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Fiction Contemporary

Alex fumbled with his keys trying to open his apartment door, No 1710, on the 17th floor of the Horizon Tower. The weight of a 12-hour night shift was heavy on his shoulders. Though he worked nights by choice, his reverse life upset his circadian rhythms and relationships with others. The corridor stretched before him, silent and empty, as it was each day at 8:10 AM. A faint scent of coffee lingered in the air, probably left behind by an early riser.

At 8:15 AM, Sam left her apartment, No 1720, on the 17th floor, and stepped into the elevator, her tailored suit crisp, her briefcase heavy with case files. As the doors closed, she caught a glimpse of the empty corridor, unaware that seconds ago, it had echoed with the footsteps of a weary nurse returning home. The elevator cubicle smelled, as each day of mild disinfectant, a smell rather upsetting but not too much.

Alex's routine was a well-worn path. As he exited the elevator, he paused, fingers automatically finding the loose screw on the "17th Floor" sign hanging slightly askew, mumbling about the careless maintenance of the building. He tightened it absentmindedly, as he did every morning, never realizing that it worked itself loose each day under Sam's same ministrations when she returned home in the evening. He shuffled down the corridor, avoiding the creaky floorboard near 1703 out of habit more than consideration for his sleeping neighbours, whom he never had a chance to meet.

Inside his apartment, Alex moved through the motions of his post-shift ritual. Scrubs in the hamper, a quick shower, then to the kitchen. He opened the fridge, staring at its sparse contents before closing it with a sigh. He forgot, once more, to stop at the nearby convenience store and he was again left with no food. Even the thought of exiting his house to run to the store, as soon as he had taken a shower, was too much. Instead, he reached his smartphone app for delivery and scrolled down to his favourite Chinese restaurant, the "Golden Dragon". "The usual, please. Delivery to Horizon Tower, Apartment 1710", he mumbled as if reciting his poem. By now they knew him, although they repeated the address, just for confirmation, as they always did.

Across town, in a bustling courtroom, Sam's stomach growled quietly. She ignored it, focusing on her cross-examination. But in a brief recess, her mind wandered to dinner plans. She fully stocked her cupboards this past weekend with all the healthy choices, but this case was tough and she deserved a treat. So she decided on her favourite cheat treat at "Golden Dragon," and the thought cheered her enough to make it through the day. However, she always noticed how the delivery guy double-checked the address, wondering about the identical orders on the same floor, always at different hours, like a clock.

As afternoon faded into evening, Sam made her way home. The subway car swayed, and she swayed with it, her body instinctively knowing which handrail was loose, avoiding it without conscious thought. At the exit, Sam paused, letting an elderly woman climb on the cart. "Thank you, dear," the woman said, her smile warm. Sam nodded, hurrying on, unaware that the same woman would offer the same smile to Alex later, thanking him for the same courtesy, as she stepped out of the cart at the same station. Alex would grip the same rail, riding the train in the opposite direction, on his way to another night shift.

In the small park near the Horizon Tower, Sam sat heavily on a bench, where she always sat when the weather permitted, to ease away the weight of the day settling on her shoulders. She did not want to carry the horrific stories she heard all day into her serene sanctuary. She watched some friends laughing together on the grass, feeling the hollow ache of loneliness. In a city of millions, how could one feel so isolated? Alex would always occupy the same bench, watching the same patch of grass, empty in the pre-dawn quiet. He'd feel the same ache, never knowing how closely his solitude mirrored another's.

Back at Horizon Tower, Sam collected her mail, flipping through bills and flyers. A colorful leaflet caught her eye: "Building Community Meeting - Get to Know Your Neighbors!" She snorted softly, tossing it in the lobby's recycling bin. The idea of forced socialization after a long day was unappealing. She didn't notice the sign-up sheet, where Alex Thompson, Apt. 1710 had already signed.

Upstairs, Sam ordered her dinner – "The usual, please. Horizon Tower, Apartment 1720" – while Alex prepared for his shift. They both paused at their windows, looking out at the city lights, feeling small against the vast urban landscape.

In the corridor, Mrs. Abernathy from 1705 was just returning from her evening walk as Sam stepped out to collect her dinner.

"Evening, dear," Mrs. Abernathy smiled. "Quiet night tonight."

Sam nodded politely, retreating quickly to her apartment. She never stayed to chat, unaware that Mrs. Abernathy treasured these brief interactions, collecting them like precious stones in the long, lonely hours.

"Not like that nice young man from 1710," Mrs. Abernathy murmured to herself as Sam's door closed. "Always has time for a word, that one."

At the elevator door, Alex checked his watch. Right on time. The doors opened, and he nodded to Mr. Rossi from 1704, who was just returning with his grocery bags.

"Evening, Alex," Mr. Rossi grinned. "Off to save lives?"

Alex smiled back, helping him out of the elevator. "Just doing my job, Mr. Rossi. Need a hand with those bags?"

"No, no, I'm fine. You go on, don't be late. And Alex?" Mr. Rossi's eyes twinkled. "That lawyer from 1720 could learn a thing or two from you about neighbourliness."

Alex chuckled, waving goodbye as the elevator doors closed. He didn't know any lawyer, but he supposed big city life made some people cold.

The next morning, as Sam was leaving for work, she saw Mrs. Abernathy talking to a handsome man about her recent doctor's visit. "Now, remember to take those pills with food, Mrs. A. And call me if you need anything, okay?"

"Oh, Alex, what would we do without you? You're an angel in this concrete jungle."

Their voices faded as they moved down the hallway towards their respective apartments. Sam stepped out, thoughtful. She'd lived here for years but couldn't name a single neighbour. When had she become so isolated? Not that she did not enjoy her privacy, but the walls she built to safeguard it had become her prison.

In the lobby, Sam noticed a book left over on a small counter: "Community Nursing: Caring for Your Neighborhood." She picked it out, curiosity piqued. Inside the cover was a name: Alex Thompson, Horizon Tower, Apt. 1710. On impulse, she took it with her. That night, as Sam read about community care and Alex tended to patients, something shifted. The walls of their isolated existences gained the faintest crack.

Days passed. Sam found herself noticing things she'd overlooked for years. The doorman's name tag: "Hi, I'm Carl!" The community board in the lobby, full of messages and offers of help. The same elderly woman at the subway station, always with a kind word. One day, Alex, returning from a brutal shift, found a note taped to his door. "I think this is yours. Thank you for caring. - S, Apt. 1720" His nursing book was on the floor, a business card tucked inside. Samuel & Associates, Law Offices. Sarah Anderson, Partner.

"How thoughtful of her!" Alex thought cheerfully. "I thought I had lost it!”

For the first time in years, both Sam and Alex felt a spark of connection to the world around them. Even though their days began and ended in mirror image, a cosmic ballet of near misses and shared spaces, they both began to see the invisible threads that had always linked them to their community, to each other.

The Horizon Tower stood like a monolith against the city skyline, its countless windows reflecting the fading daylight. Inside, lives unfolded in parallel, separated by mere walls yet isolated by the relentless rhythm of urban existence. In the vastness of the city, in the anonymity of Horizon Tower, two strangers had unwittingly shared a life. And now, with the smallest gesture, they had begun to forge a real connection.

As a new day dawned, the corridors of Horizon Tower didn't seem quite so empty. The city outside, always rushing, always moving, paused for just a moment. And in that pause, two people who had walked the same path alone for so long took the first step towards walking it together.

October 11, 2024 15:33

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James McAlpine
08:00 Dec 14, 2024

Loneliness can be a serious problem in cities. I think, that Alex and Sam might have become overly ambitious with their careers. Commitments to employers might have become rituals, and friendships might have fallen out of fashion. I liked the use of the Horizon Tower to centralize the story. Emotional separation at the large apartment building was a strong springboard to dissociate Alex and Sam. Bystanders on the seventeenth floor interestingly provided psychological background about Alex, while Sam's behavior with the nursing book prov...

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Kashira Argento
08:20 Dec 14, 2024

I have lived in a condo of two apartment buildings, 40 stories, 10 apartments on every level. I guess it was a community of around 2000 persons (give or take) in a small space, like a hive. We greeted each other in the elevator, nothing more than that. I lived there for 2 years and I never learnt a single name! This story is experienced more than anything...

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