Submitted to: Contest #308

Solar Return Policy

Written in response to: "Start or end your story with somebody stepping out into the sunshine."

Contemporary Fiction Urban Fantasy

At exactly noon on Midsummer Eve, Nora slipped from the pawnshop clutching a shoebox that glowed through its cardboard walls.

The basement had been impossibly deep, carved from stone that predated the town above. Shelves lined the walls, crowded with objects that shouldn't exist—hourglasses filled with what looked like liquid starlight, mirrors that reflected different rooms entirely, music boxes that played melodies she felt rather than heard. And behind the counter, Vincent Ness had watched her with eyes like polished coal.

"One perfect hour," he had said, his voice carrying the weight of centuries. "That's what you're purchasing, Miss Eld. Sixty minutes of reality bent to your will. But remember—" His finger had traced the edge of a contract written in script so ornate it hurt to read. "The Solar Return Policy is non-negotiable. What borrows light must give it back."

Now the shoebox pulsed against her chest, warm as a living heart. Nora hurried down Meridian Street, past the flower shop where Mrs. Cavannagh watered petunias that had bloomed continuously for six hundred years, past the bakery where bread rose in windows that never knew true darkness. The perpetual daylight felt different today—thinner somehow, as if the sun were holding its breath.

Her studio apartment waited three blocks away, cramped and suffocating with unpaid bills scattered across every surface. The latest notice from her loan servicer sat propped against her laptop: Final Notice - Payment Due $3,847.52. Behind it, a stack of credit card statements, medical bills from her father's funeral, and a pink eviction notice that made her stomach clench.

The shoebox grew warmer in her arms. Through its cardboard walls, she could see veins of light pulsing like captured lightning. The thing inside wasn't mere illumination—it felt alive, aware, patient as stone but restless as fire.

Nora fumbled with her keys, hands trembling as she unlocked her door. The apartment greeted her with its familiar despair: textbooks she couldn't afford to replace, a dissertation on solar physics that mocked her from her desk, photographs of herself at graduation, smiling and ignorant of the financial quicksand awaiting her.

She set the shoebox on her kitchen table and stared at it. The glow intensified, casting strange shadows that moved independent of any light source. Her reflection wavered in the surface of her microwave, and for a moment she saw someone else looking back—someone desperate enough to bargain with forces beyond comprehension.

The clock on her stove read 12:17 PM. Sunset wouldn't come until nearly ten tonight, giving her almost ten hours to make her wish, sprint to the hilltop shrine, and return the borrowed light to the sky. Simple. Foolproof.

The shoebox pulsed again, and she could swear she heard it whisper her name.

***

Nora sat at her kitchen table for twenty minutes, watching the shoebox breathe with inner light. Her laptop screen displayed her banking account: negative $247.18. The overdraft fees alone would consume her next paycheck from the campus observatory, where she calibrated telescopes and pretended her expertise in solar physics wasn't being wasted on entry-level grunt work.

Her phone buzzed. Another automated call from the collections agency. She let it ring, focusing instead on the warmth radiating from the cardboard container. The heat felt organic, like holding a sleeping animal against her chest.

She remembered being eight years old, standing in her grandfather's backyard with a piece of smoked glass, watching solar flares dance across the sun's surface. He had taught her the names of sunspots, explained how stellar fusion worked, filled her young mind with dreams of unlocking cosmic secrets. Now those same dreams had become financial chains, each semester of graduate school another link forged in debt.

The shoebox pulsed, and she heard it again—her name, whispered in a voice like solar wind.

"This is insane," she said aloud, but her voice lacked conviction. She had seen the other artifacts in Vincent's basement, felt the weight of impossible things made manifest. Whatever lay inside this container existed beyond the realm of rational explanation.

Her laptop chimed with another email. URGENT: Student Loan Payment Past Due - Immediate Action Required. The interest had capitalized again, adding another thousand dollars to her principal balance. At this rate, she would die owing money she had never actually received.

Nora's fingernails found the tape sealing the shoebox. One strip. Just one strip between her and the solution to every problem that had kept her awake for the past three years. Her dissertation advisor had warned the entire graduate cohort about the psychological toll of prolonged financial stress. She had watched classmates drop out, relationships crumble, brilliant minds ground down by the machinery of institutional debt.

The tape came free with a sound like tearing silk.

Light exploded from the opening, not harsh but somehow complete—the kind of illumination that made colors more vivid, edges sharper, shadows deeper. Inside the box, nestled in tissue paper that sparkled with embedded starlight, lay a crystal no larger than her thumb. It pulsed with captured sunshine, each facet containing what looked like miniature solar flares frozen in amber.

The moment her skin touched the crystal, warmth flooded her nervous system. The apartment faded at the edges, replaced by a sensation of infinite possibility. She could feel the gravitational pull of distant planets, hear the electromagnetic songs of pulsars, taste the metallic bite of cosmic radiation. This was pure solar energy crystallized into matter—a fragment of the star that powered all life on Earth.

"I want every cent of my debt erased," she whispered, her voice steadying as the words took shape. "Every loan forgiven, every financial burden lifted. I want my life back."

The crystal blazed like a captive sun, and reality began to bend around her wish.

The world shimmered like heat rising from summer asphalt. Nora felt the crystal's warmth spread through her bloodstream, each pulse synchronizing with her heartbeat. Her laptop screen flickered, numbers cascading across banking websites as if reality were rewriting itself in real time.

Her phone erupted with notifications. Email after email flooded her inbox—loan forgiveness confirmations, credit balances zeroing out, official letters bearing government seals. She watched her student loan portal refresh itself: $180,000 became $150,000, then $100,000, tumbling toward zero like a slot machine paying out in reverse.

The euphoria was intoxicating. For the first time in years, she could breathe without the crushing weight of financial ruin pressing against her ribs. Her credit score climbed in real time—600, 650, 700, 750. Collections accounts vanished from her credit report as if they had never existed.

But something felt wrong.

The light in her apartment had changed. The perpetual daylight that had bathed the town for six centuries now carried an amber tinge, like autumn afternoons that arrived too early. Through her window, she watched shadows stretch unnaturally long despite the sun's position high overhead.

Her phone rang. Unknown number.

"Miss Eld?" The voice belonged to a woman from the Federal Student Aid office. "I'm calling about some unusual activity on your account. Our systems show a complete debt forgiveness, but we have no record of processing—"

Nora hung up, heart hammering. The crystal in her palm had dimmed slightly, its solar flares moving more slowly within the faceted prison. She checked the clock: 1:43 PM. Plenty of time to reach the hilltop shrine before sunset.

She wrapped the crystal in its tissue paper and placed it back in the shoebox. The cardboard felt cooler now, though still warm enough to remind her of its contents. Outside, the light continued to shift, taking on qualities she had never seen in six hundred years of perpetual day.

The shrine waited on Meridian Hill, a twenty-minute walk through the town center. She had visited it once during her first semester, drawn by its connection to the medieval astronomer-monk who had built the crystallization lens into St. Meridian's steeple. Local legend claimed the lens focused sunlight into solid form for exactly thirteen seconds each Midsummer Eve, but she had dismissed such stories as folklore until today.

Nora grabbed her jacket and headed for the door. The moment she stepped outside, she froze.

People were running.

Not jogging or hurrying to appointments—running with the desperate urgency of those fleeing disaster. Down Meridian Street, she saw dozens of townsfolk clutching boxes, bags, and containers of various sizes. All of them moved in the same direction: toward the hill that rose beyond the town's eastern edge.

Mrs. Cavannagh from the flower shop stumbled past, her arms wrapped around a jewelry box that flickered with internal light. Behind her, the young banker who had denied Nora's loan modification sprinted by with a shoebox identical to her own. A teacher from the elementary school, the librarian, the owner of the hardware store—all running, all carrying glowing containers, all racing toward the same destination.

The light dimmed another degree. Nora looked up and saw something that made her stomach drop.

The sun was shrinking.

Not setting—shrinking. Growing smaller and dimmer while maintaining its position overhead, as if something were draining it of substance. The temperature began to drop, and for the first time in her life, Nora felt a wind that carried the promise of true darkness.

She clutched her shoebox tighter and began to run.

***

The hilltop shrine materialized through the gathering dusk like a monument to forgotten gods. Ancient stones formed a perfect circle around a crystalline platform that caught what remained of the dying light and threw it back in fractured rainbows. At the circle's center stood a pedestal carved with astronomical symbols that predated any calendar Nora knew.

She wasn't alone.

Dozens of townsfolk surrounded the shrine, their faces painted with the same desperate realization that clawed at her chest. Everyone clutched containers—shoeboxes, jewelry cases, mason jars, briefcases—but the light had gone out of most of them. Empty vessels that had once held crystallized wishes now sat dark and cold in trembling hands.

"It won't work!" Mrs. Cavannagh was sobbing, shaking her jewelry box as if she could rattle the light back to life. "I wished for my husband back, but the light is gone!"

The banker stood nearby, his shoebox split open to reveal nothing but tissue paper and shadows. "My mortgage," he whispered. "I just wanted to save my house."

Around the circle, similar scenes played out. The teacher who had wished away her daughter's medical bills, the librarian who had tried to erase decades of caring for her invalid mother, the hardware store owner who had gambled on saving his failing business—all of them holding empty containers as the world darkened around them.

The sun had shrunk to the size of a marble, casting barely enough light to see by. Temperature plummeted as plants began to wilt and birds fell silent. In the growing darkness, aurora-like ribbons began to flicker where the sun should have been—cosmic energies bleeding through the wound torn in reality's fabric.

Nora opened her shoebox with shaking hands. The crystal blazed like a captive star, its light so intense it made everyone turn toward her. The tissue paper around it sparkled with embedded starlight, and she could feel heat radiating through the cardboard walls.

"Yours still works," breathed a voice behind her.

She turned to find Vincent Ness emerging from the shadows between the ancient stones. He looked exactly as he had in his basement shop, ageless and knowing, but now his coal-dark eyes held something that might have been pity.

"Why?" Nora demanded, her voice cracking. "Why is mine different?"

Vincent stepped into the circle of light cast by her crystal. "Because yours isn't a fragment, Miss Eld. It's the source." He gestured toward the dying ember overhead. "What you hold in your hands is our sun, crystallized and stolen. Every other shard I sold was merely glass and clever illusion—pretty counterfeits that granted the feeling of wishes fulfilled without actually changing anything."

The truth hit her like cosmic radiation. Her debt remained—she could feel it now, the weight of financial obligation settling back onto her shoulders as the false reality crumbled. Her wish had never taken effect because the crystal she held was too powerful, too essential to waste on personal desires.

"Six hundred years ago," Vincent continued, "a monk discovered how to crystallize starlight. But crystallization requires extraction. To make the shards, I had to remove the light from its source. Today, for the first time, I took too much."

The aurora ribbons twisted overhead, growing brighter as the world grew colder. Around the circle, people began to understand. Their wishes had been lies, but Nora's crystal contained the actual sun—compressed into a form small enough to hold, vital enough to restore what had been lost.

"Choose carefully," Vincent whispered. "Use your wish, and the world ends in eternal darkness. Return the crystal unused, and everyone's dreams die with the light—but tomorrow will still come."

Nora looked down at the crystal pulsing in her palm. She could feel its immense power, the weight of a star condensed into crystalline form. One word from her, and every debt would vanish, every burden lifted. All it would cost was the sun itself.

The shoebox grew heavier in her hands as aurora-light danced where day should be. Around her, the desperate townsfolk waited for her choice—the choice between personal salvation and the continuation of all things.

She lifted the shoebox toward the dying light, her decision forming like a prayer in the growing dark. She placed the crystal upon the pedestal, not with a whisper of a wish for herself, but with a silent apology to the star. For a moment, nothing happened. The world held its cold, final breath. Then, from the heart of the crystal, a single beam of pure light shot into the sky, striking the dim ember overhead. It blazed. The sun did not just return; it was reborn, flooding the hilltop with warmth so intense it felt like forgiveness. Nora shielded her eyes, her face bathed in the impossible dawn she had almost erased. Around her, a hundred shattered dreams were forgotten in a collective, grateful sigh. She took a breath, and stepped out into the sunshine.

Posted Jun 23, 2025
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Alexis Araneta
17:25 Jun 23, 2025

Incredible stuff, as usual. I love how vivid the imagery here is.

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Mary Bendickson
02:21 Jun 26, 2025

Another masterpiece full of sunshine.

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