Submitted to: Contest #320

A Shelter from the Fog

Written in response to: "Write a story that includes (or is inspired by) the phrase "Out of the woods.”"

Contemporary Fiction Romance

The blank page glared at Clara, a pristine white desert mocking her completely empty mind. For the fifth time that hour, she squeezed the bridge of her nose, a familiar headache blooming behind her eyes. The digital pen felt alien in her hand, a useless stick. She was an illustrator, a creator of whimsical worlds filled with charming woodland creatures and sun-dappled glades. But the well of her imagination had run bone dry, replaced by the choking dust of deadlines and corporate-approved color palettes.

So she had run. She’d rented a tiny, isolated cabin bordering the Stillwood Forest, promising herself a week of digital detox and creative rejuvenation. The irony that she now felt more lost than ever was not lost on her.

"Fresh air," she muttered to the empty cabin, the words tasting like a lie. "Inspiration."

She pulled on her boots and stepped outside. The autumn air was crisp, carrying the scent of damp earth and decaying leaves. The forest was beautiful, a tapestry of gold, rust, and fading green under a soft, overcast sky. But to her, it just looked… tangled. A chaotic mess of lines and shapes she couldn't begin to simplify into her art style. Still, she walked, forcing her feet to move, pushing deeper into the trees on a path that was little more than a deer trail.

She walked without purpose, her mind a static-filled haze, until she realized the light was failing. The soft gray of the afternoon had deepened into a moody twilight, and a thick, pearlescent fog was rolling in, swallowing the trees and muffling all sound. She turned, expecting to see the path, but found only an identical wall of fog-shrouded trunks in every direction. A cold, sharp icicle of panic pierced through her numbness. She was lost. Truly, hopelessly lost.

Her heart hammered against her ribs. She spun in a slow circle, the identical, ghostly shapes of the trees disorienting her completely. This was a stupid, city-girl mistake. She was going to freeze out here, a cautionary tale for overworked artists. Just as a sob began to build in her throat, she saw it.

Through the thickest part of the fog, a faint, golden light flickered.

It was so small, so impossibly warm in the encroaching cold, that for a moment she thought she’d imagined it. But it flickered again, a steady, welcoming pulse. With nothing but blind hope to guide her, Clara stumbled toward it.

The light led her to a small cottage, nestled so perfectly into the woods it seemed to have grown there. It was made of dark, moss-covered logs, with a plume of fragrant woodsmoke curling from a stone chimney. The light came from a window box filled with late-blooming marigolds. Without a second thought, she scrambled onto the small porch and knocked, her knuckles rapping loudly in the sudden hush.

The door opened, and a man stood silhouetted in the warm light. He was tall, with a kind, weathered face and a beard the color of autumn leaves. He wore a simple flannel shirt, its sleeves rolled up to reveal strong forearms dusted with sawdust. He didn't look surprised or alarmed, only… patient.

"Lost?" he asked. His voice was deep and calm, like the gentle rumble of a distant river.

Clara could only nod, tears of relief finally spilling over and tracing cold tracks through the grime on her cheeks.

"Well, come on in," he said, stepping back. "No sense letting the cold in with you. I'm Finn."

The air inside was a different world, thick with the scent of cedar shavings, drying herbs, and something sweet like cinnamon. A cast-iron stove in the corner radiated a gentle, bone-deep warmth that began to melt the icy knot of panic in her chest. The cottage was one room, filled with stacks of books, shelves of strange glass jars, and everywhere—on the mantel, on the tables, on the floor—were carvings of animals. Exquisitely detailed, impossibly lifelike figures of foxes, owls, and badgers, each one seeming to hold a spark of life in its polished wooden eyes.

"You're a woodcarver," Clara breathed, her artist's soul stirring for the first time in months.

"Among other things," Finn said with a small smile. He handed her a thick, woolen blanket and a steaming mug. "Chamomile and honey. It'll help with the shock."

She wrapped her frozen fingers around the mug, the ceramic warming her to the core. The tea was sweet and floral, a taste of sunshine in the foggy twilight. She drank it while he busied himself at the stove, ladling a thick, savory-smelling stew into a pair of wooden bowls. They ate in comfortable silence, the only sounds the crackle of the fire and the gentle clinking of their spoons.

With the warmth and food chasing away the last of her fear, Clara finally found her voice. "I'm Clara. I rented the Miller cabin for the week. I was trying to… find something. Inspiration, I guess."

Finn looked at her, his eyes, the color of moss, seeming to understand more than she'd said. "Sometimes you find it," he said, gesturing with his spoon to his menagerie of carvings. "And sometimes, it has to find you."

He let her sleep on a cot near the fire, piled high with handmade quilts. She fell asleep to the scent of woodsmoke and the rhythmic, soothing sound of his knife shaving away at a small block of pine.

The next morning, the fog had lifted. Finn walked her back to her cabin, navigating the woods with an easy, innate sense of direction. But the forest looked different now. He pointed out things she’d never have noticed—the intricate lace of a spiderweb, beaded with dew; the vibrant, almost neon green of moss growing on the north side of a fallen log; the way a particular type of mushroom always grew in a perfect circle. He wasn't showing her grand vistas; he was showing her tiny, perfect worlds.

"Thank you," she said when they reached the edge of her clearing. The words felt inadequate. "For everything."

"The forest gives us what we need," he said, his gaze warm. "Sometimes that's a mushroom for a stew. Sometimes, it's a safe place to shelter from a fog."

Clara knew he was talking about more than the weather.

She didn't see him for the next two days. But she didn't stay inside. She went back into the Stillwood, but this time, she moved slowly. She left her tablet and pen behind. She looked for the small things, the details Finn had shown her. She felt the rough bark of a pine, traced the delicate veins on a fallen maple leaf, and watched a busy squirrel prepare its winter hoard. The tangled chaos she'd seen before was slowly resolving itself into a million tiny, perfect compositions.

On the third day, she took a deep breath and walked back to his cottage, a thermos of hot coffee in her hand. He was sitting on his porch, carving a tiny, sleeping fox. He smiled when he saw her, as if he’d been expecting her all along.

They spent the rest of the week together. He taught her the names of the trees and the calls of the birds. She told him about the pressures of her job, the hollow feeling of creating art for a committee instead of for herself. He would listen, his hands never ceasing their patient, loving work of coaxing life from wood.

One afternoon, sitting by a babbling creek, she pulled a small sketchbook from her pocket—a real one, with paper pages. While he whittled, she began to draw. She didn't draw a scene for a greeting card or a character for an app. She drew his hands, strong and gentle, as they worked. She drew the sleeping fox taking shape under his blade. She drew the pattern of the ferns growing by the water’s edge. The lines flowed from her pencil with an ease she hadn't felt in years.

On her last day, a gentle rain pattered on the roof of her cabin. She was packed, her bags by the door, but she felt a profound reluctance to leave. There was a knock. It was Finn, a small, cloth-wrapped object in his hands.

"A parting gift," he said.

She unwrapped it. It was the sleeping fox, carved from warm, fragrant pine, so small it fit perfectly in the palm of her hand. Its tiny form was so peaceful, so exquisitely rendered, it made her ache.

"I can't take this," she whispered. "It's beautiful."

"It's already yours," he said softly. "It wanted to be with you." His hand gently covered hers, his fingers warm over the smooth wood of the fox. "You don't have to go back to the way things were, you know."

Tears welled in her eyes. "I feel like I just… I finally feel like I’m out of the woods."

His thumb brushed a tear from her cheek. "Good," he murmured, his moss-green eyes holding hers. "Because that’s where I was hoping you'd stay."

She looked from his warm, hopeful face to the tiny, peaceful fox in her hand. The blank pages no longer scared her. The city deadlines seemed a world away. She was an illustrator, a creator of whimsical worlds. And for the first time in a very long time, she felt like she was finally living in one. She leaned forward and kissed him, the taste of rain and fresh starts on her lips.

Posted Sep 13, 2025
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Helen A Howard
17:23 Sep 22, 2025

Great story and atmosphere.

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Pamela Beach
00:38 Sep 23, 2025

Thank you!

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