ME GUSTAN NIÑAS
ACT 1
SCENE 1
Ms. Cassandra Smith, a 5th grade English teacher, sits at her desk in the back corner of her classroom. Her classroom is decorated in muted, calming variations of pink and beige. The room is covered in posters of quotes from famous writers, thinkers, and leaders throughout history. Behind Ms. Smith’s desk is a large Pride flag- a source of immense pride for the queer young woman. A young girl enters from stage left.
GIRL
Disculpe, maestra, can I talk to you?
Ms. Smith looks at the girl and smiles, gesturing her over to the desk.
MS. SMITH
What can I help you with, Liseth?
Liseth sat in a chair opposite of her teacher. She looked down at her shoes and spoke in a faint whisper.
LISETH
Creo que me gustan las niñas.
Ms. Smith leaned in closer. She placed a hand on the girl’s shoulder.
MS. SMITH
Speak up, dear. I can’t hear you. Don’t be nervous.
Liseth nodded, trembling. She looked at the door, then back to her teacher. Understanding the implied request, Ms. Smith got up and shut the door to her classroom. She sat back down and stared at Liseth, a frown etched on her face.
LISETH
I think that I like girls, Ms. Smith, and I’m really scared. I don’t know what to do!
The little girl’s body shook with silent sobs. She glanced at her teacher’s rainbow bracelet with a mix of fear and wistfulness.
MS. SMITH
There’s nothing wrong with that, friend. We all like different things, and people.
Ms. Smith wiped a tear from Liseth’s cheek.
MS.SMITH (cont’d)
I know this is difficult for you to discuss, so thank you for sharing with me. I understand your fear. But there is nothing wrong with taking the time to learn about yourself and your preferences.
Liseth shook her head. Her eyes flashed fire as she fisted her tiny hands.
LISETH
Dios me odia? Mis padres me odia.
MS. SMITH
To answer your first question, no. He is proud of your bravery and honesty. In regard to the second- I highly doubt that’s true.
LISETH
But when I told my mom, she cried. And my dad locked me in my room for two days.
Ms. Smith’s face tightened. The tension in the room was palpable.
MS. SMITH
Parents want what’s best for us, amiga, but they are only human. They see and interact with the world based on their knowledge and experience. And sometimes people fear what they cannot understand.
LISETH
My pastor made us leave the church. I just wish I could be normal and like boys!
Ms. Smith nodded.
MS. SMITH
I understand. Believe it or not- I wasn’t always this open about liking girls either.
Liseth gawked at her teacher with wide eyes.
MS. SMITH (cont’d)
My parents were a lot like yours. They were scared. I bet they still are. But at the end of the day, dear, your own happiness is more important than what anyone else thinks. Including your parents.
LISETH
Did your parents accept you for who you are?
Ms. Smith cringed.
MS. SMITH
Not really. Not in the way I wanted them to.
LISETH
Que debo hacer, Ms. Smith?
MS. SMITH
Surround yourself with friends and other family members who love and support whoever you are. And come to me with any questions you have. I am always here for you, chica.
LISETH
But what about my parents? Do they not love me anymore?
MS. SMITH
I think they do. Give them time. Show them the wonderful girl you are and all the things you will accomplish that has nothing to do with who you like or don’t like. If they love you, they’ll come around.
LISETH
But what if they don’t?
MS.SMITH
That’s a tough one. I wish I had all the answers. I will help in any way I can, Liseth. You aren’t alone.
Liseth stands and wipes the cascade of sobs from her eyes. She smiles and exits the classroom with a wave.
END OF SCENE 1
SCENE 2
Ms. Smith sits at her dining room table. The kitchen and dining room connect to a sparsely furnished living room with a simple couch, work desk, TV stand, and bookcase. The color scheme is consistent with her classroom in almost every way- including another flag hung proudly in the living room. Ms. Smith hears her phone rings and answers quickly.
MS. SMITH
Hello? This is Cassandra speaking.
She hears the familiar cough of her principal, Mr. Williams, on the other end.
MR. WILLIAMS
Good evening, Ms. Smith. This is Mr. Williams. Do you have a moment to talk?
MS. SMITH
Of course, sir. What seems to be the problem?
MR. WILLIAMS
Liseth Gonzales’ parents called the school in a frightful frenzy. They said their daughter spoke to you about a sensitive topic and that you encouraged her to disobey them and foster her unique desires.
Mr. Williams cleared his throat as Ms. Smith scoffed.
MS. SMITH
I did have a conversation with Liseth, yes. She came to me in confidence and I will not discuss it with you. However, I will defend myself by saying that I did not tell her to disobey her parents. I merely told a scared, confused little girl to put her own wellbeing first.
MR. WILLIAMS
She is just a child, Ms. Smith. You cannot radicalize this girl with your wild ideas. It is disgusting and disgraceful.
Ms. Smith sighed and pinched the bridge of her nose.
MS. SMITH
I will not lead a student down a path that will end in suffering or God-knows what else. It IS my duty to protect the children in my care.
MR. WILLIAMS
She doesn’t need protection. She needs discipline. Call her parents and apologize by the end of the day tomorrow- or clean out your desk.
Mr. Williams hangs up. Ms. Smith throws the phone into the living room and stifles a sob.
END OF SCENE 2
SCENE 3
Liseth, her mother, and father sit around a small wooden table in a cramped studio apartment. Piles of laundry and dirty dishes are scattered throughout the small area. An infant cries from a crib and the mother hurries to soothe it.
LISETH’S FATHER
De donde sacas todas esas ideas locas, Liseth? No ves lo estresados y cansados que estamos?
Where do you get all these crazy ideas, Liseth? Don’t you see how stressed and tired we are?
Liseth looks at her mother as tears fill her eyes.
LISETH
Solo quiero ser feliz, papa! Por favor escuchame!
I only want to be happy, Papa! Please listen to me!
The baby’s crying intensifies.
LISETH’S FATHER
Trabajo en tres empleos para poder poner comida en esta mesa. Y ese es el agradecimiento que recibo?
I work three jobs to put food on this table and this is the thanks I get?
Liseth’s mother puts a hand on her husband’s shoulder.
LISETH’S MOTHER
Escucha a tu padre, Liseth. Viajamos y luchamos hasta llegar a America para ofrecerte un futuro mejor, hija.
Listen to your father, Liseth. We traveled and fought our way to America for a better future for you, daughter.
LISETH’S FATHER
Tu deber es tener éxito en la escuela y tener éxito en la vida, no besar chicas.
Your duty is to do well in school and succeed in life, not kiss girls.
LISETH
Lo entiendo, papa. Pero la Sra. Smith dijo…
I understand, papa. But Ms. Smith said…
Liseth’s father slammed his fist onto the table.
LISETH’S FATHER
La dama blanca no entiende. No entiende nuestras costumbres. Tu profesora te está llenando la cabeza de mentiras!
The white lady does not understand. She does not understand our ways. Your teacher is filling your head with lies!
Liseth’s mother clears her throat.
LISETH’S MOTHER
Tu padre no te lo volverá a recordar.Ya hablamos con tu directora para que no te dejes convencer por las fantasias de la Sra. Smith. Vete a la cama.
Your father will not remind you again. We have already spoken with your principal so that you can no longer be persuaded by Ms. Smith’s fantasies. Go to bed.
Liseth groans and stomps off stage. Her parents stare after her with a mix of disdain and helplessness.
You must sign up or log in to submit a comment.
An interesting story Caitlyn. Definitely a hot button topic with a sensitive viewpoint from a 10 year-old. A couple things that I stumbled with. The setting: it's a play. While there is stage direction for the actors, stating the temperature of the audience can't be used (The tension in the room was palpable). As there are no other characters mentioned the description is left as a description of the audience. Also, who is Liseth waving at? Not sure the reason for that direction. The use of Spanish is nice but when there are translations how would this be conveyed to the audience. Perhaps it would be better to start with a straightforward short story.
As to the dialogue, it feels a bit forced. While it states the viewpoints of each character, it is too formal and likely not as realistic as people would talk in such a sensitive topic.
And finally, while there isn't any actual resolution, there need not be. But it does need some indicator of outcome as you leave the child with no way forward. She has parents that apparently don't accept her and a teacher that tells her to stand true to herself with no real guidance.
I assume there is more to the story but Reedsy's word limit does not allow for you to submit all that you need (I've been there!). But you can still finish the story and post it outside of the contest.
Good luck and keep writing!
Reply
Thank you for your feedback! As a teacher, I wanted the "guidance" that the teacher gives to Liseth be a teachable moment- more about discovering herself than being told what to do. As for the translations, my audience is primarily for those who would not need it.
Reply