Contest #288 shortlist ⭐️

The Day the Words Got Loose

Submitted into Contest #288 in response to: Set your story during — or just before — a storm.... view prompt

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Fiction Inspirational

The rain began, a relief after a long, dry August. As if signaling the end of summer’s lazy days, the sky turned gray, and the first drops fell with a soft pitter-patter, carrying the fresh scent of wet earth. At first, it was soothing. But the rain kept coming. The parched ground, hardened into baked clay, rejected the offering. As the storms raged, water pooled on lawns, sidewalks turned to rivers, and gutters gurgled, whispering secrets as they carried the flood away. The rain began to seep into every nook and cranny of the old homes. It filled the puddles, and old flower pots. 

Even the Little Free Library on the corner of Oak and Fifth wasn’t safe. The drops ran through the roof shingles, drip drip dropping onto the books. At first, only a few inky droplets ran down the spines. Then, as the rain pressed harder, the words themselves seemed to loosen. But, nobody noticed until the words started running. It began slowly. A comma dribbled down the glass. A few stray adjectives pooled at the bottom of the shelf — wistful, unruly, forlorn. Then, as the rain pressed harder, the words melted right off the pages. Sentences oozed into the streets. Whole paragraphs ran in elegant, inky streams toward the storm drains. The Great Gatsby slipped away with a whisper of “So we beat on…” before vanishing into a swirling puddle. Frankenstein  left a single ghostly utterance of  “Beware; for I am fearless, and therefore powerful”  before it was swallowed by the current. Down the drains the words went, through old pipes and rusted mains, until they found new places to settle — kitchen faucets, coffee shop spouts, restaurant taps. They even ended up in the school’s drinking fountains! 

At the coffee shop,  the locals were gathered at tables. There was talk of the rain, when it would end or what chores were being put off until later. The windows steamed over and the coffee stayed warm. Leo at the counter didn’t say much. He was good at steaming milk, bad at small talk, and mostly kept his head down. But when he handed a cappuccino to a tired-looking woman, the words just came out: “The world breaks everyone and afterward many are strong at the broken places.”  

The woman blinked at him.“…Excuse me?” 

Leo blinked back. He hadn’t meant to say that. He wasn’t even sure where he’d heard it.

"You know what? Never mind. Have a good day," he said, but his voice wavered. Somewhere, Ernest Hemmingway smiled.

That afternoon, at the high school, Mia looked dreamily out the window. The rain created patterns on the glass, which she found much more interesting than her teacher’s lecture. She took a long, slow drink from her Stanley. Then, without thinking, she sighed,"So we beat on, boats against the current, borne back ceaselessly into the past." 

Her best friend Jasmine squinted. “Mia, are you okay?”

Mia nodded, confused. The words felt familiar, like she’d borrowed them from somewhere deep in her brain. She just couldn’t remember from where. But, they fit this moment. Mia had recently reconciled with her boyfriend. Somewhere, Fitzgerald shook his head. 

That evening, Mr. Patel was doing the dishes when he took a sip from his glass and suddenly told his wife, "Time moves slowly, but passes quickly." 

She dropped a plate. “Since when do you talk like that?” 

Mr. Patel wiped his hands on a towel, staring at the water still running from the tap. Something about it seemed different. Almost alive. Mr. and Mrs. Patel shared a long look, and sat at the table, holding hands for the first time in a long time. From the depths, Walker nodded approvingly.

By nightfall, the entire town was speaking in borrowed voices. Grandmothers whispered Faulkner in their sleep. Strangers on the subway exchanged the words of Christie. A toddler repeated "It was the best of times, it was the worst of times" in perfect enunciation before shoving a cracker into his mouth. Sleepovers will filled with the most terrifying utterances of King. And then—just as quickly as it started—it stopped.

The words were gone. The books in the little free library sat empty, their stories rinsed clean. The rain lightened, and a deep hush settled over the town. Nobody could explain what happened, but for weeks, people spoke a little more carefully. They listened a little harder. Some swore their water still carried traces of poetry. Others left their taps running at night, just in case a sentence or two might find its way back. Because words had a way of sticking around. Even in the places you’d least expect. 

Time passed further, and soon, the day the words got loose became a distant memory. People began to think they dreamt this – just like they dreamt the amount of rain that saturated the town those rainy weeks. 

Early one morning, young Verona stopped by the Little Free Library on the corner of Oak and Fifth. As she opened the squeaky door, she pulled out a book and flipped through its pages. Blank. She reached for another. And another. All empty. It was true.

She sat cross-legged on the damp grass, staring at the silent books stacked around her. The words were gone. Erased, like whispers carried off by the wind. A hollow ache settled in her chest. It wasn’t just stories that had vanished—it was voices, memories, entire worlds.

But as Verona traced her fingers over the smooth, empty pages, she had an idea. Maybe the words weren’t lost. Maybe they were waiting.

She gathered as many blank books as she could carry and took them home, stacking them carefully on her desk. That night, she listened. Not just to the rain, which had long since faded, but to the voices around her—her father humming in the kitchen, the creak of the old swing on the porch, the murmurs of neighbors in the street.

She opened a book and began to write.

At first, she tried to recall the lost words, reaching for echoes of Gatsby and Hemingway, but something felt wrong. These pages didn’t want to be filled with the past—they wanted something new. So she wrote what she heard: the laughter of a boy riding his bike too fast down Oak Street, the sigh of a woman rereading an old letter, the quiet strength in the way Mr. Patel and his wife held hands at the dinner table.

Days turned into weeks. Verona filled book after book, blending the borrowed voices of yesterday with the unspoken poetry of today. When she was done, she carried them back to the Little Free Library, tucking them carefully onto the shelves.

The next morning, an elderly man picked one up. He flipped to the first page and read a passage about a man who had once been fearless but now feared the quiet. His breath caught in his throat—he had never told anyone that.

A child found another book and ran home, clutching it tightly. Inside, she discovered a story about a girl who spoke in song lyrics and always knew when someone needed a hug.

Soon, the books were passed from hand to hand. People read and gasped, laughed, cried. The words had returned, not as they were, but as they were meant to be—new, alive, and filled with heart.

And Verona? She kept listening. Because stories had a way of finding their way home.

February 07, 2025 02:34

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Alexis Araneta
15:36 Feb 07, 2025

What a tale! The whole full circle moment is really clever. As per usual, amazing descriptions too, Amazing work !

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Lila Evans
01:06 Feb 08, 2025

Thank you! ❤️ I got this idea whist sitting in a meeting -- right in the nick of time! I didn't think I was going to make it for this round of stories. Thank you for your positive vibes, Alexis!

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Imogen Bird
13:24 Feb 07, 2025

What a joy! I'm in love with this concept and the full circle of Verona writing in the blank books. Brilliant and magical.

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Lila Evans
01:07 Feb 08, 2025

Thank you! I got an idea while sitting in a meeting this week -- and, then saw a little library while dropping my kids off -- love the prompts. They make me think. Thank you for the feedback!

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