"The Gathering Clouds"

Written in response to: Set your story during — or just before — a storm.... view prompt

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Adventure Bedtime Black

Sure! Here’s a story set just before a storm:

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The Gathering Clouds

The winds were restless that evening. Beneath the grey, overcast sky, the air felt thick and heavy, like it was holding its breath. In the distance, the faint rumble of thunder could be heard, a sound that had grown steadily louder over the past few hours. Yet, in the small town of Glenhaven, life went on as usual—shops remained open, children played in the streets, and the usual hustle of evening chores continued uninterrupted.

But not for long.

At the edge of the town, on a secluded farm, Anna stood at the window of her cottage, watching the sky with growing unease. Her grandmother, who had lived through decades of storms, always said that the air before a storm felt like the calm before the plunge. It was a feeling Anna had never quite understood until now.

The sky above her farm had darkened swiftly in the past hour, and the wind had picked up, whistling through the trees, bending the branches in odd, unnatural directions. It wasn’t the usual spring gusts that came and went. This wind carried something ominous. Something she could feel deep in her chest.

She pulled her shawl tighter around her shoulders and stepped outside, feeling the cold bite of the wind as it rushed past her. The trees, once peaceful in their stillness, now swayed wildly, their limbs creaking and groaning. The sky, once a light grey, had turned a bruising shade of purple, and the first droplets of rain began to splatter against the ground.

“Anna!” a voice called from the barn.

Anna turned to see her younger brother, Caleb, running toward her. He was holding a leather bag, his face taut with worry.

“Is it coming?” she asked, already knowing the answer.

“It's already here,” he replied, glancing nervously at the horizon where the dark clouds seemed to close in like a hungry animal stalking its prey. “We need to get everything inside. The storm is going to hit hard.”

Anna nodded, her heart racing. She could see the clouds gathering above the barn now, swirling together like a mass of writhing snakes. The wind picked up again, sending a sharp chill through her bones. There was no time to waste.

Together, they hurried to the barn, where they began securing tools, gathering the animals, and making sure the doors were shut tight. Caleb worked quickly, his hands trembling as he tried to fasten the latches on the barn doors.

“I hate this,” he muttered, almost to himself. “Every year, it feels like it gets worse.”

Anna didn’t say anything. She didn’t have to. The fear in his voice mirrored her own. The storms that came every spring had always been unpredictable, but this one felt different. It felt like something more than just a storm. It felt like a warning.

“Everything’s ready,” she said, stepping back from the barn door. “Let’s go inside.”

The two of them hurried back to the cottage, the rain now pouring down in sheets. The world around them felt eerily quiet, as if the earth itself was holding its breath in anticipation.

Inside, the warmth of the fire crackled in the hearth, a small comfort in the growing chaos outside. Anna helped Caleb with the shutters, securing the windows as the storm’s intensity increased.

“I’ll keep the fire going,” Anna said, her voice steady despite the storm’s fury. “You check the roof. We don’t want any leaks.”

Caleb nodded, though his face was pale. “I’ll be quick,” he said, grabbing a lantern and heading upstairs to the attic.

Anna stood by the fire, her thoughts drifting to the past. She remembered the storms of her childhood, the ones that came and went without much fuss. But over the years, they had grown stronger, fiercer. Something had changed, and she couldn’t shake the feeling that it wasn’t just the weather that was growing more violent.

The wind howled outside, rattling the windows, as if demanding to be heard. Anna tried to ignore the rising sense of dread creeping through her chest. She had no proof, only a deep, unsettling intuition. But something was coming—something beyond the storm.

A loud crash echoed from the roof, followed by the sound of footsteps running down the stairs.

“Anna!” Caleb’s voice was frantic. “The roof! It’s cracking. We need to leave.”

Anna’s heart skipped a beat. She quickly grabbed her coat, her hands trembling, and joined Caleb in the entryway.

“Where will we go?” she asked, but even as the words left her mouth, she knew there was no safe place to run. The storm was too powerful, and it was too late to escape.

“The cellar,” Caleb said urgently. “It’s our only chance.”

Without another word, they raced down the narrow staircase to the cellar beneath the cottage. The wooden door creaked and groaned as it opened, but the sound of the storm drowned out everything else. They descended into the darkness, the air thick with the smell of earth and dampness.

The door shut behind them with a thud, and they huddled together in the dim light of the lantern. The storm roared above them, the wind howling like a wild animal and the rain battering against the earth as if trying to tear it apart. In the distance, they could hear the sharp crack of thunder, followed by a flash of lightning that lit up the cellar in eerie, fleeting brilliance.

“We’re safe here,” Caleb said, though his voice trembled.

Anna didn’t answer. She could feel the weight of the storm pressing down on them, and she couldn’t shake the feeling that it was more than just nature at play. Something was shifting. Something ancient and powerful was stirring in the depths of the earth, and this storm was its herald.

The minutes stretched into hours as the storm raged outside. The winds howled, the walls of the cottage creaked and groaned, and the world beyond seemed to disappear into the fury of nature. All they could do was wait.

And when the storm finally began to subside, Anna knew that what had come before was nothing compared to what was to come next.

The storm was just the beginning.

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February 01, 2025 06:49

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