOVE

OR I CAN FOLLOW JESUS’ WAY, LOVING EVERYONE, WHICH IS TAUGHT FROM ABOVE

I CAN CHOOSE TO LISTEN TO JESUS’ KINGDOM AND HIS WISDOM FROM ABOVE

OR I CAN CHOOSE TO LISTEN THIS WORLD’S KINGDOM AND NEVER REALLY KNOW TRUE LOVE

WHO AM I?

I CAN CHOOSE TO HAVE JOY THAT THIS WORLD CAN’T GIVE TO ME

AND SINCE THIS WORLD CAN’T GIVE IT, THEN IT CAN NEVER TAKE IT AWAY… YOU SEE

MATERIAL GAIN, POSSESSIONS, AND WEALTH; ARE THINGS THAT DON’T SATISFY MY DESTINY AT ALL

BECAUSE WITHOUT DIVINE RIGHTEOUSNESS IN ME, I WILL BOTH FAIL AND FALL

I HAVE FREE WILL, BUT IT IS ALL IN VAIN

IF I WILLINGLY HURT OTHERS, DISREGARDING THEIR PAIN

WHO AM I?

I’M CAPABLE OF HARBORING ANGER, JEALOUSY, AND BITTERNESS WHICH I MAY UNJUSTLY SERVE

I MAY EVEN TARGET THOSE TO WHOM DO NOT JUSTLY DESERVE

I CAN BACKBITE AND GOSSIP AND THEN SMILE OR DARE TO FROWN IN ONE’S FACE

AND I MAY DO THIS TO KEEP THE FOCUS OFF MY OWN HIDDEN DISGRACE

IF I CHOOSE TO HURT OTHERS AND SEEK DILIGENTLY TO UNJUSTLY DEFAME

I WILL ONLY HURT MYSELF IN THE END, AND CAUSE MYSELF MUCH SHAME

I CAN ALSO CHOOSE TO HUMBLY SAY I’M SORRY WHEN I’VE DONE SOMEONE WRONG

OR I CAN CHOOSE TO HOLDOUT SELFISHLY WITH ARROGANT PRIDE FOR A TIME VERY LONG

WHO AM I?

I CAN CHOOSE TO TURN FROM WORLDLY WICKEDNESS WHICH JESUS DEFINES TO MY SOUL

I CAN DISALLOW MY ADVERSARY TO DECEIVE ME WITH FUTILE FLATTERIES, WHICH ONLY TAKE THEIR TOLL

WHICH ONLY TELL ME DECEPTIVELY, WHAT I MAY DECEPTIVELY WANT TO HEAR

OH DID I NOT TELL YOU YET? I HAVE EYES AND I ALSO HAVE EARS

WHO AM I?

I MAY WISH FOR SOMETHING GOOD, AND CLEAN, TO HOPEFULLY MAKE ME PURE

AND FOR NO MORE FALLACIES THAT DECEIVE ME OR ALSO MAKE ME UNSURE

I WISH TO BE GUARDED AND NURTURED, WITH ALL HONESTY FROM WITHIN

I YEARN TO BE CHANGED FOR RIGHTEOUSNESS SAKE AND DELIVERED FROM ALL MY SINS

MANY TIMES I CAN DECEIVE MYSELF WITH DISHONEST MOTIVES AND THEN LIVE IN DENIAL

FORFEITING MY OWN REMEDY AND CONVICTIONS, WHICH RESULT FROM MY OWN TRIALS

ACCORDING TO PSALM 22:26, GOD HAS PROMISED THAT I CAN LIVE HAPPILY FOREVER

IF I BECOME MEEK BY HIS GLORY, ALLOWING HIM TO MAKE ME BETTER

WHO AM I?

I MUST ALWAYS EXAMINE MY MOTIVES WITH UTMOST PIERCEING TRUTH

MY DESIRES MUST BE DETECTED AND INVESTIGATED, LIKE FROM A WELL TRAINED SLUETH

AND WHEN I AM JUSTLY BROKEN IN SPIRIT, AND FEELING HEAVY INSIDE

I WISH THEN FOR SOMETHING STRONG YET MEEK, TO COME IN AND RESIDE

ONCE I AM FILLED WITH THAT WHICH CAN ONLY MAKE ME WHOLE

I REALIZE, ONLY THEN, WHAT THIS WORLD’S CORRUPTION AND PREVERSION HAS STOLE

FROM ME, FROM MY PAST, FROM MY FUTURE IF I CONTINUE TO NEGLECT

THE DIVINE TRUTH FOR MY TRUE FREEDOM AND WHO PROMISES TO PROTECT

WHO AM I?

YOU’RE ASKING, I HOPE, WITH SINCERITY IN ALL, AND NOT JUST IN PART

FOR THE ANSWER—MY DEARLY BELOVED—IS THAT I....

AM SIMPLY YOUR HEART

Written by,

Tina Louise Prophetess

April 04, 2023 14:43

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Creati Author
11:46 Apr 25, 2023

"Your Heart" wow, the heart does bring out the many issues of life, but putting it it in this way, it tries to figure itself out. Wow

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Rita Kimak
09:35 Apr 13, 2023

What a beautiful poem!! And truly life’s biggest treasure!! You are very gifted!! Thank you for sharing!!

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