The road stretched endlessly before Daniel as he drove through the thick fog, the headlights of his car barely piercing the dense mist. He gripped the wheel tightly, trying to shake the gnawing unease growing in his stomach. Hollow Creek wasn’t even on the map, but the directions had led him here—mile after mile of dark, towering trees lining the narrow, winding road.
He glanced at the crumpled note in the passenger seat, the one he had found tucked inside his jacket pocket that morning. It had no sender, no explanation—just an address and a single line written in hurried, scratchy handwriting:
"You need to come back."
The words made no sense. He had never been to Hollow Creek before.
Or had he?
A strange déjà vu prickled at the back of his mind. Something about this place felt… familiar. But that was impossible. Daniel had spent his entire life in the city. He had no memory of this eerie, forgotten town.
His phone had lost signal miles ago, and his gas gauge was sinking dangerously toward empty. He had no choice but to continue forward, following the barely visible road signs until the fog thinned just enough for him to make out the shape of a town emerging from the gloom.
Hollow Creek.
It was unsettlingly quiet. The streets were empty, the houses old and worn, their windows dark. No movement. No sound. It was as if the entire town was holding its breath.
Daniel parked near what looked like an old general store. The neon "OPEN" sign flickered dimly, casting a sickly glow onto the wet pavement. He stepped out of the car, his boots crunching against gravel, and made his way inside.
The bell above the door jingled as he entered. The store smelled of dust and something faintly metallic. An old man stood behind the counter, watching him with an expression Daniel couldn’t quite place—was it suspicion? Recognition?
“You made it,” the man said.
Daniel hesitated. “Excuse me?”
The man sighed, wiping his hands on a stained rag. “Didn’t think you’d come back.”
A chill ran down Daniel’s spine. There it was again—that strange implication that he should remember this place.
“I think there’s been a mistake,” he said. “I’ve never been here before.”
The old man tilted his head. “Haven’t you?”
Daniel frowned, but before he could respond, the man gestured toward the door.
"You should go to the house," he said. "It’s waiting for you."
Daniel’s pulse quickened. “What house?”
The man just nodded toward the window. Daniel turned to look. Across the street, through the mist, stood an old Victorian house. It was massive, its wooden structure warped with age. Despite its emptiness, something about it felt… expectant.
His breath hitched. The sight of it sent a sharp pain through his temples.
A memory—too fast to grasp—flashed in his mind. A staircase. A locked door. A whisper.
He staggered back, shaking his head. "No. I—I don’t know this place."
The old man’s face remained unreadable. "You will."
—
Daniel stood before the house, his heartbeat pounding in his ears. The closer he got, the heavier the air seemed to become. It smelled of rain and decaying wood.
He pushed the front door open, and it creaked loudly, the sound echoing through the empty halls. Dust covered the floor, undisturbed. It didn’t look like anyone had lived here for years.
And yet, there was something undeniably alive about the house.
Daniel stepped inside. The moment he did, a wave of dizziness washed over him. His vision blurred. The air shifted.
Then—
A laugh.
Faint. A child’s laugh, echoing from somewhere upstairs.
Daniel’s breath caught. He turned sharply, scanning the shadows. Nothing.
His pulse hammered as he forced himself forward, his footsteps echoing in the silence.
A staircase loomed ahead, leading to the second floor.
He didn’t want to go up there.
But his feet carried him forward anyway.
—
The upstairs hallway was lined with closed doors.
At the end of the hall, one door stood slightly ajar.
A voice—small, barely above a whisper—drifted from inside.
"Daniel..."
His chest tightened.
"Come play."
A cold sweat broke across his skin. The voice was familiar.
Too familiar.
He pushed the door open.
Inside was a child’s room. The wallpaper was faded, peeling at the corners. A rocking horse sat in the corner, unmoving. A small bed, perfectly made.
And in the center of the room, a little boy sat on the floor, playing with a set of wooden blocks.
Daniel’s entire body locked in place.
Because the boy…
The boy was him.
Frozen, unable to breathe, Daniel stared at his younger self. The child looked up, smiling.
"You finally came back," the boy said.
Daniel staggered backward, gripping the doorframe. "This isn’t real," he gasped.
The child tilted his head. "You don’t remember, do you?"
The pain in his skull returned, sharper this time. Images flashed—too fast, too much.
Running feet. A dark basement.
A locked door.
Something pounding.
Screaming.
Daniel’s breath turned ragged. "What… what happened here?"
The boy’s smile faded. "You left me."
Daniel shook his head wildly. "No. That’s not—"
"Yes," the boy said. "You left. You forgot. But I never did."
The room darkened. The temperature dropped. The child’s eyes filled with something hollow, something ancient.
"You need to remember," he whispered.
The walls shuddered. The floor groaned beneath Daniel’s feet. He stumbled back into the hallway.
The house was changing. The wallpaper blackened, curling at the edges. Shadows pooled at his feet, creeping toward him.
And then—
A door at the end of the hall swung open violently.
The basement.
A wave of nausea hit him.
No. Not the basement.
He turned to run, but the house wouldn’t let him. The shadows seized his limbs, dragging him forward.
He tried to scream, but the darkness swallowed his voice.
The door slammed shut behind him.
—
The basement was cold.
So much colder than he remembered.
The air smelled of rot and damp earth.
Daniel stood at the bottom of the stairs, staring at the far wall.
A wooden door.
The same one from his memories.
His younger self appeared beside him, his small hand reaching toward the handle.
"You locked the door," the boy whispered. "You said you’d come back."
Daniel’s legs trembled. He didn’t want to do this.
He didn’t want to remember.
But the shadows pressed closer. The house wouldn’t let him go.
With a shaking breath, he reached out and turned the handle.
The door creaked open.
And inside—
A skeleton.
Curled in the corner.
Small.
Too small.
Daniel’s knees buckled. His stomach twisted violently. He knew, before his mind even allowed him to accept it.
The house. The boy.
It was him.
And the bones in the corner…
The brother he had forgotten.
Tears blurred his vision. A sob ripped from his chest.
"I—" His voice cracked. "I didn’t mean to—"
His younger self knelt beside the skeleton, tracing the tiny fingers. "But you did."
The house rumbled, the walls groaning.
"You left me," the boy whispered.
And then—
Darkness.
—
When Daniel opened his eyes, he was outside.
His car sat where he had left it. The house was gone.
As if it had never been there at all.
A breeze whispered through the trees, carrying the echo of a child’s voice.
"You left me."
Daniel collapsed to his knees, the weight of memory crushing him.
He had come back.
But some things could never be undone.
And Hollow Creek would never let him forget again.
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