Maggie's hands moved with precision as she sliced through the crisp okra, the rhythmic sound of her knife against the cutting board echoing through the kitchen. The aroma of simmering collard greens and spicy fried chicken filled the air, a testament to the soul food legacy she was building at her restaurant, Sweet Home.
"Shawn, how's that cornbread coming along?" Maggie called out, her eyes never leaving the task at hand.
"Golden and perfect, Chef," Shawn replied, his deep voice carrying a hint of pride. "Just like everything else that comes out of your kitchen."
Maggie glanced up, catching Shawn's warm smile. Her sous-chef's charm was as undeniable as his culinary skills.
"Let's hope the food critics agree," Maggie muttered, wiping her brow with the back of her hand. "We've got a big night ahead of us."
As if on cue, the kitchen doors swung open, and Lisa strode in, her heels clicking against the tile floor. "Speaking of big nights, I've got some news," she announced, her voice cutting through the kitchen's cacophony.
Maggie set down her knife, giving her business partner her full attention. Lisa's perfectly manicured nails tapped against her phone screen as she spoke. "I've managed to snag us a last-minute slot on 'L.A.'s Taste of the Town.' They want to feature Sweet Home on next week's episode."
Excitement bubbled up in Maggie's chest, but it was quickly tempered by a flicker of suspicion. "That's amazing, Lisa. But I thought they were booked for the next nine months."
Lisa's lips curved into a sly smile. "Let's just say I have my ways. You focus on the food, and I'll handle the business side of things."
Maggie nodded, pushing aside her doubts. This was the break they'd been waiting for, a chance to put Sweet Home on L.A.'s culinary map.
"We'll need to create a new signature dish for the feature," Maggie mused, "Something that showcases our modern twist on classic soul food."
"Whatever you come up with, I'm sure it'll be fantastic," Shawn chimed in, moving to stand beside Lisa. His hand found the small of her back, a gesture that didn't go unnoticed by Maggie.
She turned away, focusing on the okra in front of her. "I appreciate the vote of confidence, but we'll need to nail every detail."
"Don't worry so much, Mags," Lisa said, her tone light but with a sprinkle of something Maggie couldn't quite place. "Our food speaks for itself. Just do what you do best, and leave the rest to me."
As Lisa and Shawn left the kitchen, their heads bent close in conversation, Maggie couldn't shake the feeling that something was off. She'd known Lisa since culinary school, and while her friend had always been ambitious, lately, there was an undercurrent to her actions that set Maggie on edge.
Pushing her concerns aside, Maggie refocused on the task at hand. She had a restaurant to run and a menu to perfect. Whatever challenges lay ahead, she'd face them head-on, just as she always had.
* * *
Maggie pored over the stack of papers spread across her desk. The late-night glow of her office lamp cast long shadows, mirroring the dark thoughts creeping into her consciousness. She'd stayed behind after closing, determined to get a handle on the restaurant's finances before their big TV debut.
As she flipped through the documents, a discrepancy caught her eye. Frowning, she pulled out her calculator, double-checking the numbers. Something wasn't adding up.
Her fingers flew over the keyboard as she accessed the restaurant's bank records. With each click, her heart sank lower. Large sums of money had been transferred out of the business account, cleverly disguised as vendor payments.
"This can't be right," Maggie muttered, her voice barely above a whisper.
She dug deeper, following the trail of transactions. The destination account belonged to a holding company she'd never heard of. Maggie's breath caught in her throat as she googled the name.
There it was, in black and white. The holding company was registered to Lisa Grant.
Maggie's world tilted on its axis. Her best friend, her business partner, had been systematically draining their restaurant's funds. But why?
As if in answer to her unspoken question, an email notification popped up on her screen. It was from the producers of "L.A.'s Taste of the Town," confirming the upcoming feature. But the name listed as the owner of Sweet Home wasn't Maggie Smith Johnson. It was Lisa Grant.
The pieces fell into place with sickening clarity. Lisa wasn't just stealing money; she was stealing the entire restaurant. The betrayal cut deep, leaving her feeling hollow and lost. She'd trusted Lisa, shared her dreams with her. And all this time, Lisa had been plotting against her.
For a moment, rage threatened to overwhelm her. She wanted to confront Lisa, to demand answers, to fight for what was rightfully hers. But as quickly as it came, the anger drained away, leaving behind a steely determination.
She wouldn't tip her hand just yet. Instead, she'd do what she did best - she'd cook.
* * *
Maggie's fingers flew across her phone screen as she scrolled through her social media feed, desperate for a distraction from the betrayal still raw in her mind. Her eyes caught on a post from the Los Angeles Culinary Institute.
"Calling all chefs! Enter our 'Dish Best Served Cold' competition. Create a dish that embodies revenge. Grand prize: $50,000 and a feature in Gourmet magazine."
This was it. The perfect opportunity to showcase her skills and reclaim her rightful place in the culinary world. She'd create a dish so spectacular, so uniquely hers, that there'd be no doubt about who was the true talent behind Sweet Home.
She grabbed her notebook and started scribbling ideas. Bitter flavors came to mind first - dark chocolate, coffee, arugula. But no, that was too obvious. She needed something unexpected, something that would tell her story.
Her phone buzzed with a text from Shawn.
"Hey Mags, heard about the competition. You entering? Lisa is dusting off her culinary knifes and submitted her application an hour ago."
Maggie's stomach did a little flip. So, the embezzler wanted to win a culinary competition? Was Shawn working with Lisa, too?
"Thinking about it," she typed back. "Got any ideas for a revenge dish?"
His response came quickly. "How about a sweet and spicy combo? Something that looks innocent but packs a punch."
Trust Shawn to come up with something clever. All the more reason not to trust him, though.
As she brainstormed, Maggie found her thoughts drifting back to Shawn. It was becoming harder to ignore the warmth that spread through her chest whenever they talked.
But as Robyn Fenty once said, “Fuck your feelings.” She had a restaurant to save and a dish to create.
A dessert, perhaps? Something that looked delicate and beautiful on the outside, but held a fiery surprise within.
Maggie tied her loc’d hair back and headed to the kitchen, eager to start experimenting.
She'd create something unforgettable, a dish that would not only win the competition but would show Lisa - and the world - exactly who Maggie Smith Johnson was.
**
Maggie wiped her brow, flour dusting her cheek as she stared at the latest iteration of her revenge dish. The kitchen counter was a battlefield of discarded ingredients and half-formed ideas.
A knock at the door startled her out of her culinary funk. She looked at the clock and groaned. She’d forgotten that the contest had paired her with a blogger in the hopes of documenting the journey for the winner. She opened the door to find a lanky guy with tousled dark hair and a mischievous grin.
"Maggie Smith Johnson?" His green eyes sparkled. "I'm Jake Thompson. Food blogger extraordinaire and your new competition partner."
Maggie's jaw clenched. "Look, is this really necessary?"
Jake leaned against the doorframe, undeterred. "Come on, Chef. Let me do my job. Plus, I've got the inside scoop on what the judges are looking for."
Maggie hesitated. As much as she hated to admit it, she could use some fresh perspective. And if he really did have insider information…
"Fine," she grumbled, stepping aside to let him in. "But don't touch anything."
Jake sauntered into the kitchen, his eyes widening at the chaos. "Whoa. Did a flour bomb go off in here?"
Maggie rolled her eyes. "I've been experimenting."
"I can see that." Jake picked up a discarded recipe, eyebrows raised. "Ghost pepper ice cream? Bold choice."
"It was an idea," Maggie defended, snatching the paper from his hands.
Jake held up his hands in surrender. "Hey, no judgment here. I once ate a cricket taco for a blog post. Let's just say it wasn't my finest culinary moment."
Despite herself, Maggie felt a smile tugging at her lips. "Alright, blogger. What do the judges want?"
Jake's eyes lit up. He launched into a rapid-fire brainstorming session, tossing out ideas that ranged from clever to downright absurd.
"What about a dish that changes as you eat it?" Jake suggested, perched on a barstool. "Start sweet, end spicy. Like a relationship gone wrong."
Maggie paused, intrigued despite herself. "That... actually has potential."
Jake beamed. "See? I'm not just a pretty face with a food blog."
Maggie snorted, but she couldn't deny the spark of excitement she felt.
Jake cleared his throat, "So, Chef Johnson, ready to create a masterpiece?"
Maggie grinned, surprising herself with her eagerness. "Let's do it, Blogger Boy."
As they set to work, Maggie realized that this unexpected partnership might just be the key to unlocking her revenge dish. And if Jake's presence made the process a little more enjoyable, well, that was just an added bonus.
* * *
Maggie's kitchen buzzed with newfound energy as she and Jake worked side by side. The clock ticked past midnight, but neither seemed to notice. "Pass the chili oil," Maggie said, her hand outstretched.
"Careful there, Chef. We're making revenge, not arson." Jake teased, dodging the dish towel Maggie threw at him.
As they worked, stories flowed as freely as the wine Jake had insisted on opening. Maggie found herself sharing bits of her culinary journey she'd never voiced aloud before.
Jake drained the last of the wine and leaned forward. “Cool tat.”
Maggie rolled the sleeve on her white coat to reveal the full tattoo of a whisk with the words “No Whisk, No Reward” above it. “Lot’s of sangria involved.”
Jake chuckled. “So, what made you want to open your place?"
Maggie's hands stilled. She took a deep breath, surprised by her willingness to open up. "I wanted to create a place where I could share my passion and uplift my community."
Jake nodded, his usual joking demeanor softening. "And Lisa is trying to take it."
Maggie's jaw clenched. "Yeah. Funny how quickly dreams can turn into nightmares."
"Hey." Jake's hand covered hers, "You're not letting her win."
Maggie looked up, meeting his gaze. The intensity she found there made her breath catch. For a moment, she forgot about Lisa, about the competition, about everything except the way Jake was looking at her.
Jake cleared his throat, breaking the spell. "So, uh, what do you think of our masterpiece?"
Maggie blinked, forcing herself to focus on the dish before them. "It's... not bad. But something's missing."
Their faces were inches apart. Maggie could smell his cologne, a hint of citrus and spice. Her heart raced, and she found herself wondering what it would be like to close that small distance between them.
Her phone buzzed, shattering the moment. Maggie jumped back, fumbling for her device.
It was a text reminding her to register to vote.
Jake cleared his throat. "Well, Chef, I think we've made some good progress tonight. What do you say we call it and pick this up tomorrow?"
Maggie nodded, grateful for the out.
As Jake gathered his things to leave, Maggie found herself reluctant to see him go. "Thanks for tonight," she said softly. " I needed this."
Jake's smile was warm and genuine. " That's what partners are for."
***
The morning of the competition at the Minerva Hotel in downtown L.A. dawned bright and clear, but Maggie barely noticed as she hurried into the event space.
Maggie made her way to her assigned station, her fingers tightening around the straps of her knife roll. She'd practiced her dish countless times with Jake, but now, standing alone in the sea of competitors, doubt crept in.
"You've got this," she whispered to herself, unpacking her tools with practiced efficiency.
As she laid out her ingredients, a familiar voice cut through the noise.
“Good luck, partner."
Maggie's spine stiffened. She turned to find Lisa sauntering towards her, Shawn trailing behind like a reluctant shadow.
"Don’t need luck," Maggie replied, forcing a smile, “when I have skill.”
Lisa's eyes narrowed. "We’ll see."
As they turned to leave, Shawn’s eyes met Maggie's, a flicker of something – regret? – passing across his face.
Maggie took a deep breath, pushing away the hurt and betrayal. She had a competition to win.
The next few hours passed in a blur. As she worked, she poured every ounce of her frustration into the dish. Win or lose, she was ready to fight for what was hers.
* * *
Maggie's heart pounded as she stepped forward, her carefully plated dish balanced in her hands. The judges sat before her, their expressions neutral, pens poised over notepads.
"Judges, I present to you 'Karma’s A Bitch,'" Maggie began, her voice clear and confident. "This chilled soup represents a fusion of Southern soul food and Indian flavors."
She set the dish down, the vibrant colors of the soup catching the light. From the corner of her eye, she spotted Jake giving her a subtle thumbs-up from the sidelines.
"The base is a smooth blend of roasted Indian Riya tomatoes and ripe Georgia peaches," Maggie explained, gesturing to the golden-red liquid. "The sweetness of the peaches balances the sourness of the tomatoes, creating a harmony that speaks to life's unexpected pairings."
The head judge nodded. Encouraged, Maggie continued.
"Atop the soup, you'll find a spicy crab salad. The heat comes from the Indian Malabar pepper and represents the initial fire you feel when seeking revenge, while the delicate Louisiana crab meat symbolizes the vulnerability we all carry within us."
As she spoke, Maggie's passion shone through. Her words painted a picture not just of flavors, but of her journey.
"Finally, the L.A. basil oil drizzle, grown from my garden, adds a fresh, herbal note that cuts through the richness," she concluded. "It's a reminder that even in our darkest moments, there's always a glimmer of hope and new beginnings."
The judges sampled the dish, their expressions shifting from curiosity to surprise, and finally, to appreciation. Maggie held her breath, watching as they exchanged glances and whispered comments.
"Chef Johnson," the head judge spoke, setting down his spoon. "This is a remarkably complex dish, both in flavor and concept."
Maggie's heart soared at the praise. She glanced towards Jake, who beamed with pride.
"Thank you," Maggie replied.
As the judges continued their deliberation, Maggie stepped back, feeling a weight lift from her shoulders. Whether she won or not, she knew she'd created something truly special.
* * *
"And now, the moment we've all been waiting for," the head judge announced, his voice cutting through the tension. "In third place..."
Maggie barely registered the name called. As they announced the second-place winner, she held her breath.
"The grand prize winner of this year's 'Dish Best Served Cold' competition is..." The judge paused, building suspense. "Maggie Smith Johnson, with her innovative chilled soup!"
The room erupted in applause, but Maggie stood frozen, disbelief washing over her. Jake's excited whoop snapped her back to reality, and she found herself grinning from ear to ear.
As she stepped forward to accept her award, the head judge continued, "Chef Johnson's dish not only demonstrated exceptional culinary skill but also told a compelling story of resilience and hope."
Maggie's chest swelled with pride as she clutched the trophy. She'd done it. She'd proven to herself - and everyone else - that she was a force to be reckoned with in the culinary world.
But her moment of triumph was short-lived. A commotion near the judges' table drew everyone's attention. Lisa stood there, her face contorted with anger, waving a handful of papers.
"This is ridiculous!" Lisa shouted. "I demand a recount! There's no way her amateur soup could beat my dish!"
The head judge frowned, stepping towards Lisa. "Ms. Grant, I'm afraid there's been a development we need to discuss. We've received evidence from your sous chef, Shawn Lee of some... irregularities in your application and financial records."
Maggie watched, stunned, as the judge produced a folder. "It appears you've been misappropriating funds from your restaurant and using them for personal gain. This is a clear violation of our competition's ethics code."
Lisa's face drained of color. "I... I don't know what you're talking about," she stammered, but her eyes darted to Shawn.
"I'm sorry, but we have no choice but to disqualify you from the competition," the judge declared firmly.
As security escorted a protesting Lisa from the room, Maggie caught sight of Shawn. He smiled. Their eyes met, and for a moment, Maggie saw a flicker of the connection they once shared.
She looked at Jake, who beamed at her with undisguised admiration. He'd been there for her, supporting and challenging her in equal measure. With him, she felt seen and valued for who she truly was.
"Congratulations, chef," Jake said softly, "You were incredible up there."
Maggie smiled, feeling lighter than she had in months. “I couldn't have done this without you."
The future stretched out before her, full of possibilities. With her talent recognized and her passion reignited, Maggie knew that this was just the beginning of her culinary journey. And she couldn't wait to see where it would take her next.
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14 comments
Loved this story of revenge,told so well. I could envisage the characters and almost smell the food. Beautifully done!
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Thank you, Jenny!
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Hey Keleigh, just so you know, Jonathan Foster's review was AI generated.
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*slow blink Should I add to my bio that I want to know what red-blooded, fragile but resilient, complicated, beautifully messy humans think and feel about my words rather than a soulless computer program?
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Wonderfully written, Keleigh! The food descriptions stirred my appetite. I knew when Lisa walked into that kitchen, with heels clacking, that she didn’t belong there. Now look at her. Haha
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Thank you, G! I love a good comeuppance too!
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This story transported me into Maggie’s kitchen. The sounds of the knife against the cutting board, the flavors and the passion of the protagonist made this story a delectable read. (Also loved the timely nod to our Dame Maggie Smith.) I absolutely enjoyed it and only wish it came with the recipe for “Karma’s a Bitch.” Great job.
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Thank you, Nicole!
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This story was both inspiring and endearing. A beautiful tapestry of words, both delicious and captivating. I want more from this author!
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Thank you, Gina!
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From the very beginning, the vivid descriptions make this story come alive. I was immediately immersed in the rich aromas of soul food—crispy fried chicken, simmering collard greens, and perfectly golden cornbread. The attention to detail is mesmerizing, making it easy to visualize the passion and precision that Maggie pours into her dishes, and that's not even half of what makes this story so great. The relationship between the characters, the humor, the drama, and the vivid scenery makes me want to keep reading. My only complaint is that t...
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Thank you, L.A.!
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Your pacing of this story is spot on! You move through transitions smoothly and keep us racing to the final announcement. Your descriptions of the food are lovely and imaginative. Well done! Of course, the ending is very satisfying.
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Thank you so much, Heidi! I had just learned about the death of Dame Maggie Smith and wanted to honor her name with this character.
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