It was Christmas Eve in the small, snow-cloaked town of Bellingham, where warm lights spilled from frosted windows and the air hummed with the faint echo of carols. At the grand old manor of the Van Houts, the wealthiest family in town, a lavish Christmas party was in full swing. The ballroom sparkled with gilded garlands, towering evergreens adorned with silver and crimson baubles, and a roaring hearth that bathed everything in a golden glow.
The townsfolk mingled, wine glasses in hand, laughter and music intertwining as snow began to fall outside. It was a tradition that no one dared to miss, though the Van Houts were known for their cold, imperious demeanor. This year was different, though. This year, something lingered at the edges of the warmth—something that made the candles flicker, as if shadows pressed too close.
It began when the front door opened, though no one had seen anyone approach. A sharp wind howled through the entryway, making the chandeliers tremble. There, in the doorway, stood a figure cloaked in a long, midnight-black coat, its hem dusted with snow. A wide-brimmed hat obscured most of the stranger’s face, and their gloved hands clasped a polished cane tipped with an opalescent stone that seemed to shimmer unnaturally in the light.
For a moment, the music faltered as the guests turned to look. The stranger stepped inside, their boots making no sound against the tiled floor. There was an otherworldly grace to their movements, as though the world shifted subtly to accommodate them.
"Welcome!" boomed Theodore Van Hout, the head of the family, his voice hearty though his eyes betrayed a flicker of unease. "And who might you be, friend? I don’t believe we’ve had the pleasure."
The stranger inclined their head, the shadow of the brim shifting slightly. Their voice was low, melodic, and oddly layered, as though several voices spoke in unison. "A guest, as invited as any. Tonight, I bring my own... revelry."
Something about their words made the air feel heavier, though Theodore laughed and clapped them on the back. "Well, any friend of Christmas is a friend of mine! Please, enjoy yourself."
The stranger drifted into the crowd, and though their presence was impossible to ignore, they seemed to slide just beyond true focus. Guests whispered behind raised hands, wondering who had invited such an enigmatic figure, but no one could recall their name being on the guest list.
An hour later, Peter Crowley, the town’s loudest and most self-important man, was the first to notice something strange. He’d been boasting near the punch bowl when his voice trailed off mid-sentence. His gaze fixed on the stranger, who stood at the far end of the room, staring directly at him. The opalescent stone on their cane seemed to pulse faintly with an inner light, and Peter’s face went pale.
Without a word, he turned and stumbled toward the exit, brushing past confused partygoers. No one followed him, though a ripple of discomfort spread through the crowd. The music played on, but it felt dissonant now, like a hymn played backward.
Minutes later, a scream pierced the night. It came from outside, shrill and raw. Several guests rushed to the doors and threw them open, but all they found was a spray of blood in the fresh snow and Peter’s hat lying forlornly by the fountain. Of Peter himself, there was no sign.
Panic rippled through the crowd, though Theodore was quick to dismiss it as an unfortunate accident. "Wolves," he said with forced conviction. "You know how they are this time of year. Poor Peter must’ve wandered too far."
Yet the stranger’s presence grew more oppressive. Wherever they moved, the air grew colder, and the shadows seemed to stretch unnaturally long. Conversations faltered as their gaze passed over the guests, each glance feeling like a tangible weight.
When a young maid went to close the door, the stranger’s voice stopped her. "No," they said, "leave it open. It’s for the wind."
The wind, indeed, began to howl louder, though it seemed confined to the manor. Candles sputtered and went out, leaving only the firelight to cast trembling shadows. Guests began to notice subtle changes in the room—a door that had always led to the dining hall now opened to a dark, spiraling staircase; a window reflected not the snowy courtyard but a vast, swirling void speckled with faint, alien stars.
The stranger finally addressed the gathering when the clock struck midnight. The guests had huddled near the hearth, their joviality replaced with unease.
"Shall I tell you a story?" the stranger asked, their voice carrying over the uneasy murmurs. They moved to stand before the hearth, their silhouette stretching impossibly tall against the flames.
No one answered, yet the stranger continued. "Long ago, there was a being who feasted on the joy of others. They would come to celebrations like this, drawn by the warmth and light. The merrier the gathering, the richer their feast."
The room seemed to darken further, the firelight dimming as the opalescent stone on the cane glowed brighter. "But the being was not cruel," the stranger added. "It gave gifts to those it favored. Gifts of transcendence. Gifts of oblivion."
A ripple of unease passed through the guests, but no one dared interrupt. "The being loved stories," the stranger continued, their voice soft yet thunderous. "So tell me, who among you will share a tale tonight?"
No one spoke. The room felt stifling, the air thick as though soaked with unseen brine. Finally, Theodore Van Hout stepped forward, his bravado faltering. "Enough of this nonsense," he said, though his voice trembled. "You’ve scared my guests quite enough."
The stranger turned their head slightly, and Theodore fell silent. "Ah," the stranger said. "The host. Tell me, Theodore, what do you desire most in this world?"
The silence was suffocating. Theodore opened his mouth, but no sound came out. The stranger raised a gloved hand, and the opalescent stone flared with a light so intense it painted the room in stark, monochrome contrasts. When the light faded, Theodore was gone, his wine glass shattered on the floor.
The guests erupted into chaos, but the manor had become a labyrinth. Doors opened to endless corridors or cavernous voids, and the windows now revealed alien vistas where massive, writhing shapes blotted out a sickly green sky. The stranger stood motionless amidst the chaos, their presence a still point in the swirling madness.
One by one, the guests vanished. Some were drawn toward the stranger as though compelled, their faces slack with a mix of terror and awe. Others fled into the darkened hallways, only to scream moments later as they were swallowed by shadows. The few who tried to fight found their weapons turned to ash the moment they struck.
By the time the last candle flickered out, only the stranger remained. They turned to the hearth, where the fire had gone cold, and placed their cane against the mantle. With a soft sigh, they removed their hat, revealing a face that no human mind could comprehend—a swirling mass of shifting patterns, endless and unknowable.
The stranger stepped into the hearth and disappeared, leaving behind only the faint scent of pine and a single, perfect bauble gleaming on the mantle.
When the townsfolk arrived the next morning, the manor was silent. They found the ballroom untouched, though the hearth was filled with blackened snow and the air smelled faintly of brine. Of the guests, there was no trace. Only the bauble remained, its surface shifting like liquid moonlight.
Those who dared touch it claimed they heard faint whispers, promises of warmth and joy. But as the years passed, the Van Hout manor fell into disrepair, avoided by all but the desperate and the foolhardy.
And every Christmas Eve, a single light could be seen flickering in the ballroom, accompanied by the faint, haunting strains of a melody no one could quite remember.
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