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Drama Fiction Holiday

The snow fell gently outside, creating a serene world that stood in stark contrast to the tension inside the Anderson household. The aroma of roasting turkey and simmering gravy mingled with the thick, palpable atmosphere of familial discord.

I sat at the head of the table, tapping my fingers against the polished surface as I surveyed my family. Each face bore the weight of years of unspoken resentments and simmering conflicts. This year, my goal was to keep a low profile and handle family conflicts like a seasoned diplomat.

The dining room was a strange combination of opulence and discomfort. From above, the chandelier cast a gentle, golden glow that brought out the stunning shine of the polished silverware, elegant china, and dazzling crystal glasses.

“Pass the gravy, would you?” My sister Emily shot me a withering glance from across the table. Her eyes, once bright with youthful innocence, now held a weariness that spoke of years of bickering and familial strife.

Carefully, I passed the dish of gravy to Emily, avoiding any eye contact. I could feel the weight of my mother’s scrutinizing gaze, always quick to catch any sign of dissent.

“Lucas,” she warned, “make sure you remember to pass the vegetables as well. We’re not savages.”

I nodded, suppressing a sigh, and passed the dish of roasted vegetables to my left. The tension in the room was palpable, an invisible force that seemed to tighten its grip with every passing moment.

The conversation at the table was stilted, a careful dance around topics that could ignite the powder keg of discord. I focused on my plate, carefully selecting my bites.

“Did you hear about the Johnsons’ new beach house?” My father, Richard, attempted to steer the conversation toward safer shores. “Quite the property, I hear.”

Emily scoffed, her fork clinking against her plate. “Must be nice to have the luxury of affording beach houses while the rest of us scrape by.”

I resisted the urge to interject, opting for a sip of wine. The taste was bitter, mirroring the sentiments that bubbled beneath the surface. I glanced at my watch; the minutes ticking away like a time bomb waiting to explode.

The doorbell rang, a welcome interruption to the strained atmosphere within. My younger brother, Daniel, leapt up from the table with a zeal that bordered on desperation.

“I’ll get it!” he announced, practically sprinting to the door.

The family exchanged glances, eyebrows raised in unspoken speculation. The door swung open, revealing Aunt Sylvia, resplendent in a holiday-themed sweater and a jovial expression that seemed to radiate goodwill.

“Hello, everyone!” she exclaimed, her voice carrying a warmth that bordered on theatrical. “I hope I’m not too late for the festivities.”

Aunt Sylvia’s entrance was met with a collective sigh of relief. She was the family’s unofficial peacemaker, a role she seemed to relish. Her presence had the uncanny ability to diffuse tension like a cool breeze sweeping through a stifling room.

When she sat down, the mood got a little lighter. I allowed myself a small, cautious smile, hoping that perhaps this year, the Thanksgiving dinner might end on a different note.

The meal continued, the clinking of cutlery against porcelain providing a tentative soundtrack to the uneasy harmony of the tense gathering. Aunt Sylvia kept us all entertained with her stories about her recent travels, specifically choosing each one to divert attention away from the awkward situation.

However, the fragile truce held only for so long. The tension resurfaced like a dormant volcano, waiting for the slightest provocation to erupt.

My cousin, Rachel, leaned across the table, her eyes narrowing as she addressed me. “So, Lucas, how’s that job of yours going? Still slaving away for that soul-sucking corporation?”

I took a deep breath, my resolve wavering. I glanced at Aunt Sylvia, who shot me a sympathetic look, as if silently urging me to remain composed.

“It’s going well, Rachel,” I replied evenly. “I enjoy my work, and the pay is decent.”

Rachel’s scoff echoed through the room. “Decent? You’re practically a corporate drone, sacrificing your soul for a paycheck. I, for one, would rather starve than sell out like that.”

The tension thickened, the unspoken words between us hanging in the air like an impending storm. I clenched my fists beneath the table, struggling to maintain the peace I had worked so hard to preserve.

Aunt Sylvia cleared her throat, attempting to direct the conversation away from the precipice. “Has anyone tried the pecan pie? It’s absolutely divine!”

The diversion, however well-intentioned, proved futile. The storm had arrived, and it was impossible to ignore the crackling tension in the air.

Despite their best efforts, the Anderson family teetered on the edge of chaos. The once-muted arguments erupted, each member contributing to the cacophony of grievances and long-buried resentments.

Exhausted from the same old drama, I excused myself and walked away from the family feud. I stepped outside onto the snow-covered porch, the cold air offering a temporary respite from the heated exchange within.

As I stared into the night, my breath forming clouds in the chilly air, I couldn’t help but wonder if we’d ever have a holiday dinner without the drama. I thought maybe it was just a dream, something you only see in the movies and on cards.

Yet, in that moment of solitude, where it was just me, my thoughts, and the gentle crunch of snow beneath my boots, I questioned the circumstances that had kept my family entangled in so much turmoil. Each Thanksgiving was the same recurring cycle.

I wondered what kept us stuck, and how could we find the keys to bringing more harmony to our gatherings, turning them into times of genuine connection and happiness?

The snow continued to fall, a silent witness to the ongoing drama within the Anderson household. And as the night wore on, I couldn’t help but cling to the hope that, just maybe, the next holiday dinner would bring with it a newfound peace—a truce that would endure, if only for a fleeting moment in time.

November 28, 2023 14:29

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Kailani B.
22:36 Dec 07, 2023

Hello Dita, I got your story as part of the Critique Circle and wanted to share a few thoughts. I think you've got a good grasp on writing, but in this story you left a lot on the table (no pun intended). Why, exactly, are Emily and Lucas not on good terms? Does Rachel have a meaningful job or is she just insulting Lucas to cover her own insecurities? I know short stories don't allow a lot of time, but would it work better if instead of telling us there's tension, have the characters talk and act in a way that shows tension? Example: ma...

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Dita Dow
23:06 Dec 07, 2023

Thank you, Kailani. I appreciate your review. Excellent points!

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S Gabe
22:10 Dec 05, 2023

wow this is so relatable! you capture people so well

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Dita Dow
01:03 Dec 06, 2023

Thank you so much!

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