The Street That Wasn’t There

Submitted into Contest #273 in response to: Write a story that hides something from the reader until the end.... view prompt

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Fiction Mystery Horror

The early morning sun painted the streets of Mariborough with a golden hue, making the cobbled roads shimmer as if they were made of polished brass. The street vendors, as they did every morning, set up their stalls with the same practiced movements: the man selling fresh pastries waved at the grocer who was already haggling with his first customer; the flower woman dusted her blooms with soft care, sending little specks of pollen floating into the air. Mariborough was always alive, a city buzzing with life even before the clock struck eight.

Among the sea of faces in the market, there was a man who moved with a curious stillness, almost as if the crowd parted for him naturally, though no one seemed to notice him. His name was Stephen. Tall, lean, with a face that seemed to blend into the background, Stephen was neither memorable nor forgettable, just… there. He walked with purpose, weaving through the crowd without breaking stride, his long coat brushing the ground, making the faintest of whispers as he passed.

Today, like every day for the past two months, Stephen was headed to The Paper Lantern, a quaint café tucked between a jeweler’s shop and an old bookstore that had long since closed its doors. It was the kind of place you wouldn’t find unless you were looking for it. The sign above the door had faded from green to grey, but the faint aroma of freshly ground coffee beans beckoned regulars and newcomers alike.

Stephen pushed open the door, and a bell chimed softly. The café was already half-full, with its usual patrons sipping coffee, reading newspapers, or simply watching the world go by through the large window that framed the bustling street outside.

At the far end, in a small booth by the window, sat a young woman. Her name was Clara, and she was always there before him. Today, she was scribbling something furiously into a leather-bound notebook, her dark hair spilling across the page as her head bent low in concentration. Stephen approached her silently, as he always did, sliding into the seat across from her.

"You're late," Clara said without looking up, a smirk tugging at the corner of her mouth.

"Am I?" Stephen replied, glancing at the clock on the café wall. "By three minutes, perhaps."

She finally looked up, her green eyes sparkling with mischief. "Three minutes is still late."

He smiled, the kind of smile that reached his eyes, though barely. They both knew the time didn’t matter. It was part of the game they played, this familiar banter. Stephen had met Clara here every morning for weeks now, and every time, it was the same routine: she would write, and he would watch the street, a silent observer of the world outside the café window.

"Did you see him today?" Clara asked suddenly, her voice dropping to a whisper.

Stephen’s eyes flickered briefly. He knew who she meant. There had been whispers in the café, rumors of a strange man seen wandering the streets of Mariborough. Some said he was a ghost, others a thief. Some swore they saw him disappear into thin air, while others insisted he had simply walked away, his coat trailing behind him like a shadow.

"I didn’t," Stephen replied. "But he’ll show up."

Clara’s gaze sharpened. "You’re sure?"

"I’m sure," he said, though his voice was quieter now. There was something about the way Clara asked that always unsettled him, as if she knew more than she let on.

The day wore on, and as it always did, Mariborough’s streets grew busier. The sun climbed higher, and the soft morning bustle gave way to the chaotic energy of midday. Stephen and Clara sat in the café for hours, sometimes talking, sometimes simply sitting in silence, lost in their own thoughts.

By afternoon, Clara had finished her notebook and set it aside, her expression pensive. "Do you ever wonder if we’re looking for something that isn’t there?" she asked suddenly, breaking the silence between them.

Stephen looked at her, startled by the question. "What do you mean?"

"I don’t know," she said, sighing. "It just feels like… like there’s something we’re missing. Something right in front of us that we’re not seeing."

Stephen frowned. He knew the feeling she was describing, though he couldn’t put it into words. There had been something strange about Mariborough lately. The streets were the same, the people the same, but there was an undercurrent of tension that hadn’t been there before. It was as if the city itself was holding its breath, waiting for something to happen.

As the sun began to dip behind the buildings, casting long shadows across the streets, Stephen and Clara left the café together, as they always did. The evening crowd was just beginning to stir, and the streetlights flickered on, one by one, casting a warm glow over the city. They walked in silence, their footsteps echoing softly against the cobblestones.

Suddenly, Clara stopped, her hand gripping Stephen’s arm. "There," she whispered, pointing down a narrow alleyway between two tall buildings. Stephen followed her gaze and saw him – the man. He was standing at the far end of the alley, his back to them, his coat billowing slightly in the evening breeze.

Stephen’s heart raced. "It’s him."

Clara nodded, her eyes wide with something that looked like fear, but also curiosity. "We have to follow him."

Without waiting for a response, she took off down the alley, her footsteps light and quick. Stephen hesitated for a moment, then followed, his mind racing with questions. Who was this man? Why had they been searching for him? What would happen when they finally caught up to him?

The man moved quickly, slipping through the narrow streets with ease, always just out of reach. Stephen and Clara chased him through the city, past the bustling market, past the old clock tower, and finally, to a street that Stephen didn’t recognize.

It was quiet here, too quiet. The street was empty, the shops dark and closed, and there was no sign of life anywhere. The man stopped at the end of the street, turning to face them at last. His face was hidden in shadow, but Stephen could feel his gaze on him, cold and unsettling.

Clara stepped forward, her voice trembling. "Who are you?"

The man didn’t answer. Instead, he raised his hand and pointed to something behind them. Stephen turned slowly, his heart pounding in his chest, and saw it.

The street they had just come from… was gone.

The bustling market, the cafés, the people – all of it had disappeared. In its place was nothing but darkness, an empty void stretching out as far as the eye could see. Stephen felt a chill run down his spine as the truth dawned on him.

They hadn’t been searching for the man.

They had been searching for a way out.

The man’s voice echoed softly through the empty street. "You shouldn’t have followed me."

And then, he was gone, leaving Stephen and Clara standing alone in the dark, the bustling streets of Mariborough nothing but a distant memory.

October 19, 2024 14:35

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Craig Scott
20:47 Oct 31, 2024

Hello Young, I very much enjoyed your writing stye here. The descriptions of Mariborough were well done, and I particularly like how you captured the "feel" of the small community. I also enjoyed the ambiguity at the end - who exactly the man was, and where the characters were. It reminded me a bit of the short stories of Gene Wolfe. I likewise appreciated how the relationship between Stephen and Clara was taken for what it was - two people platonically enjoying coffee together. No romance or other nonsense needed. Anyways, keep up t...

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