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Fiction Christian Inspirational

It’s a one of a kind place, this Inn is. It’s where dreams are kept and where peace is found. It’s where memories are made and memories relived. It’s where time stands still and your mind goes into solace. 

It’s nestled right on the banks of the Cape Fear River in a small beautiful North Carolina town. It only has eight rooms, each with it’s own charm. Six of the rooms have a semi-private porch divided by some wooden slats that go almost to the ground. The old wooden porch swing is my favorite. Each of the river side rooms has one. They still have keys for the rooms. 

This quaint place is named, The Grand Banks Inn.

This time we are staying in room number six for the whole week. Upon arrival, we were greeted by our host who told us, “if you need something, just call me, the keys are on the table in the room.” 

We were unloading the car for what seemed like an eternity. I complained as usual and Lisa just looked at me and smiled. As that event went on there were other things unpacking in my mind. Who’s in room seven I thought, who’s in room five? These are all the things I think about when staying in a Inn. I think if you played the song hotel california it would match this Inn. I would like it to anyway. The song goes, you can check out but you can never leave. 

As we were finishing the unloading process room seven door opens and a younger couple emerged. They looked like they were in their forties or so. I made eye contact and I shook hands with my eyes. Only a few people will ever get this. It’s a silent gift that some have. You can have a complete conversation with just your eyes, and we did. It went like this to the both of them, hello, how are you, you’re in seven and we are in six, good to meet you, we can chat later….then blink. 

Well, wouldn’t you know it I got sick that week and was unable to do anything. So, while Lisa went to walk each day I sat on the old porch swing and enjoyed that breeze that came off the river from the ocean. I was working on a previous story titled, Oh Snap. It’s what I call a dark story but it does have a hopeful ending. As I pressed through it I realized that room seven was in and out on their porch. They were very quite. Not conversing a great deal.

I was able to get up enough strength to get to the swing each day and focus and write the story I was working on. I usually wear headphones and listen to what I call my writing music but for some reason i decided this natural peace was just enough to listen to. The swing would rock back and forth and back and forth. I had the lap top in my lap writing what I thought was a master piece. I laugh at myself saying that because each write I do is not for you but for me, it’s a release of emotions and brings healing to me each and every time. In the back of my mind I do hope these stories will help someone. 

Lisa had gone on another long walk about midday, I was in the swing writing and enjoying the sun and then I heard room seven door opened and close, I hear her talking on the phone. He was already sitting on the porch. I could see his feet dangling. I couldn’t make out what she was saying other than, are you sure. Are you one-hundred percent!

The wind had silence in it as if I was supposed to hear something. There were no boats, no people, no birds, no nothing, just her saying, “are you sure.” She told the caller, “ok.” 

There was silence like I’ve never heard. I was still trying to focus on this real story I was fully involved in. It was so difficult to focus. She then told her husband, “ the test results are in and I am terminal.” The cancer has taken a turn and there is no hope of recovery, I am terminal.” I have two weeks to live. She joined him on the swing, both feet dangling in the sun barely touching the ground. They pushed back and forth, back and forth.

He got up and walked in the yard by the river, looking up as to ask God himself for help. I could see the distress in his countenance. She joined him with a beautiful hug in the sun light as to say, it’s going to be ok. We’re going to be ok. They both started to walk back to room seven and our eyes took yet another handshake. It’s going to be ok, I said. You are going to make it, I promise you that. Never underestimate the power of the eyes, the look, the glance, the stare, the hug, the kiss, the touch. It’s all real and it brings comfort. They knew what I was saying, they understood. I had overheard a conversation that wasn’t meant for me but it now involved me.

Later that evening Lisa and I were swinging on that old porch swing in room six, over looking the cape fear river. I had not told her what I had heard earlier that day as I was still processing. Lisa is a cancer survivor so this is a very sensitive topic for her. I had finished writing my story and shared it with her. She always gives great insight to my stories and as we chatted about the story it led into a very common conversation for us.

We just started talking about what we always talk about, things of life. As we looked at the stars in the heavens, and the waters all around us. We talked about God, we talked about Jesus and the peace and life He brings to us each and everyday. We talked about the plans He has for us and the future He has for us. We talked about His amazing grace, from where we were to where we are today. We talked about His saving grace and why we are who we are. This is a regular conversation for us. 

I then shared with her what I had heard from room seven. Lisa was so torn, she wanted to go over and pray with them to bring some hope, some type of rescue to them but realized this was their battle, if they needed to include us then only God would make that happen. We agreed to pray right then and there for them. We prayed out loud on that porch swing outside room six for those in room seven. PLEASE GOD HAVE MERCY ON THEM, MAY YOUR WILL BE DONE, IF THEY DON’T KNOW YOU THEN LEAD THOSE THAT WILL SHOW THEM THE WAY, AMEN.

With that we went to bed that evening, not sleeping too much. I was feeling better the next day and got up a bit early. I noticed that room seven was packing up the car and preparing to leave. At the Grand Banks Inn it’s not unusual to have both the front and back doors open at the same time. As I stood in my door way with my sweet Lisa by my side we all shook hands again with our eyes. Saying to them, we love you, it’s going to be ok, we will be here if you need us and most important, we love you!

Not knowing who they were we often included them in our prayers. A year has passed now and we are back for our annual vacation time, a celebration of our love and our restoration, which is for another story.

We always try to get room six. As it was this year room six is where we are. We are unloading and in the back of our minds we are wondering about room seven. We get all settled in and the sun is bright and the wind is blowing ever so soft. 

I peered over to the porch at room seven and noted it was empty, then I heard a door close, I rushed back to my place on the porch, sitting quickly on the swing hoping that room seven was occupied.

A man came out and sat in the swing, I could see his feet moving back and forth. He started talking to someone. I was wondering if it was him and maybe the doctors were wrong. 

I stopped and got up quietly and walked out into the yard toward the river. A voice came from room sevens porch. I turned and it was him. He greeted me with a very soft, “hello.” I returned, a “hello.” He just stared at me as if to say something. He said, “you were here last year about this time, right?” I said, “yes, we were.” I didn’t act dumb, I knew she didn’t make it. 

We made past the introductions and he told me the whole story about her cancer and the diagnosis and the final two weeks of her life. Our eyes engaged and once again we communicated in silence. He then said, “I have a letter here for you, she wrote it and sealed it up before she passed, with the hopes of one day me seeing you again to deliver it. 

And the letter read:

Dear Room Six, 

I know we only shook hands with our eyes but I did overhear you and your sweet Lisa as you called her talking. I did overhear you taking about this God and this Jesus that brings peace and hope to your souls. I did hear you talking about a life everlasting and a life in this place called heaven. I wanted you to know that the last two weeks of my life, God has brought some amazing into my life. They have shared with me this love of Jesus. I overheard you room six and I am thankful that I did. Thanks to you room six my husband now understands and has this same hope. 

He knows God’s plan for him is to prosper and not harm him, he knows his future is even brighter with this everlasting love. If you are reading this now you know I overheard, for that I am grateful beyond words. See you soon!

Signed, 

Room Seven

With that, you never know the power of the spoken word, choose wisely.

May 15, 2024 23:09

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Paul Simpkin
07:39 May 23, 2024

Thank you for writing this wonderful story. I look forward to reading more of your work in future.

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George Beasley
21:23 May 23, 2024

Thank you for the kind words Paul. It means a lot to me.

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Maylissa Noel
02:42 May 23, 2024

Love this story. Very Inspirational

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George Beasley
21:23 May 23, 2024

Thank you Malissa, those words are so kind!

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Kristi Gott
19:29 May 18, 2024

This is deeply moving, inspiring and insightful. The way you described the eyes communicating had emotional truth and was very unique. The writing is beautifully done and I love the spirituality of this. A very special story.

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Mary Bendickson
01:03 May 16, 2024

Powerful message. Never know where the angels may be. So inspirational. Please double check some minor mistakes in writing before this is approved.

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George Beasley
11:21 May 16, 2024

Thank you so much Mary. Thank you for reading the story and thank you for check for mistakes. I always appreciate that. I’m not great at editing. I do have an editor but it’s hard for her to get it all done in a week. So I just end up winging it. I used to never put an unedited write out but then I ran into this site. Thank you again. It means a lot to me.

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Mary Bendickson
22:08 May 16, 2024

Those little glitches get us all. Sometimes I think it is the automated system that is trying to over correct what we want. Thanks for liking my Secret Secret Agent Man

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