Submitted to: Contest #303

Deceptive Passions - Rage of Betrayal A Tale of Revenge and Emotion

Written in response to: "Write about someone who chooses revenge — even though forgiveness is an option."

Drama Fiction Suspense

This story contains themes or mentions of physical violence, gore, or abuse.

Angela stood frozen at the edge of the cliff, the night wind howling around her like a warning. It yanked at her hair, clawed at her coat, and sent a chill through her bones that had nothing to do with the cold. Below her, the ocean thrashed against jagged rocks, each crashing wave sounding like the echo of a secret finally unleashed. The moon cast a ghostly glow over the water, illuminating the madness below—and the madness inside her. Her heart slammed against her ribs, not just from fear, but fury. A raw, bitter betrayal pulsed through her veins, hot enough to drown out reason. She gripped the crumpled letter tighter in her fist, the words etched into her mind like scars. He lied. He chose her. He ruined everything. And now, in the place where they'd once promised forever, Angela stood alone—on the edge of the truth, and something far more dangerous.

Angela had always been a woman of passion, her heart guiding her through the tapestry of life. She loved fiercely, laughed freely, and held onto the people she cherished with a grip that could rival the strongest of chains. But her world had been turned upside down, her trust broken by the person she had loved the most.

Derek, her husband of nine years, had been her rock, her support, the very center of her existence. They had shared dreams and goals, disclosed secrets that no one else knew, building a life together that seemed invincible. Yet, the fortress of their love had crumbled, demolished by his infidelity.

She discovered his affair in the most gut-wrenching way possible—a text meant for someone else landed right in her inbox. Just a few lines, laced with lust and betrayal, but they hit like a punch to the chest. Angela stared at the message, her hands trembling as the truth sunk in. The words weren’t meant for her, but they burned into her soul all the same. When she confronted Derek, her pain erupted into fury—her voice shook, her eyes blazed, and every word she spoke felt like fire. He didn’t deny it. He didn’t even try. His face was painted with shame, his apologies weak and hollow, like patching a bullet wound with a Band-Aid. But it was too late. The damage was done, and the man she thought she knew had crumbled into a stranger before her very eyes.

In that moment, Angela made a decision. Forgiveness was a luxury she could no longer afford. Revenge, sweet and devastating, would be her path forward.

Angela’s mind was racing back and forth with rage. The betrayal Derek inflicted on her caused her to choose to get back instead of moving on. He was going to regret the day he broke our vows. Derek’s life was going to be forever changed after the plan went into effect leaving him exposed and vulnerable. For months, Derek attempted to apologize and fight for the marriage, but it was too late. Angela was on a spiral of revenge. She gathered all the evidence that he was still cheating with the woman named April. Derek promised he was cheating anymore but the photos and videos proved otherwise. Angela had everything she needed. It was time!

One evening as the wind blew and the night glow took over the streets, she executed her plan. Angela sent a text to April from Derek’s phone to meet at a specific destination. She sent a copy of that message to Derek from April. They both responded “okay”.

Angela stood still in the center of the abandoned warehouse, shadows creeping along the cracked concrete walls like silent witnesses. The air was thick with dust and tension, every breath tasting like rust and revenge. Her heart pounded in her chest, but the rage pumping through her veins numbed every ounce of fear. Two chairs sat beneath a flickering overhead light—facing each other like this was some twisted interrogation scene.

Then came the sound—footsteps.

First hesitant, then clearer.

Derek and April stepped inside; their voices low with confusion… until they saw her. And more importantly, the gun she was holding—raised, steady, and aimed right between their eyes.

Derek froze mid-step. April gasped, stumbling back, her eyes wide with terror as the cold reality slammed into her.

"Sit," Angela barked, her voice sharp and unfamiliar even to her own ears. She tossed a pair of handcuffs at April’s feet, the metal clattering on the floor like a warning shot.

“Put. Them. On.”

April burst into tears, her hands shaking uncontrollably, while Derek stood frozen in disbelief, his mouth opening but no words forming. The silence that followed was deafening—broken only by the sound of Angela cocking the gun, signaling that this was no bluff.

This was payback. And they had just stepped into her trap. April’s sobs echoed through the empty warehouse; each one laced with panic. She dropped to her knees, fumbling with the cuffs as her mascara streaked down her cheeks. The trembling in her fingers made it nearly impossible, but she managed to lock one wrist, then the other, her breath hiccupping through gasps of fear.

Derek finally snapped out of his trance, stepping forward with his hands slightly raised. “Angela, what the hell is this? You’ve lost your damn mind—”

Click.

The sound of Angela releasing the safety on the gun made him freeze mid-sentence.

“Say one more word, Derek. I swear to God; I’ll decorate this place with your lies.”

Her voice was calm now—too calm. Like the storm before the tornado hits.

“You thought I wouldn’t find out? You thought I’d just sit back and take it?” she spat, pacing between the chairs like a predator circling her prey. “You made me out to be the fool. You both did. Playing in my face.”

She forced Derek into the second chair with a sharp nod of the gun. He hesitated, but one look at her eyes—wild, unblinking—told him she wasn’t bluffing. He sat down slowly, hands clenched into fists on his lap.

Angela backed up just enough to see them both, two liars cuffed and cornered like rats.

“You’re going to sit here,” she said, eyes burning holes through them, “and you’re going to hear everything. Every tear I cried. Every time I doubted my worth. Every night I thought it was me.”

Her voice cracked then, just for a second—but the fury held strong.

“You broke something in me,” she whispered, “so now I’m breaking something in you.”

And with that, she pulled out her phone… and hit record. Not for justice. Not for clout. For the truth.

The red light from the phone blinked as Angela walked around the two talking. “Both of you caused this to happen!” Derek began to try and apologize which pissed Angela off even more. A sharp clang echoed through the room as metal cracked against the side of Derek's head, silencing him mid-sentence. April screamed and started begging for her life.

“Please! Please don’t kill me! I didn’t know he was married.” She cried.

Everything was going red in the eyes of Angela. “You knew! You know how I know you know because I saw the messages of him telling you. Your response was you didn’t care!”

April eyes were as wide as her fate was becoming more realistic. She made eye contact with Derek and put her head down. Angela began to ask questions to Derek and April for them to confess what they did. In Angela’s mind, she wanted to hear the details and a way of reason. When Derek, couldn’t provide the answer she began to hit him over and over with the gun.

Blood started spilling out of his wounds. She turned her attention to April who was trying to break free.

“Just stop already! When I’ve gotten my answers, I’ll let you free.” Angela said.

Like a fool April believed her. “Okay, what do you want to know?”

Angela began to ask the questions about their affair. By the look on Derek’s face, he didn’t want her to speak. April started to explain the timeline which caused immediate anger. It started around the time she was pregnant.

“Did he tell you he was having a baby?” Angela questioned.

The silence stretched longer, heavier, each second more suffocating than the last. Neither Derek nor April dared to speak, both trapped in the weight of their guilt and fear. Angela’s grip on the gun tightened, her patience slipping like sand through cracked fingers.

“I said answer me!” she snapped, her voice slicing through the tension like a blade.

When they still didn’t respond, Angela didn’t hesitate. She turned the gun toward April’s leg and—BANG!

The shot rang out like thunder in the warehouse, echoing off the concrete walls. April let out a blood-curdling scream, collapsing sideways in the chair as crimson poured from her thigh, soaking into the dusty floor beneath her.

Derek lunged forward instinctively, shouting, “Angela, stop! Let her go! She needs help!”

His voice cracked with panic, his eyes wild—not for himself, but for her. The way he looked at April in that moment, with desperation and protectiveness, hit Angela like a punch to the chest.

That look—that—was what shattered her.

It wasn’t just an affair.

He loved her.

Angela’s fury ignited all over again, hotter, deeper, and darker than before. The gun trembled slightly in her hand, not from fear—but from the storm of betrayal roaring inside her.

“So, let me get this straight. You were with her while I was having a miscarriage? When I was calling and texting you with no response.” Angela Snapped. “No! No, baby it wasn’t like that I swear!” Derek tried to explain. But Angela could tell he was lying.

The more information she received-the more she started hitting the both of them. She was so enraged she forgot the camera was recording. Angela’s breathing grew heavier, more erratic, as she stared at Derek—really stared—taking in the raw panic on his face as he hovered over April. The way his hands trembled trying to stop her bleeding. The way his voice softened, desperate and broken, pleading with April to hold on.

That should’ve been me.

She saw it now, crystal clear—she was never the one he protected. Never the one he fought for. She was just the one he kept around until something better came along.

Her finger twitched against the trigger again, the weight of the gun suddenly feeling like justice in her palm.

“You love her, huh?” she whispered, her voice eerily calm as she paced toward them.

Derek looked up, blood on his hands. “Angela, please. Don’t do this.”

“You do love her,” she said again, louder this time, nodding like she was confirming it for herself. “After everything—you still choose her.”

Angela raised the gun to Derek’s chest.

He didn’t move.

Didn’t beg.

Didn’t even flinch.

But April did.

“Don’t hurt him!” she cried out through gritted teeth, her voice strained from the pain.

Angela blinked, just once, and smiled coldly.

“Oh, now you want to protect him?” She tilted her head, eyes narrowed. “Cute.”

She stepped back, gun swinging between them, decision already made.

“Then bleed together.”

BANG!

The second shot fired—louder than the first, more final. Derek gasped, clutching his side as blood streamed beneath his shirt. He collapsed beside April, their bodies tangled in pain, betrayal, and everything they tried to hide.

Angela stood over them, the gun now hanging loosely by her side, the phone still recording it all in the background. Her face unreadable, her eyes empty.

This was no longer about love.

This was about power.

About making sure they felt every ounce of the devastation they left behind.

As their groans filled the air and the pool of blood thickened beneath them, Angela turned to the door.

No rush. No panic.

She had time. And the story was far from over. As soon as Angela stepped out of the warehouse, the cool night air hit her like a slap—sharper, more real than anything inside. But before she could even catch her breath, the distant whine of sirens pierced the silence, growing louder by the second.

Then red and blue lights painted the street in chaos.

Squad cars screeched to a halt, tires burning rubber, doors flying open. Officers swarmed in with guns drawn, barking commands that echoed through the night.

“DROP THE WEAPON!”

“ON THE GROUND—NOW!”

“DO IT NOW!”

Angela froze, her heartbeat crashing in her ears. It was all moving so fast, like a blur of noise and flashing lights. She barely felt the gun fall from her fingers. Her knees hit the pavement a second later, hands raised, palms open. It didn’t matter that her eyes were blank—she already knew what came next.

The cold steel of handcuffs clamped around her wrists, biting into her skin. She was shoved into the back of a cruiser, her reflection in the glass staring back at her—blood-specked, hollow-eyed, and no longer the victim.

She didn’t speak. Not during the ride. Not during booking. Not when they took her mugshot or read her rights.

Reality didn’t hit her until she was alone in the cell, sitting on a hard bench with dried blood on her clothes and silence pressing in from all sides.

Now she wasn’t just heartbroken.

She was a headline waiting to happen as she confused to kidnapping and murder. Surprisingly, April lived to tell the story. During the sentence, both families made a statement. Angela dropped her head as she read her statement out loud.

“I never thought that I would be in this type of situation but here I am. Through the hurt and pain pushed a side of me that was hidden. I couldn’t see past the rage caused by infidelity. But now that rage will sit with me as I grieve and do my time for the hurt, I caused. With hope one day, I will be able to have my life back.”

Angela sat silently in the courtroom, shackled and surrounded, as the judge delivered the final blow—30 years. No mercy. No second chances. The words echoed in her mind long after the gavel dropped. Rage had swallowed her whole, left her blind to consequence, deaf to reason. She thought vengeance would bring peace, but all it did was cage her pain deeper. Now, behind bars, every day played like a reel of regret, looping the moment she chose violence over healing. That old saying—hurt people, hurt people—was no longer just a phrase. It was her reality, stamped on her record and burned into her soul. And as the cell door slammed shut, Angela finally realized: the real prison wasn’t these four walls... it was the rage she never learned to release.

Posted May 18, 2025
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John Rutherford
07:56 May 29, 2025

Powerful story! Thanks for sharing.

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Destany Arnold
22:05 May 30, 2025

Thank you!!

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