For Better or Worse

Submitted into Contest #281 in response to: Write a story from the POV of a non-human character.... view prompt

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Fiction Friendship Drama

Master Meow lives in a lovely, comfortable apartment in Toyko with his human companion, Mr. Sato. Mr. Sato is retired and lives on a small pension. He has enough to keep himself and Master Meow comfortable and well-fed.

Master Meow is a beautiful white and light brown cat, part Persian and part Angora. He is very fluffy. He spends his day grooming and purring on a satin pillow in the window. He also has a very high opinion of himself.

He loves it here because his food dish is always full of fresh red salmon, his water bowl is changed three times a day with clean spring water, and a small plate of snacks is available whenever he wants. In the corner is a toy box with all kinds of toys to play with, and once a week, Mr. Sato gives him a tiny gray toy mouse that smells odd. It makes his head feel light and funny. His pupils expand so large that he swears he can see into infinity. Yes, life is good for Master Meow, and to think all he has to do to repay Mr. Sato is to tolerate him.  It doesn’t matter because Mr. Sato loves him. Don’t get Meow wrong, for there are times when he is feeling somewhat affectionate and will allow Mr. Sato to stroke him a little and scratch his ears. Yes, Master Meow is sure that life couldn’t be any better than this.

One day, while sitting on his pillow, Master Meow feels quite concerned that Mr. Sato hasn’t returned home from grocery shopping. This is evident by the way his tail is thrashing about. Like a sentinel in a watchtower, Master Meow surveys the street below through half-open eyes. Perturbed, he thinks, “Where is he? That man is at least five minutes late. That’s not like him.” Master Meow’s eyes widen slightly. “Oh, this is just great! It is starting to rain. I hope he brought his umbrella with him! I feel like sitting on his lap, but I won’t if it is wet. I hate that!” Meow sits straight, nearly pressing his flat, round face against the glass. It’s hard to tell who’s who under all the passing umbrellas. At long last, he sees Mr. Sato’s umbrella turn up the front steps and lays back down. He assumes an expression of calm indifference to hide his anxiety.

 Mr. Sato pauses to shake the rain from his umbrella before entering. Once inside, he walks to the kitchen table to put down his packages.

“I’m sorry I’m late, but something unexpected happened. I hope you’ll forgive me, but I have a good reason.” Hanging his coat on the back of the chair, he reaches into a grocery bag and takes something out. He holds a white ball cupped in his hands as he approaches Master Meow.

“Look, Master Meow. Look what I have found!”   Meow turns and looks. He gives Sato a sharp meow of disapproval, for the curly white ball smells strange. 

Master Meow’s nose barely touches the object when he hisses, “No! Can it be?  A-a DOG!?!” 

As Mr.Sato explains how he found the puppy hiding in a doorway, looking scared, he admits he just had to take him home. The puppy opens its sad, big brown eyes and looks directly at Master Meow. Meow’s green eyes narrow menacingly. Mr. Sato places the tiny pup on the floor before the cat. “See, Master Meow, isn’t he just adorable? Because he is so white, I will name him Yuki, which means snow. Don’t you think that’s a cute name?”

Master Meow stares and hisses at Mr. Sato. “No! I don’t think it is a cute name. I don’t even think it’s a cute thing. What were you thinking, bringing a dog into my home? You’ve always had a soft spot for strangers, like when you bought that canary. The damn thing squawked constantly and threw seeds all over the floor. They stuck to my paws and got caught in my elegant fur. We’ll never know how it got frightened to death, but thank God it’s gone!”

Yuki staggers toward Meow on oversized puppy paws and woofs sharply at him. “Hello. Are you my big brother?”

Master Meow’s pupils widen in terror. As the sweet little puppy approaches, Meow reaches out and strikes the puppy’s head with a series of quick slaps. Yuki laughs and rushes at Meow. “Yeah! Let’s play!” Astonished, Meow backs away and continues to deliver fast but not damaging blows. Mr. Sato reprimands Meow, “Oh, come now, Master, don’t be like that. He’s only a baby and wants to play.”

I don’t play! Get rid of that thing now!” Meow rumbles as he jumps up on the armchair to get away. Yuki tries to follow and repeatedly jumps to no avail. Meow glares satisfactorily at Yuki’s failed attempts. Turning his attention to Sato, he complains in a series of short, sharp meows, “You have until noon tomorrow to bring that thing to the pound, or else find me a new home.!” With that, Meow leaps from the chair and races into the bedroom, where he jumps onto the bed. Tucking his front paws beneath his chest, he closes his eyes as his tail whips back and forth angrily. Of course, Mr. Sato doesn’t understand and reassures Yuki that he and Master Meow will be great friends soon.

Master Meow stays steadfast in his disdain for Yuki and uses every opportunity to attack him. What frustrates Meow the most is that after five years, the stupid dog still thinks Meow is playing! Meow has given up on trying to keep the dog out of his bed. Even though Yuki is grown up now, he is still not any larger than Meow himself. Meow won’t admit it but finds sleeping with Yuki somewhat comfortable. Mr. Sato always smiles when he hears Master Meow loudly purring when he passes the two of them that way.

One day, Master Meow is staring in disgust at one of his favorite jingle balls, all covered with spit and chew marks, when he smells something strange. He meows loudly for Mr. Sato, then remembers that Sato is gone for the day. “Ah, yes. Now that I recall, Sato put out extra food and water for us both. That idiot dog has already eaten all of his and drank over half the water! Still, what is the smell?”

Meow hears the sound of toenails scraping madly across the floor as Yuki comes flying around the corner, barking frantically.  “There’s a fire in Daddy’s bedroom! We’ve got to get out!” 

Meow’s eyes grow suspicious, “A fire?” “How did that happen? What did you do?”

“I didn’t do anything. It looks like the cord on the alarm clock frayed, and a spark lit the curtains. We’ve got to get out of here now!” The smoke detector sounds the alarm with sharp, loud beeps.  Master Meow’s eyes narrow to slits as he jumps on his pillow and crouches, trembling from nose to tail.

Hearing the smoke alarm, the next-door neighbor calls the landlord and the fire department. The landlord rushes to the door and pounds, shouting furiously, “Sato! Sato!” The doorknob feels warm to his touch. He grabs his key and opens the door. The room is full of thick white smoke.

Yuki pleads with Meow to leave with him. “Please, Meow, there’s a man here who can help us!”

“No, no, I can’t! I’ve never been outside without my carrier. I’m scared!” Where’s Sato? He always takes me out in my carrier! I want Sato!”

Hearing the barking dog, the landlord covers his nose and mouth with his handkerchief and charges through the thick smoke. Finding Yuki, he scoops the little dog up and runs back out of the apartment.

“Put me down! Put me down,” Yuki demands. We’ve got to save my brother!” The landlord rushes down the stairs, clutching Yuki tightly. Outside, he checks to ensure all the other tenants have made it out safely. Racing over to the fire captain and informs him that the fire is in the bedroom and that the apartment is empty. Squirming to get away, Yuki screams, “No, it’s not!” He growls and nips the landlord’s hand. The landlord releases the pup. Running as fast as he can, he races back inside.

From the center of the room, Yuki notices it has gotten worse. “Brother, brother, where are you?” he barks. He hears coughing coming from the closet and dashes to it. He finds Meow collapsed behind the shoe rack. Even though Yuki and Meow are the same size, Yuki is stronger. He grabs Meow by the scruff of his neck and starts dragging him to safety.

One of the firefighters sees the little dog and calls, “Hey, Chief, look at that!” When the captain sees Yuki, he commands, “Get those two out of here!” The firefighter races into the yard and lays Meow down. “He’s not breathing.” Turning to Yuki, he places his big hand on the pup’s little head, “Don’t worry, little buddy, I’ve got just the thing to save him.” As Yuki paces and whines, the firefighter runs to the back of the ambulance and returns with an oxygen mask for small animals. He places the mask over Meow’s muzzle and turns it on. After a tense minute, Meow begins to breathe and opens his pretty green eyes. 

Mr. Sato pushes through the crowd and drops to his knees. He hugs his pets and sobs, “Thank you. Thank you so much for saving my family.”

Yuki can’t stop licking Master Meow. “Are you okay? Are you sure you’re alright?”

Meow responds, “Yes, Yuki, I’m perfectly fine. I must thank you for saving my life. You are truly a good friend.”

Yuki’s ears shoot up. “A good friend! “Like hell, you’re my brother, and I love you!” Master Meow licks the back of his paw and washes the smoke out of his eye. Leaning close to Yuki, he whispers, “Never tell Mr. Sato this, but I love you too.”

December 14, 2024 14:17

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Shirley Medhurst
16:00 Dec 21, 2024

I really enjoyed your tale, Ralph, particularly your many astute observations of feline behaviour e.g. “He assumes an expression of calm indifference to hide his anxiety” So sweet at the end, when Yuki saves Meow who then thanks him (in secret only, of course 😉… Shhh, don't tell anyone!)

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Ralph Aldrich
12:25 Dec 16, 2024

Yes I dressed it up a little

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Mary Bendickson
04:20 Dec 16, 2024

Is this a rerun? Sounds familiar. Good the second time around, too, if it is. If not forgive an elderly lady's memory.🤶

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