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The cinders whisper secrets. They tell of long nights, cruel taunts, and dreams that dare not take flight. My place in this twisted tale is constantly reminded by them clinging to my skin. They call me Cinderella. I call myself Ella.

You think you know my story. The poor, downtrodden girl, abused by her stepmother and stepsisters, rescued by a fairy godmother and a glass slipper. A simple tale of rags to riches, of good triumphing over evil.

But fairy tales, like firelight, cast long, deceptive shadows. My mother, bless her soul, was indeed a kind woman. But she was also fragile, a delicate bloom wilting under the harsh sun of grief after my father’s death.

Lady Agatha, my stepmother, arrived like a storm, all sharp angles and icy smiles. She wasn’t overtly wicked but cunning in ways that left little room for resistance.

She declared the household’s accounts in disarray, selling my cherished possessions under the guise of “safeguarding our future.” My attic exile was framed as a necessary sacrifice to make room for her daughters’ futures. Her manipulations were quiet but insidious. Once, I overheard her at tea with one of the local matrons. “Ella’s taken such a liking to the attic. It’s her little haven,” she said with a smile that didn’t reach her eyes.

The matron nodded sympathetically. “What a humble girl,” she replied, unaware of how I scrubbed the floors while Agatha spoke of me as though I were choosing to be invisible.

My stepsisters, Drizella and Anastasia, mirrored their mother. They weren’t cruel by nature but by nurture, their barbs and laughter little more than echoes of Agatha’s calculated disapproval. In their eyes, I was a rival—unfairly beautiful and a reminder of a past they were determined to erase.

Drizella once snapped, “Why do you always look so calm? You’re just a servant.” The truth was, I had no choice. My quiet defiance was my armor. In the solitude of the attic, I found unexpected strength. The cinders became my companions, the ashes a mark of resilience rather than shame.

I read by moonlight, befriended the mice, and spun dreams from scraps, all while tending to an endless list of chores. The attic window became my portal to another life, where I could imagine walking free under the stars.

When the invitation to the Prince’s ball arrived, Lady Agatha’s ambitions flared. She called for extra fittings and demanded new gowns for Drizella and Anastasia. “You wouldn’t want to embarrass us by showing up,” she said with a syrupy smile when I asked to attend. Her tone left no room for argument. But I dared to hope anyway.

Stitching together a gown from my mother’s remnants, I claimed a sliver of happiness. I spent days on it, hemming and beading under the pale light of my attic sanctuary. When my stepsisters tore it apart, their glee was a sharp knife in my heart. Drizella yanked the fabric, Anastasia ripped the sleeves, and they laughed as if my tears were part of the entertainment. Agatha’s quiet satisfaction hurt even more. “Let this be a lesson,” she said, not unkindly. “Know your place, Ella.”

The garden became my refuge that night. I sank to my knees among the roses, their sweet scent mixing with the salt of my tears. And then, magic found me. My fairy godmother, a shimmering presence in the garden, offered me a fleeting glimpse of another life. “My dear,” she said, her voice like a gentle breeze, “you deserve a night of freedom.” The ball was a dream.

The gown she conjured shimmered like the moon on water, and the glass slippers sparkled with each step. But it wasn’t just the dress or the Prince that made the night special. It was the freedom—the chance to dance without fear, to speak without being silenced.

The Prince’s charm was undeniable, but it was his curiosity that drew me in. “You’re not like anyone here,” he said, as we danced. “What’s your story?” For the first time, someone asked—and listened.

But the spell shattered at midnight, and I fled. Back in the attic, the glass slipper felt like a relic of another world, fragile proof that for one night, I had been seen.

When the Prince sought me out, the glass slipper fit, as the tale goes. But our story didn’t end there. Life at the palace was both glittering and suffocating. I learned to navigate the whispers of courtiers who reduced me to a rags-to-riches novelty. “She’s quite the symbol,” they would say, as though I were an idea rather than a person.

The Prince, for all his kindness, struggled with his own burdens. One night, as the palace fell silent, I found him in the royal gardens, sitting under a sprawling oak. His head was bowed, the weight of the crown palpable even without it resting on his head. “Sometimes I wonder,” he said, “if they see me or just the crown.” He looked at me then, his gaze heavy with longing. “And now, you—are you here because of the slipper? Because I couldn’t let you go?” His vulnerability mirrored my own. I reached for his hand. “Maybe it’s both,” I said. “Maybe it’s enough that we try to see each other.” But trying wasn’t always enough. I loved him for his heart, for his efforts, but the palace wasn’t my home.

I found my voice beyond its walls, building schools and libraries, empowering those who had been silenced. The Prince supported my work, even when it meant my absence. He knew, as I did, that freedom was my greatest treasure.

Years later, in a quiet moment, he found me reading to children in one of the libraries we had established. He watched, leaning against the doorframe, a soft smile on his face. “You’ve built something incredible,” he said. “So have you,” I replied, gesturing to the children. “This was your dream too.” He nodded, sitting beside me on the wooden floor. “Maybe the slipper wasn’t about destiny,” he mused. “Maybe it was a chance—for both of us.” I smiled, tracing the memory of cinders on my palms. “And we made the most of it.”

My story, the real story, is not about a prince or a glass slipper. It’s about finding your voice, embracing your strength, and rising from the ashes of adversity. Perhaps one day, storytellers will tire of tidy endings and explore the truths hidden in the shadows. Until then, I’ll continue to tell mine—a tale of resilience, love, and a girl named Ella who turned cinders into stars.

November 17, 2024 11:01

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Nicholas Amato
13:47 Nov 22, 2024

Great take on a classic story... and very well written! Great job!

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