The Unexpected Arrival

Written in response to: "Write a story that includes the line “What time is it?”"

Fiction

The waiting room of Dr. Jack's office was unusually quiet that morning. The soft hum of the air conditioner and the occasional rustle of magazine pages were the only sounds that filled the space. Julia sat in one of the cushioned chairs, her hands resting on her swollen belly. She was nine months pregnant and had come in for her routine check-up.

As she flipped through a parenting magazine, she felt a slight twinge in her lower abdomen. She dismissed it as just another Braxton Hicks contraction, something she had been experiencing frequently over the past few weeks. She glanced around the room, noting the other patients waiting their turn. An elderly man with a cane, a young mother with a toddler, and a teenage girl with her mother.

Julia's thoughts drifted to the nursery she and her husband, Stewart, had prepared. It was painted a soft shade of yellow, with a crib, a changing table, and a rocking chair. They had spent countless hours assembling furniture, folding tiny clothes, and arranging stuffed animals. She smiled, imagining the day they would bring their baby home.

Another twinge, this time a bit stronger, pulled her out of her reverie. She shifted in her seat, trying to find a more comfortable position. Just then, the receptionist called her name.

"Julia Johnson?"

Julia stood up, feeling a sudden rush of warmth between her legs. She looked down and saw a small puddle forming at her feet. Her eyes widened in realization.

"Oh my God," she whispered. "My water just broke."

The receptionist's eyes widened as well. "Dr. Jack will see you right away. Please, follow me."

Julia followed the receptionist down the hallway, her heart pounding with a mix of excitement and fear. They entered an examination room, where Dr. Jack was waiting.

"Julia, what's going on?" Dr. Jack asked, noticing her distressed expression.

"My water just broke," Julia said, her voice trembling.

Dr. Jack's eyes widened. "Alright, let's get you checked out."

As Dr. Jack examined her, Julia felt another contraction, this one much stronger than the previous ones. She winced in pain.

"You're in labor, Julia," Dr. Jack said calmly. "We need to get you to the hospital right away."

Julia's mind raced. "What about Stewart? He's at work. I need to call him."

Dr. Jack nodded. "We'll call him for you. Don't worry."

The receptionist handed Julia her phone, and she quickly dialed Stewart's number. It rang several times before he answered.

"Hey, honey. What's up?" Stewart's voice came through the line.

"Stewart, my water broke. I'm in labor. They're taking me to the hospital," Julia said, her voice shaking.

"Oh my God! I'll be there as soon as I can. Hang in there, Julia. I love you," Stewart said, his voice filled with urgency.

"I love you too," Julia replied before hanging up.

Dr. Jack and the receptionist helped Julia into a wheelchair and quickly wheeled her out to the waiting ambulance. The ride to the hospital felt like a blur, with contractions coming closer and closer together.

When they arrived at the hospital, Julia was rushed into the labor and delivery unit. Nurses and doctors surrounded her, preparing for the imminent arrival of her baby. Julia's mind was a whirlwind of emotions—fear, excitement, anticipation.

As she lay on the hospital bed, gripping the sides with each contraction, she heard a familiar voice.

"Julia, I'm here!" Stewart burst into the room, his face flushed with worry.

"Stewart!" Julia cried, tears streaming down her face. "I'm so glad you're here."

He rushed to her side, taking her hand in his. "I'm not going anywhere, honey. We're in this together."

The hours seemed to stretch on as Julia labored, with Stewart by her side, offering words of encouragement and support. Finally, after what felt like an eternity, the doctor announced that it was time to push.

"You're doing great, Julia. Just a little more," the doctor said.

Julia pushed with all her strength, feeling the intense pressure and pain. Stewart's voice was a constant source of comfort.

"You're amazing, Julia. You can do this," he whispered.

With one final push, Julia felt a sudden release, followed by the sound of a baby's cry. Tears of joy and relief streamed down her face as the doctor placed the tiny, wriggling baby on her chest.

"Congratulations, Julia and Stewart. You have a beautiful baby girl," the doctor said, smiling.

Julia looked down at her daughter, overwhelmed with love. "She's perfect," she whispered.

Stewart leaned in, kissing Julia's forehead. "You did it, Julia. I'm so proud of you."

As they marveled at their newborn daughter, a nurse came in to check on them.

"How are you feeling, Julia?" the nurse asked.

"Tired, but so happy," Julia replied, her voice filled with emotion.

The nurse smiled. "That's completely normal. Do you know what time it is?"

Julia glanced at the clock on the wall. "It's 3:45 PM."

The nurse nodded. "Your baby was born at 3:30 PM. Congratulations again."

Julia and Stewart exchanged a look of pure joy. They had just experienced the most incredible moment of their lives, and they knew that their journey as parents was just beginning.

As they held their daughter close, they felt a sense of awe and gratitude. The waiting room of the doctor's office seemed like a distant memory, replaced by the overwhelming love and happiness of this new chapter in their lives.

Just then, the door to their room opened, and a woman in a lab coat entered. She had a serious expression on her face.

"Mr. and Mrs. Johnson, I'm Dr. Evans. I need to speak with you about something important," she said.

Julia and Stewart exchanged worried glances. "Is everything okay?" Stewart asked.

Dr. Evans took a deep breath. "Your daughter is healthy, but during the delivery, we discovered something unusual. She has a rare genetic marker that indicates she may have extraordinary abilities."

Julia's eyes widened. "Extraordinary abilities? What do you mean?"

Dr. Evans continued, "This marker is extremely rare and has been linked to enhanced cognitive and physical abilities. We need to monitor her closely and conduct further tests."

Stewart's mind raced. "Are you saying our daughter might be... special?"

Dr. Evans nodded. "Yes, but we won't know the extent of her abilities until she grows older. For now, we need to ensure she receives the best care and support."

Julia and Stewart looked at their newborn daughter, feeling a mix of awe and uncertainty. Their journey as parents had taken an unexpected turn, and they knew they would face new challenges and discoveries.

As they held their daughter close, they felt a renewed sense of determination. They were ready to embrace whatever the future held, knowing that their love and support would guide their extraordinary child through the unknown.

Posted Apr 11, 2025
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