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Submitted to: Contest #15
Written in response to: "Write about a character’s secret area of expertise, something most of their acquaintances would be surprised to learn they know tons about."
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IDK why the font is so big???
I couldn't fix it...
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WOWOWOWOWOWOWOW
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Wow. Clearly, I am reading this late but I mean, W O W. This story gave me chills. You have an incredible talent, one that is bone-chilling and meant to be shared with the world.
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Thank a-lot! I put a lot of thought into this story!
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What??? The ending line, “At the very least, I was glad that she was happy.” was stunning. I couldn’t believe it, and has me wondering if Sariah is a witch, or something.
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Hmmm...
Maybe?
😉
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Still a good story tho!
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Thank you!
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That was...wow. This Sariah persona seems like a real treat. Murdering people... taking all their money... yikes. It was a very gripping story from the beginning and a nice twist from the prompt.
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