Double Dose of Christmas Magic

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Fiction Christmas Holiday

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**Mention of pregnancy loss**

Snowflakes swirled in lazy loops, sticking to the windshield as the car heater worked overtime to keep the chill at bay. Mia sat quietly, her hands twisting the zipper on her coat. Bing Crosby’s smooth voice filled the car, singing about dreaming of a white Christmas, but it barely registered over the nervous energy humming between her and Ben.

“Hey,” Ben said, his hand finding hers and squeezing gently. “It’s going to be okay.”

Mia gave him a small, tight smile, but her stomach was in knots. The houses they passed glowed with twinkling lights, some decked out with inflatable Santas and reindeer. She tried to focus on the cheerful displays, but all she could think about was how much had led to this moment.

IVF wasn’t something they ever thought they’d need, let alone struggle with. Mia and Ben had gone through more rounds than they could count. There had been excitement, hope, then crushing disappointment. The worst had been the miscarriage—so close, only to have it all ripped away. This was their last embryo, the last shot at the family they’d been dreaming of for years. And it had taken. They knew it had. But every appointment was a test of their fragile hope.

Ben tapped the steering wheel lightly as they waited at a stoplight. “Remember last Christmas?” he asked. His tone was light, but there was an undercurrent of sadness.

Mia nodded. “We spent it binge-watching cheesy movies because we couldn’t face the world.”

“This year’s different,” Ben said firmly, though she could hear the hint of doubt he was trying to mask.

The clinic parking lot was nearly empty when they pulled in. A small wreath hung crookedly on the door, a half-hearted nod to the season. They parked, and for a second, neither of them moved. Ben broke the silence. “Ready?”

“Not even a little,” Mia admitted, exhaling a shaky breath. Her fingers played with the strap of her bag as she stepped out of the car, the cold air biting at her face.

Inside, the clinic was quiet. A tiny Christmas tree sat in the corner of the waiting room, its lights blinking in a slow, almost meditative rhythm. The receptionist greeted them with a warm smile. “Merry Christmas,” she said softly.

Mia scanned the room as she and Ben sat down. A young couple sat across from them, the woman cradling a baby bump, her partner whispering something that made her laugh. An older man in scrubs walked by, holding a steaming cup of coffee. The soft strains of “Silent Night” played overhead, and a few poinsettias dotted the room. It should have been comforting, but Mia’s nerves were too loud.

When the nurse called their name, Mia’s heart thudded in her chest. The exam room was dimly lit, with a string of lights framing the window. Their doctor walked in, her usual reassuring smile in place. “Thought we’d make this visit a little festive,” she said, setting up the ultrasound machine.

The gel was cold against Mia’s skin, and she reached for Ben’s hand. The sound of a heartbeat filled the room, steady and strong. Relief washed over her as the doctor smiled. “Your little girl is looking perfect.”

Mia felt her chest loosen for the first time in weeks. She glanced at Ben, who was grinning ear to ear. But then the doctor paused, tilting the wand slightly. Her brow furrowed, and Mia’s stomach dropped.

“Wait a second,” the doctor murmured, adjusting the machine. The silence stretched, and Mia felt Ben’s grip tighten on hers. Finally, the doctor looked at them, her eyes wide. “I wasn’t expecting that.”

“What?” Mia’s voice came out as a whisper, her heart pounding.

The doctor turned the monitor toward them. “There are two heartbeats. You’re having identical twins.”

For a moment, Mia couldn’t process the words. She stared at the screen, where two tiny flickers beat side by side. “Twins?” she managed, her voice shaky. “How... how is that possible?”

“Your embryo split,” the doctor explained, her tone warm. “It’s rare, but it’s an incredible miracle.”

Tears spilled down Mia’s cheeks as she turned to Ben. He was already crying, laughing through his tears. “Twins,” he said, shaking his head in disbelief. “We’re having twins.”

Mia let out a shaky laugh, her fingers brushing over the ultrasound image as the doctor handed it to her. “I don’t even know how to process this,” she said.

Ben grinned. “Start by realizing we’re going to need a bigger car.”

The doctor chuckled. “I’d say that’s a good start. Merry Christmas to both of you.”

The snow had picked up by the time they left, blanketing the world in a fresh, quiet beauty. The cold air hit them as they stepped outside, their breath puffing out in clouds. They stopped by the car, neither quite ready to leave yet.

Across the street, a nativity scene glowed softly, the figures dusted with snow. Mia looked down at the photo in her hands, then up at Ben. “All those years,” she said, her voice breaking. “All that pain... and now this.”

Ben wrapped an arm around her, pulling her close. “We never gave up,” he said simply.

As they drove home, the world outside was a blur of snow and holiday lights. Inside the car, it was warm and quiet. Mia stared at the ultrasound photo in her lap, her mind racing with thoughts of the future.

“What do you think about naming them Holly and Carol?” she asked suddenly, breaking the silence.

Ben glanced at her, a smile tugging at his lips. “Holly and Carol,” he repeated. “To commemorate the gift we’ve been given this holiday?”

Mia nodded, her heart swelling. “It feels right.”

Ben reached over, brushing a tear from her cheek. “Then Holly and Carol it is.”

She smiled, the weight of the last few years beginning to lift. For the first time in a long time, the future felt bright. They drove on, the snow falling heavier now, but inside, there was only warmth and joy. This Christmas, after everything, they’d finally been given their miracle. And for the first time in years, Mia felt a peace she didn’t think was possible.

January 01, 2025 14:38

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Chuck Suave
14:07 Jan 09, 2025

A well written story on an emotive subject. I can relate to the plight of the young couple. Two of my friends went through IVF but sadly never fell pregnant. I liked the opening scene and as i was reading it could vividly recall times when I had driven in the snow. The coupe de gras was not only having one baby but twins, so a lovely ending too.

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