Drama Fiction Suspense

Ava Winter had always been defined by her words. They were her weapon, her shield, her very identity. As a journalist, she had built her career on exposing truths hidden beneath layers of deceit. Her voice—steady, compelling, unmistakable—had won her awards and opened doors to places most people could only dream of.

But now, it was gone.

How did this happen to me? she wondered, her eyes tracing the blank walls of her small, lifeless apartment. Each morning felt like waking into a nightmare she couldn’t escape.

For six months, she had tried to piece together the shattered fragments of her existence, but nothing seemed to fit. How could she move forward when the very thing that had defined her—her voice—was lost?

I used to fill rooms with my words. Now, I can’t even manage a whisper.

Her friends had stopped calling within weeks, unsure of how to navigate the silence that now consumed her life. Ava understood, but their absence still stung.

Who wants to sit in awkward silence with someone who was once the loudest in the room?

Bitterness coiled through her thoughts, uninvited but persistent.

Morning light seeped through the blinds, casting faint, pale stripes across the apartment’s barren walls. The fragile glow barely softened the dullness that enveloped her.

Her once-crowded bookshelves, filled with dog-eared biographies and neatly stacked notebooks, now stood half-empty. Their contents were crammed haphazardly into boxes scattered across the floor—a reflection of the disarray in her heart.

Her fingers drifted to the edge of the nightstand, brushing against its surface as she reached for her phone. She froze mid-motion at the sight of the blank screen.

No texts. No missed calls.

No one left to call anyway, she thought, the sharp ache of loneliness settling heavily in her chest.

In her loneliest moments, Ava turned to her journal. Her pen flew across the pages, spilling out the thoughts she could no longer voice. At first, the words felt hollow, like whispers of a life slipping further from her grasp. But over time, they became her anchor—a fragile thread connecting her to the person she once was.

Her gaze often drifted to a framed photo teetering on the edge of the bookshelf. Taken two years earlier, it captured a time when her life brimmed with purpose. Her byline had graced the city’s most prominent publications, her career thriving.

In the photo, she stood on a balcony overlooking the bustling downtown streets, microphone in hand, laughing with unrestrained joy.

The memory clawed at her heart. I used to own every room I walked into. Now, I’m trapped in this one, swallowing me whole.

Ava’s fingers grazed the leather-bound journal resting on her desk. She flipped it open, watching as the transformation unfolded before her eyes: once-neatly penned entries filled with hopeful plans and promises had turned into chaotic scribbles and unfinished thoughts.

The journal had become more than a daily ritual—it was her lifeline, a fragile thread connecting her to a reality she feared was slipping away.

Even as she poured her thoughts onto its pages, the oppressive stillness of the room closed in around her, heavy and stifling. Tightening her grip on the pen, she thought, How did this happen to me?

With deliberate strokes, she scrawled two words across the page—Still here. She stared at them, letting the silence stretch, their uncertain and resolute meaning.

The park had become her only refuge from the stifling walls of her apartment. She appreciated how the trees muffled the city’s constant noise, providing a space where the silence felt peaceful rather than overwhelming. The biting winter air stung her cheeks as she wandered along the familiar path, her boots crunching over frost-covered grass.

Skeletal trees creaked softly in the wind, their shadows reaching across the ground like long fingers. Tightening her scarf against the cold, the rough wool grazing her skin, Ava was about to head home when she noticed them. Near the frozen lake, two figures stood silhouetted against the faint glow of a nearby lamppost. At first glance, Ava assumed they were lovers drawn to the romance of the icy night. But as she moved closer, the scene shifted.

The man loomed over the woman, his movements sharp and aggressive, cutting through the stillness like a blade. The woman shrank back, arms crossed tightly, her posture tense and defensive.

Ava froze, her breath crystallizing in the frigid air as unease coiled tightly in her chest. Her heart thudded as she squinted into the darkness, trying to make sense of the scene. The woman tilted her head slightly, her voice—if she spoke—too faint to rise above the biting wind.

Ava hesitated, her feet faltering as the weight of the stillness pressed down around her, heavy and foreboding.

It’s not my business, Ava told herself, her stomach twisting uneasily. Despite the thought, her feet carried her forward, almost automatically.

She slipped off the path, her boots sinking into the frozen grass as she ducked behind a tree. Gripping its rough bark with trembling fingers, she peered out from the shadows, her pulse quickening.

The man’s sharp, angry voice sliced through the icy stillness, though the wind scattered his words before they could reach her fully. Ava squinted into the dim light.

The woman stood rigid, her arms crossed tightly, her posture defensive. Her responses, soft and hesitant were little more than fragments that dissolved in the biting wind.

Ava’s chest tightened. Something’s wrong. Do something. But what? I can’t even—

Her thoughts shattered as the man lunged, shoving the woman with brutal force. Ava’s breath caught as the woman slipped on the ice. For one excruciating moment, time seemed to stop. The air stood still, the world eerily frozen—until the fragile frost beneath the woman cracked.

The sound was sharp and jarring, like breaking glass. A splash shattered the silence as the woman disappeared into the frigid, dark water.

Panic surged through Ava like a tidal wave. Scream. Call for help. Do something! she begged herself, but her voice refused to come, locked deep within the recesses of her mind.

Desperation set in as her shaking hands fumbled in her pocket. After a frantic struggle, she pulled out her phone and hit the record button, her fingers trembling against the icy metal.

Then he turned. The man’s head snapped toward her, and their gazes locked with unnerving precision.

There in the dim light, Ava felt the intensity of his stare—piercing, calculated, and merciless. It cut through the darkness, striking at the core of her fear. Her stomach clenched with unease.

He sees me. He knows I saw.

He stepped toward her, his boots crunching loudly on the frosted ground.

Ava didn’t wait to see what would come next. Her legs jolted into motion, slipping and sliding as she bolted back toward the path. Her breaths came in short, ragged bursts, her heart pounding like a frantic drumbeat as the icy air seared her lungs.

Later, Ava sat at her desk, staring at the blurry video looping on her laptop screen. Barely ten seconds long, the shaky footage revealed almost nothing. The man’s face was lost in a haze, and the woman’s fall disappeared into the shadows. It’s not enough, she thought bitterly, frustration coiling in her stomach like a spring. Clenching her fists tightly, she replayed the scene again.

I saw it happen. I know what I saw. Why isn’t that enough?

She had gone to the police, but their skepticism had been palpable. Unable to speak, Ava resorted to scribbling frantic notes, pointing at her phone, and gesturing in sheer desperation.

Yet her efforts were met with dismissive questions: Why hadn’t she called for help? Why was the video so unclear? Did she even know the people involved?

By the end of the interview, Ava felt like the one under suspicion, the weight of their doubts pressing heavily on her.

Back in her apartment, anger simmered beneath the surface. Her notepad lay open on the cluttered desk, its pages littered with hastily scrawled thoughts and disjointed leads.

As she tapped her pen against the edge of the desk, the scene replayed vividly in her mind.

How could they dismiss it so quickly? she thought, her chest tightening. You were there. You saw it. Isn’t that enough?

But the memory of the detective’s dismissive tone echoed, fueling the frustration building inside her. Ava slammed the notepad shut.

This is why I became a journalist—to expose people like him. To give a voice to the powerless. And now I’m the one without a voice.

Her laptop screen flickered, the video paused on the shadowy outline of the man by the frozen lake. No features. No clarity. Just darkness.

Ava clenched her fists, biting back the doubt gnawing at her resolve. Not enough, she thought bitterly as she grabbed her pen and scrawled the words across her notepad with such force that the paper tore.

Her hands trembled as the detective’s words replayed in her mind: “A blurry video isn’t much to go on. Without more, there’s not much we can do.”

Tears prickled her eyes. They think I’m delusional. They think I imagined it all. Helpless. Powerless. She swallowed hard, her throat tightening.

You’re not helpless. You’ve never been helpless.

Her reflection in the window caught her eye—tense and weary. She leaned against the wall, inhaling deeply, her fists still clenched.

This is why you don’t quit, she reminded herself. Because people like him can’t get away with this. You can’t let them win.

A sharp chime from her computer broke the heavy stillness. Crossing the room, Ava froze when she saw the sender’s name—Lucas.

Her breath hitched, a flicker of something she hadn’t felt in months breaking through the haze: hope. His response was brief but direct, and it ignited something in her.

You’re not doing this alone anymore.

Lucas had been there during her prime, one of the few who understood her dogged pursuit of the truth. Now, he was ready to help.

Together, they began unraveling Victor Hayes’s carefully concealed life: corruption, intimidation, a pattern of calculated violence cloaked behind a polished façade. Each new revelation strengthened Ava’s resolve.

She stared at a photo of one of Victor’s previous victims, her fingers gripping its edges.

He’s done this before. And no one stopped him. That changes now.

Memories flickered like faint echoes—raised voices, papers scattered across a desk, a room cloaked in shadow. Ava pressed her hands to her temples, trying to grasp the elusive fragments.

Think! What did you see? What did you hear?

But the harder she tried, the more the details seemed to slip through her fingers, like grains of sand. Still, one truth emerged from the fog: The night you lost your voice wasn’t random. It’s tied to all of this. It’s tied to him.

With Lucas’s help, Ava tracked down an old source—a woman who had once worked closely with Victor. They met in a quiet café, where the soft murmur of conversation only heightened the tension between them.

The café’s low buzz and clatter of mugs softened, fading beneath the chaos in Ava’s mind. She gripped her notepad, knuckles white, as her gaze darted between the woman’s trembling hands and the window she wouldn’t stop watching.

Across the table, the woman stirred her tea with deliberate slowness, her hands trembling faintly despite the blank mask on her face. “You don’t understand yet,” she murmured, her voice tight and low. Her eyes flicked to the window, watching it intently as if expecting someone to burst in. “But you will soon.”

Ava’s stomach churned, tightening painfully. Her pulse hammered in her ears, drowning out the comforting hum of the café. Slowly, she picked up her notepad from the table and scribbled a question. She slid it toward the woman, her hand steady despite her pounding heart.

“What do you mean?” she'd written.

The woman leaned closer, her face now inches from Ava’s, her gaze piercing and intense. Ava shifted in her seat, the unease tightening its grip. “I shouldn’t be here,” the woman whispered, her breath quick and unsteady. “They’ll know I’ve talked.”

Her words landed heavily in Ava’s chest, leaving her breathless. Her fingers twitched, reaching for a steadiness she couldn’t find. Slowly, she picked up her notepad and wrote the question with deliberate strokes. She held it up, her eyes locking with the woman's.

“Why me?”

The woman hesitated, her hands fidgeting with the edges of her napkin, tearing it into frayed strips. She glanced at Ava, guilt and resignation flickering in her eyes, before quickly looking away. Her trembling hands gripped her cup, her voice shaky as she spoke.

Ava studied her closely, her pen gliding across the page. Look at her. She’s scared. Just like you were. Just like so many others. But she’s here, she’s talking. That means something.

Lucas asked the questions Ava couldn't, drawing out details she hadn’t dared to hope for. By the end, the truth was undeniable: Victor’s immaculate public image was a facade upheld by manipulation and fear.

Ava stared at her notes, her breath hitching as her eyes landed on the name scrawled in the corner of an earlier entry: Victor Hayes. With measured movements, she wrote on her notepad and slid it toward Lucas.

"We need to meet him."

Lucas read the words, his jaw tightening before he nodded. "We'll choose a location where he won't feel entirely in control," he said, his voice low and deliberate. Turning to the woman, he added, "Thank you. You've done more than you know."

The woman nodded faintly, her hands gripping her cup. Ava's heart pounded as she absorbed the gravity of what lay ahead. Meeting Victor meant stepping directly into the fire. But it was the only way forward—the only way to bring the truth to light.

Her resolve sharpened as she scribbled on the notepad once more. "We need to confront him."

Lucas glanced at her words and nodded resolutely. "If we're doing this, we have to be strategic. We need neutral ground—somewhere he'll come, but won't own.”

The theater was his idea. "It's neutral ground," he said. "Somewhere he'll come, but not somewhere he'll own."

Ava wasn’t convinced. “What if he doesn’t show?” she’d written on the pad between them, her pen pressing into the paper with doubt.

“He will,” Lucas had replied, leaning closer, his voice steady. “He’ll want to see the pieces for himself. He can’t resist thinking he can still control the outcome.”

And so, the message was sent, its contents carefully constructed to lure Victor out. The stage was set, both figuratively and literally, for the confrontation that Ava knew could change everything.

Now, as she stood in the hollow shell of the theater, its grand interior reduced to shadows and decay, the weight of that choice settled heavily on her. Dust motes danced in the dim light streaming through cracked windows, and the faint creak of old floorboards echoed in the cavernous emptiness.

Her evidence was meticulously laid out before her on the stage, each piece feeling like a fragile lifeline, a thread connecting her to the truth.

And then, the sound of polished shoes clicking against the floor broke the stillness, each step deliberate, each echo sharper than the last.

Victor Hayes emerged from the shadows at the back of the theater, his presence filling the room before he even reached the stage.

He stopped a few feet away, the cool glint in his eyes pinning Ava in place. His suit, pristine and unyielding, seemed to mirror his demeanor—impeccable, yet menacing.

“You should have stayed quiet,” Victor said. His voice was soft, almost conversational, but the menace beneath it rippled like a storm just beneath the surface.

Ava’s breath caught, her fingers curling at her sides as she steadied herself. The weight of his presence was suffocating, but she forced herself to meet his gaze, refusing to look away.

Inside, her thoughts sharpened, cutting through the fear: I don’t need a voice to bring you down. My story is louder than you’ll ever be.

Victor’s smile was faint, more an indication of control than amusement.

“This,” he said, gesturing to the evidence before her with a flick of his hand, “isn’t going to change anything. You think you’ve won, but you don’t understand how the game works.”

Lucas stepped forward, breaking the tension momentarily as he began presenting the

truth piece by piece. His voice was firm and steady, and for the first time, Ava saw Victor’s polished exterior begin to fracture.

His jaw tightened, his eyes narrowing ever so slightly as each revelation chipped away at his armor.

“You don’t understand what you’re doing,” Victor said finally, his tone cutting and sharp now. “You think justice is on your side? You’re in over your head.”

But Ava didn’t flinch. As the cracks in Victor’s facade grew, a strange calm settled over her.

Her silence, once a source of despair and weakness, now felt like an unassailable wall.

This was the moment she had fought for—the truth was out, and it was louder than anything Victor could say or do.

She stood taller, her composure unbroken.

This is it. This is why you fought so hard. This is what they can’t take from you, she thought, the strength in her resolve radiating outward.

Victor stepped back, the calculated anger in his eyes barely contained.

For the first time, it was clear—he wasn’t in control anymore.

And Ava, with her silence and the undeniable power of truth, had turned the tide.

She had proven that even without words, her voice could echo louder than his threats ever could.



Posted Mar 20, 2025
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Glen Kenner
22:46 Mar 27, 2025

My first Reedsy review! :) I found myself completely drawn into Ava's world at first—who wouldn't feel that gut punch when someone loses the very thing that defines them? Those quiet scenes in her apartment really hit home for me. The way you described her empty bookshelves and those unanswered texts... That kind of isolation can be seriously harmful to the mind and body.

The park scene had me genuinely nervous for Ava! I think that might be your strongest writing—I could almost feel the cold air and hear the ice cracking. I'm still thinking about that moment when she realizes she can't call for help.

I wonder if maybe the middle section is where things get a bit fuzzy? It wasn't always clear to me how Ava connects the dots from a blurry recording to identifying Victor. Maybe I missed something there? He seems to just show up? Maybe (and I've done this too many times) while editing, you deleted a line or two? And while the confrontation scene has tension, it seemed to rush past what should be the most satisfying part—seeing the evidence of Victor's crimes finally exposed.

The story feels a bit longer than it needs to be—I sometimes found myself skimming through repetitive descriptions. Though, to be fair, I tend to prefer fast moving pacing in thrillers.

I'd love to see more of how Ava cleverly works around her inability to speak. Those moments where she finds alternative ways to communicate were so compelling! Lucas helps, of course, but I found myself more invested when Ava was solving problems on her own.

You know what? Ava would make an amazing protagonist for a mystery series. A journalist who can't speak but still fights for justice? I'd absolutely pick up the next book to see what case she tackles next! There's something special about her character that stays with you.

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03:08 Mar 28, 2025

Hi Glen. Thank you for your thoughtful review of The Quiet Witness! I'm so glad Ava's journey resonated with you, especially the quiet moments and the tension in the park scene. Your feedback on the middle section and confrontation is invaluable—I'll revisit those parts to make them clearer and more impactful. I’m delighted you enjoyed Ava’s resourcefulness, and your suggestion to expand on those moments inspires me. The idea of her leading a mystery series is incredibly exciting—I’ll definitely consider it!
Thanks again for your kind words and insightful feedback. They’ll help me grow and improve, and I’m so glad The Quiet Witness left an impression on you.

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18:35 Mar 24, 2025

Thanks so much, Heidi! So glad you enjoyed the story!! I appreciate your positive review and encouragement! I will revisit that scene change! Thanks again!

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Heidi Fedore
17:46 Mar 24, 2025

I liked how you moved us through time quickly in the beginning, getting us into the heart of the story. You have many lovely phrases, such as, "Bitterness coiled through her thoughts" and "the words felt hollow, like whispers of a life slipping further from her grasp." The abrupt scene change with "The park had become her only refuge," threw me off a bit. The tension was well constructed and I loved the last line. So powerful!

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