Submitted to: Contest #314

Blue Redemption

Written in response to: "Begin your story with “It was the hottest day of the year...”"

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CW: Mentions of violence and substance abuse

It was the hottest day of the year, the kind of heat that turned the city of Las Vegas into a shimmering mirage, where the asphalt bubbled and the air itself seemed thick enough to impede forward motion. Detective Marcus Kane trudged through the neon haze of Fremont Street, his shirt clinging to his back like a second skin, his badge heavy on his sweat-damp trousers. The sun was a merciless overlord, bleaching the color from the world, leaving only the stark outlines of pawn shops, casinos, and the tired faces of those who called the streets home.

Marcus’s head throbbed, not just from the heat but from the bottle of bourbon he’d emptied the night before. At forty-two, he was a man running on fumes, his marriage long over, she got all their friends in the divorce. All he had left in the world were the dead. They all had stories to tell but getting them to talk was a challenge he wasn’t feeling up to anymore.

The call came in just after noon. A body in an alley off Fourth Street, between a laundromat and a greasy-spoon café. Female, young, dead. Marcus arrived to find the alley cordoned off, yellow tape fluttering in the faint, furnace-like breeze. The air stank of rotting trash and motor oil, the dumpster nearby overflowing with coffee cups and stained linens. Uniformed officers milled about, their faces slick with sweat, while a small crowd of onlookers—mostly street people and pros—gathered at the tape’s edge, drawn by the grim spectacle.

The victim lay sprawled on the cracked pavement, her body half-hidden in the shadow of the laundromat’s brick wall. She was young, maybe twenty, her skin pale and bruised, her blonde hair matted with blood. Her clothes—a dirty tank top and ripped shorts—were stained with grime and worse. Needle marks dotted her arms like a constellation of bad choices. Marcus recognized the signs: a street kid, a drug addict, likely a prostitute. The kind of case the city chewed up and spat out, forgotten by everyone except the coroner. But something about her face—gaunt, yet pretty, innocent—caught in his chest, a flicker of something he couldn’t name.

Then he heard the growl. Low, guttural, it came from a blue heeler mix crouched beside the body, its brindle coat matted with dust and blood. The dog’s eyes were sharp, unyielding, its teeth bared at the officers trying to approach. One cop, a rookie named Delgado, reached for his baton, but Marcus raised a hand. “Back off,” he said, his voice rough as gravel. The dog’s gaze locked onto him, and for a moment, the alley seemed to hold its breath. Marcus knelt, ignoring the heat searing through his slacks, and extended a hand. “Easy, buddy,” he murmured. The dog’s ears twitched, and, to everyone’s surprise, it stopped growling, stepping closer to sniff his fingers before sitting at his side, vigilant but calm.

“Damn, Kane,” Delgado muttered. “He likes you, maybe your wife was wrong about you being an unlovable asshole?”

Marcus ignored him, too hung over to get in an altercation and straining to keep his focus on the girl. Her name, he’d learn later, was Sarah Jane, a runaway who’d been working the streets for years. The coroner’s initial assessment pointed to strangulation—bruises circled her throat like a cruel necklace—the scene was messy, with signs of a struggle. A broken bottle lay nearby, its jagged edges glinting in the sun, and scuff marks in the dust suggested she’d fought hard. Marcus’s gut told him this wasn’t a random John gone too far. Something about the depth and severity of the bruises, the way her body was posed, felt deliberate, angry and somewhat ritualistic.

The dog stayed close as Marcus worked the scene, its presence a strange comfort. It wore no collar, its ribs visible beneath its patchy fur, but it moved with a quiet loyalty, as if it had claimed Sarah as its own. When the coroner’s van arrived to take the body, the dog whined, a low, mournful sound that cut through Marcus. He scratched its ears, surprised by the warmth of its fur against his calloused fingers. “Animal control is on the way.” Marcus looked at Delgado “They finally coming to take you away? It’s about time.”

“You’re coming with me, the only witness I’ve got,” he said, looking at the dog.

As he led the dog through the crowd of on-lookers to his Crown Victoria, a 40-something street walker stepped in front of him holding up her hand, “What happened to Sara? Where are you taking Bluebell?”

“Bluebell,” he asked.

“That’s the dogs name,” she said, “Sarah named him after her favorite ice cream.”

“Sarah is gone, he’s my only witness for now so I’m taking him into custody.”

“Oh God,” she said, “I told her to get off these streets!” She was crying now.

Marcus pushed past her turning and shoving a business card in her hand, “call me if you hear anything.”

When they were in the car Marcus looked at the pup, standing uneasy on the hot vinyl seat of his police vehicle. “It’ll be better once the AC cools it down in here. I’m gonna call you Blue if that’s ok. Bluebell doesn’t sound like a boys name.”

The investigation was slow, hampered by the heat and the city’s indifference. Sarah Jane was a nobody in the eyes of most—a junkie, a whore, her life was worthless. Marcus, though, couldn’t let it go. Maybe it was the way her eyes, even in death, seemed to ask for something—justice, or at least someone to care. He dug into her past, piecing together a life of foster homes, addiction, and survival. She’d been a regular at the café, where the owner, a gruff woman named Rita, remembered her feeding dumpster scraps to a dog. Blue, Marcus realized, his hand resting on the dog’s head as he sat in his cramped apartment, the air conditioner rattling uselessly.

Nights were the hardest. Marcus’s depression was a black hole that had grown darker since his divorce, a weight that pushed him deeper with each case, each reminder of the city’s underbelly. He’d sit in his armchair, bourbon in hand, staring at the wall where photos of happier times—his wedding, his old patrol partner’s retirement party—gathered dust. The thoughts came unbidden: What’s the point? Another body, another file, another day closer to nothing. But Blue would be alone again if he let the darkness suck him in. The dog would curl up at his feet, its steady breathing a quiet anchor, pulling him back from the edge. He started feeding Blue proper meals, brushing his coat, talking to him about the case. Blue listened, his head tilting, as if he understood.

Weeks passed, and the case grew colder. Marcus chased leads—pimps, dealers, johns—but they all dead-ended. He visited the alley daily, Blue at his side, hoping for a breakthrough. The heat never relented, the city locked in a summer that felt like a punishment.

One evening, as the sun bled orange across the sky, Marcus noticed something in the alley: a faint carving in the brick, barely visible under layers of grime. A symbol, like a crescent moon with a slash through it. He’d seen it before, scratched into the cement under a bridge where they’d found a previous homicide victim six months earlier. His pulse quickened. This wasn’t random. Someone was marking their work.

He dug deeper, pulling records of similar murders across the state. Three other women, all prostitutes, all strangled, all found with the same symbol carved nearby. A serial killer, operating under the radar, targeting the invisible. Marcus’s obsession grew, his days blurring into nights spent poring over files, Blue dozing beside him. The dog became his shadow, following him to precincts, diners, even the alley. Colleagues raised eyebrows, but Marcus didn’t care. Blue was more than a pet; it was a lifeline, a reason to get up each morning.

The break came on a night as stifling as the first. A tip from a street informant pointed Marcus to a warehouse in North Las Vegas, a hub for low-level dealers. He went alone, against protocol, Blue in the passenger seat of his unmarked car.

The warehouse was a hulking skeleton of rust and concrete, its windows blacked out. Inside, the air was thick with the stench of chemicals and decay. Marcus moved silently, Blue at his heels, the dog’s ears pricked for danger. In a back room, he found it: a shrine of sorts, photos of women pinned to the wall, each marked with the crescent symbol. Sarah’s face stared back at him, her eyes haunting.

Footsteps echoed behind him. Marcus spun, gun drawn, but a blow to the head sent him sprawling. The killer was fast, a wiry man with cold eyes and a knife that glinted in the dim light. Marcus’s vision swam, his gun skittering across the floor. The man lunged, but Blue was faster, a blur of fur and teeth. The dog clamped onto the killer’s arm, snarling, giving Marcus time to scramble to his feet. He tackled the man, pinning him while he fished the radio out of his pocket and called for backup.

The killer confessed, a drifter with a twisted vendetta against “lost women.” Sarah’s death, like the others, was his attempt to “cleanse” the city. Marcus didn’t care about the why; he cared that it was over.

Back at his apartment, he sat with Blue, the dog’s head in his lap. The darkness still there, but lighter now. Blue had saved him—not just from the knife, but from the void that had threatened to swallow him whole. He scratched the dog’s ears, a small smile breaking through. “We’re a team now, huh?” Blue’s tail thumped in agreement.

The hottest day of the year had set it all in motion, a case that burned away Marcus’s despair and gave him something to hold onto. Blue stayed by his side, through every case after, a loyal friend who reminded him that even in the darkest alleys, there was something worth fighting for.

Posted Aug 06, 2025
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Phi Schmo
01:04 Aug 13, 2025

I can't believe no one has commented on this work yet, Aaron. This is the format I've been looking for and am having a hard time finding among the contestant's work in this competition. A story with a beginning, a middle, and an end - where the protagonist changes somehow in the end. Yeah, its not a flowery piece with a lot of descriptive adverbs and adjectives, but its lean and its mean, man! I loved it. A story that starts with a man whose lost something always grabs me and holds me. I've lost everything. We are limited by the 1,000 to 3,000 word limit and therefore can't put a lot of color into our stories(I had to cut out 1,545 words of my original text so that I could stay in the competition), but if we hold to the mechanics of basic, good storytelling - they hold together well as yours did. Very well done, Aaron, I thoroughly enjoyed it.

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Aaron Kennedy
01:30 Aug 13, 2025

Thank you. These two I wrote for this contest were my first two short stories ever. I tried to google and read what makes a short story which wasn’t super helpful so I just decided to make a story with as little filler material as possible. Thank you for your feedback. Makes me feel like I didn’t completely fail the assignment.

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Phi Schmo
02:07 Aug 13, 2025

I just gave you the most important elements and you have a firm grasp of them here. It is astounding to me that these are your first attempts. You have a bright future. Stick with that basic fame work and all your stories will hold together. You can add the fluff and color later, but get the story skeleton done first. Catch a vision of what you want to achieve in the telling then let the characters lead you into their adventure, trust what they are telling you. They are your 'voice', let them have their way and trust in your creative facility to take you there. Keep writing my friend you have a wonderful talent, well done!

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Aaron Kennedy
02:32 Aug 13, 2025

Thank you Sir!

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