Submitted to: Contest #308

Summertime Crush Part II: Sarah's Return

Written in response to: "Write a story in which the natural and the mystical intertwine."

Coming of Age Drama Fiction

Sarah’s tires crunched on the familiar gravel of the old camp road, a sound that resonated deep within her, stirring not just memories, but a profound sense of finality.

Years had spun by since she last drove this path, enough time for the world to reshape itself, for her once-bright blonde hair to mellow into a distinguished silver, now thin and brittle.

Each breath was a conscious effort, each step a testament to sheer will. It was the stark, undeniable truth from her doctor—a prognosis of limited time left—that had finally propelled her here.

A return long overdue, she knew.

Yet, as she looked through the windshield at the overgrown entrance to Camp Crystal Lake, her eyes, those same summer sky blue pools that had once reflected youthful exuberance, still held an unyielding optimism, now tinged with a quiet, comforting peace.

This was her last pilgrimage.

She parked her Jeep, a sturdy Cherokee that had seen its last cross-country adventure.

The air here was different, thicker. It wasn't just humidity; it was the palpable weight of unspoken stories, of laughter cut short, and of one boy's tragic fate that had forever scarred her heart.

But today, beneath the sorrow, she felt a strange, welcoming pull.

She pushed open the creaking gate, a sound like a long-held sigh, and stepped onto the path.

The trees, once slender saplings, now towering, formed a dense canopy that dappled the light into shifting patterns on the forest floor.

Her steps were slow, deliberate, each one a precious commodity.

This wasn't a casual stroll; it was a journey to an end.

She had come back for Jason. Not the monster of legend, but the boy.

The lonely, misunderstood boy she had last seen alive before the lake had truly claimed him. She needed closure, yes, but more than that, she needed to see if he was alright, to offer a final comfort, to bridge the decades of unspoken guilt and sorrow.

The cabins were ruins, leaning precariously, their windows like vacant eyes. Nature had begun its slow, inexorable work of dismantling them.

She walked past the main lodge, its porch sagging, remembering the frantic agonizing moments as she pulled him from the water, still breathing. And her crushing relief, followed by the deep, unsettling guilt that she was forced to leave.

Only to learn later that the lake had indeed taken him a second time, truly claiming him in her absence.

Now, there was no more running.

Her doctor’s words had cut through all her excuses, all her fear, leaving only the urgent need to make amends.

She found the lake. It lay still and dark, a mirror reflecting the oppressive green of the forest. The water looked ancient, but today, there was a subtle, almost inviting warmth radiating from it. A shiver, not of cold but of memory, traced its way down her spine.

This was it. This was where he had truly gone.

She walked to the edge, the ground soft and spongy beneath her sensible hiking boots. The air here was heavy, yet tinged with a delicate floral scent she couldn't quite place, hinting at growth even amidst decay. She closed her eyes, letting the sounds of the forest wash over her: the rustle of leaves, the distant call of a bird, the buzzing of insects.

Then, a sound, faint but distinct: a soft, rhythmic lapping of water against the shore, as if a quiet breath was being taken.

When she opened her eyes, she saw it. Not an apparition, not a monster, but a ripple.

A single, small ripple spreading from the center of the lake, disturbingly deliberate, as if a hand had just breached the surface and withdrawn, a gentle wave of acknowledgment.

“Jason?” she whispered, her voice reedy, but clear.

The ripple faded, and the lake was still again.

She sat on a fallen log, its bark rough beneath her palm. The sun began its slow descent, painting the sky in hues of orange and purple, softer than the harsh light of memory. The forest deepened into shadow, but it felt less menacing, more welcoming now.

It felt like home.

As dusk settled, a thick mist began to rise from the lake, clinging to the trees, transforming the familiar landscape into something ethereal, otherworldly. It swirled around her, cool and damp, yet not chilling. It felt almost like a soft embrace. She pulled her cardigan tighter, a comforting gesture.

Then, she saw him.

A figure, dark against the deepening twilight, standing on the opposite shore. Tall, broad, unmoving. Not a trick of the mist, not a tree stump. It was him.

Her breath caught in her throat. Her heart, a sturdy old thing, began to pound with a rhythm she hadn’t felt in years. Fear mingled with awe, and a strange, profound sense of peace.

He was here. He was truly here.

He didn't move, didn't acknowledge her with a gesture. He simply stood there, a silent sentinel. The mist thickened, obscuring his form, then thinning, revealing him again, like a slow, deliberate reveal.

“Jason,” she said again, her voice stronger, carrying across the still water with surprising clarity. “It’s me. Sarah.”

Still no response. He was a statue, a silhouette. But she felt no uncertainty about his reality. He was as solid and real as the ancient trees around them.

She decided to approach. The path around the lake was treacherous, but she was propelled by a quiet determination. She started walking, her eyes fixed on the distant figure.

The mist swirled, making every step a challenge, obscuring the path, then revealing it just in time. The forest pressed in, ancient and watchful; its gaze felt less like judgment and more like silent observation.

As she drew closer, the air grew not colder, but subtly warmer, infused with a faint, earthy smell, like damp soil and fresh growth, a scent of life returning.

She could feel a strange energy emanating from him, a raw, primal force that was both undeniably powerful and strangely gentle.

Finally, she stood on the opposite shore, mere feet from him.

He was enormous. His body was a monolith, but in this soft light, she could see a subtle ruggedness to his form, like a tree twisted by time. He wore tattered, mud-stained clothes, clinging to his massive frame, almost a part of him now.

He still wore the mask, of course. The hockey mask, aged, scarred. But now, it seemed less a symbol of terror and more a shield, a barrier protecting a tender, vulnerable core.

Her eyes were drawn to the mask, to the dark, empty eyeholes. She peered into them, trying to find some hint of the boy she remembered. The boy who was afraid, who was bullied, who had simply wanted to be accepted.

“Jason,” she said, her voice soft, almost a plea. “Are you... are you alright?”

He moved. Slowly, deliberately, he turned his head, the mask swiveling to face her. No sound escaped him. But the movement, the simple act of acknowledging her presence, sent a wave of warmth through her.

“I... I came back,” she continued, her voice gaining strength, driven by a desperate need to connect. “I never stopped thinking about you. About what happened.”

She paused, taking a shaky breath, and the words she’d carried for so long finally spilled out. “I’m so, so sorry, Jason. I should have come back sooner. I should never have left you, but they gave me no choice. I was fired. I truly am sorry for not being here.”

She took another breath, her voice growing quieter, more vulnerable. “And Jason... I'm sick. My time here is almost done. The doctors... they said I don’t have much longer. That’s why I came back. To find you. To make sure you were alright.”

The mist seemed to part slightly around him, as if he commanded it, revealing a patch of ground at his feet. The earth was churned, but there were also delicate new shoots of grass pushing through. And there, near his feet, something glinted in the dying light.

She looked closer. It was an old, tarnished locket. A simple, silver locket, the kind a mother might give to her child. Her heart clenched. It was her locket. The one she had lost that fateful summer. The one she had always secretly believed Jason had found, a small, innocent token amidst the horror of his first near-drowning.

She knelt, her knees protesting, and reached for it. As her fingers brushed the cold metal, a surge of energy, sharp and electric, passed through her, but it was invigorating.

It was a flood of images, of emotions, of a life she couldn't comprehend, yet now saw with astonishing clarity.

She saw the boy, Jason, alone, abandoned, ostracized. She saw his fear, his rage, his yearning for acceptance. She saw the moments of his second death, the cold water closing over him, the despair. But then, something else. A flicker of something ancient, dormant in the very earth, stirred by his pain, by his death.

The forest itself seemed to weep for him, to rise in his defense. The roots of the trees twined around him, not to harm, but to nurture, to hold him. The lake, his tomb, became his cradle. The natural world, intertwined with a primal, mystical force, had claimed him, nourished him, and transformed him.

He hadn't died, not truly. He had become part of it. Part of the lake, part of the forest, an embodiment of its ancient power and its enduring sorrow, but also its resilience. He was the protector of this place, and perhaps, its avenger.

The visions now felt less about violence and more about a fierce, unwavering guardianship. He wasn’t a malicious force, but a misunderstood, powerful entity fiercely defending his only sanctuary from a world that had rejected him.

His 'immortality' wasn't a curse, but a byproduct of this primal connection. He wasn't simply unkillable; he was intrinsically linked to the very essence of Crystal Lake.

As long as the lake existed, as long as the forest breathed, he would endure, a steadfast, silent protector.

The vision faded, leaving her breathless, her hand still clutching the locket. The air around them crackled, imbued with a strange, humming energy that felt like a quiet blessing.

“Oh, Jason,” she whispered, tears streaming down her aged cheeks. Not tears of fear, but of profound understanding, of sorrow, and yes, of a strange, powerful love. “You weren’t a monster. You were... misunderstood. You were hurt.”

She looked up at him, her gaze unwavering. “And you’ve been protecting this place all along, haven’t you? Protecting yourself.”

He tilted his head slightly, a subtle shift that was almost imperceptible, but she felt it, a profound affirmation.

“You’re not alone,” she said, her voice catching. “Not anymore. I'm here now.”

She reached out a trembling hand, not towards him, but towards the tattered fabric of his shirt. She didn’t expect him to take it, to hold it. But she needed to offer.

He remained still, but she felt a subtle change in the air, a softening of the harsh energy that had surrounded him. It was as if a long-held tension had finally begun to ease, replaced by a quiet sense of acknowledgment.

She looked at the locket in her hand. She unclasped it and opened it. Inside, the faded, sepia-toned photos of her and her mother.

“This was always meant for you,” she said, holding it out, offering it to him. “A small piece of the world that cared. A reminder that not everyone abandoned you.”

For a long moment, he didn’t move.

Then, slowly, he extended a massive, scarred hand. His grip on the machete loosened, and the heavy blade fell with a soft thud onto the damp earth, forgotten.

His hand moved past the locket, and with an incredibly gentle, almost delicate touch, his fingers closed around her outstretched hand.

His grip was firm, warm, and surprisingly soft. Not the unfeeling touch of a corpse or a monster, but the quiet, comforting pressure of someone who simply was.

The locket fell from her trembling fingers onto the damp earth—forgotten.

He remained still, his large hand gently clasping hers. She knew she wouldn’t get a verbal response.

His language was the forest, the lake, the silence, and now, the profound, gentle touch of his hand. But she felt his acknowledgment, a profound understanding that transcended words.

The burden she had carried for so long, the nagging questions, the lingering guilt—it all began to lift, dissolving into the swirling mist, replaced by a deep, quiet peace.

Sarah didn’t move. She felt the chill of the coming night, the dampness seeping into her bones, but a different kind of warmth enveloped her.

Her body might be failing, but her spirit, here, with him, felt truly alive for the first time in years.

This was where she was meant to be.

This was her final resting place, not in a sterile hospital bed gasping for breath, but embraced by the very earth and water that had claimed Jason.

She looked up at him, a faint smile touching her lips.

“I’m staying,” she whispered, her voice barely audible, but filled with a quiet certainty. “You won’t be alone ever again. I promise.”

He didn’t move, didn’t make a sound. But his grip on her hand tightened ever so slightly, a silent understanding passing between them.

Jason wasn't alone anymore.

The mist swirled, growing thicker, enveloping them both, pulling them into the quiet embrace of the lake and the forest.

The next morning, the sun rose over Camp Crystal Lake, painting the still water with gold.

The cabins remained in ruin, the path overgrown, but a new, subtle energy hummed beneath the surface of the woods.

A sense of peace had settled over the old camp—Jason and Sarah vanished without a trace—her Jeep the only evidence she’d ever been there.

Now, when the moon would show full and the mist rose from the lake just so, locals would swear they could see in the mist a young boy and a camp counselor playing—their laughter, soft as the rustle of leaves, carried on the breeze, eternally youthful, forever intertwined with the natural, mystical heart of Crystal Lake.

Crystal Lake had embraced them both, drawing Sarah into its timeless, nurturing heart, forever bound to the boy she had come home for.

She had found her closure, not in an ending, but in a profound belonging, and a final, quiet act of love.

Posted Jun 25, 2025
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Mary Bendickson
17:27 Jun 26, 2025

And so it ends...or begins.

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J.R. Geiger
20:19 Jun 26, 2025

I think it's the end.

Jason finds himself again and he's no longer alone.

Sarah is now with him, his former camp counselor, both forever young.

Both in no more pain.

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Mary Bendickson
22:15 Jun 26, 2025

Good ending.

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J.R. Geiger
23:12 Jun 26, 2025

👍

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Wendy Geiger
16:11 Jun 26, 2025

Your descriptions are vivid and makes on feel like they're their in the moment, sharing the scenes, conversations, and the scenery. It has all the right feels. I like the way you write.

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J.R. Geiger
20:20 Jun 26, 2025

Thanks, sis'!!! 😊

It means a lot you read it and "felt" it.

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