Submitted to: Contest #308

Whiskers In The Sunlight

Written in response to: "Start or end your story with somebody stepping out into the sunshine."

Fiction Happy Inspirational

The screen door creaked.

A small shadow paused in the doorway, silhouetted against a morning soaked in golden light. Dust motes danced in the air. A breeze carried the scent of fresh-cut grass and bacon from the neighbor’s window. One paw stepped onto the porch, then another.

Whiskers blinked against the brightness. Then came the firm hand behind him.

"Out you go, you little menace."

The human's voice was full of feigned patience and real exasperation. Whiskers, however, accepted his fate with the regal dignity of a feline exiled not by force, but by choice. As the door closed behind him, he took one stately step forward.

He had not been thrown out.

He had chosen to step into the sunshine.

It had all started with a series of unfortunate, but in Whiskers' view, completely justified incidents: a knocked-over lamp, shredded toilet paper art installation, the midnight crashing of the cookie jar, and—most scandalous of all—the leap into the fruit bowl during a Zoom meeting.

The humans had reached their limit.

“Catio time,” they declared.

The catio—Whiskers’ fenced-in outdoor domain—was meant to be a time-out, a holding pen. But Whiskers treated it as his veranda. From his cushioned perch, he ruled over birds, bugs, and the occasional squirrel who dared lock eyes with him through the mesh.

This morning, after his latest escapade involving an open butter dish and muddy paws, he had been escorted—gently, but firmly—outside.

And so, he settled into the sun, tail curling neatly around his feet, nose tilted upward to the breeze. A king surveying his kingdom.

Outside, the day was alive. A cicada buzzed lazily in the distance. Robins argued in a nearby bush. Whiskers wandered the perimeter of the catio, pausing to swat a beetle, then pounced dramatically on a crinkled leaf.

He eyed the gate. He knew how to open it, theoretically. But he also knew the humans were watching from time to time. So instead, he lay flat against the cool cement slab, eyes narrowed, perfectly still—until a butterfly dared to flutter by.

The chase was on.

He darted after it, zigzagging through the flowerpots. The butterfly eluded him, but he felt no shame. It had been a worthy hunt.

After his burst of athleticism, Whiskers strolled to his favorite shady spot beneath the wicker lounge chair. The sun had moved. The light slanted through the lattice above, forming warm stripes across the stone floor.

He circled once.

Twice.

Settled in a perfect coil. And slept.

Hours passed. Birds came and went. The breeze shifted, carrying the faint smell of barbecue. Whiskers dreamed—not of gods or mice, but of quiet rustling grasses and slow-moving beetles, of warm fur and the gentle rise and fall of his breath.

When he woke, the day was nearly done.

The sun hung low, long shadows stretching across the yard. He stood, stretched front to back, and shook out the dust.

But he wasn’t ready to end the day yet.

He patrolled again. A gecko clung to the outside of the mesh wall, and Whiskers stared at it, tail twitching, eyes unblinking. The gecko returned the gaze before vanishing under the garden hose. A good contest, even without a winner.

A breeze stirred a leaf pile in the far corner. Whiskers crouched low, stalking, ears forward. A crinkle here, a shuffle there—he pounced. The leaves scattered like a startled flock, and Whiskers emerged triumphant with a twig in his mouth.

He strutted across the patio, dropped the twig ceremonially onto the mat by the door, and sat beside it. If the humans didn’t consider this a worthy peace offering, that was their lack of imagination, not his.

Content with his gesture of diplomacy, Whiskers returned to the planter boxes. He climbed into one, kicking dirt around and settling in among the basil and mint. The scent was heady. He purred.

A bee buzzed close to his ear. He watched it without moving. Not everything had to be caught. Some things could simply be observed.

The clouds thickened briefly, cooling the yard. Whiskers watched them drift past. Then came the return of the light—softer now, golden and low. He wandered to the fence and rubbed his face against a corner post. Familiar smells lingered—his scent, reminders of past visits, declarations of ownership.

A dog barked in the distance. Whiskers didn’t flinch.

Dogs barked. That was what they did. It didn’t concern him.

The air now carried a chill. Evening was coming. Whiskers stretched again—slow, precise. He walked the edge of the catio, tracing the route he had taken that morning. Everything had changed, yet nothing had.

He paused near the mesh wall where the ivy grew thick. He pawed at a leaf, then sat and listened. Beyond the wall, the world continued. Cars rolled down streets. Sprinklers clicked to life. A kid laughed somewhere.

Whiskers was not confined.

He was simply placed where he belonged—for now.

He looked up. The last light of the day reached across the catio, a single sunbeam filtering through the branches overhead. It struck the brick floor in a perfect, glowing square.

He walked toward it.

He stepped into the light.

He sank down slowly, deliberately, curling into it like it was a bed made just for him. The warmth soaked into his fur.

It began at the tips of his ears, a subtle heat like the brush of breath against velvet. Then down his back, between his shoulders, where the sun kissed the black stripe of his coat. It spread like honey, slow and thick, melting every bit of tension in his small frame.

The bricks beneath him held the heat like old memories. Radiating upward, they bathed his belly in comfort. He rolled slightly, offering his side to the last of the day’s warmth, and the sun obliged, tender and patient.

His fur seemed to glisten in golden hour, a tapestry of browns and creams, of little scars earned from porch railings and brambles. In this light, even his whiskers caught the glow, twitching like antennae tuned to peace.

The warmth seeped into his joints. Into the soft folds behind his knees. Into the pads of his paws. It was not a lazy heat. It was a promise. The day had been lived fully. And now the light said: rest.

He closed his eyes, but only partway. He listened. To birds settling in trees. To the creak of wood cooling in the dusk. To the tiny crackle of a weed growing between bricks beside him.

The sun was still there.

Still on him.

Still his.

The last touch of sunlight lingered on his spine, a finger trailing slowly toward his tail.

And when it slipped away—just as gently as it had come—Whiskers did not chase it.

He merely sighed.

And stayed.

Posted Jun 24, 2025
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4 likes 2 comments

Randall L
00:40 Jun 29, 2025

Really lyrical. Nice work

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Connie Cook
21:42 Jun 28, 2025

Well done. Loved the descriptions and the thoughts of the cat.

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