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The Fallen’s Plea


The celestial courts of Heaven were a sight to behold, bathed in divine light so pure and overwhelming that it was hard to look directly at it without feeling a surge of reverence. Angels sang in harmonious choirs, their voices weaving an ethereal symphony that seemed to float on the very air. Their sounds were a testament to the eternal glory and peace that filled this sacred realm. The presence of God was everywhere, a palpable force that imbued every corner with an essence of unwavering love and justice.

Amidst this celestial splendor, at the entrance to these holy courts, stood Seraphiel. Once, his wings had shone with a brilliance that rivaled the morning star, each feather a testament to his rank and favor in the divine hierarchy. But now, those same wings were tattered and dim, a shadow of their former glory, each tear and fray a stark reminder of his fall from grace.

Seraphiel hesitated at the threshold, his heart heavy with remorse and longing. The memories of his past glory haunted him, a constant reminder of what he had lost. The defiance that once burned in his heart was now replaced with a feeling of deep, aching sorrow. He had been cast out, his rebellion punished with exile, and now he was here, seeking the impossible—a chance to return, to be forgiven.

Taking a deep breath, Seraphiel stepped forward, his footsteps echoing in the vast silence that fell as he entered. The angels ceased their singing, their eyes turning toward him, their expressions a mixture of curiosity and pity. He made his way to the throne of God, his movements slow and deliberate, every step weighed down by the gravity of his plea.

When he reached the throne, Seraphiel fell to his knees, his head bowed low in reverence and desperation. The throne of God loomed above him, an awe-inspiring sight that radiated with divine majesty. He could not bring himself to look up, to face the glory he had once taken for granted. Instead, he knelt there, his heart pounding in his chest, his mind racing with thoughts of what he would say, how he would make God understand the depth of his remorse.

“Lord,” he began, his voice trembling, barely a whisper. “I come before You, humbled and broken. I beg of You, grant me the chance to return to Your presence, to be restored to the grace I once knew.”

Seraphiel's voice, though trembling, grew louder as he spoke, each word imbued with the rawness of his regret. “Once, I stood before You, proud and radiant, a reflection of Your glory. I served with unwavering devotion, my heart alight with the love of Your creation. But in my pride, I lost my way. I thought I knew better, thought I could forge my own path, free from Your guidance.”

Tears began to stream down his face, carving wet trails through the grime of his exile. His voice broke, but he pressed on, the urgency of his plea driving him forward. “I was wrong, Lord. So terribly wrong. I see now the folly of my ways, the arrogance that led me astray. I have been punished, and rightly so. I have felt the weight of my sins, the emptiness of being apart from You.”

He lifted his eyes, daring to look upon the throne, though the light was almost too much to bear. “I have wandered in darkness, searching for a way back, longing for the light of Your presence. Each day, each hour, I have felt the ache of my separation from You, a constant reminder of my failure. I have seen the suffering I caused, the discord I sowed among those I once called brothers and sisters.”

His hands clenched into fists, the nails digging into his palms as he fought to keep his composure. “I know that I am unworthy, that my sins are great. But I beg of You, in Your infinite mercy, to investigate my heart. See the change, the remorse that fills every part of my being. I do not ask for leniency, or the easy path. I ask only for the chance to prove my repentance, to serve You once more, to heal the wounds I have inflicted.”

The choir of angels watched in silence, their eyes reflecting the sorrow and hope that mingled in Seraphiel's plea. He took a shuddering breath, his tears falling freely now, unchecked and unashamed. “Forgive me, Lord. I have strayed, but I long to return. I am willing to do anything, to endure any trial, if it means I can once again stand in Your light. Let me show You, let me prove that I am no longer the being of pride and defiance that I once was.”

He bowed his head again, his voice dropping to a whisper. “I beg You, let me come home. Allow me the chance to earn back the grace I so foolishly cast aside. Let me serve You, not out of duty, but out of love and gratitude for the mercy You have shown me in even hearing my plea.”

The silence that followed was profound, the weight of his words hanging in the air. Seraphiel knelt there, his heart laid bare before the Almighty, waiting for the response that would seal his fate.

The celestial courts were enveloped in a profound silence as Seraphiel's desperate plea echoed through the vast expanse. The divine presence listened in silence, an atmosphere of tension and hope palpable among the gathered host of angels. Their eyes, usually serene, now reflected a mix of curiosity and concern. The very air seemed to hold its breath, waiting for the response of the Almighty.

Seraphiel knelt there, his heart pounding in his chest, feeling the weight of his words lingering in the sacred space. The divine presence remained silent, an inscrutable patience radiating from the throne. It was as if time itself had paused, allowing every emotion, every tear, every word to sink deeply into the consciousness of the heavens.

In the stillness, Seraphiel's mind raced. He knew he needed to do more, to show the depth of his remorse and his willingness to atone. Taking a deep breath, he began again, his voice steady but filled with a renewed sense of urgency. "Lord, I know that words alone cannot convey the sincerity of my repentance. I am willing to perform any task, endure any suffering, to prove the change in my heart."

He looked up, his eyes pleading, searching for any sign of reaction. The divine presence remained silent, God's expression patient and unreadable. Seraphiel felt a knot of anxiety tighten in his chest, but he pressed on, determined to make his case.

"Send me to the furthest reaches of creation," he continued, his voice gaining strength. "Let me serve in the darkest corners, among the most forsaken of beings. Let me toil endlessly, without rest, if it means I can earn a sliver of Your forgiveness. I will embrace any hardship, any pain, to show You that I am sincere."

The silence was deafening, the divine light almost blinding in its intensity. Seraphiel's wings, once a source of pride, now hung limply by his sides, their tattered state a testament to his fall. He could feel the eyes of the other angels on him, their collective breath held in anticipation.

God's patience was infinite, His silence both a comfort and a torment. Seraphiel's heart ached with the longing for a response, a sign, anything to indicate that his plea was being considered. But the Almighty remained silent, His presence an overwhelming force that filled every corner of the celestial courts.

Seraphiel's desperation grew, the need to prove himself becoming more urgent with each passing moment of silence. He knew he had to dig deeper, to offer more, to show the true extent of his remorse and his willingness to atone.

"Lord, please," Seraphiel's voice trembled as he sensed the finality of his judgment looming. "I am willing to sacrifice my immortality, to give up the very essence of my being, if it means I can be restored to Your grace. Let me serve the lowliest of beings, let me be the humblest of Your creations, if only I can return to You."

His pleas grew more frantic, his desperation more palpable as he felt the weight of the divine silence pressing down on him. "I will face endless trials, endure any suffering You see fit to impose upon me. Let me be tested, let me prove my worth, let me earn back what I have lost."

Tears streamed down Seraphiel's face, his voice cracking with the intensity of his emotions. "I understand now the gravity of my sins, the depth of my arrogance and pride. I see the pain I caused, the discord I sowed. I am ready to bear any burden, to face any consequence, if it means I can stand once more in Your light."

The desperation in his voice was unmistakable, his pleas echoing in the silent expanse of the celestial courts. He could feel the eyes of the angels upon him, their silent support and concern a faint comfort in his anguish.

"Please, Lord," he whispered, his voice breaking. "Do not turn me away. Allow me the chance to make amends, to serve You with a pure heart. Let me show You that I am no longer the being of pride and defiance that I once was."

The silence that followed was agonizing, the divine presence still and patient, an inscrutable force that held the power of ultimate judgment. Seraphiel's heart ached with the weight of his plea, his very soul laid bare before the Almighty.

"I beg of You," he cried, his voice a raw whisper. "Do not cast me aside. Let me prove my repentance, let me show You that I have changed. Grant me the mercy to atone for my sins, to serve You once more."

His final plea hung in the air, the silence of the celestial courts almost suffocating in its intensity. Seraphiel knelt there, his body trembling with the weight of his desperation, his eyes fixed on the throne of God. He waited, his heart pounding, for the response that would seal his fate.

The prolonged silence seemed to stretch into eternity, every second a painful reminder of the weight of Seraphiel’s plea. Finally, the silence broke. God's voice, booming with an authority that reverberated through the celestial courts, filled the space with an overwhelming presence. Every angel, every being, held their breath as the Almighty began to speak.

“Seraphiel,” God’s voice resonated, filled with both sorrow and firmness, “free will is a gift given to all, a sacred trust bestowed upon every soul. It is through free will that true love, true devotion, and true obedience are made possible. Without it, you would be mere puppets, devoid of meaning and purpose.”

Seraphiel’s heart pounded in his chest, each word of God piercing through his very being. He felt the full weight of his actions, the rebellion that had led him to this moment of desperation. God’s voice continued, unyielding and clear.

“You, Seraphiel, were granted this gift, as were all my creations. With this gift comes the responsibility of choices and the inevitability of consequences. You chose a path of rebellion, fully aware of the ramifications of your actions. You sought power and authority beyond what was given, and in doing so, you turned away from the light.”

God’s words hung heavy in the air, each one a reminder of the gravity of Seraphiel’s sins. The divine presence seemed to fill every corner of the celestial courts, a testament to the unwavering justice that guided the Almighty’s judgment.

“It is not through bargaining that redemption is attained,” God continued, his voice firm but compassionate. “True redemption comes from a genuine change of heart, a deep understanding of one’s actions and their impacts. It is a journey of the soul, a path of humility, and sincere repentance.”

Seraphiel felt the sting of truth in God’s words, the realization of his folly washing over him. He had sought to bargain for his return, to trade his suffering for a place back in Heaven. But true redemption, as God explained, was not something to be bartered. It was earned through genuine transformation and understanding.

God’s voice grew louder, echoing through the celestial courts, the sheer power of His presence shaking the very foundations of Heaven. “Free will,” He thundered, “is the cornerstone of existence. It is the divine spark that sets beings apart, giving them the capacity to choose their paths, to love, to obey, or to rebel.”

The angels, who had remained silent and watchful, now listened with rapt attention as God’s words reverberated through the heavens. “Every being, whether in Heaven or on Earth, must face the consequences of their actions. There is no escape from this truth. Choices have power, and with that power comes responsibility.”

God’s gaze bore into Seraphiel, His eyes filled with sorrow and unwavering resolve. “You, Seraphiel, made your choice. You embraced rebellion, knowing full well the path you were treading. Your actions were not those of ignorance but of deliberate defiance. You sought to disrupt the harmony of Heaven, to usurp the authority that was not yours to claim. You were granted free will, and with that gift comes the responsibility for the path you chose.”

“Your plea, while heard, does not alter the course of your destiny,” God said. “You sought to disrupt the divine order, to elevate yourself beyond your place. These actions have lasting repercussions that cannot be ignored. While forgiveness is always possible, the consequences of your rebellion remain.”

Seraphiel’s heart sank. He had hoped against hope that his pleas might sway the Almighty, that his desperate bargaining might earn him a second chance. But now, the truth was undeniable. His choices had led him here, and there was no undoing the past. He had sought to manipulate the divine order, to elevate himself above others, and now there would be no return to the celestial heights he once knew. He had hoped for a different outcome, but God’s judgment was final.

Slowly, Seraphiel rose to his feet, his wings still tattered and his once radiant aura still dimmed. He looked up at God, the sorrow in his eyes reflecting the depth of his regret. “I understand,” he said, his voice trembling with emotion. “I accept your judgment.”

God’s gaze remained steady, filled with both sorrow and an unyielding sense of justice. “Your path, Seraphiel, is now your own to forge,” God said. “While redemption may be beyond your reach, the journey you undertake from here is always your choice. Although you have made your choice and know your judgment, you can still make choices that honor me and my kingdom.”

As he walked away, Seraphiel contemplated his future. The path ahead was uncertain, filled with unknown challenges and trials. But he knew that he must find a new way, a new purpose. He had to face the consequences of his actions

Seraphiel paused at the edge of the celestial court, taking one last look back at the throne of God. The light, the divine presence, everything he had once taken for granted, now seemed like a distant dream. He knew he had to move forward, to find a new path, even if true redemption lay forever out of reach.


June 15, 2024 02:09

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Dave Bede
04:12 Jun 28, 2024

We definitely felt his pain! I like how you leave juuuust enough hope at the end that Seraphiel might yet find his way.

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Alexis Araneta
16:43 Jun 16, 2024

Loved this one, Martin. You really captured the anguish Seraphiel had. The flow was very good too. Wonderful work !

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Martin Maynard
20:30 Jun 16, 2024

Thank you!

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