Whisper of Wings

Submitted into Contest #273 in response to: Write a story with the line “Don’t tell anyone.”... view prompt

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Inspirational Suspense Christian

The Whisper of Wings


The night fell quietly over the small town of Crescent Hollow, where the stars shimmered like diamonds scattered across velvet. It was the kind of town where nothing extraordinary ever happened, where life moved at a slow, predictable pace—until the angel came.


Nathaniel had been sent to Earth with a purpose, though he wasn’t told exactly what it was. Angels rarely were. Their missions were delivered through feeling and intuition, through a deeper understanding that lay far beneath the surface of human reasoning. All he knew was that something in Crescent Hollow needed to be saved.


He took the form of a man, a tall figure with dark, feathered hair and deep-set, silver eyes that seemed to capture the light in strange ways. His earthly disguise was plain enough to blend in, but there was a peculiar grace about him that caused people to turn their heads when he passed. They felt something, but they couldn’t quite place it.


No one knew the truth. No one, except for the little girl.


Her name was Emily. She was eight years old and had always been different from the other children. While they chased butterflies and played in the park, she spent her time staring at the clouds, as if searching for something beyond them. Her parents thought she had an overactive imagination. The truth was, Emily could see what others couldn’t.


It started one cool autumn evening, just as the sun dipped below the horizon, casting the sky in swirls of pink and gold. Emily sat in the front yard of her small house, legs crossed beneath her, gazing up at the clouds when she saw him—Nathaniel, walking down the street with a steady, purposeful stride.


She knew instantly he wasn’t like the others. His presence hummed in the air, as if the very fabric of reality bent around him. His disguise might have fooled others, but not her. She saw the faintest shimmer of wings folded against his back, translucent and glowing, like the thinnest layer of stardust.


“Who are you?” she whispered when he stopped at the end of her yard, as if he had been drawn there by her voice.


Nathaniel’s silver eyes met hers, startled. No human child had ever recognized an angel before. He hesitated for a long moment before stepping closer, kneeling in front of her so their eyes were level.


“My name is Nathaniel,” he said softly, his voice like a breeze rustling through the leaves. “But you mustn’t tell anyone. Do you understand? Don’t tell anyone.”


Emily nodded, wide-eyed, her heart beating fast in her chest. She had never seen anything so beautiful, so utterly otherworldly. The moment she looked into his eyes, she felt a deep knowing—this was a creature not of this world, but of the heavens.


“Why can I see you?” she asked, her voice barely more than a whisper.


Nathaniel smiled gently, though his eyes were full of secrets. “Some souls are more attuned to the divine. Yours is one of them.”


“What’s your mission?” Emily asked, her curiosity outweighing any fear she might have felt.


Nathaniel paused, glancing up at the sky as if seeking guidance from the stars. He didn’t know the full answer yet, but he felt it was important that this girl—this strange, perceptive child—was a part of it.


“I’ve been sent to protect something,” he said carefully. “Something very important.”


Emily furrowed her brow. “Like a treasure?”


Nathaniel shook his head. “Not quite. It’s more like a moment, an event. Something that must not happen—or something that must.”


He stood, offering her a hand, which she took without hesitation. Together, they walked through the quiet streets of Crescent Hollow, his long strides slowing to match her small steps. There was a deep peace in the air, but Nathaniel could feel it—a stirring, a ripple beneath the surface of time and space. The world was about to change, though no one could yet see it.


Except, perhaps, Emily.


Days turned into weeks, and Emily found herself seeing Nathaniel more often. He appeared in different places—outside her school, at the edge of the park, near the bakery on Main Street. Always watching, always waiting. Sometimes they spoke, sometimes they simply sat in companionable silence. Emily never told anyone about him, not even her parents, who had begun to worry about her growing silence and far-off looks.


“What is it you’re waiting for?” Emily asked one afternoon as they sat on the swing set in the empty park.


Nathaniel looked at her, his silver eyes clouded with thought. “A decision,” he said quietly. “Someone is about to make a choice that could change everything.”


“Is it a bad choice?” she asked, her voice trembling.


“I don’t know yet,” Nathaniel replied, his voice heavy with the weight of uncertainty. “But I have to be here when it happens. I have to be ready.”


Emily didn’t fully understand, but she trusted him. She trusted the quiet strength in his voice and the way he seemed to know things beyond the understanding of mortals. She also began to feel that whatever was coming, she had a part to play in it.


The night of the storm arrived without warning. Dark clouds gathered over Crescent Hollow, swirling and brooding like ancient, angry spirits. Thunder rumbled in the distance, growing louder as it approached. The town’s streets were deserted, the windows shuttered, but Nathaniel stood in the center of the square, his eyes fixed on the sky.


Emily, drawn by some invisible force, slipped out of her house and ran through the rain-soaked streets to find him. She stood beside him, her small hand gripping the hem of his coat.


“Is it happening now?” she asked, her voice trembling.


Nathaniel nodded. “The moment is near.”


Just then, a man appeared at the end of the street, walking toward them with a heavy, hurried gait. He was tall and broad-shouldered, with wild eyes and shaking hands. Emily recognized him—it was Mr. Harper, the man who owned the hardware store. She had heard the adults whisper about him, about his troubles and the anger that had been building in him like a storm of his own.


Nathaniel tensed beside her, his eyes narrowing as the man approached.


“What’s he going to do?” Emily whispered.


Nathaniel didn’t answer. He didn’t need to. She could see the desperation in Mr. Harper’s eyes, the weight of the decision hanging over him like a storm cloud.


“Nobody believes me,” Mr. Harper shouted, his voice cracking with emotion. “No one cares about my business, my struggles! I can’t keep going like this!”


Nathaniel stepped forward, placing himself between Mr. Harper and the darkened houses beyond.


“You don’t have to face this alone,” Nathaniel said, his voice calm but filled with unshakable authority.


Mr. Harper stopped, his body trembling as if he was on the edge of some precipice. The rain fell harder, thunder crashing overhead.


“They’re all going to abandon me!” Mr. Harper cried, his voice a mix of fury and despair. “I’ve lost everything!”


“They haven’t abandoned you,” Nathaniel replied softly, stepping closer. “You just can’t see it right now. But there’s always another way.”


For a moment, it seemed as though the world held its breath. Emily could feel the tension in the air, the weight of the choice that hung in the balance.


And then, Mr. Harper’s shoulders sagged. He dropped to the ground, burying his face in his hands as he sobbed. The storm broke, and with it, the tension that had gripped the town for weeks.


Nathaniel stepped forward, kneeling beside the man. “It’s okay to ask for help,” he said gently. “You don’t have to carry this burden alone.”


Emily watched as Mr. Harper slowly raised his head, the anger and despair in his eyes replaced by a glimmer of hope. He looked around, as if noticing for the first time the town that surrounded him, the people who cared even if he couldn’t see it before.


Nathaniel’s wings shimmered faintly in the fading light of the storm, and Emily felt a warmth spreading through the air. It was a moment of connection, of understanding.


“Was that it?” Emily asked, her voice barely above a whisper. “Was that the choice?”


Nathaniel smiled, though it was tinged with sadness. “Yes. It was a moment that could have changed everything—for him, for this town, for many more. But tonight, he chose to reach out instead.”


Emily looked up at him, her eyes full of questions. “Will you leave now?”


Nathaniel knelt beside her, his eyes soft and kind. “Not yet,” he said. “There’s still more to do. But when the time comes, you’ll know.”


And with that, he stood, his wings shimmering faintly in the fading light of the storm, and disappeared into the night, leaving behind only the whisper of wings and the knowledge that, sometimes, the smallest of choices can change the world.


The town of Crescent Hollow would never know how close they had come to losing something precious that night. But Emily knew. And as she grew older, she carried the secret of the angel who had come to save them—an angel only she had seen.

October 20, 2024 02:24

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