The hum was a low thrum in my bones, a vibration that resonated with the very fabric of reality. I gripped the worn leather of the temporal displacement device, a contraption I'd cobbled together from schematics found buried deep in my grandfather's attic. Tonight was the night. Tonight, I’d finally fix the biggest mistake of my life. 25 years ago, I'd let her go, and the ghost of that decision had haunted me ever since.
There was hardly a day that went by that I did not consider my decision and regret it.
The numbers on the device flickered, then stabilized: 1998. The world around me dissolved into a dizzying kaleidoscope of light and sound before coalescing back into a familiar, yet disturbingly younger, version of my neighborhood. The air was different, cleaner, and the aroma of freshly cut grass hung heavy in the evening breeze. The streetlights cast long, sharp shadows, just like I remembered.
My heart hammered against my ribs. This was it. I found her house easily, the same peeling paint and overgrown rose bushes I remembered. I took a deep breath and knocked.
In my mind was great excitement yet at the same instance a feeling about whether what I was doing was right or really interfering with that which should never be changed?
The door opened, and there she was. Sarah. Twenty-two years old, her eyes bright with a youthful spark and a glow of attractiveness.
"Can I help you?" she asked, her voice a melody I hadn’t heard in so long.
My throat constricted. “Sarah,” I breathed, “It’s… it’s me. Liam.”
Her brow furrowed. “Liam? I don’t think… have we met?” A hint of suspicion flickered in her eyes.
“It's… it’s complicated,” I said, searching for the right words. “I need to tell you something. Something important.”
I spent the next hour sitting on her porch swing, desperately trying to explain, to convince her. I told her about the future, about the life we could have, about the regrets that had consumed me for decades. She listened, her expression changing from bewildered to intrigued.
After several moments I could see that Sarah was considering everything I had said to her.
“So, you’re saying,” she said, leaning forward, her fingers tracing the lines of the porch railing, “that in 25 years, you're… us? But we don't end up together?"
“That’s right,” I said, my voice thick with emotion. “I messed up, Sarah. I let you go. And it's been the biggest mistake of my life.”
A thoughtful silence settled between us. The crickets chirped their evening song, the world around us seeming to hold its breath.
“And you think,” she said finally, her gaze locking with mine, “that you can change it?”
“I have to,” I said, my voice barely a whisper. “I have to try.”
She smiled, a small, almost hesitant smile. “Okay, Liam,” she said. “Okay. Tell me what needs to change. We can make this work.”
A wave of relief washed over me. This was it. I had done it. I was going to fix everything. We talked for hours that night, mapping out the next few months, replaying the pivotal moments, ensuring the decisions that would eventually tear us apart were avoided.
The sun was just beginning to peek over the horizon when we finished, both of us exhausted but strangely invigorated.
"I should go," I said, standing. "I need to get back." I touched the device hidden beneath my coat.
Her eyes widened in understanding. "You'll… you'll be back, right?"
"I'll be... I'll be here, Sarah," I said. I smiled, a genuine smile, for the first time in years. "Don't worry."
I activated the device. The humming began, the familiar vibration started to pulse beneath my skin. The world around me started to dissolve.
And then it happened.
A voice, cold and unfamiliar, cut through the hum. "Going somewhere, Liam?"
The world snapped back into focus. I was still on Sarah's porch, but everything was different. The rose bushes were gone, ripped from the earth. The paint was fresh, a stark, modern grey. And standing on the steps, arms crossed, was a woman who bore a terrifying resemblance to Sarah. But this woman was older, her eyes cold and calculating, a predatory gleam in their depths.
"I'm Samantha," she said, a cruel smile twisting her lips. "Sarah's daughter. And you, I presume, are Liam, the time-traveling fool who came to change the past?"
I stared, speechless. The device in my hand felt like a lead weight. But how...?
Samantha laughed, a hollow, chilling sound. "Oh, Daddy Dearest," she purred, taking a step down towards me. "You thought you were so clever, didn't you? Back then, Mum told me everything. About the man who came from the future to be with her. And about how she didn’t want me, because she was never with you in the first place."
She gestured to the house. "I've been doing my research. And it seems you weren't as good at time travel as you thought you were. Your little jumps leave… traces. And now,” she continued, stepping closer, her voice dropping to a menacing whisper, “I have a few questions for you, Daddy."
My mind reeled, trying to grasp the implications. I had come to fix a mistake, and somehow, I had created something far more terrible. The past wasn’t something you could just tinker with. It fought back.
And as Samantha stepped into the pale pre-dawn light, the full horror of my actions finally crashed down upon me. This wasn't just about a missed chance at love. It was about a future I had created, a twisted future where my actions, meant to ease my pain, had spawned this… this monster. And I was trapped, not with the woman I loved, but with the consequence of trying to change what was never meant to be. My time travel hadn’t changed the past. It had created a new, much darker, future. And I was its prisoner.
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Now that’s what I’m talking about! Boom! Loved it. My style of story. That was well executed, strong, great twist. All the good qualities I will sit and unwillingly to leave. Great job Robert!
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Thank you for your nice message!
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I wrote a piece about a Time Machine once. Really like the dark twist that time is entity itself. Good read to bad it’s not a book
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