When Lions Remember Their Names

Written in response to: "Center your story around someone or something that undergoes a transformation."

Fiction

The torch flames cast dancing shadows across the council chamber as Queen Amytis entered flanked by guards, her chains clinking softly against the marble floor. Seven years of sleeping in gardens and managing an empire's slow collapse had taught her many things, but the most valuable lesson was this: when facing a tribunal of ambitious men, posture was everything.

She walked like a queen.

Behind the crescent-shaped table sat nine members of the Babylonian High Council, their faces masks of practiced neutrality. But Amytis could read the tells—Nabonidus drumming his fingers against his wine cup, young Shamash-iddin avoiding her gaze, elderly Nabu-rim-ani studying his scrolls with suspicious intensity. Seven years of court politics had made her fluent in the language of nervous ambition.

"Your Majesty." Lord Belshazzar rose from the central seat, his voice carrying the oily courtesy of a man already tasting victory. "Please, be seated."

A simple wooden chair waited in the center of the chamber—deliberately humble, meant to diminish her status. Instead, she settled into it like ascending a throne, arranging her simple robes with unconscious dignity. Her mother had been right: breeding showed, even in chains.

"My lords." She inclined her head precisely—enough respect to acknowledge their authority, not enough to suggest submission. "I understand you have questions about my... administrative decisions... during the king's indisposition."

Murmurs rippled through the chamber. Administrative decisions. Indisposition. She was forcing them to use euphemisms, making them acknowledge the legal complexity of their position. In Babylonian law, madness was a medical condition, not grounds for automatic deposition.

Belshazzar consulted a scroll, his movements theatrical. "Indeed, Your Majesty. Serious questions about your conduct during a period of... unprecedented challenges."

From the gallery behind her came a soft cough. She recognized it immediately—Darius of Susa, clutching his eternal scrolls, probably documenting this trial with the same bureaucratic precision he'd applied to tracking her husband's grass consumption. Poor man looked ready to dissolve into his own paperwork.

"The first charge," Belshazzar continued, "concerns your refusal to acknowledge the king's incapacity and facilitate proper succession protocols. For seven years, you've maintained the fiction that a madman retains legal authority over the empire."

Amytis smiled—the expression her husband had once called her "war face." "My lord, I find your terminology interesting. Our court physicians have never diagnosed His Majesty as mad. They speak of humors, celestial influences, temporary afflictions. When did the council acquire medical expertise to contradict them?"

Nabonidus leaned forward, scarred face flushing. "Your Majesty, the king eats grass. He sleeps outdoors like an animal. He shows no recognition of human speech or authority. Are we to pretend otherwise for political convenience?"

"I would prefer we use accurate language. His Majesty suffers from a condition that renders him temporarily unable to perform royal duties. Temporary being the operative word." She let her gaze sweep the chamber. "Unless, of course, this council has received divine revelations about his condition's permanence that I haven't been informed of?"

The silence stretched like a bowstring. They couldn't admit to consulting foreign prophets without undermining their position, but neither could they claim certain knowledge of the king's future without revealing their impatience for power.

"Furthermore," she continued, pressing her advantage, "I'm curious about the legal precedent here. Are we establishing that temporary incapacitation voids royal succession? Because I can think of several occasions when council members have been... temporarily impaired... by wine or illness. Should we have declared their positions vacant?"

Several faces flushed. She was reminding them of their own vulnerabilities, their own moments of weakness that could be weaponized under this new standard.

Shamash-iddin shifted uncomfortably. "Your Majesty, surely after seven years—"

"After seven years, I've learned patience." Her voice carried warmth that somehow made the words more threatening. "A virtue that seems to be in short supply among ambitious men."

Belshazzar's jaw tightened. "The second charge concerns your corruption of royal authority through foreign influence. Specifically, your documented conversations with the Hebrew advisor Daniel, whose... predictions... have allegedly guided your decisions regarding the empire's governance."

Here it was—the trap they'd been building toward. Admit to believing Daniel's prophecy and validate their claims of foreign corruption. Deny it and appear to be acting without rational basis.

"I've consulted many advisors during this crisis," she said carefully. "Egyptian physicians who prescribed costly treatments that failed. Persian astrologers who provided contradictory readings. Our own court officials who offered everything except useful guidance. Are you suggesting that seeking diverse counsel constitutes treason?"

"We're suggesting," Nabu-rim-ani spoke for the first time, his aged voice carrying decades of accumulated authority, "that placing foreign superstition above Babylonian wisdom constitutes dangerous precedent. That allowing Hebrew mysticism to influence royal policy undermines the very foundations of our civilization."

"Foreign superstition?" Amytis laughed, the sound echoing off marble walls. "My lords, that 'foreign superstition' accurately predicted my husband's condition down to the specific details. When our own gods remained silent, when our wisest priests offered nothing but expensive rituals, a Hebrew advisor warned us exactly what would happen. Should I have ignored the only accurate counsel available out of cultural pride?"

The chamber erupted in whispers. She'd just admitted to believing Daniel's prophecy—given them exactly what they needed for a conviction. But she wasn't finished.

"Tell me," she continued, raising her voice above the murmurs, "what have our traditional sources offered? General Nabonidus, what did the temple of Marduk predict about the king's recovery?"

Nabonidus's face went through several colors. "The priests... they continue to seek divine guidance through proper channels..."

"For seven years. With no results." She turned to Shamash-iddin. "And our court astrologers? What insights have the stars provided?"

The young noble squirmed. "The celestial signs remain... complex to interpret..."

"Complex. Expensive and complex." Amytis stood, her chains rattling like an accusation. "So when the only accurate prediction comes from a Hebrew god, you call it foreign corruption. When Babylonian sources fail spectacularly for seven years, you call it divine mystery. How wonderfully convenient."

Belshazzar slammed his palm against the table. "Enough! The third charge stands clear—you have undermined the stability of this empire by maintaining allegiance to a beast, refusing legitimate succession, and placing the ravings of a foreign slave above the wisdom of this council!"

The accusation hung in the air like incense at a funeral. Treason, conspiracy, corruption—capital charges that would see her executed before dawn. The chamber fell silent except for the crackling of torches and the scratch of Darius's stylus documenting her destruction.

But Amytis had spent seven years preparing for this moment.

"My lords," she said quietly, "you speak of stability. Let me tell you about stability." She began walking slowly around the chamber, her chains marking rhythm like a funeral drum. "For seven years, while you've been plotting succession, I've been holding this empire together. Who negotiated the trade agreements that kept our northern borders secure? Who managed the Syrian rebellions without depleting our military reserves? Who maintained diplomatic relations with Egypt while they tested our resolve?"

Silence.

"You were busy positioning yourselves for power while I was actually exercising it. Every document, every decision, every policy that's prevented this empire from collapsing—my work. Not because I believed in some Hebrew god, but because I understood something you've apparently forgotten."

She stopped directly in front of Belshazzar. "Legitimacy matters. Law matters. The moment you abandon legal succession for convenience, you invite every ambitious general and foreign prince to try the same. You want to destabilize the empire? Crown yourself through this farce and watch how quickly our enemies notice that Babylonian law means nothing."

The chamber erupted. Half the council shouted objections while the other half demanded order. But Amytis could see uncertainty creeping into several faces—men who hadn't considered the broader implications of their coup.

"Furthermore," she continued when the noise subsided, "you seem confused about my motivations. You think I've spent seven years protecting a beast out of sentimental attachment? That I've risked everything for romantic love?"

She laughed, and this time the sound carried genuine amusement.

"My lords, I've protected the king because I'm not stupid. Daniel's prophecy didn't just predict seven years of madness—it predicted restoration. Complete restoration, when the king acknowledges the sovereignty of the Hebrew god. And I've counted every day, watched every sign, because I know something you've apparently forgotten."

The chamber held its breath.

"Nebuchadnezzar the Great didn't build this empire through mercy. He didn't conquer half the known world by forgiving insults. When he returns to his throne—not if, when—he'll remember everything. Every betrayal, every act of disloyalty, every ambitious fool who tried to steal his crown while he was helpless."

She turned to face the full council, her voice dropping to a whisper that somehow carried to every corner of the chamber.

"So ask yourselves, my lords—when the lion remembers his name, do you want to be standing with his queen, or standing with his enemies?"

The silence stretched like a blade waiting to fall. Several council members exchanged glances, the mathematics of survival suddenly more complex than simple ambition.

But Belshazzar had prepared for this moment too.

"Pretty words, Your Majesty. But this council deals in reality, not prophecy." He produced another scroll from beneath the table, unrolling it with deliberate ceremony. "Which brings us to tonight's final business—a routine matter of temple administration."

Amytis felt something cold slide down her spine. The way he said 'routine'—nothing about tonight was routine.

"The high priest of Marduk has requested council approval for a purification ritual," Belshazzar continued, his voice taking on the bored tone of bureaucratic procedure. "It seems the temple grounds have been... contaminated... by the presence of unclean beasts. To properly honor our great god, these creatures must be sacrificed according to ancient protocol."

The chamber fell silent. Amytis could hear her own heartbeat thundering in her ears.

"The ritual requires identification and removal of any beast that has defiled sacred spaces through its presence in the royal precincts. All such animals are to be brought before this council for formal classification and..." He paused, consulting the scroll. "Appropriate disposal."

Nabu-rim-ani nodded gravely. "A necessary cleansing. The gods have been too patient with our... administrative oversights."

Administrative oversights. They were going to kill her husband and call it temple maintenance.

Heavy footsteps echoed from the corridor outside—the sound of multiple guards approaching. Through the chamber doors came six palace soldiers dragging something between them. Something that had once been a man but now moved on all fours, wild hair hanging like a curtain, powerful muscles rippling beneath skin darkened by years of outdoor living.

Nebuchadnezzar.

They forced him to his knees in the center of the chamber, though his massive frame still dominated the space. Even in madness, even reduced to an animal, he radiated the latent power of someone who'd once commanded legions.

"The beast in question," Belshazzar announced. "Seven years of defiling the palace grounds, consuming sacred gardens, disturbing the natural order through its presence in royal spaces."

The creature that had been Nebuchadnezzar lifted its head, and Amytis saw eyes that held no recognition, no awareness of the proceedings. But from its throat came a sound—a low, guttural vocalization that had become familiar over the past months: "Yah... Yah..."

Shamash-iddin laughed, the sound sharp and cruel. "Listen to it. Still making those bestial noises. What did you call them, Your Majesty? Divine communication?"

Other council members joined in the mockery. "Yah... Yah..." they repeated, turning the sound into a joke, a symbol of madness and degradation.

But Amytis felt her world shift. In that repeated sound, she suddenly heard something else—not animal noise, but a broken attempt at a name. A name from Daniel's teachings, from the Hebrew god who had predicted this entire sequence of events.

Yahweh.

For seven years, he'd been trying to say the name. For seven years, the mad king had been reaching toward the very deity whose sovereignty Daniel had said he must acknowledge.

"The council will now vote," Belshazzar declared, "on the resolution to purify the temple grounds through appropriate sacrifice of contaminated beasts. All in favor?"

Hands began to rise around the table. One. Two. Three. The mathematical certainty of her husband's execution taking shape in parliamentary procedure.

All her political maneuvering, all her careful arguments about legitimacy and law—useless against this bureaucratic murder dressed as religious duty. They were going to kill him while she watched, and there was nothing her intelligence or royal breeding could do to stop it.

Nothing except faith.

"El Elyon!" she cried out, the Hebrew words ripping from her throat like a prayer torn from her soul. "El Shaddai! God Most High, if you are real, if your prophet spoke truth, let your servant acknowledge your sovereignty!"

The chamber erupted in chaos. Blasphemy in a Babylonian court—foreign gods invoked in the sacred space where Marduk's authority was absolute. She'd just signed her own death warrant with words of faith.

But the creature at the chamber's center had gone completely still.

"Yah..." it said again, but this time the sound was different. Clearer. More human.

"Yah... weh..."

The mockery died on Shamash-iddin's lips.

"Yahweh," the voice said, and now it was unmistakably human speech, though roughened by years of disuse. The massive frame began to straighten, shoulders squaring, head lifting with royal dignity.

"Now I, Nebuchadnezzar..."

The words cut through the chamber noise like a sword through silk. Every voice fell silent, every hand froze in mid-gesture. The figure that had been beast was rising to its full height, and in its eyes was something that made grown men step backward.

Recognition. Intelligence. Memory.

Terrible, terrible memory.

"Now I, Nebuchadnezzar, praise and exalt and glorify the King of heaven, because everything he does is right and all his ways are just."

His gaze swept the council table, and Amytis watched seven years of careful planning crumble into dust. Belshazzar's face went white as limestone. Nabonidus actually whimpered. Shamash-iddin looked ready to faint.

"And those who walk in pride," the king continued, his voice gaining strength with each word, "he is able to humble."

The silence that followed was the silence of men realizing they'd been caught in the act of regicide by the intended victim.

But it was the king's eyes that made Amytis's breath catch—no longer vacant, no longer mad, but filled with terrible clarity and something that might have been gratitude as they found her face.

"My queen," he said softly. "I believe you were defending my throne?"

Amytis smiled through tears she hadn't realized were falling, her chains suddenly feeling light as silk ribbons. "Just keeping it warm, my lord. I trust you're ready to take it back?"

Nebuchadnezzar's answering smile was sharp enough to cut diamonds, and when he looked back at the council table, several members actually cowered.

"Oh yes," he said quietly. "I believe I am."

The transformation was complete. The lion had remembered his name.

And in the council chamber of Babylon, judgment was about to begin.

Posted Jun 17, 2025
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Alexis Araneta
06:48 Jun 18, 2025

Alex, this was stunning work again. I love that you took a different perspective on Daniel's story from the Bible. I loved how you maintained and amplified the tension as the story progressed. Of course, as usual from you, incredible use of imagery.

I suppose across cultures, greed and ambition corrupt absolutely. Incredible work!

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