All Lines, No Map
Act One
Avery: Page one. Who starts?
Mara: You do.
Avery: It does not say that.
Mara: It does not say anything. That is the point.
Gus: Stick to the script.
Priya: The script is six names and a bunch of lines. There is no sticking. There is sliding.
Leo: Sliding is dangerous. That is how you end up improvising.
Tessa: Improvising is forbidden.
Avery: Forbidden, by who?
Tessa: By the absence. The silence where the directions should be.
Mara: That sounds like philosophy.
Gus: It is also obedience.
Priya: Which is also annoying.
Avery: Then what are we doing right now?
Gus: Sticking to the spirit of sticking to the script.
Priya: That is a lot of sticking. We will be glued to the floor by the intermission.
Leo: Do we even get an intermission?
Avery: It says nothing about exits.
Mara: So we are trapped.
Gus: Do not panic. Stick to the script.
Priya: I need you to stop saying that.
Leo: He is not wrong. If we start filling in blanks, we will never stop. First, it is a chair. Then it is a chariot. Then, suddenly, we are in Julius Caesar.
Tessa: At least Shakespeare gave stage directions.
Avery: That is the test. No stage directions. No safety net.
Mara: I do not need a net. I just want to know if I am supposed to sit.
Gus: Stick to the script.
Priya: Say that again, and I will write a stage direction that says Gus is eaten by the spotlight.
Leo: Et Tu Priya? That is not in the script.
Priya: It could be. We will say it is.
Tessa: Cheating.
Avery: Maybe cheating is the honest way to do this.
Mara: Now you sound like my therapist.
Gus: Focus. The playwright gave us words. That is enough.
Priya: The words do not tell us how.
Leo: Maybe the how is up to us.
Tessa: That feels reckless.
Avery: Or liberating.
Mara: Or both.
Gus: No. We are not liberated. We are disciplined. Stick to the script.
Priya: If discipline was the point, why delete the directions?
Leo: Maybe they trusted us.
Tessa: Or wanted to watch us collapse.
Avery: Same thing, really.
Mara: Page one. Avery, read the first line.
Avery: Hello. I am not sure if I am late.
Gus: Good. Clean.
Priya: You are on time, because time is a circle when no one draws lines.
Leo: That is not comforting.
Tessa: It is not supposed to be.
Mara: I like it. It means we are all equally lost.
Avery: Finally, something familiar.
Gus: Do not get clever. Stick to the script.
Priya: Stop. Saying. That.
Leo: I think the script wants us to fight about this.
Tessa: Then we are doing great.
Mara: So, Act One is us panicking about whether we are doing Act One.
Avery: Exactly. Which means we nailed it.
Gus: Fine. But only because we stuck to the script.
Priya: We are sliding on it, not sticking to it.
Leo: Call it gliding.
Tessa: Call it trying.
Avery: I call it begging for a chair.
Mara: The chairs are implied.
Gus: Implied chairs are still chairs.
Priya: Are implied bows still bows?
Leo: Ask me after we survive page two.
Tessa: If page two ever arrives.
Avery: It arrives when we say it arrives.
Mara: That sounds like a cue.
Gus: Cues are directions.
Priya: Then let it be a promise.
Leo: Or a confession.
Tessa: Or a dare.
Avery: Fine. I dare us to keep going.
Act Two
Avery: Page two. Who starts.
Mara: Still you.
Avery: The script does not say that.
Gus: The script only includes the lines. Stick to the script.
Priya: If I hear that again, I am throwing the script out the window.
Leo: There are no windows.
Tessa: Not true. I can say there is a window and then there is.
Avery: That feels like cheating.
Mara: It feels like theater.
Gus: Theater has stage directions. Which we do not have. Which is why we stick to the script.
Priya: Gus, I swear.
Leo: Wait. Did anyone else hear that?
Tessa: Hear what?
Leo: I thought I heard the line. Dramatic pause.
Avery: That is not in here.
Mara: He invented a stage direction.
Gus: Treason.
Priya: Relax. It was a good pause.
Leo: Thank you. Sometimes silence says more than words.
Gus: Silence is not in the script.
Tessa: Maybe it should be.
Avery: Maybe the script trusts us to fill the blanks.
Mara: Or trusts us to fail in the blanks.
Priya: Then let us fail interestingly.
Leo: Yes. Failing loudly.
Gus: Quiet failing would be better. Maybe no one notices.
Tessa: They always notice.
Avery: New rule. If the script does not tell us what to do, we confess instead.
Mara: Confess what?
Avery: Anything. I confess I do not know if this line is mine or yours.
Priya: I confess my voice sounds like a clarinet.
Leo: I confess I am jealous of clarinets. They always know the note.
Tessa: I confess I am pretending my chair is real.
Gus: I confess I am uncomfortable with this game.
Mara: Then it is working.
Priya: See. We turned nothing into something.
Leo: It almost sounded like a scene.
Tessa: Almost.
Avery: Maybe almost is the point.
Mara: Almost is more interesting than perfect.
Gus: Perfect is applause.
Priya: Perfect is boring.
Leo: Perfect belongs to another play. A death of a Roman Emporer in 44 BC.
Tessa: We are not doing another play.
Avery: We are doing this. Whatever this is.
Mara: A play with no map.
Priya: And no exits.
Leo: And no chairs.
Tessa: And no mercy.
Priya: And no drama.
Avery: So what do we have?
Mara: Just the words.
Gus: Just the script.
Priya: Just each other.
Leo: Maybe that is enough.
Tessa: Enough for what?
Avery: Enough for Act Three.
Mara: Not yet. We need one more fight about the rules so the payoff means something.
Gus: Good. I would like to submit a rule. When in doubt, ask for a line.
Priya: Asking for a line is not in the script.
Gus: It is now. Line.
Leo: You cannot call line if no one forgot it.
Tessa: He forgot confidence.
Avery: We all forgot confidence.
Mara: Then let us remember each other instead.
Priya: That sounds like a card someone would keep in their pocket.
Leo: I would frame it.
Tessa: I would underline it with my eyes.
Gus: Eyes are not props.
Priya: Everything is a prop if you treat it with respect.
Avery: Even fear.
Mara: Especially fear.
Leo: I still want a window.
Tessa: Here you go. I am opening it now.
Gus: Stop inventing things.
Priya: Let him have a window.
Leo: Thank you. I can see the possibility from here.
Avery: Possibility is rehearsing.
Mara: It looks very sure of itself.
Gus: That is because it has stage directions.
Priya: Also costumes.
Tessa: Also betrayal on page whatever.
Leo: We only have each other on page whatever.
Avery: Then that is what we will use.
Mara: Try a pledge.
Gus: I pledge to stop saying stick to the script.
Priya: I pledge to stop threatening spotlights.
Leo: I pledge to notice the people next to me.
Tessa: I pledge to trust the words even when they feel small.
Avery: I pledge to ask for help out loud.
Mara: I pledge to answer when someone asks.
Gus: I already miss my phrase.
Priya: You can keep it. Use it when it means care and not control.
Leo: Yes. Stick to the script and let the script be us.
Tessa: That sounds like a direction.
Avery: It sounds like a choice.
Mara: It sounds like the start of Act Three.
Act Three
Avery: I do not know what I am doing.
Mara: Same. I have been bluffing since page one.
Gus: I thought that was the job. Bluff until applause.
Priya: Applause for what?
Leo: For pretending we know where to stand.
Tessa: Or for standing anyway.
Avery: I keep hearing the line in my head. Stick to the script.
Mara: What if sticking to the script means admitting the script cannot hold us?
Gus: That sounds like improvising.
Priya: No. It is cooperating. There is a difference.
Leo: Cooperation feels dangerous.
Tessa: Or like trust.
Avery: I will go first. I am afraid I am boring.
Mara: I am afraid I am too loud.
Gus: I am afraid my hands look unemployed.
Priya: I am afraid I am the only one who does not belong here.
Leo: I am afraid I only belong here.
Tessa: I am afraid if I stop talking, I will disappear.
Avery: Then do not stop.
Mara: We will not let you disappear.
Gus: Your hands have a role.
Priya: Your silence has a role.
Leo: Especially your silence.
Tessa: Then maybe we can turn all these fears into one thing.
Avery: Into us.
Mara: Not separate.
Gus: Not lost.
Priya: Not directed.
Leo: Together.
Tessa: Together.
All: Together.
Avery: Even if it is messy.
Mara: Especially if it is messy.
Gus: The script cannot tell us how to care.
Priya: But we can.
Leo: So we will.
Tessa: Right now.
Avery: I choose to breathe.
Mara: I choose to listen.
Gus: I choose to let the line land before I grab it.
Priya: I choose to answer the line instead of fixing it.
Leo: I choose to notice the person who needs space.
Tessa: I choose to take only the space I need.
Avery: I choose to say yes and mean it.
Mara: I choose to say no when yes would be a lie.
Gus: I choose to share the laugh.
Priya: I choose to share the quiet.
Leo: I choose to call this a scene.
Tessa: I choose to believe it is enough.
All: We are enough.
(beat of silence)
You: I did not get it.
Director: Same. Next time, I might go back to Julius Caesar in the park.
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This is the a great story, the only thing I would suggest is to use more contractions, it would make the story flow better, but otherwise great job!
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That’s a great note. Thanks.
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