The Old Guard's Last Score

Submitted into Contest #286 in response to: Center your story around a character who’s struggling to let go.... view prompt

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The security cameras at Singapore's Changi Prison clicked west. Eight seconds. Walter Chen had memorized their rotation pattern during his weekly visits to Michelle. The cameras swung east. Another eight seconds before they'd pan back.

Time enough to pick any lock in the world. Not that he needed to – he was here legally, watching his comatose daughter through reinforced glass while a guard hovered nearby. Still, old habits died hard, especially for a man who'd stolen the crown jewels of three different countries.

"Mr. Chen?" Dr. Lim approached, tablet in hand. "There's been a development."

Walter's fingers twitched, muscle memory from decades of wielding lock picks. "Is she...?"

"Still stable. But we've received transfer orders. They're moving her to California next week."

"What? Who authorized that?"

"Her insurance. The long-term care facility in Oakland specializes in cases like hers." Dr. Lim hesitated. "There's something else. The courts have made a decision about Timothy."

Walter's chest tightened. He hadn't seen his grandson since the accident four months ago. The boy who hadn't spoken a word since watching his mother's car hydroplane off the Tampines Expressway.

"They're invoking Section 47 of the International Family Care Act," Dr. Lim said. "Given Singapore's partnership with California's judicial system, and your status as next of kin..."

Walter's mind raced through the implications faster than he'd ever mapped a security system. "They can't force me to take him. I'm not qualified—"

"Your background check shows no criminal record. You own property in Oakland, run a legitimate locksmith business. On paper, you're the ideal guardian."

*On paper*. Walter almost laughed. They had no idea about the Louvre heist in '92, or the Crown Casino job in '01. The really good stuff never made it to paper.

The guard's radio crackled. "Visitor for Michelle Chen. Timothy Chen, approved escort."

Walter turned. Through the reinforced glass, he saw his grandson – small for eleven, with Michelle's delicate features and his own calculating eyes. The boy carried only a tablet computer and a backpack, everything else lost in the crash that took his voice and put his mother here.

"Hello, Timothy," Walter said.

The boy's fingers moved across his tablet's screen. A computerized voice spoke: "Hello, Grandfather."

Walter's hands clenched. In forty years of heists, he'd never been caught. Now here he was, trapped by something as simple as family.

---

The private medical transport flew them to Oakland International. Walter spent the eight-hour flight studying his grandson while pretending to read. Timothy hadn't touched his tablet since takeoff, instead watching the clouds with the same intense focus Walter used to give surveillance cameras.

They pulled up to Walter's craftsman house in Rockridge just as his elderly neighbors were gathering for their weekly mahjong game. To them, he was just the quiet locksmith who sometimes fixed their doors. They couldn't see the titanium reinforcements, the military-grade security mesh, or the panic room behind his workshop.

"Your room's upstairs," Walter said as they entered. "Bathroom's across the hall. Try not to break anything expensive."

Timothy's fingers flew across his tablet: "Are there any rules?"

Walter paused. In his old life, rules were things to be broken. But now...

"Yeah. First rule: we only open locks we own or have permission to open."

Timothy's eyebrows rose slightly – the first real expression Walter had seen from him.

"Second rule: what happens in this house stays in this house." Walter hesitated. "Third rule: if you need something, ask. I'm not good at guessing."

The boy nodded and climbed the stairs, backpack clutched like a shield.

Walter's phone buzzed. A message from Mei Lin, his former protégé: *Heard about the custody ruling. Still in for the Chen Tian job next month?*

The Chen Tian Museum job. The score that would cement his legacy. They'd been planning it for years, waiting for the right moment. Now that moment was here, and he was stuck playing grandfather to a mute kid who probably hated him.

*Can't*, he typed back. *Complications*.

*Since when do complications stop the great Walter Chen?* 

His thumb hovered over the phone. Upstairs, he heard Timothy's footsteps – exploring, analyzing, just like Walter had taught Michelle before everything fell apart.

*Not this time*, he sent. *I'm out*.

He turned off the phone before Mei Lin could reply. Through his workshop window, he saw Mrs. Zhang struggling with her mahjong tiles again. Force of habit made him calculate the best angle to bypass her home security – a pathetically simple system. Then he noticed Timothy watching from the upstairs window.

Walter sighed and grabbed his coat. "Mrs. Zhang," he called out. "Need help setting up?"

The elderly woman beamed. "Walter! And who's this young man?"

"My grandson. He'll be staying with me for a while."

"Wonderful! You know, we're always short a player for mahjong..."

Walter nodded absently, his mind already spinning through scenarios. For the first time in his life, he wasn't planning a heist.

He was planning how to be a grandfather.

---

Three weeks passed like a prison sentence. Walter learned that raising a child required more precision than any heist he'd ever planned. Timothy moved through the house like a ghost, communicating only through his tablet when absolutely necessary. The boy spent hours in Walter's workshop, studying the locks with an intensity that made Walter's chest ache.

One morning, he caught Timothy trying to pick a practice padlock.

"Want to learn properly?" Walter asked before he could stop himself.

Timothy nodded.

"Okay. First rule still applies – we only open locks we own or have permission to open. Clear?"

Another nod.

Walter placed a basic Schlage on the workbench. "Watch carefully. Every lock tells a story if you know how to listen."

He demonstrated the technique, explaining each step. Timothy absorbed everything with those quiet, calculating eyes. By sunset, the boy had mastered three different types of locks.

"You've got good hands," Walter said. "Like your mother."

Timothy's fingers flew across his tablet: "Did you teach her too?"

Walter's chest tightened. "No. I... I wasn't around much when she was growing up. Too busy with work."

"What kind of work?"

Walter studied his grandson's face, seeing the same sharp intelligence he'd recognized in Michelle at that age. "Complicated work. The kind that kept me away from the people who mattered."

Timothy considered this, then typed: "Is that why she doesn't talk about you?"

"Probably." Walter picked up another lock. "Sometimes the hardest things to crack aren't locks at all."

---

The mahjong ladies adopted Timothy like a mascot. Mrs. Zhang taught him basic Mandarin. Mrs. Kapoor showed him how to make proper chai. Even Mrs. Sullivan, who still competed in martial arts tournaments at seventy-two, offered to teach him self-defense.

"The boy needs to learn to protect himself," she insisted over tea. "The world isn't safe."

Walter wanted to tell her that Timothy had already learned that lesson the hard way, but he just nodded and watched his grandson practice kicks in her backyard dojo.

The regular updates from Michelle's doctors were maddeningly consistent: stable but unchanged. Walter hired the best neurologists in California, paying with money that technically didn't exist. He visited her every Sunday, Timothy in tow, watching his grandson sign stories to his comatose mother about locks and butterflies and Mrs. Sullivan's roundhouse kicks.

Then came the message that changed everything.

*The Chen Tian piece is moving early*, Mei Lin texted. *Two weeks. Security details attached. It's the score of the century, Walter. Your legacy*.

Walter stayed up all night studying the plans. The Chen Tian Museum's prize attraction – the Empress's Tears, a necklace of perfectly matched black pearls – would be in Oakland for exactly six hours during a touring exhibition. The security was impressive: pressure-sensitive floors, infrared arrays, quantum-encrypted locks.

For the old Walter Chen, it would have been the perfect challenge. For the new Walter Chen, it was a test he wasn't sure he wanted to pass.

"You're distracted," Mrs. Sullivan said during the next mahjong game. "Something on your mind?"

Walter rearranged his tiles. "Just thinking about legacy."

"Ah." She glanced at Timothy, who was teaching Mrs. Zhang's grandson sign language in the corner. "Different kind of inheritance than you planned?"

"Something like that."

Mrs. Sullivan laid down a winning hand. "You know, I was world champion once. Thirty years ago. Spent decades chasing that feeling again, until I realized my real legacy was in teaching others."

Walter stared at his tiles, seeing not patterns but security diagrams, floor plans, timing sequences. "What if you had one more shot at the title?"

"I'd pass." She smiled. "Some prizes aren't worth the cost of winning them."

---

Timothy's nightmares started the following week. Walter found him in the workshop at three AM, methodically taking apart and reassembling locks.

"Bad dreams?" Walter asked.

Timothy nodded, hands moving in the sign language Mrs. Zhang's grandson had been teaching him: "About the accident."

Walter sat down at the workbench. "Want to talk about it?"

"It was raining," Timothy signed. "Mom was singing. Then everything went sideways."

Walter picked up a lock. "You know, in our line of work – locksmithing – we have a saying. Every lock has a memory of being opened. Even if it's been closed for years, it remembers."

Timothy watched him work the pins. "Like people?"

"Maybe." Walter demonstrated a particularly tricky technique. "But sometimes we get stuck trying to open things the same old way, when what we really need is a new approach."

They worked in comfortable silence until dawn, and if Walter's hands shook slightly while picking the practice locks, neither of them mentioned it.

---

The day before the Chen Tian exhibition, Mei Lin appeared at his door.

"Nice domestic setup," she said, eyeing the toys scattered across his usually immaculate living room. "Very convincing."

"It's not a setup."

"Of course not." She smiled. "Just like the Walter Chen I know isn't really retiring to play grandpa."

"People change."

"Do they?" She handed him a thumb drive. "Final security details. The team's ready. We just need our locksmith."

Walter pocketed the drive. "I told you, I'm out."

"Did you?" She gestured at his workshop. "Because you've been practicing with quantum locks all week. I've been watching."

Before Walter could respond, Timothy appeared in the doorway. The boy's hands moved in a rapid series of signs.

"What's he saying?" Mei Lin asked.

"He's asking if you're staying for dinner," Walter lied. What Timothy had actually signed was: *Is she why you're afraid to sleep?*

Mei Lin checked her watch. "Another time. Think about it, Walter. Twenty-four hours to decide. The Empress's Tears could be your crowning achievement."

After she left, Timothy signed: *She's not very good at hiding things*.

Walter raised an eyebrow. "Oh?"

*She has picks in her sleeve. Like you used to*.

"Used to?"

Timothy smiled – his first real smile since arriving. *You keep yours in the safe now. Behind the Monet*.

Walter stared at his grandson. "How long have you known?"

*Mom used to say you could steal the stars if you wanted to. I thought she was being metaphorical*.

For the first time in forty years, Walter Chen laughed until he cried.

---

The night of the exhibition, Walter sat in his workshop, staring at the quantum lock he'd been practicing on. Timothy found him there at midnight.

*The pearls would look nice on Mom*, he signed.

"They would," Walter agreed. "But she'd hate how we got them."

*Are you going?*

Walter thought about Mei Lin waiting with the team, about the perfect plans on the thumb drive, about the legacy he'd spent his life building.

Then he thought about Michelle, about missed recitals and empty chairs at graduations, about the way Timothy's hands moved when he signed stories to her still form.

"No," he said finally. "Some locks are better left unpicked."

Timothy sat beside him. *Can you teach me that thing you were doing with the quantum lock?*

"Now?"

*We're both awake anyway*.

So Walter Chen, the greatest thief of his generation, spent the night of his biggest potential score teaching his grandson about pins and tumblers, about tension and timing, about the art of opening things that want to stay closed.

And if somewhere across town a team of thieves was cursing his name, well, he had more important things to worry about.

---

Six months later, Michelle opened her eyes to find her father and son playing cards in her hospital room. Timothy's hands were flying in animated conversation, and Walter was laughing at whatever he'd just signed.

"Dad?" she whispered.

Walter turned, tears streaming down his weathered face. "Hey, sweetheart."

Timothy jumped up, signing rapidly: *Mom! Grandfather's been teaching me locks, and Mrs. Sullivan taught me kung fu, and Mrs. Zhang says my Mandarin is better than his now, and—*

"Slow down," Michelle said, her voice rough from disuse. "How long have you been signing?"

"A while," Walter answered. "Turns out your boy's a natural at cracking all sorts of codes."

Michelle looked between them – her silent son who was suddenly so expressive, her distant father who was somehow here, present, changed.

"I'm sorry," Walter said softly. "For everything. I spent so many years chasing the wrong kind of legacy."

Michelle reached for both their hands. "Tell me," she said. "Tell me everything."

And as the afternoon light painted shadows across the hospital room, Walter Chen – former master thief, reluctant grandfather, and finally, thankfully, a father – began to share the story of how his grandson had taught him that sometimes the greatest heist of all is stealing back the time you've lost.

In his pocket, his phone buzzed with a message from Mei Lin: *The Empress's Tears hit the black market yesterday. Word is some hotshot new crew pulled it off*.

Walter smiled and turned off the phone. Let someone else chase legacy. He had more important locks to pick.

Timothy's hands moved one last time: *Welcome home, Mom*.

Walter translated, his voice thick with emotion, realizing that sometimes the things we struggle most to let go of are the very things keeping us from holding on to what matters most.

Outside the window, a magpie landed on the sill – nature's own little thief, watching the former master with knowing eyes.

Some habits, after all, run in the family.

January 21, 2025 20:59

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