The soft screams of a newborn girl pierced the stillness of the forest, mingling with the rustle of leaves and the distant call of unseen creatures. This was not the best place to give birth but her mother had no other choice. Hidden beneath the protective canopy of ancient trees, she clutched her newborn, her heart racing with a mixture of joy and trepidation. Beside her, the father, an outcast marked by society’s disdain, held his breath. He knew what this new life would inherit in a world that judged worth by the marks upon one’s skin. As the sunlight filtered through the branches, casting dappled patterns on the forest floor, the air hummed with possibility and foreboding, hinting at the struggles that awaited their daughter. She would bear the mark of her father. An inescapable fate.
Although her mothers mark was not the same, it would not matter. They knew this but they hoped, even prayed that she would be spared this fate. For the outcast mark, the lowest ranking mark one can be assigned, would ensure a miserable life for their innocent baby girl. Everyone who bears that mark is destined to a life of servitude. A life that will never truly be their own. It was commonly believed that these people were a disease, a plight of society. A mistake. An untouchable class not worthy of drinking the same water, living in houses or even reproducing.
They were fortunate—at least, as fortunate as an outcast could be. Her mother bore the mark of the healer class: a staff entwined with a serpent. It granted her a rare privilege—privacy. No one questioned her pregnancy. Had they known the child’s father belonged to the outcast class, she would have never been allowed to keep her baby. It wouldn’t matter that she loved him. But now that her daughter was here, returning home would be too dangerous. But, where would they go? There was a tough decision to be made, one that would cement her daughter's fate. Hiding in the forest, living off the land, was a fool’s dream—one that would only end in starvation or discovery. Fleeing to a neighboring realm was just as perilous; there was no way to know if they would be given sanctuary or sent back in chains
Was staying really their only option? Could she truly condemn their innocent little girl to a life where the world would always see her mark before her soul, before the person she was and the woman she would become?
Her mind was so consumed by her daughter's future that, for a moment, she almost forgot the grim fate awaiting her lover. Staying meant his death. The laws were clear—outcasts could not reproduce. To create more of their kind was to invite swift and merciless punishment. If they were found out, a mob would come for him, and they would not be kind. She refused to picture it.
Her gaze met his, and in that moment, she knew he had already reached the same conclusion.
"You know what we have to do," he said, his voice unsteady but firm.
Tears burned her eyes as she nodded, the truth crashing over her like a wave. There was no other way.
She would return home with her baby.
But she would return alone.
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The cold, grimy water sloshed over the edges of the bucket as she scrubbed the stone steps, her fingers raw from the harsh soap. Her knees ached from hours spent kneeling, but she knew better than to stop. The house belonged to one of the higher-ups—a merchant. She could tell from the mark that adorned his hand, a coin that shimmered gold in the light, a cruel reminder of the wealth that would never be shared. People like him decided the fates of people like her.
One wrong move, one moment of hesitation, and he could have her tossed into the streets without a second thought. The outcasts had no rights, only the mercy of those above them—and mercy was a rare thing in this world.
She scrubbed harder, her breath steady, her expression blank. She had learned early on that showing emotion was dangerous. The moment she let her frustration slip, someone would remind her of her place.
Sixteen years old and already she had learned that people like her didn’t get kindness, only orders. She was tolerated, not accepted, and only because her mother’s mark had granted her a place in this world. But the healer’s mark wasn’t hers. The mark etched into her own skin told a different story, one she had no way to escape.
She was her father’s daughter.
A child of an outcast.
And that was all anyone ever saw.
“Scrub harder, girl,” a sharp voice snapped from above. She flinched and bit her tongue, forcing herself to nod. Obedience kept her safe. Silent suffering kept her alive.
As she worked, her gaze flickered to the street beyond the estate’s gate. The outcasts huddled together, their clothes ragged, their faces worn with exhaustion. Some bartered for scraps; others simply sat, waiting for a day that would never change.
A lump formed in her throat. Was this all her life would ever be? Cleaning the filth of those who would never see her as more than the stain beneath their boots?
She swallowed hard and turned back to her work.
Dreams were dangerous things in a world that had already decided what she was worth.
The day dragged on in a haze of exhaustion and silent endurance.
By midday, her arms trembled from scrubbing, her fingernails blackened from dirt that would never fully wash away. The merchant’s family walked past her without so much as a glance—until his son, a boy not much older than she was, sneered down at her.
“You missed a spot,” he mocked, echoing his mother’s earlier words.
But he wasn’t content with just that. A moment later, something wet splattered against the stone in front of her. A half-eaten piece of fruit, discarded as if she were no better than the filth she cleaned.
Heat burned in her chest, but she swallowed her anger, forcing herself to keep scrubbing. She couldn’t react.
Another piece of fruit hit her shoulder. Then another. Juice dripped down her arm, sticky and cold.
Still, she said nothing.
Because what could she say?
She didn’t stop working until the sun hung low in the sky, until her knees throbbed and her fingers bled. Only then was she allowed to leave, trudging home through the streets where the outcasts huddled in alleys and begged for scraps.
She kept her head down, moving quickly. The less time she spent in the open, the better. But she could feel them watching—always watching.
The first blow came from behind. A fist slammed into her back, sending her sprawling forward, her hands scraping against the rough cobblestone.
Laughter echoed around her.
“Where do you think you’re going, filth?”
She knew the voice. She had heard it before, jeering from the mouths of those who walked the streets without fear. She tried to push herself up, but another kick landed in her ribs, knocking her breath away.
“Disgusting little wretch,” one of them spat. “You think you belong here? You think you deserve to walk among us?”
Hands yanked at her hair, forcing her head back. A familiar face loomed over her, eyes glinting with cruel amusement.
“You should know your place by now.”
The first punch split her lip. The second sent her head snapping sideways, her vision blurring. She barely felt the next few blows—her body was too numb, too broken. Her ears rang with their laughter, with the wet sound of fists against flesh.
Then, just as quickly as it started, it was over. They left her in the dirt, coughing, trembling, blood pooling between her fingers. She heard their footsteps retreat, their laughter fading into the night.
She didn’t move for a long time. Just lay there, staring up at the darkening sky, tasting iron on her tongue.
Eventually, she forced herself to her feet. Each step home was agony, but she didn’t stop.
Her mother was already asleep when she stepped inside their tiny dwelling, the air thick with the scent of damp wood and stale bread. In the quiet of the night, she fell to her knees, clasped her hands together, and whispered into the darkness.
“Please,” she murmured. “Let me be something else. Anything else. I don’t care what it takes—I just want them to suffer the way I have.”
She squeezed her eyes shut, desperation curling around her like a vice.
---
When she woke, something was different.
The air crackled, thick with a strange energy. Her heart pounded as she sat up, her breath hitching. Her hand trembled as she looked down at her wrist, at the mark that had defined her misery for sixteen years.
But it was no longer there.
In its place was a new mark.
A crown.
The mark of the ruler.
Her pulse roared in her ears. Impossible. This was impossible. And yet, as she curled her fingers, she felt power thrumming beneath her skin, coiling and waiting to be used.
A slow, wicked smile stretched across her lips.
She would never scrub another step again.
And those who had tormented her?
They would kneel.
---
The first taste of power was intoxicating.
She stormed through the merchant’s estate, no longer a servant but something far greater. The moment the guards saw the mark on her wrist, they fell into bows, their eyes wide with terror.
The merchant himself stammered when she entered his home unannounced, his family shrinking back as she stepped forward.
“You,” she said, her voice smooth as silk. “On your knees.”
He obeyed without question.
A rush of satisfaction surged through her. How quickly fear replaced arrogance. How easily power shifted when the roles were reversed.
The merchant’s son cowered behind his mother, the same boy who had thrown food at her just the day before. She took slow, deliberate steps toward him, drinking in his trembling form.
“Do you remember me?” she asked, tilting her head.
He nodded frantically.
“Good.”
She raised her hand, and power crackled at her fingertips. She didn’t know how she knew what to do—only that she did. The golden light surged forward, wrapping around the boy like invisible chains, squeezing tight. He gasped, clawing at his throat as panic filled his eyes.
His mother screamed.
And she laughed.
She had begged for this power. Now it was hers.
And she would make them suffer.
–--
That night, as she sat atop her throne—a throne that had belonged to someone else just hours before—the air shifted around her.
A figure stepped from the shadows, cloaked in robes darker than midnight. Their face was obscured, but she could feel the weight of their gaze.
"You prayed," the god said, voice smooth as a whisper. "And I answered."
She lifted her chin, unafraid. "You did."
A pause. Then—"Every wish comes with a price."
Her fingers curled against the armrest of her throne. "What price?"
The god chuckled, the sound neither warm nor kind. "You'll see soon enough."
And then they were gone.
But even in their absence, their words lingered.
–--
The first time she made someone kneel before her, it was thrilling.
The second time, it was satisfying.
The third, fourth, fifth—it became effortless.
With each act of cruelty, the mark burned hotter against her skin, feeding on the fear she inspired, the power she wielded. At first, she told herself it was justified. She was simply righting the wrongs, balancing the scales. But soon, justice blurred into vengeance, and vengeance blurred into something far worse—something insatiable.
She no longer flinched at the cries of those who begged for mercy. She barely even heard them anymore. Their pain, their suffering, their obedience—it all became background noise to the only thing that mattered: control.
The city that had once scorned her now bent to her will. The merchants who had sneered at her now emptied their pockets at her command. The nobles who would have had her scrubbing their floors now bowed as she passed.
She had won.
---
One evening, she stood at the palace balcony, looking down at the streets below. The outcasts were no longer cowering in alleys, but they didn’t look free, either. They bowed just like the rest of them, whispering her name like a prayer. Or a curse.
She tried to remember why she had wanted this.
But the memory was hazy, slipping through her fingers like smoke. Had her mother been kind? Gentle? What had her voice sounded like? What had her touch felt like?
The mark on her wrist pulsed, and a cold emptiness filled her chest.
It didn’t matter.
None of it mattered.
---
The god stood at the foot of her bed, their face obscured by shifting darkness. The same god who had granted her wish. The one who had given her everything she had asked for.
“Every wish comes with a price,” the god murmured. “And yours has already been paid.”
A pit opened in her stomach. “What did you take from me?”
The god stepped closer, their form shifting like smoke. When they spoke, their voice was soft, almost amused.
“You already know.”
Her breath caught.
---
As the days bled into weeks, the power that once exhilarated her became a dark void, consuming every trace of her humanity. Each act of cruelty further severed the ties to her past—her childhood, her mother, her compassion. She no longer hesitated, no longer questioned the screams and pleas that echoed in the halls of her palace.
Her mark pulsed with a sickening glow, feeding off the fear she instilled in others, and it fueled her insatiable hunger. But it was not enough.
The city, once vibrant and full of life, became a mere backdrop for her descent into madness. The outcasts, whom she had once longed to protect, now were nothing more than pawns in her game of power. She sought not just to control them but to obliterate the very system that had oppressed her.
The day came when she stood atop the palace, overlooking the sprawling city beneath her—a city that had been built on the backs of the outcasts and the nobility alike. Her heart, or what remained of it, thudded in her chest, a metronome counting down to chaos.
With a flick of her wrist, the mark burned like fire, and the streets below ignited with chaos. Waves of power surged from her, crackling through the air like lightning. Buildings crumbled, their foundations shaking under the weight of her fury.
The people—nobles, merchants, outcasts—screamed as they scrambled to escape, but there was no refuge from the storm she unleashed. She reveled in the destruction, in the way the old class system shattered like glass beneath her wrath.
One by one, she hunted them down. The merchant whose son had mocked her, the noble who had cast her aside, the guards who had once enforced their laws—all fell before her, their blood painting the cobblestones. She didn’t stop to consider their lives; she didn’t care who was guilty or innocent. In her eyes, they were all complicit in a system that had sought to crush her.
Her laughter echoed through the chaos, a haunting melody that rose above the cries of despair. Power surged within her, wild and intoxicating. But with each life she extinguished, a flicker of her humanity faded further into the abyss. She was no longer the girl who had prayed for change—she had become the harbinger of destruction, a force that knew no mercy.
And still, it wasn’t enough.
The night fell heavy with ash and sorrow as she approached the heart of the city. Here lay the grand hall where the ruling elite had once convened, where decisions had been made that had doomed her people. She could sense the last vestiges of power lingering there, and she intended to take it all.
Pushing through the crumbling doors, she was met with the remnants of the council—the few who remained, trembling in their seats, eyes wide with horror.
And as she unleashed her fury, she felt the last shreds of her humanity dissolve into the ether, leaving only a monster in its wake.
The hall crumbled around them, and the world outside echoed with the sounds of a civilization collapsing. With each scream, with each flicker of light extinguished, she realized she had achieved her goal: the destruction of the class system, the eradication of those who had once held power over her.
Yet, in that moment of victory, a chilling silence fell. As the dust settled and the cries faded into the night, she stood amidst the ruins, a ruler with no subjects, a conqueror with no kingdom.
What had she become?
The mark pulsed on her wrist, but instead of satisfaction, she felt a hollow ache where her heart once beat. She had dismantled the chains that bound her, but in doing so, she had also shattered her own soul.
Alone in the wreckage of a world that had been both her prison and her battleground, she was left to confront the true price of her wish. The god’s laughter echoed in her mind, a cruel reminder that she was now the architect of her own desolation.
And as she stood among the ashes of her past, she understood the weight of her choice. She had become the monster she once feared, and the only thing left in her heart was the darkness she had created.
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