Black Fiction Friendship

Musa always meant well. That was what his mother would say whenever he fumbled something up. “Musa has a good heart. He just doesn’t think things through.” And it was true. Whether it was helping a neighbor or trying to impress a teacher, Musa’s good intentions had a habit of backfiring.

So, when he saw the envelope lying on Mr. Dube’s desk that rainy Thursday afternoon, sealed and marked “CONFIDENTIAL – SCHOLARSHIP DECISIONS,” he didn’t think. He acted.

Mr. Dube, the headmaster, had been talking about the scholarship for months. A full ride to one of South Africa’s top boarding schools. Only one student would get it. Musa had applied, but so had Lwandle, his closest friend and toughest competition.

That day, Musa had stayed after school to finish his science project. As he passed the open office door, the envelope called to him like a magnet. Mr. Dube was nowhere in sight. Maybe in the staffroom. Maybe in the bathroom. The lights were still on.

Musa peeked in. Took one cautious step. Then another. He told himself he just wanted to see. Just a peek. He wouldn’t touch anything. Just look at the name on the letter.

But the envelope had a flap that obscured the contents. Without realizing, his hand reached out. He peeled it open.

Inside was a printed letter on official letterhead.

“Dear Mr. Dube, we are pleased to award the 2025 Ndlovu Scholarship to… Lwandle Ngema.”

Musa’s heart sank.

Lwandle.

He didn’t even know why he felt disappointed—Lwandle deserved it. He was smart, always scored a few points higher than Musa. But they had both hoped. Both dreamed. And now…

He stared at the name. And then something strange happened. Something awful.

He had a thought.

“What if I just… changed it?”

It was ridiculous. Dangerous. But the idea lingered. If he changed the name, no one would know. No one saw him. He could fix the mistake—the universe’s mistake. After all, Musa had worked just as hard. Maybe harder. Maybe this was the way fate was correcting itself.

His hands trembled as he took the paper out. His bag had a pencil and a black gel pen. He practiced the forgery on a piece of scrap paper. Then slowly, carefully, he traced over Lwandle’s name.

“Musa Ndlovu.”

He stared at it. It looked… real. Like it had always been that way.

He slid the letter back in and resealed the envelope with the glue from his science board.

By the time Mr. Dube returned to his office, Musa was long gone.

The next morning, a special assembly was called.

Musa’s stomach churned as Mr. Dube took the stage, envelope in hand.

“We are proud to announce the recipient of this year’s Ndlovu Scholarship…”

His breath caught.

“…Musa Ndlovu.”

Applause thundered around the hall. Lwandle clapped too. He even slapped Musa on the back. “You did it, bro! You deserved it.”

Musa smiled weakly. It felt like shards of glass were rattling in his chest.

Things spiraled from there.

A journalist from the local paper came to take his picture. The principal arranged for a meeting with the scholarship foundation. His parents cried. “We knew you were destined for greatness!”

But the guilt clung to Musa like wet clothes. At night, he tossed and turned. At school, he avoided Lwandle’s eyes. Every time someone congratulated him, it felt like a slap.

He thought about confessing. But how do you tell your parents you ruined their proudest moment? How do you tell your best friend you stole his future?

Then, two weeks before the term was to start, everything fell apart.

The scholarship foundation called the school. They were puzzled, they said. Their copy of the letter clearly stated “Lwandle Ngema.” There must have been a mistake. A terrible mistake.

Mr. Dube was furious. He called both boys and their parents into the office.

“I don’t know what happened,” he said. “But someone tampered with the official letter.”

Lwandle’s mother was shaking. “You mean… Musa took Lwandle’s place?”

Musa couldn’t speak. His mouth had dried to sand. Everyone was looking at him.

“Musa,” Mr. Dube said gently, “is there something you need to tell us?”

He stared at the floor. Then nodded.

The words came out slowly, between sobs and shame.

“I changed the name. I’m sorry. I didn’t think… I just wanted…”

The fallout was swift.

He was suspended. The scholarship was awarded—rightfully—to Lwandle. The article in the paper was retracted. His parents were devastated. His father didn’t speak to him for days. His mother wept quietly at night.

Lwandle stopped talking to him entirely.

But worst of all was the school.

The stares. The whispers. The betrayal.

No one cared that Musa had been honest in the end. To them, he was the boy who tried to steal another’s dream.

Three months later, Musa sat alone under the jacaranda tree in the schoolyard. He had just served his last day of suspension and returned to school. Everything looked the same—but nothing felt like before.

“Mind if I sit?” a voice asked.

He looked up.

Lwandle.

Musa blinked, unsure if he was imagining it.

Lwandle sat anyway. His face was calm, unreadable.

“I’m still mad,” he said. “What you did… it sucked.”

Musa nodded. “I know.”

“But I’ve been thinking,” Lwandle said, rubbing his palms together. “You’re not evil. Just… stupid.”

Musa cracked a dry laugh. “That’s fair.”

They sat in silence a while, watching the wind stir the fallen blossoms.

“You’re still smart, Musa. You just… you need to learn that you don’t have to cheat to win. Maybe that’s what life was trying to teach you.”

Musa nodded again. “I think I get it now.”

Lwandle stood. “Good. Because I want to beat you fair and square next time.”

And with that, he walked away.

Epilogue

Years later, Musa would write a letter of his own.

Not a fake one.

A real letter. Of recommendation. For a student who reminded him a lot of himself—eager, brilliant, and a little too impatient.

He had learned his lesson the hard way. But sometimes, the deepest lessons are born from the biggest mistakes.

And sometimes, the wrong turn still leads you to the right place.

Posted May 07, 2025
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4 likes 4 comments

Jes Oakheart
18:44 May 17, 2025

Kalenga, this was such a sweet story. You built great suspense in the middle, leaving the reader wondering if Musa would get caught. The ending was really wonderful too. Great work!

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Kalenga Mulenga
08:04 May 18, 2025

Thanks so much Jes. I am really enjoying the Reedsy prompts and so glad you enjoyed this one!

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Carolyn X
17:02 May 13, 2025

A fun, effortless read. Thanks Kalenga.

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Kalenga Mulenga
19:08 May 13, 2025

Thanks Carolyn!

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