Fiction

It was 3:17 am, the hour when even the city's hum seemed to pause. The streetlights flickered in their own rhythm, casting long shadows across the cobblestones of Alder Lane. On the rooftop of the old observatory, Maren adjusted the brass dial of the weather vane, her gloved fingers steady despite the chill.

She wasn't there for stargazing. The telescope had long since been retired, its lens fogged with age. Maren's vigil was quieter than that-less about watching the stars, more about listening for what didn't belong.

Every night, she climbed the spiral staircase with a thermos of black tea and a notebook bound in waxed canvas. Her job was simple: record the wind's direction, note the temperature drop and listen for the bell.

The bell hadn't rung in 19 years.

It hung in the tower above her, a relic from when the observatory doubled as a costal warning station. If the bell rang, it meant the tide had turned in a way it shouldn't. It meant the sea was coming for something it had no business touching.

Maren didn't believe in omens. She believed in patterns. In the way the gulls flew lower when the barometric pressure dipped. In the way the ivy curled tighter around the eastern wall when the storms brewed offshore. She believed in the quiet language of things that didn't speak.

She had inherited the post from her grandfather, who had inherited it from his aunt. No one asked her to continue it. No one ever even remembered the bell. But she did. And that was enough.

Tonight, the wind came from the northwest. Unusual for August. She jotted it down, then paused. A low groan echoed from the tower above. Not the bell. Just the wood settling. Still, she stood and walked to the edge of the room, scanning the horizon.

The sea was calm. The town was asleep. And Maren, the keeper of the hour, remained awake-not for glory, not for fear, but because someone had to be.

Part 2

Maren lingered at the edge of the rooftop, her boots planted firmly on the slate tiles. Below, Alder Lane stretched like a ribbon of silence, its windows dark, its garden asleep. The town trusted the rhythm of its own slumber. That trust was what Maren guarded.

She returned to her stool and poured the last of her tea. The thermos hissed softly, steam curling into the air like a whisper. She flipped open her notebook again, not to write, but to reread. The entries were meticulous. Wind patterns. Cloud formations. Unusual bird calls. Once, a fox had sat at the base of the tower for three nights in a row. She'd recorded that too.

The bell hadn't rung, but she felt something tonight. Not dread-more like a shift. A subtle misalignment, like a clock running half a second fast.

She checked the tide chart pinned to the wall. High tide had passed an hour ago, The sea should be retreating. But the air still smelled of salt and brine, heavier than it should.

She descended the spiral staircase, lantern in hand, and stepped into the courtyard. The observatory's stone walls loomed around her, moss-covered and patient. She walked to the tide markers carved into the outer wall-generations of etchings, each line a record of the seas's reach.

Tonight, the water had kissed the edge of the 1932 line. That was too high.

She ran her fingers over the stone, tracing the grooves.No storm. No rain. No reason. Just the sea, reaching a little farther than it should.

Back inside, she lit the signal lamp. Not the bell-never unless it rang on its own. But the lamp was a quiet alert, a soft glow that would bee seen by the lighthouse keeper across the bay. A message without panic: Watch with me.

She returned to the rooftop. The wind had shifted again-now from the east. She wrote it down. Then she sat, eyes on the horizon, waiting.

Not for disaster. Not for revelation.

Just for the next hour. And the next. Because someone had to.

Part 3

Across the bay, the lighthouse blinked its rhythm: three short, one long. A pattern older than Maren, older than the town. It was a language of light, and tonight, it spoke back.

The signal lamp she'd lit glowed in amber in the observatory's upper window. Not urgent. Not loud. Just present.

At the lighthouse, Thom adjusted his glasses and leaned forward. He'd seen the lap. He always did. Even when he didn't need to. Even when he was sure nothing would come of it.

He marked the time-3:42 am-and turned the page in his own logbook. His entries were less poetic than Maren's. More numbers. More coordinates. But he respected her notes. They filled in the spaces his instruments couldn't.

He stepped outside, boots crunching on gravel, and scanned the shoreline. The tide was high here too. Not dangerously so, but enough to make him pause.

Thom didn't believe in warnings. He believed in agreements. The sea had its domain. So did the land. And when one encroached on the other, someone had to notice.

He walked to the edge of the bluff and lit his own lamp-a pale blue flame that flickered once, then held. A reply. I see it too.

Back at the observatory, Maren saw the light and nodded. No words passed between them. They hadn't spoken in years. Not out of bitterness, but because they didn't need to. Their silence was a kind of pact.

She turned the page in her notebook and wrote:

3:42 am

Tide reached 1932 line.

Wind shifted east.

Signal returned.

Agreement holds.

She closed the book and leaned back, letting the quiet settle around her. The bell above remained still, its silence not ominous, but earned. It hadn't rung because it didn't need to. Not yet.

And if it ever did, she knew Thom would hear it too.

Part 4

At 4:06 am, the wind stopped.

Not slowed. Not shifted. Stopped.

Maren noticed it first in the way the ivy on the eastern wall stilled. It had always moved, even in the gentlest breeze. Tonight it hung limp, like a curtain waiting for a hand to draw it back.

She stood, lantern in hand, and walked the perimeter of the rooftop. No rustling. No creaking. Even the gulls had gone silent.

She didn't panic. She listened.

From the north a sound rose-soft, rhythmic, deliberate. Not footsteps. Not machinery. Something between breath and motion. It came from the edge of the woods that bordered the observatory grounds, Where the trees grew thick and the ground sloped toward the sea.

She descended the staircase again, slower this time, and stepped into the courtyard. The sound was clearer now. A kind of brushing, like fabric against bark.

She walked to the edge of the woods, stopping just short of the tree line. Her lantern cast a circle of light that touched the first few trunks, revealing nothing unusual. But the sound continued.

Then, from the shadows, a figure emerged.

Not a stranger. Not a threat.

A deer.

But not one she recognized. Its coat was darker than usual, almost charcoal, and its antlers were asymmetrical-one curved forward like a hook, the other back like a branch. It stepped into the light, and looked directly at her.

Maren didn't move.

The deer lowered its head, not in submission, but in acknowledgment. Then it turned and walked back into the woods, the brushing sound fading with it.

She waited a full minute before returning to the observatory. At the rooftop, she opened her notebook and wrote:

4:06 am.

Wind ceased.

Unfamiliar deer.

Antlers asymmetrical.

No fear. No urgency.

Presence noted.

Across the bay, Thom's lamp flickered again. A single pulse. He'd seen it too.

The bell remained silent.

But the watchers were awake.

Part 5

Thom didn't sleep anymore-not during the night hours, at least. His body had long since adjusted to the rhythm of the lighthouse, to the slow turning of its beam and the soft tick of the tide clock mounted above the hearth.

At 4:06 am, he felt the stillness before he saw it.

The wind, which usually teased the edge of his coat as he stood on the bluff, had vanished. The sea below lay flat, not calm, but expectant-like a breath held too long.

He raised his binoculars and scanned the shoreline. Nothing moved. No gulls. No foxes. Even the grasses along the dunes had stopped their usual swaying.

Then he saw it.

A ripple-not in the water, but in the light.

The beam from the lighthouse, which rotated in its precise arc every twelve seconds, faltered. Just once. A shutter. A blink.

Thom lowered the binoculars and turned toward the lens room. The mechanism was intact. The bulb steady. But the light had hesitated.

He checked the tide clock. Still ticking. Still true.

He walked to the logbook and wrote:

4:06 am.

Wind ceased.

Beam stuttered.

Sea flat.

No mechanical fault.

Presence implied.

He paused, then added:

Maren's lamp steady.

Agreement holds.

He stepped outside again, eyes on the horizon. The sea was beginning to move again-just slightly. A ripple here. A shift there. But it was different now. Not chaotic. Not wrong. Just... watched.

Thom lit his lamp once more. A soft blue pulse. Still here.

Back at the observatory, Maren saw it and nodded. She didn't write this time. She simply watched.

The watchers didn't chase mystery. They didn't demand answers. They recorded. They noticed. They held the line.

And tonight, something had noticed them back.

Part 6

At 5:12 am, the first light touched the edge of the sea.

It was dramatic. No blaze of color. Just a softening of the dark, a pale thread of silver stitched across the horizon. Maren watched it from the rooftop, her lantern dimmed but still lit. The wind had returned, faint and uncertain, like a child waking from a deep sleep.

She didn't write yet. Dawn was not for recording. It was for listening.

The bell above her creaked-not a ring, not even a warning. Just the sound of old metal shifting in its cradle. She looked up, eyes tracing the worn rope that connected it to the tower's heart.

The bell had rung only once in her lifetime.

She'd been twelve. Her grandfather had been keeper then. The sound had come at 3:03 am, sharp and clear, cutting through fog like a blade. No storm followed. No flood. Just a single deer found at the base of the tower, its antlers tangled in seaweed, its eyes open and unafraid.

Her grandfather hadn't explained. He'd simply written:

Bell rang.

Deer arrived.

Sea reached 1911 line.

Agreement tested.

Line held.

Maren had asked what the bell meant. he'd said, "It means we're not the only ones keeping watch."

She hadn't asked again.

Now, as the light grew, she heard a sound from the woods. Not the brushing from before. A different rhythm-hooves on stone. She turned and saw the deer again, standing at the edge of the courtyard.

Its antlers were wet.

It didn't approach. It didn't flee. It simply stood, watching her as the sun rose behind it.

Across the bay, Thom's lamp flickered once, then went dark. His shift was over. The sea was his no longer.

Maren nodded to the deer, then climbed the tower steps one last time before morning. She touched the bell's rope-not to ring it, but to remind it she was there.

She returned to her notebook and wrote:

5:12 am.

Dawn arrived.

Deer returned.

Antlers wet.

Bell stirred.

Line holds.

She closed the book.

The watchers had done their part.

And the world, for now, had answered in kind.

Posted Aug 09, 2025
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9 likes 2 comments

Keba Ghardt
02:21 Aug 21, 2025

The atmosphere is immersive right away. Sort of reminds me of early PC games like MYST or Gadget, where nothing is explained, everything is mysterious, but you still have a job to do

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Mary Bendickson
21:42 Aug 09, 2025

Sh-h. They are watching amd listening.

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