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Friendship Fiction Suspense

โ€œDid you find the flashlights?โ€ I asked, rummaging through some old cabinets, filled with dust bunnies that provoked my sensitive nose to sneeze.

โ€œNada, canโ€™t find a single one.โ€

โ€œDang it,โ€ I cursed under my breath, โ€œWeโ€™re totally gonna be in the dark, literally.โ€

โ€œI hate to say this but, โ€˜I told you soโ€™.โ€

I rolled my eyes, spreading my hands wide to help me navigate my surroundings. The frost biting my neck, my fingers numb that they began to feel useless. My mouth chattering, my breath turned to fog as it exited outside my mouth.

My short, ivory hair fell over my shoulders, draping my neck. The rubber band must have fallen off.

The sun rays were out of sight. The dim light began to fade as time ticked off, my breathing less accurate, my heart palpitating with fear mixed with the unknown factor.

The strands of my eyelashes began to freeze, turning into icicles. One more hour spent here and weโ€™ll be ice sculptures.ย 

Frozen to death. I could see the headlines of the next broadcasting news, hitting millions of views.ย 

Not what I expected on a typical Friday evening.

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โ€œCome on Coco, donโ€™t be so intransigentโ€ฆ a no-work day can help you,โ€ Akshaya lectured.

โ€œI know, I know,โ€ I held my hand up, facing her in a timorous way. Akshaya was known to throw fits, and always won them too.

โ€œDonโ€™t you dare drag me to the mall,โ€ I spoke, seeing Akshayaโ€™s black eyes twinkled with excitement.

โ€œAww, donโ€™t be so darn tenacious,โ€ She coaxed, batting away at my hands playfully.

โ€œI have to do my job, you know much money means to me.โ€

She placed a reassuring hand on my shoulder, tousling her long, dark hair with her fingers.

โ€œDonโ€™t fret sweetie,โ€ She faxed a smile.

โ€œIf you let me go, I promise to go shopping tomorrow and actually...,โ€ I pronounced the word with a strain, โ€œTry out new dresses.โ€

Akshaya squeaked, I was grateful to recall closing my ears before her outburst.

โ€œDone?โ€ย 

โ€œYeah,โ€ She gave me a sheepish smile, โ€œIโ€™ll go with you,โ€ She gave me a โ€˜I know your a escapistโ€™ look.

Great. No way to escape 5 hours of boredom.


โ€œHey Co, take my shift will ya?โ€ Kasey; one of my co-workers beseeched, โ€œIโ€™m take the long weekend soon.โ€

โ€œUmโ€ฆ fine,โ€ Akshaya gave me a murderous look but I ignored her.

โ€œThanks sweets, I owe you one,โ€ Kasey skipped out the door, putting on a thick woolen coat as she strolled over to a brand new Chevy and got in.

I felt the eyes of my annoying girlfriend on my back as I filled in orders, and managed to please Mr. Fellen; one of the famous designers here.

I was exhausted by the end of the day while Akshaya rolled her eyes at me every time the chime of the door went off, inviting a new customer.

โ€œI think Iโ€™m almost done,โ€ I answered when Akshaya had begun to get on my nerves.

She scoffed, drinking the latte I provided free of cost to shut her up.

2 hours later,

โ€œYou done?โ€

โ€œYup, Iโ€™ll just lock up.โ€

I walked towards the glass door, trying to budge it open to only discover it to be frozen shut. Akshaya was busy on her phone, tapping her hands in sync to some music she always listened to, not paying attention to our current dilemma.

I tried to shove the door with all my might, but my hands slipped away due to the moisture from the freezing weather.

Rubbing my hands together, blowing some hot air I tried again, my hands felt numb and weak.

I could hear the swoosh of the wind outside the glass window, snow heavily falling on the sidewalks, coating them white.

We were doomed.

A blizzard is coming.

Before I could react to the part where we were definitely stuck inside the overhanging fluorescent lights went off, darkness seeping through everywhere.

โ€œAhh,โ€ I could see the dim light of Akshayaโ€™s phone vibrate as she bumped into me.ย 

She flashed the light on my face, blinding me for a moment.

โ€œHey, cut it outโ€ฆ itโ€™s me.โ€

โ€œOops, sorry.โ€

โ€œItโ€™s fine.โ€

โ€œNo itโ€™s not, weโ€™re trapped inside and Iโ€™m freezing,โ€ She complained,โ€Wait, my phone?! I must have accidentally dropped it.โ€

I could barely make out her panicked expression.

โ€œWeโ€™ll be fine,โ€ I half-lied.ย 

โ€œYeah right,โ€ She added sarcastically, โ€œAre there flashlights here?โ€

โ€œMaybe, I hope.โ€

We got up feebly, holding on each other for support. Navigating with our hands, careful not to bump into anything.

10 minutes later,

โ€œDid you find the flashlights?โ€ย 

โ€œNada, canโ€™t find a single one.โ€

I cursed, careful not to let Akshaya hear how pissed off I was.

โ€œI hate to say this but, โ€˜I told you soโ€™.โ€

โ€œOk, ok youโ€™re right.โ€

I could hear her choke a laugh.

โ€œHey, come here.โ€

I walked towards her voice, almost tripping over the carpet. Some blue light flooded from Mr. Fenโ€™s office, a place he never let me go in. Or as I remembered anyone else who worked here either.

โ€œCome on, maybe there is a phone or something,โ€ Akshaya coaxed.

I nodded, then remembering Akshaya canโ€™t see me.

โ€œFine, but make it quick, Iโ€™m normally not allowed inside.โ€

We hustled inside, the room was a bit warmer than the rest of the building. I could smell the dust and expired coffee beans.

We shuffled through the messy desk, careful not to disturb anything that could backfire on us.

โ€œWhat are these?โ€ I felt something sharp on my arm, like a folder edge.

โ€œWhat are you doing?โ€ I could see her silhouette shrug, handing me a bunch of folders.

โ€œWhat-โ€ I read the title; Blueberry and basil cupcakes- THE SWEETEST HEAVEN BAKERY- BY. PATRICIA ROY.

โ€œWhoโ€™s Patricia?โ€ I asked.

โ€œDonโ€™t know, why is her recipe here?โ€

โ€œHmm,โ€ I flipped through the rest of the files, each paper was soiled or ripped as if they were ancient recipes.

โ€œAll these recipes are what we serve here, thenโ€ฆ?โ€

โ€œI found a phone!โ€ Akshaya exclaimed, tapping away, โ€œLook,โ€ She shoved the phone on my face.

โ€œThe sweetest heaven bakery was out of business because they forgot the recipe, someone stole it?โ€

My face paled, โ€œYou donโ€™t thinkโ€ฆโ€

โ€œYour boss stole all these recipes, none of them was his own, Akshaya finished.

โ€œWeโ€™d better tell someone.โ€

The sooner I uttered the words, the lights flooded back on. I rubbed my eyes from the sudden exposure of brightness.

โ€œHey, hereโ€™s a crowbar, wow your boss is very prepared.โ€

โ€œSure isโ€ฆโ€ I smiled, โ€œHeโ€™d better be ready to get in big trouble.โ€

โ€œYou sure? Youโ€™ll lose your job.โ€

โ€œYeah, itโ€™s better to not serve a dishonest man than be job-less.โ€

โ€œYou're a good friend Coco,โ€ Akshaya said, hugging me.

โ€œSo are youโ€ฆโ€ I added, โ€œIf you wonโ€™t drag me to Macy's.โ€

โ€œNot a chance,โ€ She said, linking hands.

โ€œWeโ€™d better stop by the police station.โ€

โ€œOh, we will,โ€ She grinned.


Hi everyone! Hope you all enjoyed this story. This was one of the shortest stories I've written and I kept changing ideas and finally landed on this idea. If you didn't understand or it could have been better please let me know.

Dedications!!!

Akshaya Sutrave for always being there for me and one of my firest and best friends!!! THX SO MUCH AKSHAYA :D

&

Coco Longstaff for being a sweet, talkative girl always full of sunshine!!! THX COCO!

HOPE EVERYONE HAS A WONDERFUL DAY/NIGHT!












January 19, 2021 18:17

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Kate Reynolds
20:53 Jan 19, 2021

GREAT STORY YET AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it!!!!!!!!! Just a few suggestions though: It was a bit fast-paced, so maybe slow it down a bit? (Though that may be hard bc of the 3000 word limit) But overall it was wonderfulllllllllllllll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Aww, thank you Kate!!!!!!!!!! Yeah, I know it's a bit rushed. But glad u still liked it:DD

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Kate Reynolds
21:45 Jan 19, 2021

IT WAS WONDERFUL.

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